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Jul 16, 2009 09:07PM

10003 It can be what ever kind of 'back' you want it to be.

and AWESOME poem Joelle :)
Day 54 (29 new)
Jul 16, 2009 09:03PM

10003 Yeah, you guys, lol you're pretty good on word count unless ur getting in the 400s/500s haha.

NOOOOOO Jeeves, I meant everyone should write about
me! CLARE! haha right. lol and why would I want that exactly?? I'd hate to hear what people would say... actaully....hmm..... that might be interesting.

NOW! My pathetic short story cuz I don't have time to write a long one anymore ( =[ ) :

Me. Why Me? WHY must it ALWAYS be me? If there were dishes destined to be broken, you could rest assured that I'd be the one to drop them. If someone should get mugged, no doubt I'd be at the scene of the crime, a look of guilt on my face for no reason. If there were a building to collapse randomly, they'd all look at me, wondering just how I'd managed to do it. Yes, that’s me. Always me.
Day 53 (15 new)
Jul 16, 2009 09:00PM

10003 hahah absolutly confusing and funny :) I liked it!
Jul 16, 2009 08:54PM

10003 lol alriiiight...
Day 55 (10 new)
Jul 16, 2009 08:54PM

10003 What are the point of Phonebooks if every person I need to find is unlisted. Come on. ak!!!
Jul 16, 2009 08:53PM

10003 Um, could you guys battle it out somewhere else? I mean, no offence, but this is the topic for 'short stories'... You're more than welcome to scoot over to the Topic Discussion and have at it! :D lol....
Jul 16, 2009 08:47PM

10003 omg, hahah, I've been reading all the comments, and I feel really stupid for forgeting about it!!! Sorry!!!
Jul 16, 2009 08:44PM

10003 Oh my gosh, you guys!!! So sorry about the misdirection! Ak, I forgot to change it :( I've been super busy... Sorry again, for all the confusion!!
Links to Stories (29 new)
Jul 14, 2009 08:40PM

10003 didn't work...
Jul 14, 2009 08:36PM

10003 You have until Sunday afternoon to post a poem on here before the Topic changes. Please post it directly onto this topic, rather than posting a link. You're welcome to discuss poems on here also.

This week's Topic is Back. If anyone has any objections to this topic, please go to the Poetry Topic Objections post.

Poems can be as long and short as you want them to be. This is not a contest, it's just for fun and to show off our own poetry.
Day 54 (29 new)
Jul 14, 2009 08:35PM

10003 These stories can be 100 words or less. Today's topic is ME!!

Write what ever you want, just try to keep to the topic (or at least have to word in the story) and keep it pretty short. Around 100. :)
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Jul 14, 2009 08:31PM

10003 haha u guys, its not all that strick. we just say 75 words just to, u know, suggest that it be kept short. actually originally it was 100. idk what happened. lolz.
Day 53 (15 new)
Jul 14, 2009 08:28PM

10003 good stories!!
Jul 14, 2009 08:27PM

10003 Instructions:
Please do not use a story previously used on goodreads. After the week's contest, you are welcome to put it on your profile writings, but please refrain from using stories you have already put on there.

You have until Saturday afternoon to post a story on here. Please post it directly onto this topic, rather than posting a link. Also, please do not discuss stories on here. You must go to Weekly Short Story Contest Discussion for that. This will avoid any clutter and confusion, so that people can simply come on here and read the story, without having to read comments on the story.

This week's Topic is Rapids. If anyone has any objections to this topic, please go to the Objections post. The rules are pretty loose. You could write about rapids, water, pretty much anything. Just have the word in the story :)

Weekly stories must be at least 500 words long to 2,500 words long. (if the whole story won't fit in one post, divide it into two)

Good luck!


P.S. PLEASE say if you would like to have your story on Short Story Galore, if you win. This way it wouldn't take me ages to get your consent afterwards. This includes adding a link to your stories. If you want to have your story on the Short Story Galore, but not the link, just say so.
Jul 14, 2009 08:21PM

10003 Sorry everyone! Busy weekend! The results:

Davis, congrats! You win this weeks contest! thanks for entering!
Jul 14, 2009 08:20PM

10003 good poem
Jul 13, 2009 08:29AM

10003 Alt Ctrl Delete to get task manager?
Jul 09, 2009 08:59PM

10003 lol that was a very random story.
Jul 09, 2009 08:53PM

10003 Name: Punks Instigating Non-stopping Kaos

By: Clare

Words: 724

Notes: lollz it was very confusing to write, I'll tell ya that much...


The internet is a great thing. I spend 80% of my free time on it. Face book, e-mail, IMing, MySpace, Goodreads, Twitter, you name it, I’m there. I’ll have to say my favorite is MSN instant messaging though. The ability to talk to all my friends without having to actually call them, or meet up with them. I can do a million other things at the same time too. It’s a pretty good deal if you ask me. Which is why you can find me on IM almost every night after nine, like tonight.

Tonight I grabbed a bag of Doritos and a can of Coke and sit down. I click the Messenger window open and write ‘hatepasswords:P’ into the password slot and sign in.

A bunch of people are on so I don’t even bother talking to them each individually. I click on one name, my friend Kira, and a small window pops up. It has a section where everything typed it displayed, and there is a bar that separates it from the smaller box in which I type what I want to say. My picture is in the bottom corner, and is displaying a white screen with the letters: ITS TIME TO START SLAPPING PEOPLE. Kira’s is of a cartoon dragon. I add a bunch of people and start a convo. Takes them a few minutes to reply (always does), but after a few minute they started popping in. We all had weird nick-names, like Cup’Cake’Demon, SuckIt-Stupid, and Its.a.Sheep!! Mines was ME. Anyway, one by one they came in and said hi and started to goof off.

Know0where0u0live says:
Hi fools. I know where u liiiiive! Muahaha!!

Hi*freaks:P says:
Shut it freak

LoserLeader says:
Hi To You To.

Elf-huntress! has joined this conversation.

HHHHHHATEcha! has joined this conversation.

HHHHHHATEcha says:
Hey kids, hows it???/>

Elf-huntress! says:

SuckIt-Stupid has joined this conversation.

Its.a.Sheep has joined this conversation.

HHHHHHATEcha says:
Shuddup elfy

ME says:
Lol cute

Elf-huntress! says:

SuckIt-Stupid says:
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u died yesterday. Sad.

Its.a.Sheep says:
As a sheep to be certain.... lollzlz

Hi*freaks:P says:

Elf-huntress! says:

Its.a.Sheep says:
That’s for me to know and you.....not to know.

Elf-huntress! says:

ME says:
hey guys, I came upon a revelation today...

Hottie-In-Mars has joined this conversation.
hey everyone! HOTTIE is HEREEEE.

Elf-huntress! says:
CHA CHA! A;skgj;kjsfg[pdkfanl’

ME says:
Hello? Anyone wanna hear my revelation????

LoserLeader says:
What Are We Talking About Again? : |

Its.a.Sheep says:
Life in general.

ME says:
PINK actually.

Hottie-In-Mars says:
Omg! Pink?! WHERE WHERE WHERE!!!!???!!!

Know0where0u0live says:
u like pink? disgusting

Hottie-In-Mars says:
read the name! pink = hot, and I’m hot!! : |)

Cup’Cake’Demon has joined this conversation.

Hi*freaks:P says:
Shut up lindaaaaly

Hottie-In-Mars says:
I hate that name b quiet : (

Cup’Cake’Demon says:
Whatd I miss?

SuckIt-Stupid says:
Ur life apparently. :PP

ME says:
Actually, I was thinking about pink means. I decided it means Punks Instigating Non-stop Koas.

Its.a.Sheep says:
Chaos. Its spelled with a CH retard. *rolls eyes*

Elf-huntress! says:

HHHHHHATEcha says:
WHHHHHHere do u get off? ??!?

Know0where0u0live says:
Well the important part is that I know where u all live. O_O

Its.a.Sheep says:
Is she for real?

Hottie-In-Mars says:
Is there any hot guys in this convo? I’m free on sat!!! :D :D :D

LoserLeader says:
I’d Rather Stick A Toothpick In My Eye.

HHHHHHATEcha says:
theres sense in that statement...../..

ME says:
I guess no one appreciated my PINK theory. : /

Hi*freaks:P says:
U guessed it freeeak.

SuckIt-Stupid says:
Suck it :P lolllz

ME says:
w/e, ima leave. Ttyl.

Cup’Cake’Demon says:
What?! : O ur leaving?!?!?@# don’t go! I’m miss u!!

Elf-huntress! says:
HUGS! KISSES!!!! LA LA LA!!! Alghjksdklfjhglkdsjfh;kjpdf

Its.a.Sheep says:
Talk to thou later.

Cup’Cake’Demon says:

ME says:
Till next time pplz

I signed off. One thing about IM...absolutely nothing makes sense. Not that it matters. Lol.

Day 46 (19 new)
Jul 09, 2009 06:45PM

10003 lol *Shhh* don't tell anyone, but if its like a little longer, lightning will not strike u down... >.< :P

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