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Arena 35 BEGINS (1999 new)
Dec 17, 2012 05:22PM

29213 Will's eyes flickered to Mai for a second and he realized instantly what she was doing. Green eyes looking back at Morder and making sure he was focusing on Mai (Though it hurt him knowing that he was talking about killing her) He got a better grip on his spear and inched away from Mai slightly so he could get a better advantage at killing Morder.
Killing. He couldn't believe he was even thinking of doing such a thing, but anything to protect Mai.
Arena 35 BEGINS (1999 new)
Dec 16, 2012 03:20PM

29213 William ducked, shoving Mai out of harms way. The sword missed, but Morder's foot managed to clip his face as he soared over him. Will stummbled, falling onto his back in the snow and tasted blood on his lip. He quickly got up and spun around, spear in hand. His green eyes flickered as he watched Morder, observing what Morder would do next. As he watched carefully he moved to stand in front of Mai. He wouldn't let her get hurt.
"Your really fast," William said matter of factly. "Not fast enough though."
Arena 35 BEGINS (1999 new)
Nov 09, 2012 10:29PM

29213 William's eyes flickered and he looked over his shoulder hearing a noise.
It was then that he saw with horror another tribute.
"Moder," he whispered in Mai's ear. "Run or fight?"
If they started running now they might make it away. If they fought, they might win, but Will only had a spear, that was all. He would let Mai decide
Arena 35 BEGINS (1999 new)
Oct 19, 2012 12:14AM

29213 ((Are we rping with someone else? I thought someone was gonna come and attack Mai and Will?))
Arena 35 BEGINS (1999 new)
Sep 30, 2012 10:16PM

29213 Will nodded slightly, swallowing. He took her hand and began walking.
"We'll make it quick for them. Painless, hopefully," he murmured. "We wont be like some other kids thrown into this hell, who drag it out. Quick and hopefully painless."
He took a shuddery breath, looking up at the sky. He never wanted this. He never wanted to be here, he didnt want to kill another kid. Because that's what they were, kids. Kids with a family wishing for them to come home. Kids who have friends hoping that maybe one day they can play together again. Kids who were innocent and who were paying for the mistakes their elders had made.
But he would kill if he had to. He'd do it to protect Mai. And when he'd kill, he'd make sure that he would feel the victim's pain. He would make sure that he would feel everything, and he would beg them to forgive him in their dying moments. Though in his head it sounded weird, he still wanted this. He didnt want to be a killer who killed without feeling. If he had to be one, he'd make sure that he felt everything. In a way, he'd be punishing himself.
He liked the thought of doing that. Punishing himself for killing. Twisted as it sounded he liked it. Nothing new anyway, he was always being punished for one thing or another.
Arena 35 BEGINS (1999 new)
Sep 29, 2012 11:17PM

29213 Will's arms wrapped tightly around Mai, his chin resting on her head.
"Hush," He spoke softly, rocking from side to side softly like he would do to comfort his younger siblings. He didn't even notice he was doing it.
"Its ok, Mai, everything will be fine. You will not die, you will not get hurt, and you will get back home to look after your family, and i will do everything in my power make that happen," he murmured. He silently sent a prayer to his siblings though, hoping that they would understand. This was a promise he just made, and he never, ever broke his promises.
Arena 35 BEGINS (1999 new)
Sep 23, 2012 11:07PM

29213 Will froze, looking at Mai. His green eyes flickered slightly. "Kill? Well, i thought we'd only do that if we absolutly had to," He said softly. "....Unless... well, the Gamemakers will do something if we dont.... if no-one kills anyone.... but i still dont want to kill... unless you, um, want to..."
He swallowed, biting his lip. Did she want to? Would she kill him? Though he was taller and maybe faster, Mai might have the fire in her to easily kill him. He inhaled sharply at the thought.
No, dont do this. Dont think of that, you'll become edgy and not trust her, William, He thought quickly, closing his eyes.
"Its your choice," he murmured
Arena 35 BEGINS (1999 new)
Sep 22, 2012 11:41PM

29213 "Pardon?" Will said, looking at Mai. He felt a tinge of hopelessness inside him, and he felt quite weak. Not because he was tired though, more because of the fact that he hadn't come up with any amazing plans yet.
Shesh. Dad would be proud, he thought sourly
Arena 35 BEGINS (1999 new)
Sep 18, 2012 10:53PM

29213 Will bit his lip, eyes closed. "Come on," he muttered to himself, teeth gritted in frustration. "Come on, do something with yourself you stupid boy."
God, he sounded just like his father.
He opened his eyes. "Ok, we're just gonna have to be really careful, ok? Just hold onto my hand, keep a lookout behind me, you see any sudden movements let me know. There's some freaky things out here at the moment, and i'll be damned if i dont at least try to protect you," he said, staring straight at her
Arena 35 BEGINS (1999 new)
Sep 14, 2012 01:06AM

29213 "I think we should get somewhere safer," Will said, "I dont want to be anywhere around here when these things appear"
Arena 35 BEGINS (1999 new)
Sep 10, 2012 10:20PM

29213 The sound of autunmn wrote:
Mai had heard exactly what Will had said, but for the sake of confusing Panem, her face contorted into a whole different reaction. "No Will, I will not kill an innocent child! I don't care what happens to us!" she protested, but her eyes were saying something completely different. Her gaze said she understood, and was willing to follow along with Will's plan of surving off of romance.


William smiled at Mai, then he blinked and frowned.
"Can you hear that?" he murmured, taking Mai's hand and looking around, the other hand holding onto his spear. It had suddenly grown more cold and the falling snow had gotten worse
Arena 35 BEGINS (1999 new)
Sep 09, 2012 09:51PM

29213 The Sound of Autumn wrote:
Mai blinked at Will, trying to think about his question. "I... I don't know," she replied, feeling stuck. What was he getting at? All she knew that if he was trying to trick the Capital, and he said it out loud, then it'd be a waste. All of Panem would know they were faking it- whatever they would be doing. Mai leaned in closer to Will with her head turned slightly, as though she were waiting for him to whisper in her ear.


Will brushed a piece of hair out of her face as he was about to whisper in her ear.
"Could you wait for at least half an hour? Could you survive that? Because as much as i'd love to kiss you right now the Capitol would think that i was playing something up and they wouldn't send us anything. But perhaps in half an hour or so they'll forget."
Arena 35 BEGINS (1999 new)
Sep 06, 2012 11:15PM

29213 William thought for a second, looking up at the sky. "What is it that the Capitol really loves Mai? Besides the death of District children?" he said
Arena 35 BEGINS (1999 new)
Sep 05, 2012 10:51PM

29213 Will looked at Mai, pushing those worrying thoughts out of his mind.
"Not yet, not now, we're strong Mai, we'll be fine," he said, but though he tried to push the thoughts away, they kept sneaking back after awhile
Arena 35 BEGINS (1999 new)
Aug 31, 2012 11:57PM

29213 The sound of autumn wrote:
Max *SHERlocked heart* wrote: "Will looked at Mai. "Look, lets go now, ok? Those screams are freaking me out, the futher away we are from them the better," he said after he heard on of the cannons fire"

Mai had jumped at the loud sound of a thunderously booming cannon, signifying the death of yet...


William took her hand and they both left, Will holding onto the spear tightly as they ran. He didnt feel as confident with the spear, he wished he had a knife or something smaller to use, but this would have to do.
Arena 35 BEGINS (1999 new)
Aug 28, 2012 09:45PM

29213 Will looked at Mai. "Look, lets go now, ok? Those screams are freaking me out, the futher away we are from them the better," he said after he heard on of the cannons fire
Arena 35 BEGINS (1999 new)
Aug 12, 2012 10:36PM

29213 the sound of autumn wrote:
They weren't prepared. They'd just lost all their supplies, all they had left was a few weapons and the clothes on their backs. Mai and Will were tired, hungry, and cold. They weren't ready for facing off with other tributes. Mai looked up to Will, worry burdening the features of her face.


Will looked down at Mai, swallowing. His hands touched his compass in his pocket, feeling a wave of sadness suddenly pass over him. He would never see his siblings again.
No! He thought, a slight flicker of green flames in his eyes. Dont think like that, dont you dare! Kill or be killed, and your not going down just yet William Carlyle, neither of you are
"Listen," He said, cupping Mai's face with his hands, "If they make a move on us, thats when we fight back. If they let us go because they still have a shread of mercy left in them that the Capitol hasn't stomped out, then we leave them alone too. Just go slowly, we'll be fine."
Arena 35 BEGINS (1999 new)
Aug 05, 2012 10:26PM

29213 Will looked around, a small frown on his face. "Damnit..." he murmured, putting one arm around Mai and the other reaching for his spear. His eyes flickered, watching and observing silently.
Arena 35 BEGINS (1999 new)
Aug 04, 2012 10:41PM

29213 ((Take the rain in new zealand!!! I'm over it at the moment, the water blocks the drains at school and next thing i know i'm up to my knees in water, not cool man, not cool. Just really, really cold and icky))

William jumped up onto the Cornucopia, putting his spear down beside him and reaching down to help Mai up
Arena 35 BEGINS (1999 new)
Aug 01, 2012 10:55PM

29213 Will nodded, his legs pumping even faster. They had to make it, he never imagined dying under a layer of snow. Snow was just frozen water, he had grown up around water, he never feared it. But now he was being chased by it, oh dear God he felt let down for some reason. He felt as though the thing he had trusted most had turned on him. Was he going insane, thinking this?
He grunted, just running faster then ever with Mai
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