Mickey's comments (member since May 03, 2009)

Mickey's comments from the ¡ POETRY ! group.

Hola amigo!

Welcome! Im pretty young but have been published in mags and stuff. I LOVE poems, and if something happens that inspires me is the only time i can write. If someone just wants me to write i can't. It has to come from my heart.

I love that scuba diving poem- very nice. Captured me in a story of love between father and daughter on a adventure.
Nice work. ☺

Fall-Orginal.

The leaves fall gently from the treetops as they land softly on the ground creating a forest carpet. As I step on a twig hidden beneath my boot, a small popping sound echoes across the land. The sun lightly dances on the trees and leaves, creating a wonderful array of sunshine. The golden colors of the leaves swoop and sway as they get kicked about.
Fall is a time of beauty, when Mother Nature goes to work to restore the Earth and get it ready for spring. But when winter comes, an eerie silence fills the forest and all colors are gone.
Then,
The golden sun is gone.


Please tell me what you think, and i am young ( like really young) so it dosn't have the most expanded vocab.

thanks

I cant find it!

Were is the folder?

Do i enter my poem here?