Eric Yuen's recent posts
Recent public discussion board posts (showing 1-5 of 6).
Great review. I liked your summary because it was really descriptive. I got the basic idea of the book and you didn't give too much information away. I also really like your hook and I liked the part when you said "imagine"...
This book connects to my life because it's basicly about growing up and making choices. Overall great job.
I liked how you described the characters because the way you described him made an image in my head. Maybe you can improve by describing more of the summary but not too much. Describe up to the climax because thats when the main action happens. If i was being hunted by the government, i would be so scared and run away. i also liked your oxymoron (bitter-sweet).
Although im not that interested in love books, this book is ok. This book seems like a more modern version of Romen and Juliet. i like how you asked rhetorical questions to leave the reader hanging and in order to know what happens next you have to read it. Also i liked how you told the story but didn't tell too much.
I really like your beginning paragraph because it really want to read you're whole review. It made me imagine if i was her and what i would do. I also liked your choice of quote and you were very descriptive. I would want to read this book because it seems interesting and i personally enjoy mysteries. A connection i have is that i watched an episode of Rugrats where dylan was dropped on the head when he was small but he wasn't in a come luckily.
i liked how you describe the book but you didnt give too much away for the reader. i personally like horror books bedcause they are very exciting and descriptive, especially when the monsters kill the people. i like the choice of quote you picked, it really help draw the readers attention. overall great work.