Toil and Trouble (Jolie Wilkins, #2)

Apr 28, 2012 Jessi rated it 5 of 5 stars

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Witches, Warlocks, and Waging a War.

Jolie Wilkins is a witty, sarcastic psychic. Well, until she found out she's a witch and her power is so strong she can reanimate otherworldy creatures. Now she's a witty, sarcastic witch who's about to join forces with her beloved Rand. A war is being waged between the faeries, vampires, werewolves, and witches. But is Jolie biting off more than she can chew?

I. Could. NOT. Put. This. Book. Down! I had the first book in this series in my TBR pile for entirely...more

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Jan 26, 2013 Michala Tyann rated it 5 of 5 stars

Book Review: Toil and Trouble by H.P. Mallory
by: Michala T.
TOIL AND TROUBLE
BOOK 2 OF THE JOLIE WILKINS SERIES
So I dived right into book 2 of the series and finished it in one day. It was totally awesome and I am already half way through book 3. But, again, let's focus on this one. LOL

Jolie finds herself in the center of the underworld civil war and its all about her. While she still struggles with her feelings with Rand and his incessant 'we can't do this' because of his torn emotions of love an...more Book Review: Toil and Trouble by H.P. Mallory
by: Michala T.
TOIL AND TROUBLE
BOOK 2 OF THE JOLIE WILKINS SERIES
So I dived right into book 2 of the series and finished it in one day. It was totally awesome and I am already half way through book 3. But, again, let's focus on this one. LOL

Jolie finds herself in the center of the underworld civil war and its all about her. While she still struggles with her feelings with Rand and his incessant 'we can't do this' because of his torn emotions of love and his call of duty and she can't help but wonder if he will ever come around.

It doens't help that she has a very sexy vampire who is determined to have her as his own. The warlock and the vampire are constantly going at it. Sometimes it does annoying reading it...but Mallory does well to hold the readers attention and interest.

Jolie defends herself against some mega fairy magic and it nearly kills her. The impending war has increased all around her and the man she loves is refusing to let fight in the war. This just won't do for Jolie as she is determined to exact her own revenge on the one man who nearly killed her and so she seeks the help of the one who Rand detests...the vampire that seeks to claim her for his own.

As if all this isn't enough, she is in for the biggest shock of her life when she is ripped away from everything she knows.

This book was, if it is possible, even better than book one. I totally couldn't put this down. I read it straight through...even though I had worked an all nighter and needed sleep for the next all nighter the following day. I just couldn't stop reading. I would say that near the end...everything changed for a bit and I felt a bit of a culture shock. I didn't like it at first but then I was amazed with Mallory's tale-spinning abilities and saw just how important this piece was. Amazing.

VERDICT: YET ANOTHER 10/10. If I could I'd rate it 12/10...but that's kind of impossible. LOL

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Oct 02, 2012 Jetches (My Not So Vacant Shelf) rated it 5 of 5 stars

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Oh. My. God. I was/am freaking out. There was a point while I was reading this novel that I took hold of my friend/co-workers arm and started shaking it with all my might completely freaking out because something big happens in this novel. I don’t want to ruin it but I was thinking “No! No! Oh my! It all make sense! I know what’s going to happen! OH.MY.GOD! That is so friggin’ perfect!”. I know you are probably sitting there with big buggy eyes thinking “she is firmly on the pipe” but, no. There...more Oh. My. God. I was/am freaking out. There was a point while I was reading this novel that I took hold of my friend/co-workers arm and started shaking it with all my might completely freaking out because something big happens in this novel. I don’t want to ruin it but I was thinking “No! No! Oh my! It all make sense! I know what’s going to happen! OH.MY.GOD! That is so friggin’ perfect!”. I know you are probably sitting there with big buggy eyes thinking “she is firmly on the pipe” but, no. There was just a moment when things about this book connect with things from the first book and even the past that makes anyone reading it want to do the can-can.
Make sure your not standing close to people while you are reading this book by the way.
It was sheer beauty that makes me have a lady-crush on one H.P. Mallory. I truly wish I had a mind capable of thinking that far ahead and being able to write in plots in the first book that become twist in the second.
Anyhow you clearly understand how awesome this book was for me. I highly recommend. Do you want emotion? Do you want to cry and laugh ad get angry? Do you want to be surprised? Do you want to swoon over a man/men? Do you want to cheer your heroine on? If you answered yes to any and/or all of these I have a question for you?
Why are you still reading this and not out purchasing these books?
Good:
Jolie—Oh my lordy. I am so proud of you. It’s like watching a child grow up. You were a psychic when we started off together and now…you can actually kick my plump little rump. So proud *tear.
Rand—I wanted to slap you Rand. SO MANY TIMES! But then through the second half of the book you were like Mr. Darcy for a second (as in you infuriated me) then I was in love with you again.
Sinjin—There is a whole different side to Sinjin. I’m lovin it, yet wondering what is he really all about?
Bad:
Nothing. Everything falls together perfectly. Dear lord it was good.
Overall (Writing style, story line, and general):
Overall the plot and story line surpassed the first. Once again there were two stories in one novel (sort of) but these seemed to mesh well even better than the first novel. The characters as still brilliant and even more in depth. SO MUCH gets revealed it was awesome. And I didn’t have to re-read anything to make sure I was understanding things correctly. All of this= awesomeness. And I will be continuing the series.

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Jan 28, 2012 Felicia rated it 4 of 5 stars

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Received from Author and bought on Amazon (yes folks I liked it that much)!

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What I Loved: Toil and Trouble really is Jolie's life in a nutshell! I really can't write much without giving it away so this will be a general review. This book rocked the house in a fun, spunky kind of way. I liked the first one (gave it a 3) but all those little things that were missing from it are in this one in spades. Jolie, bless her little wiccan heart, i...more

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Jan 08, 2012 Nikki Wilde rated it 5 of 5 stars

Toil and Trouble picked up exactly where book one left off. There was no down time. This book also answered a lot of unknown questions and put a lot of things into perspective.

Not only did I get more of what I wanted, Sinjin, but we also learned in what directions things would go. Although, we never really learn more about Sinjin I feel like we may in the future. That I definitely can't wait for. There are a few other people I'd like to learn about but I'm unsure as to whether or not that will h...more

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Aug 22, 2011 Heather Book Savvy Babe rated it 5 of 5 stars

Shelves: paranormal-romance, urban-fantasy, review-on-blog, 5-star

Toil and Trouble picks up right after book 1. This story is a little bit more focused, as there is not as much need for in-depth explanations. With impending war, relationship drama, and surprising plot twists, book 2 in the Jolie Wilkins series is even better than the first book.

In this book, war is imminent, the characters have chosen sides, and war preparations are made. Jolie and Rand still face relationship problems, even though the attraction between them is stronger than ever. If possible...more

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Apr 17, 2011 Nikki added it

I read the second book in the Jolie Wilkins series by H.P. Mallory, “Toil and Trouble “ on the Kindle. Like the first one, “Fire Burn and Cauldron Bubble,” which I also reviewed, it didn’t disappoint. This installment picks up right where the last one left off- with a pending war and a seemingly unrequited love. I was a little concerned at first because the beginning was moving just a little too slow for me. But within the first few pages, Mallory picks up the pace and doesn’t let up until the e...more I read the second book in the Jolie Wilkins series by H.P. Mallory, “Toil and Trouble “ on the Kindle. Like the first one, “Fire Burn and Cauldron Bubble,” which I also reviewed, it didn’t disappoint. This installment picks up right where the last one left off- with a pending war and a seemingly unrequited love. I was a little concerned at first because the beginning was moving just a little too slow for me. But within the first few pages, Mallory picks up the pace and doesn’t let up until the end.

Blurb from Amazon:

"After defending herself against fairy magic, Jolie Wilkins wakes to find her world turned upside down—the creatures of the Underworld on the precipice of war. The Underworld is polarized in a battle of witch against witch, creature against creature, led by the villainous Bella, who would be Queen. While Jolie has one goal in mind, to stake the vampire, Ryder, who nearly killed her, she also must choose between the affections of her warlock employer, Rand, and the mysteriously sexy vampire, Sinjin. And as if that weren’t enough to ruin a girl’s day, everything Jolie knows will be turned inside out when she’s thrust into the shock of a lifetime."

“Toil and Trouble” was just a little heavier on the romance (and somewhat graphic sex scenes, which don’t bother me but I thought I should provide fair warning for those easily bothered by that sort of thing) than the first book, but again she worked it into the storyline flawlessly, never making me feel like I was reading a romance novel. Mallory writes in such a fun, easygoing voice. While the books are in first person, she doesn’t force her reader to sit through page after page of annoying, angst-ridden inner monologues. The dialogue is natural and witty and the characters are well-developed early on.

I just read on Twitter that there is going to be a third book in the series. Yay! This one ended in a way that suggested a sequel, but also tied up a few of the major loose ends. I’m also looking forward to “To Kill a Warlock,” her first book in another series. If you enjoy Urban Fantasy with a a little more than a twist of romance, I really think you’ll enjoy H.P. Mallory.

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Jan 20, 2011 Lacey Weatherford rated it 5 of 5 stars

I rushed right out to buy this book after finishing the first one in the series and I was instantly captivated, having to read until I was finished with it.

Let me just say the love triangle rocked in this book and kept me bouncing back and forth so badly that I was afraid I was going to end up with whiplash. How the heck does one choose between a smoking hot warlock and a drippingly delicious vampire? Both guys had the goods in spades and kept poor Jolie terrified of making a decision. I couldn'...more

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Jan 04, 2011 Belinda Boring rated it 5 of 5 stars

I seriously lost major pounds reading this book because it seemed like every time I turned the page I was jumping up and down with excitement over a new plot twist, swooning with giddiness of the TWO extremely sexy male characters or so engrossed with what was happening with Jolie that stopping to eat was a major inconvenience. I absolutely loved the first book, Fire Burn and Cauldron Bubble and expected pretty much the same for Toil And Trouble so I was completely blown away with just how incre...more I seriously lost major pounds reading this book because it seemed like every time I turned the page I was jumping up and down with excitement over a new plot twist, swooning with giddiness of the TWO extremely sexy male characters or so engrossed with what was happening with Jolie that stopping to eat was a major inconvenience. I absolutely loved the first book, Fire Burn and Cauldron Bubble and expected pretty much the same for Toil And Trouble so I was completely blown away with just how incredible this book was to read and just how tied up my emotions became because this was definitely one of the BEST books I read all year. The book had me completely turned inside out and upside turn and I LOVED every single word of it!!

Toil and Trouble picks up where the last book left off and straight away I saw a difference. Jolie had just won a bet with Odran and wakes up to find a concerned and protective Rand. She’s now weak from overusing her magic and needs plenty of TLC to regain her strength. With the Fae now joining in the war against Bella, things begin to heat up as all the different groups come together to Pelham Manor to train. Desperately wanting to be a part of the preparations and her need to destroy Ryder for what he’s done, Jolie is frustrated when it seems Rand is making the decisions for her. The sexy warlock is different now, more attentive to her and although she slowly begins to understand why he’s so adamant about not bonding with her, it still hurts. To add fuel to the fire, things begin to heat up with Sinjin, the seductive vampire who always seems to be around when she needs him and it doesn’t take long before she sees an opportunity to help her in the battle. It involves working closely with Sinjin and everything must be done away from the watchful eye of Rand. Things don’t go as strictly as planned and things blow up, leaving Jolie to take drastic, dangerous steps that will put her on the frontline. Along the way, Jolie’s heart takes different turns and her feelings begin to deepen for Sinjin, confusing her as she once again has to evaluate her heart. Just when Jolie thinks that everything’s going according to her plan, a shocking turn of events happen that completely pulls the rug out from under her. Suddenly things become way more complicated than before, the risk is greater and even though she has the opportunity to have everything she’s ever wanted; Jolie has to make a heartbreaking decision. What will she chose? LOL you have to read it to find out but prepare yourself because the twists in this book are AMAZING and will leave you utterly speechless.

I honestly don’t know how the author does it. I went into the book thinking I knew it all. I figured that I knew roughly how the story would be; I was certain that Rand had blown his chance with Jolie and that my lust buddy Sinjin would swoop in and whisk Jolie away. Done deal. End of story. SOOOO not how it went and I have to say I absolutely LOVED the uncertainty of it all. HP Mallory has a really great sense of humor that I really enjoyed throughout the book and it had me chuckling, sometimes so loud I’d wake my husband out of a dead sleep. There was one scene earlier on in the book that was so hilarious, it took several attempts for me to catch my breath long enough to stop laughing. She wrote with great emotion which for me is such an important aspect of a great book. Whether it was in a tender moment between Jolie and Rand, a seductive one with Sinjin or a terrifying battle scene, I was completely hooked and unable to separate myself from the characters. I wasn’t just given a bunch of scenes stringed together; I was given an experience that felt very close to a cardio workout. One that was thrilling to the very end and I closed the book impatiently eager for book three.

Jolie was fabulous in this story, becoming much stronger as I read. I loved that she was so determined and that she was willing to do what was needed to put her plan into action. I totally understood her need for revenge because Ryder was a monster, a vile and disgusting vampire that I’d gladly hop in line just for a shot at staking him. Ryder aside, she knew she needed to be beside Rand in the battle and she knew if she didn’t do something she ran the risk of being “stashed” against her will in safety, which wasn’t Jolie at all. She’s the woman that fights for what she needs and although I was sad that she had to go to such measures to do it, I loved that she wasn’t deterred and that she was so creative. She had incredible heart throughout the book and her poor heart gets pulled through the wringer a few times but Jolie’s resilient and I just loved watching how she dealt with every situation. I laughed with her, cheered for her and sadly there were times my heart broke for her. The lengths she goes to for love and to do what was right was extraordinary and I couldn’t help but admire her for it.

You need to know I went into the book a strong supporter of Sinjin. My gosh that man was like liquid chocolate, so smooth and seductive and with the back and forth of Rand and his emotions; I was completely ready for Jolie to kick him to the curb for my favorite vampire. So when I began to see a different Rand, a more attentive and openly affectionate Rand, my “lust” for Sinjin began to be overshadowed by how strongly my heart started to chant Rand’s name. How did Jolie stand it all? Two deliciously sexy men, both with their own strengths and weaknesses and both were vying for her attention. Sinjin was openly ready to commit to her and I could definitely see why he was such a temptation because he was always available whenever Jolie needed him. There was no holding back and how could Rand possibly compete with that when his fear of bonding still played a huge part in his relationship with Jolie. His fear was so understandable as Rand shared his heart with her and it wasn’t long before I switched camps and became Team Rand. What can I say, heart trumps lust any day but what a rollercoaster and what incredible male characters. I really believe it doesn’t matter whether you love Sinjin or Rand because both of them hold the power to make you swoon and go giddy at the knees. Wickedly hot men that leave your insides gooey and breathless *sigh*

This is one of those books where I could sit and gush about it for hours because it was such a wonderful read. I loved what I read and I loved how I felt, making it a book I wouldn’t hesitate to recommend to anyone. For me, HP Mallory is one heck of a writer because she managed to top a great first book with an amazing second one and I can’t wait to see what she has up her sleeves for Jolie, Rand and Sinjin. With the way my heart beat in Toil and Trouble I know it’s going to be incredible. Happy reading!!
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Jan 02, 2011 Lady Rogue rated it 4 of 5 stars

This review has been hidden because it contains spoilers. To view it, click here. Toil and Trouble takes off where the first book, Fire Burn and Cauldron Bubble left off. Jolie had just dueled with Dougal, champion of the fairy king Odran, in order to win thier allegiance against Bella, the big bad bitch and her minions. Thankfully, she won. But, in order to do so, she had to take in much of Dougal's negative energy and use some of her own life force. It not only put her in a coma for three days, but after waking from it, left her incapacitated. While she was resting and wait...more Toil and Trouble takes off where the first book, Fire Burn and Cauldron Bubble left off. Jolie had just dueled with Dougal, champion of the fairy king Odran, in order to win thier allegiance against Bella, the big bad bitch and her minions. Thankfully, she won. But, in order to do so, she had to take in much of Dougal's negative energy and use some of her own life force. It not only put her in a coma for three days, but after waking from it, left her incapacitated. While she was resting and waiting to regain her strength, Rand had assembled thier allies to Penlham Manor and was overseeing the preparations for the upcoming war. Among those allies was the sexy and suave vampire, Sinjin, who much to Rand's chargin, had more than a passing interest in Jolie. While bedridden, Jolie was attacked by one of Bella's minions, a werewolf who had hidden among the allies. In order to prevent her from turning, Sinjin had to suck the wound. This was an intimate act that pleased Sinjin, aroused and confused Jolie, and pissed off Rand. When Sinjin healed the werewolf bite, he also managed to return her strength and heal her completely.

Unfortunately, while Sinjin was making every effort to get closer to Jolie, Rand kept pulling away from her. First, Rand left her hanging during a very intimate moment, then he refused to let her participate in the war. He was afraid of her being in danger...Men can be dumbasses! She was at the core of the war...of course she was in danger, no matter what he did. *rolls eyes*. When he forbade her from the war, she was not a happy girl. She swore off anything with a penis. As far as the war went, she had her own reasons to enter it and wasn't going to be left out. She secretly turned to Sinjin for help. Naturally, as Jolie and Sinjin worked closely together, a war of another kind was brewing between Sinjin and Rand.

I loved Jolie's character. Even bedridden, she still maintained her straight forward, blunt and fantastic spirit. I loved that although she was a witch, she had very human thoughts. Her time rehabilitating, gave her the time to reflect on her relationship with Rand. In the first book Rand struggled with his attraction for Jolie.In this book, he struggled with commitment. She just wanted him to accept her...all of her. She loved him, but a girl can only take so much rejection. So, it was completely understandable how Sinjin had begun to appeal to her, the more she was around him. I could understand Rand's perspective, but, I didn't think, he should have prevented his current relationship with Jolie from moving forward, just because of a past love he didn't even remember. Hell, I was just as fustrated as she was with him. I also appreciate Jolie's determination...she was one of the core reasons for the war in the first place. After all it was her talent Bella was determine to control. Not to mention, she wanted a little payback and satisfaction of knowing she killed Ryder...Hell no, she was not going to be left out. I love that she did what she had to, what she knew was right.

Overall, Toil and Trouble is an amazing balance of love and war. There was never a dull moment and plenty of surprises. In this book, feelings were questioned, time was tavelled, truths were revealed, and war was fought. As I finished reading the book, the romantic complications for Jolie and Rand looked like they were finally resolved....but, with the unpredictability of H.P. Mallory, one never knows. The author has an uncanny ability to satisfy the reader, by blending action, magic, love, time-travel, and battle into a wonderfully coherant and entertaining story. Not to mention, she taunts the reader with a teasing last word... making them eagerly anticipating the next installment. If you're a fan of urban fantasy and paranormal romance that is light hearted and fast paced, then I think you will like this series.

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Dec 09, 2010 Raelena aka Throuthehaze rated it 5 of 5 stars

As much as I loved the first book in the series, I think that Toil and Trouble managed to be even better! I'm really liking the direction Jolie's relationships with Rand and Sinjin is going. I love that one minute I think she should be with one guy, and the next minute I have changed my mind. It definitely keeps things interesting. Honestly, I am kind of in love with both men myself. Jolie is an amazing character. She is smart, funny, and likes her independence...but for me, the men really make...more

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Dec 05, 2010 Siobhan rated it 4 of 5 stars

4.5 Stars for Toil and Trouble - Jolie Wilkins Book 2 - by H. P Mallory

This book picks up immediately after book one and what a fabulous second book to a series. I love all the characters in these novels and this one does not disappoint. On the whole most of the key characters in this book were introduced to us in the first novel Fire Burn and Cauldron Bubble and this sequel provides more depth to those we came to know.

There are two key male characters Rand, a gorgeous warlock and Sinjin a dan...more

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May 12, 2012 Alice Liu rated it 5 of 5 stars · review of another edition

I really disliked Jolie in this second book of the Jolie Wilkins series. While she began book one as a naive woman who made mistakes as she discovered her witchy ways, she became selfish, arrogant, and ignorant in book two...at least for the first 60% of the book. She wants to have sex with Rand, even though it will create a life-death bond between them. She doesn't know if she wants that kind of relationship, but she wants to go through the motions despite the consequences to satisfy her immedi...more

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Feb 22, 2013 Yomna hosny rated it 2 of 5 stars

"WTF" is both an entirely overused acronym and an accurate reaction to the mess that is this book.

Granted, The previous book wasn't the embodiment of literary accomplishment or anything. It seems books that belong to this genre rarely are.

Maybe I was just rebounding from the bad experience I had with

Fifty shades of Grey

and Fifty shades darker

A side by side comparison with 50 shades of Grey, anything that makes a feeble attempt not to suck will be the clear winner. Although I personally wouldn't...more

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Jan 07, 2013 Heidi Tieman mclennan rated it 5 of 5 stars

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Wow...how to choose between Rand and Sinjin...hmmmm. Lots of twists and turns in this book. Great read!

The underworld in civil war. The cause? A witch who can reanimate the dead. A sexy as sin vampire determined to claim her. An infuriatingly handsome warlock torn between duty and love. Who says blonds have more fun?

After defending herself against fairy magic, Jolie Wilkins wakes to find her world turned upside down—the creatures of the underworld on the precipice of war.

The underworld is polari...more

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May 29, 2012 Christine (Rainy Day Reads) rated it 5 of 5 stars

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I can not remember the last time that I have fallen so in love with a series of books. I dread having to stop reading, I get excited when am able to go back to reading and I am already dreading catching up to the latest book as I do not know what I will be doing with myself until the next one comes out. It does make me happy that I did not discover this series right away so that I can read 3.5 books in one go because the wait between them would have been terrible.

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Apr 01, 2011 Karissa rated it 4 of 5 stars

I got a copy of this in e-book form from the author in exchange for an honest review. I have previously read both the first book in this series, Fire Burn and Cauldron Bubble, and really enjoyed it and To Kill a Warlock (the first book in her Dulcie O'Neil series) and like that one too. So I was excited to read this book. It was an entertaining read; the plot doesn't progress a lot but Jolie has a lot to deal with and it is all entertaining.

Jolie is with Rand and Christie and Sinjin recovering f...more I got a copy of this in e-book form from the author in exchange for an honest review. I have previously read both the first book in this series, Fire Burn and Cauldron Bubble, and really enjoyed it and To Kill a Warlock (the first book in her Dulcie O'Neil series) and like that one too. So I was excited to read this book. It was an entertaining read; the plot doesn't progress a lot but Jolie has a lot to deal with and it is all entertaining.

Jolie is with Rand and Christie and Sinjin recovering from her battle at the end of Fire Burn and Cauldron Bubble. They are grouping together all of the paranormal allies that they can find so that they can go to war against the evil Bella. Jolie is torn between Rand, who still won't commit to her because he is afraid of what will happen to him in the war, and Sinjin who is increasingly understanding and supportive of Jolie's need to fight in the upcoming war. Jolie wants to fight in the war but Rand has forbidden it; so Jolie comes up with a complex plan to fight no matter what.

This was a fun and entertaining read. Rand and Sinjin are both absolutely wonderful characters and completely swoon worthy. Sinjin especially gets a lot of page space; he is super yummy and we learn a lot more about his past which I really enjoyed. Rand comes off as a jerk half the time and as misunderstood the remainder and I found him a frustrating character to read about. Jolie remains her determined, slightly silly self and is fun to read about. Christie seems like she is baggage throughout this book and is quickly shoved out of the story because she just doens't have a place in this book.

I liked some of the turns the plot took in this book; Mallory does some neat things here. Parts of the ending are especially ironic and satisfying. This is definitely more of a paranormal romance than an urban fantasy. A lot of time is spent with Jolie angsting between who she likes better Rand or Sinjin; this ended up being well done but I had hoped we would see more action. There is a lot of build up to this big war between the paranormal races and then when the war comes it is not very long or very well described. I thought the actual scenes with the war were a disappointment compared with all of the build up.

I still would like a better explanation of the magic system; it just seems like the witches can do whatever they want with magic without much limitation at one time and then at another Jolie is too worn out to do much. It is a bit inconsistent and I would like more clarification.

Things between Jolie and Rand remain frustrating throughout the book. Mallory throws in a big cliffhanger type revelation at the end of the book which really hooks the reader in and made me immediately want to find out what happens in book 3. I am not a huge fan of authors doing that; but it does keep the readers coming back. I would have liked a little more closure for the story than I got.

Overall this was a good addition to the series. It is a fun, light read and I enjoyed reading it. I love the characters and the writing style is easy to read and natural sounding. I would have liked a better war after all the build up there was to it. I would also like a more consistent structure for the magic system set up here. The ending is a bit of a cliffhanger and will make you desperate to read the next book in the series. If you are a fan of light-hearted and fun paranormal books this is the book for you. I would recommend this for fans of Molly Harper, Katie MacAlister, and Charlaine Harris's earlier Sookie Stackhouse books.(less)

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Feb 08, 2011 Missie rated it 4 of 5 stars

I've been in a serious reading slump. Nothing I'd tried to read for 'fun' around my required school reading was working for me. That is until I picked up Toil and Trouble. How could I forget what a welcoming fresh burst of comedy Jolie and her misadventures were?

Book two in the Jolie Wilkins series begins right where book one, Fire Burn and Cauldron Bubble, left off. It's been a while since I've read the first book in the series, and I worried that I might have forgotten some details, but the st...more I've been in a serious reading slump. Nothing I'd tried to read for 'fun' around my required school reading was working for me. That is until I picked up Toil and Trouble. How could I forget what a welcoming fresh burst of comedy Jolie and her misadventures were?

Book two in the Jolie Wilkins series begins right where book one, Fire Burn and Cauldron Bubble, left off. It's been a while since I've read the first book in the series, and I worried that I might have forgotten some details, but the story is so humorous and charming that it was very easy for me to remember Jolie's world and the two devastatingly handsome men (one warlock, one vampire) vying for her affections.

Because Jolie, witch in training, has a very special and unique gift (she can resurrect the dead), a war has been waged between all the creatures of the Supernatural Underworld. At the head of the evil side is Bella, a witch who plans to take Jolie as her prisoner so that she may have unlimited access to Jolie's powers.

Rand, the delicious British warlock who discovered Jolie, is determined to see that no harm comes to her. And after joining forces with the King of the Fae, Jolie and Rand feel pretty confident that they have a shot a winning the war, if only their pesky attraction towards one another would stop interfering long enough to get them safely to the battle field.

I won't denying that there was a lot of down time in this book where seemingly nothing is taking place, but I saw it as necessary for character development and momentum building. Not only is Jolie preparing for war, she is also warring with her true feelings towards Rand and Sinjin. And as much as I hate love-triangles, I have to say the one presented here is one of the most well executed I have read. Yes, it is completely frustrating, and yes, I wanted Jolie to pick the man I'm in love with (that would be Rand), but getting into her head as she tried to figure out her heart made for emotional, page turning reading.

As Jolie takes the time to really evaluate her feelings, she laces her musings with bits of humor that completely amused me. And when I wasn't enthralled with Rand, stubborn as he is, even I have to admit I enjoyed Sinjin's snarky and dark mannerisms. It is easy to see why Jolie would have a hard time choosing, even as she realizes the situation is far from ideal.

There was a plot twist I hoped would turn out to be what I guessed at, and when it did, I was delighted. I think Mallory did a wonderful job of weaving the storyline together between past and present events. And though I wouldn't call the ending an evil cliff-hanger, I will say that it was too abrupt for my taste, but I have no doubt that answers I seek will be revealed in the next installment, and that is more than fine with me because I'm not ready to let go of the characters.

Again, a few slow bits with a love triangle that will induce eye rolling, but overall, a fun and clever series with enduring characters that I have fallen in love with. Best news, according the H.P. Mallory's website, there will be three more books in the series! *Cheers* But, book 3 won't be available until Spring 2012. *Sobs buckets*

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Dec 27, 2011 Amy rated it 3 of 5 stars

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Honestly, this was a decent second book, but there was a glaring issue. Like the first book, TAT, Jolie once again spent too much time on the looks of all the men around here, even judging them by their looks this time. Like I said in my review for TAT, it's fine to think about now and again, but doing it this much just got in the way of the story, and was just plain ridiculous and uncomfortable (I don't need to hear how sexy Ra...more For more reviews, check out http://vivaladolcevita14.blogspot.com...

Honestly, this was a decent second book, but there was a glaring issue. Like the first book, TAT, Jolie once again spent too much time on the looks of all the men around here, even judging them by their looks this time. Like I said in my review for TAT, it's fine to think about now and again, but doing it this much just got in the way of the story, and was just plain ridiculous and uncomfortable (I don't need to hear how sexy Rand's legs are Jolie X_X). It was just too much. I will admit the last quarter of the book threw me for a f***ing loop. It just was so unexpected, yet I also couldn't picture this book going any other way. The twists that went on in said last quarter also were genius/threw me for a loop. I loved every minute of it.

Jolie definitely had some good growth, despite some childishness that she exhibited. I've already addressed the issue about how she viewed every guy she came in contact with, so I won't repeat it. Her journey was fun to watch, and I loved some of the lines she had. Rand was still wonderful, although he took on a bit of an overprotective persona that got annoying quick. I could tell he truly cared for Jolie, and I loved their relationship and how it evolved. Sinjin was still randy (oh the puns!) as ever, but he definitely had wonderful growth and heart which melted my own heart. I loved him even more in this book, as well as the relationship he shares with Jolie. Some of the other characters, like Odran (Ugh another accent that was hard to understand X_X)took a backseat to the love triangle going on with Jolie, Rand and Sinjin, and just in general didn't really get many moments to shine.

Ms. Mallory once again built up her world, still kept me interested for the most part. I do have to say: Ms. Mallory, please, for the love of all that is good any holy, PLEASE do not include so many descriptions of all the gorgeous men and please do not let Jolie judge the men she meets based on looks. I know there are people who appreciate all those descriptions, but it just took away from a cool story and just was not necessary. Thank you.(less)

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Jan 28, 2011 Evelyn Amaro rated it 5 of 5 stars Recommends it for: All PNR and UF Fans, VA lovers, Richelle Mead and Patricia Briggs fans

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This is a heart-pumping, romance sizzling, tear jerking, mystery filled book that will take you on an emotional rollercoaster ride, all while sitting (or in my case, jumping up and down) reading! In other words, Toil and Trouble is simply AMAZING! HP Mallory has done what many other authors have tried and failed to do: make a second book of a series that was unbelievable even better! Everything is amplified: the romance, the suspense, the action, and the lov...more Review taken from my blog: Paromantasy
This is a heart-pumping, romance sizzling, tear jerking, mystery filled book that will take you on an emotional rollercoaster ride, all while sitting (or in my case, jumping up and down) reading! In other words, Toil and Trouble is simply AMAZING! HP Mallory has done what many other authors have tried and failed to do: make a second book of a series that was unbelievable even better! Everything is amplified: the romance, the suspense, the action, and the love triangle between Jolie, Rand and Sinjin literally left me feeling like a ping pong ball, back and forth with still no clear favorite man since they are both great.

Now that my little tirade of verbal book bliss is over, let’s get into what this must-read book is all about! Jolie is a witch who can reanimate the dead and of course, anyone with that much power is going to have a huge target on their head. The underworld is now at the brink of a civil war with Jolie smack dab in the middle of it. Not to worry, she has a bunch of friends from Werewolves to Fae to help her, plus two of the hottest “guys” watching her back. There’s Sinjin, the sexy and mysterious bad boy vampire, and Rand, the incredibly hot warlock with a heart of gold to match, both willing to give their lives for her. As the action intensifies, so does the love triangle between these three. Jolie wants to take her relationship further with Rand, but he’s still holding back since love between a warlock and a witch is essentially a life bond that can lead to near death if your partner should die. He’s not willing to take that risk and she is tiring of the constant torture of loving someone and having all roads lead to nowhere. Then there’s Sinjin who wants nothing more than to go all the way with Jolie. He seems to love her, or at least lust for her, and she can’t deny the attraction, but can she trust him?

With war fast approaching, Jolie is preparing for the inevitable battle since she is a badass herself and wants her revenge on Ryder, the vamp who nearly killed her. Rand wants to keep her out of it, but nothing is going to deter her from seeking vengeance. Of course, nothing goes as plans and the readers are in for a bunch of twists and turns that will have you racing through the pages and leave your heart on the floor with a few curve balls thrown in and a jaw dropping ending.

As many of my readers know, HP Mallory is one of Paromantasy’s favorite authors and is on my “must-read list.” She actually did a Q&A with us last year, where I reviewed Fire Burn and Caulderon Bubble, book 1 of Jolie Wilkins series, and To Kill A Warklock. If you haven’t done so, put these books on you TBR list now!! They are awesome. All my Richelle Mead fans, I know we are sad that VA ended, but these books will pick your spirit right up while we wait for Bloodlines in August.
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Mar 04, 2013 Dutu rated it 4 of 5 stars

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Sep 07, 2012 Noodle rated it 3 of 5 stars

Shelves: adult, fairies, fantasy, paranormal, paranormal-romance, shape-shifters, supernatural, vampires, witches

Man, did I have trouble getting into this one. Surprisingly though, even after reading a couple of other books in between attempting to read this book, I couldn't flag it completely. That may be because HP Mallory is a good story teller and somewhere in this book I knew would be a good story.

It just took to well over halfway to find it - but boy! Did I find it.

I've said before that I'm more of a Dulcie O'Neil Fan than a Jolie Wilkins one. I think that is because I prefer the fairy world Dulcie l...more

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Feb 11, 2012 Shanon (Escaping With Fiction) rated it 5 of 5 stars

Shelves: favorite

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This book picks up right where the previous book, "Fire Burn and Cauldron Bubble", left off. The impending war between the Underworld creatures is becoming more real by the second, and Jolie has just won over the support of the Fae--who have remained neutral until now. This book is all about Jolie and her friends gearing up to battle for their freedom from the completely evil and heartless Bella; who is a powerful witch tha...more My reviews can also be found at: http://escapingwithfiction.blogspot.com/

This book picks up right where the previous book, "Fire Burn and Cauldron Bubble", left off. The impending war between the Underworld creatures is becoming more real by the second, and Jolie has just won over the support of the Fae--who have remained neutral until now. This book is all about Jolie and her friends gearing up to battle for their freedom from the completely evil and heartless Bella; who is a powerful witch that wishes to become ruler of all Underworld creatures. Bella and her legion are truly terrifying, and if Jolie and her friends lose, the unthinkable will happen...

I really felt for Jolie in this book because all she wants to do is help take Bella and her army down, but she's being told by Rand to stay away to ensure her safety. Jolie wants nothing more than to fight alongside her friends and supporters because she is the trigger for this war in the first place, unfortunately. She also wants to join the battle so she can get her hands on a certain evil vampire named Ryder, who did some terrible things to Jolie (and he would have gotten away with more if it hadn't have been for Sinjin).

Because Jolie is stubborn and awesome, she devises a plan that will get her what she wants in terms of the battle; and seeing the last events of the book unfold are seriously intense, surprising and enlightening. My jaw was pretty much on the floor for the last several chapters, and I could not tear myself away from the story! I was definitely not expecting the ending to turn out like it did, that's for sure. Let's just say that Jolie's destiny is clearly spelled out, and it's not an easy one!

There were a lot of things that were learned and discovered in this book, some involving Jolie's love interests, Rand and Sinjin. Poor Jolie has enough to worry about as it is, and on top of it all she finds herself extremely confused about her feelings for both of these men. But that's part of what I love about this series! I am smitten with both of these male characters, but for completely different reasons. It was nice to see Jolie get closer to these guys (in more ways than one). The author continues to do a great job creating the steamy scenes, that's for sure!

I don't want to go into too much detail for fear of spoiling the plot, but I will say that the revelations and experiences involving Rand were a really nice touch to the story. Getting some insight into his feelings answered a lot of questions I had. I also loved getting more of Sinjin in this book, because he is just so unpredictable. The things that he does for Jolie really solidify his feelings for her, even if his intentions still come off as misguided sometimes. But I refuse to believe he doesn't actually care for her.

So pretty much what I want to say is that this book did not disappoint. H.P. Mallory has yet again amazed me with her uniquely crafted and well-executed plot and characters! I can't wait to see what will become of Jolie and the interesting people in her life, because there are so many things I'm curious about. (less)

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May 22, 2011 Ashley rated it 4 of 5 stars

Shelves: paranormal, nook, own-a-copy, witches, vampires

"Toil and Trouble" picks up where "Fire Burn and Cauldron Bubble" left off, with Jolie waking up in the fairy village following her magical fight with the fairies strongest fairy. With her powers severly depleated, Jolie returns to Pelham Manor with Rand and aids in putting together their group of fighters in their hopes of defeating Bella who hopes to be Queen of the entire Underworld. As the group of anti-Bella warriors travel to Scotland for the battle, Jolie finds herself being transported b...more

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Oct 07, 2012 Jan Niblock rated it 5 of 5 stars

This book definitely takes the reader on the next step in the Jolie’s story. She has survived the ordeal with Odran’s Fae warrior and has gotten the king to agree to aid them in the upcoming battle. She is so confused about the two main men in her life—thus the romance part of the book. On one hand there is Rand, the gorgeous Warlock, who wants to protect her at all costs and Sinjin, the sexy Vampire, who makes no secret that he lusts after her.

As the battle gets closer, Jolie wants to be a par...more

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Aug 18, 2012 Shirley rated it 4 of 5 stars

Shelves: bout-of-books-aug-2012

Well, H.P Mallory certainly pushed me out of my reading slump. I don’t know what it is about these books, but I can’t put them down once I start. If I didn’t know it before, I am positive now, I am an official Jolie Wilkins fan. Of course, that may have something to do with Rand and Sinjin, but let’s not quibble over details.

Toil and Trouble takes up pretty much where Fire Burn and Cauldron Bubble left off. Jolie is recovering from her battle with a fairy and it has left her pretty much helpless...more Well, H.P Mallory certainly pushed me out of my reading slump. I don’t know what it is about these books, but I can’t put them down once I start. If I didn’t know it before, I am positive now, I am an official Jolie Wilkins fan. Of course, that may have something to do with Rand and Sinjin, but let’s not quibble over details.

Toil and Trouble takes up pretty much where Fire Burn and Cauldron Bubble left off. Jolie is recovering from her battle with a fairy and it has left her pretty much helpless. She spends a fair amount of time in the beginning of Toil and Trouble recovering and being continually enamored, confused and frustrated by Rand.

A lot of ground is covered in Toil and Trouble. Rand opens up a little more and Jolie learns some things on her own that even Rand doesn’t know. He still totally frustrated me in this. Even though we learn more about his hesitation where Jolie is concerned, he still made me just as mad and hurt as he made Jolie. Which I suppose is why I like these books so much. I love Jolie’s ‘voice’ and her personality. She just seems so ‘real.’ Like someone I would want to know and be friends with. I love it when authors do that.

Then there’s Sinjin. Sure he could just as easily be the bad guy and honestly, at this point I’m not so sure he’s not. At least I’m pretty sure he’s hiding something. Yet, when it comes to Jolie, regardless of his motives, you can tell he does care. Just a warning, if you aren’t a fan of love triangles, you will probably go crazy by the time you are done Toil and Trouble. I can’t say that I’m a fan, but sometimes they are unavoidable. Jolie is not a flighty teen who can’t make up her mind. She’s actually in a pretty impossible situation and is pulled in too many directions.

Toil and Trouble solves a couple mysteries, but opens up a few more. You know you are in for it when the final sentence in a book is ‘Son of a …..’ How can you not want to pick up the next book in a series when you’re faced with that? Needless to say, I’ve already downloaded Witchful Thinking. *sigh*(less)

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Apr 17, 2011 Trish rated it 5 of 5 stars

For the four stars I awarded Fire Burn I would award Toil and Trouble with ten stars, but I will have to settle for five as this is the Goodreads limit when providing a review. What can I say, I loved, loved Toil and Trouble and was left wanting much, much more. The chemistry between Jolie and Rand has blossomed far beyond any dreams I had at the end of Fire Burn. The twist during the battle caught me off guard in a good way- well done! The characters of this series are endearing and hopefully w...more

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Dec 15, 2010 Leesa rated it 5 of 5 stars

Shelves: favourites, fantasy, vampires, witches

The second book in the Jolie Wilkins series follows directly on from the first, starting with Jolie recovering after her fight with the fairy.
The book doesn't quite hit the ground running, but the pace still moves reasonably fast, as those against Bella unite and train in preparation for the war.
I said before that this book is like the ultimate fantasy/urban fantasy romance with every type of character, but this book goes above and beyond throwing in a little bit of a Jane Austen vibe when Jolie...more

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Apr 08, 2011 Shellys♥ Journal rated it 4 of 5 stars

Shelves: chick-lit, indie-author, paranormal, year-2011

Part 2 of the Jolie Wilkins series. Yes, Jolie is a witch with powers that everyone wants and two men in her life - Rand the Warlock and Sinjin the Vampire. While she feels incredibly bonded to Rand, other underworld things keep getting in the way. There's an underworld war ready to fight and she wants vengence in the midst of it. While she and Rand continue their tet a tet, Sinjin lurks in the background.

This book was better than the first, but equally as frustrating as there has to be a book 3...more

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Aug 18, 2011 Reagan Whitten rated it 5 of 5 stars

Shelves: awesome-series, contemporary, paranormal, vamps-wolves-and-other-shifters

GREAT follow up book! After being sucked into the plot and characters of the series in book 1 (Hp Mallory has a way of ending books with excellent cliffhangers) I was dying to know what happened next!!
Book two is all about the preparations of the underworld war.
You've got Team Good- Lead by Rand, the hot yet intensely frustrating warlock. He's aided by the European werewolves lead by Jolie's jerk of an ex, a clan of vampires- enter the sexy Sinjin, and the elves lead by their King Oren who’s ju...more

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