Gail's comments
(member since Jun 16, 2009)
Gail's comments from the ¡ POETRY ! group.
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Thanks for sharing Ruth. Interesting, what you wrote about, and how you wrote it.
Gail A.
Annette, let me see if I can find the comment and get back to you on it. If I find it, and I should, I'll reply again from that page.
Gee, your profile picture is real nice. Like your glasses. I've been telling myself to re-do my profile. There's more I could add and just haven't yet.
Gail A.
Continue....just a bit more glue
and form this poem into....two
Tony,
Wonderful poem. I got so catch up with the rhyming; by time I read the last line it felt astonishing.
Gail A.
Annette,
Very Funny... I'm smiling:) "I have so many Autumn poems, I need to RAKE through them." I love the way you said that! Simple and pleasent.
What's this about an Autumn contest?
Did you ever get my question in regards to "A Poem a Week" group? I hope it did not get lost. In fact, perhaps I forgot to post it after writing you, mmm. I'll wait a while and see what happens.
Gail A.
Jon, you draw, neat!
Britty, great poem I like it a lot. Do you remember how old you were?
In the past couple of years I went back to some very old poems and revised them. It's fun, rewarding to see and undersand the difference; taking an old poem written when we are much younger and bringing it up to date with new experences to add to it. Don't you think?
Gail A.
I think your moving along with it Britty. I agree with some of the others in they're comments. And yes, Jim's poem was so sad, assuming Ruth, we are talking about the same here.
Anyway, Annette, how do I get on to the Group "A Poem a Week" site? I readed your comment about my poem a while back; a poem I wrote in response to the long artical about rhythm and rhyme etc...and did not have the chance to respond to you then. Thanks for the comment.
Gail A.
PS Annette, I'll try and return to that spacific post and respond there too so there is no confussion.
How sad. Very well done.
Gail A.
Harley, interesting stuff. The black background helps to read the writing easier. I am use to close captions, being that I have had a hearing lose all my life.
Gail A.
Wow Annette, I had know idea. Haven't been to our library for a spell. The one I go to is just down town; the building is not big and beautiful nor real old either.
Gail A.
I like it. Great job David! I like writing about the seasons too.
Gail A.
All interesting comments!
Britty, how do you think you might change it, if you did, knowing where you were coming from when it was written; now that you got other insight?
Gail A.
Jon, I think your poem indeed, shows us how you feel. That to me is the best part. That to me is why you write. It is why I write.
If there is more you can feel with some images give it a try. I believe I understand what Ruth means. But, your, instructions, as Ruth put it drew me in well and has me wondering- "Lose the stupid mask and show me the world what you really do," -I assume your speaking to yourself? Just what is the mask, if I may.
Gail A.
Congrats Marian. Sounds like lots of you are moving along with work- getting pubished and writing etc...
Gail A.
Yeah, that's wonderful Nina. I like the name of the anthology Space Between Us.
Gail A.
That's great Ruth. I'm from Wisconsin. Congrates
Gail A.
Sounds like your looking for someone with more education then I have to offer. Though I just wanted to say, I loved the poem. Very visual especailly the last part-looking past into the far future; how others or someone else would view the same scene, then.
Good luck.
Gail A.
Wow, wow! I really like this Jon. Hay it's me Gail. I think this poem is a hit. I'll pass this one onto my daughter, christa. Hopefully you got my message earlier today. We were talking about sharing a poem with her.
I agree with tempust, those, have got to be my faviorte lines.
Keep up,
Gail A.
Mary, wow!
I agree with Jon, very nice. I like the smooth flowing way this poem was writen. Your ideas within the poem were most interesting. Let me know how it does with the children.
I will have to look into that site you left, thanks.
Keep up
Gail A.
Mukesh,
Very nice. I believe I caught on the second time around. Though I'm sure not entirely.
Gail A.
