The Wizard of London: Elemental Masters #4 (Elemental Masters #5)
Isabelle Benson has learned that an Elemental Master is behind the attempts on her students' lives-and the would-be murderer is someone very close to her former flame, "The Wizard of London."
ebook, 384 pages
Published
October 3rd 2006
by Daw Books
(first published 2005)
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Too-perfect characters (the biggest flaw anyone has is 'not pretty'), pages and pages of needless backstory and redundant narrative (literally takes up half the book), absolutely no conflict between the protagonists (despite the author telling us that they're all so different from each other, they all get along perfectly), and utter ridiculousness (sorry, but birds do not nod, nor think like humans. You could have spared a line or two to say that these are special magical birds, but no, we're su...more
The letter that introduced twelve-year-old Sarah Jane Lyon-White to Isabelle Harton, who ran the Harton School in central London, seemed quite simple and straightforward. But it was what was not written in the letter that resonated to Isabelle's own finely turned 'extra' senses - 'Sarah has gifts we cannot train,' the letter whispered to her, 'nor can anyone we know. Those we trust tell us that you can...'. And it was true, for the Harton School was far from ordinary. It was Isabelle's job to tr
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Sarah is a twelve year old girl whose parents (English medics helping the people of Africa) have sent her back to England for her studies. Unspoken is the understanding that some of her studies might be...of a mystic (but not magical) sort. Isabella and her husband run an academy where some of the students have "extra" lessons. Sarah's very abilities and possible future are a threat to some unknown force, and that force is trying to eliminate her.
This novel was absolutely Excellent....except for...more
This novel was absolutely Excellent....except for...more
When Isabelle's heart was broken by David Alderscroft, a young Elemental Master who was rising in his power and fame within the magical society of London, she fled to India where she found true love with a commoner like herself. Now, she and Frederick have returned to London where they've opened up a school for children who, like themselves, are not masters of magic but rather possessors of more occult talents including extrasensory perception and prophecy. It is to this school that little Sarah...more
Probably more of a 3.5 stars, but I enjoyed it.
The best part of this book was the magical world presented. It's an alternate history, set in England in a past much like ours. There was a world of elemental mages, with the power to control an element and the magical creatures associated with that sphere, and those with more psychic gifts-- like speaking with the dead as well as various battle related skills.
The characters were also interesting, particularly David Alderscroft. He's a basically goo...more
The best part of this book was the magical world presented. It's an alternate history, set in England in a past much like ours. There was a world of elemental mages, with the power to control an element and the magical creatures associated with that sphere, and those with more psychic gifts-- like speaking with the dead as well as various battle related skills.
The characters were also interesting, particularly David Alderscroft. He's a basically goo...more
It wasn't that bad.
But there are couple of things that nagged me.
(Note: this is the very first Mercedes Lachey's book that I've read.
So maybe I'll change what I feel about it after reading other books.)
•First of all, there were spelling errors. A lot of them.
e.g. Alderscroft (the wizard of London)became Ashcroft
and he's one of the main charactors!
•Unlike the title indicates, the main character is a girl called Nan.
•How did the others put it? Anticlimax?
I was waiting for something to happen but...more
But there are couple of things that nagged me.
(Note: this is the very first Mercedes Lachey's book that I've read.
So maybe I'll change what I feel about it after reading other books.)
•First of all, there were spelling errors. A lot of them.
e.g. Alderscroft (the wizard of London)became Ashcroft
and he's one of the main charactors!
•Unlike the title indicates, the main character is a girl called Nan.
•How did the others put it? Anticlimax?
I was waiting for something to happen but...more
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I listened to the audio edition. Amazon continues its foolishly short-sighted practice of not allowing linking to Audible editions, even though they own Audible and presumably make money from the sale of Audible editions. So, I'm linking to a print edition.
I hadn't read any Lackey in quite a while, having grown tired of what I thought of as her typical output. A friend recommended this, and I was very pleasantly surprised.
This is a "secret history" set in late Victorian England, with Elemental M...more
I hadn't read any Lackey in quite a while, having grown tired of what I thought of as her typical output. A friend recommended this, and I was very pleasantly surprised.
This is a "secret history" set in late Victorian England, with Elemental M...more
Oh Ms. Lackey, where do I start?
Basically, besides nothing happening, the biggest problem is the re-telling of 'The Snow Queen' forgets that at its heart is the story of a person willing to go to the ends of the earth and go through hell to rescue someone she loves. In this case, the woman just happens to be next door when the guy is in danger, and rescues him almost as an after thought to her day.
Edit:
Two things worth mentioning:
One: A very minor character is described as having parties where f...more
Basically, besides nothing happening, the biggest problem is the re-telling of 'The Snow Queen' forgets that at its heart is the story of a person willing to go to the ends of the earth and go through hell to rescue someone she loves. In this case, the woman just happens to be next door when the guy is in danger, and rescues him almost as an after thought to her day.
Edit:
Two things worth mentioning:
One: A very minor character is described as having parties where f...more
I ADORE the Diana Tregarde series and wish she would have done more with it. The Bedlam's Bard series is one of my all-time favorites. And the SERRAted Edge series simply opened a whole new world of fantasy for me.
But I'm just not a fan of Lackey's Elemental Masters Victorian fantasy series, no matter how hard I try. This one in particular was more a YA fantasy. Not because children feature in it, but because the level of writing is juvenile.
I wish I liked it better. There is such a good premise...more
But I'm just not a fan of Lackey's Elemental Masters Victorian fantasy series, no matter how hard I try. This one in particular was more a YA fantasy. Not because children feature in it, but because the level of writing is juvenile.
I wish I liked it better. There is such a good premise...more
What I found so interesting in this book was that things that normally make me want to send very mean mail to authors complaing about numorous mistakes and such were there, I could just ignore them better. The Story it's self isn't particularly earth shattering, but I still really liked it. I have read and re-read this book on a number of occasions when I had nothing else to read or couldn't find something that would capture my attention, and somehow it always does. The most annoying thing about...more
Nov 06, 2012
Delicious Strawberry
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3 of 5 stars
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This book was definitely better than 'Gates of Sleep' and I can appreciate the Snow Queen associations - it was a very creative idea and I really enjoyed it - but compared to the other books within this series, is just not as interesting. While gifted children certainly have their place in this universe that Ms. Lackey created, I was disappointed when so much of the focus was on them rather than the Masters. I'm hoping that after this book and 'Reserved for the Cat' we'll go back to a female Ele...more
Oh, Mercedes Lackey. You spring no surprises. You rush endings. Your goodies are 'good' and your baddies are 'bad' and it's all beautifully black and white and nice and lovely. So why do I enjoy you so? Perhaps because there ARE no surprises and the writing is all indulgent and amusing, which makes it the perfect guilty pleasure read. And the characters are always charming and entertaining and the dialogue funny. The bird characters in this book are adorable and the hapless title character a sad...more
Nov 07, 2011
June
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3 of 5 stars
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Recommends it for:
Lackey's Elemental fans
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this is one of Lackey's Elemental Mage series. I pick these up for the Mercedes Lackey experience, and got what I expected. Fairly good read, the bird familiars that the two girls have in the story leant a little attitude and interest to the overall tale. The main female character was fairly well developed, but ML could have gone deeper into this character and built a more complex tale by focusing a little more on the solid foundatin of the main femaile character and her husband.
I found the mai...more
I found the mai...more
From the cover, I thought this book was going to be more about Sarah, so I was a bit surprised to see that Nan was really the main character. She and Sarah complimented each other so well, they could almost have been one character except the contrast between them allowed the dialogue to progress. I felt the character of Lord Alderscroft could have been more developed - he was rather one dimensional. Then again, I was reading this for a fun, lazy day read, so the lack of a complicated plot fit pe...more
You can tell this was developed from 2 short stories. The first third is the short stories, mostly untouched so there is a change in writing style when she starts on the novel. Also the second story regurgitates a lot of the first story needlessly. There are several contradictions about Nan, first she has never had a name but Nan and a few pages later she is called Nan Killian. Once you get to the novel it's pretty good. First third I'd give a 2, maybe a 2.5. The second part I'd give a 3.5. Not...more
Jan 09, 2013
Geoffrey Cubbage
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3 of 5 stars
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Recommends it for:
Readers in need of fast, mindless fun
Mercedes Lackey is dear to me from my early adolescence, and mostly writes books that are good for early adolescents. Returning to them at a later age can be a little disappointing.
I picked The Wizard of London up at a garage sale for a quarter, planning on reading it during a bout of the 'flu some day or something, but ended up reading it sober and healthy and enjoying the experience more than I'd thought.
It's an unobjectionable little pulp romp that hits all the notes you want out of a romant...more
I picked The Wizard of London up at a garage sale for a quarter, planning on reading it during a bout of the 'flu some day or something, but ended up reading it sober and healthy and enjoying the experience more than I'd thought.
It's an unobjectionable little pulp romp that hits all the notes you want out of a romant...more
Jan 27, 2013
Alexandra
rated it
4 of 5 stars
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to-review
I have been a Mercedes Lackey fan since the very first book of hers that I ever picked up, when I was probably around 13 years old. I devoured her numerous novels of Valdemar – in fact, they still fill much of my bookshelves today – but never found myself unduly interested in any of her other series. Having been so long finished with the Valdemar series however, and interested in a guaranteed good fantasy read, I decided to go ahead and grab a book off of my shelf that I hadn’t read yet: The Wiz...more
From my Audible (audiobook) review:
Much as I love these tales, this is the weakest of the Elemental Masters novels. Most of the story involves Sarah and Nan, young, magically-talented girls who come to live at the Harton School in London, run by the also-talented Isabelle Harton and her husband. Sarah has been sent home to England "for her health" from her parents' hospital in Africa, along with her remarkably wise and capable African Gray parrot, simply called Gray. Nan is taken in from the st...more
Much as I love these tales, this is the weakest of the Elemental Masters novels. Most of the story involves Sarah and Nan, young, magically-talented girls who come to live at the Harton School in London, run by the also-talented Isabelle Harton and her husband. Sarah has been sent home to England "for her health" from her parents' hospital in Africa, along with her remarkably wise and capable African Gray parrot, simply called Gray. Nan is taken in from the st...more
Jun 12, 2010
Ruby Hollyberry
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5 of 5 stars
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This book is the perfect example of what Mercedes Lackey does to me. She makes constant errors in spelling and grammar. She apparently can't remember what she wrote in the last book and contradicts herself. She is very sloppy with minor characters. She sometimes puts speeches into the wrong major character's mouth. Her books are unpredictable in quality, some great, some awful, some patchy. This one is very patchy, zooming ahead and then dropping you awkwardly. I don't agree with her morality at...more
This book took me far longer to read than I would have liked thanks to problems in real life. However, I enjoyed it, for the most part. It was a little draggy, in certain aspects, and I can understand how the romance between Isabelle and Frederick seemed a bit much.
However, after I realized just what David Alderscoft had done to himself, it was hard not to feel sorry for him. Thanks to Cordelia's manipulations, he had lost the one thing that he could have prized above everything. Now the juxtapo...more
However, after I realized just what David Alderscoft had done to himself, it was hard not to feel sorry for him. Thanks to Cordelia's manipulations, he had lost the one thing that he could have prized above everything. Now the juxtapo...more
Jun 07, 2008
Kathryn
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4 of 5 stars
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fantasy,
historical-fiction
This is one of Misty's Elemental Master's series, where she rewrites fairytales into a real world, historical setting. The Wizard of London is based on "The Snow Queen" by Hans Christian Anderson, and is set in Victorian London.
First, a little background is needed. Generally, the characters are elemental masters, able to command supernatural creatures of fire (salamanders, lyons), water (nymphs, selkies), earth (fawns, brownies) or air (sylvans, dryads). In addition there are people with psychi...more
First, a little background is needed. Generally, the characters are elemental masters, able to command supernatural creatures of fire (salamanders, lyons), water (nymphs, selkies), earth (fawns, brownies) or air (sylvans, dryads). In addition there are people with psychi...more
Not one of Mercedes Lackey's best books, in my opinion. There were several things she kept repeating - e.g. that 3 of the servants came from different, oftentimes opposing, cultures but had come to respect each other and work together as a unified group. As this is one of the main themes of the book - differing cultures/classes/genders working harmoniously together as equals - I understand the desire to stress it, but over and over? I'm not stupid (and I really hate being treated as such) and I...more
Overall, I liked the story. I loved the two young girls. I even loved the eagle and the crow. I had to search because it said in a review, this book was a retelling of the Snow Queen. I have not read the original story. I also liked that they had Robin Goodfellow and they used a "Midsummer Night's Dream into the story. That is one of my favorite plays.
I did not like David Alderscroft. I thought him arrogant, British prick. I did not agree with his Victorian age views on women. I also didn't like...more
I did not like David Alderscroft. I thought him arrogant, British prick. I did not agree with his Victorian age views on women. I also didn't like...more
Mercedes Lackey is hit and miss with me. I usually enjoy her books that have hints of old fairy tales in a different setting. The Wizard of London contained hints of The Snow Queen, but I missed some of the more direct correlation. I enjoyed the young characters of Sarah and Nan--a change for Lackey to have some of her main characters be children. The story was interesting, but nothing gripping or unique. I enjoyed the read, but it wasn't really remarkable.
Jan 28, 2009
Jacqueline
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4 of 5 stars
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fairy-tales,
fantasy
The Wizard of London back tracks a bit and shows us some of the events leading up to the world of the other books in the Elemental Masters series. This loose retelling of The Snow Queen features children as main characters, a raven and a parrot, and glimpses of boarding school life and Indian culture.
For those of the pagan bent who ponder on the elements, this book shows a unique correlation between fire and ice that really made me think.
For those of the pagan bent who ponder on the elements, this book shows a unique correlation between fire and ice that really made me think.
The first Elemental Masters was better. The beginning is episodic, and almost as if she wrote short, connected stories for serial publication because of the unnecessary repetition of background details (which annoys me). The main adventure was full of adventure, magic, friendship and intrigue - so enjoyable, even if a bit predictable. She peoples her magical worlds with rich and deep and original magic mythology and characters, with generous tie-ins to Western mythology. A good read to escape in...more
Aug 02, 2011
Elizabeth
rated it
3 of 5 stars
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science-fiction-fantasy
This is based on a short story she wrote several years ago. The beginning is the exact same as the short story. This is probably least favorite of all of her books I have read. It's good but not of the quality I have seen in the other Elemental Masters books or the Valdemar series. I would like to see more development of these stories, maybe do miniseries similar to how the Valdemar books are done.
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Mercedes entered this world on June 24, 1950, in Chicago, had a normal childhood and graduated from Purdue University in 1972. During the late 70's she worked as an artist's model and then went into the computer programming field, ending up with American Airlines in Tulsa, Oklahoma. In addition to her fantasy writing, she has written lyrics for and recorded nearly fifty songs for Firebird Arts &...more
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