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Darla's Secret Wish

3.15  ·  Rating Details  ·  307 Ratings  ·  35 Reviews
Darla doesn't understand why her father left them, and her feelings of longing and jealousy become even more confused when her father remarries. A night babysitting her younger half-sister at her father's new house ends up fulfilling Darla's secret wish, when her stepmother gets ill, forcing them to return early, and her father has to drive Darla home . . .
Nook, 37 pages
Published March 8th 2009 by Smashwords (first published 2008)
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Aug 20, 2014 Raby rated it it was ok

This is a novelette... so, it's super short... Contains 1 love scene... :(

I'm totally not satisfied with this... At the end, I was like 'that's it? That's all I get?'
It's quite disappointing, I didn't even feel anything when they did it. Ana's so much better and quite longer than this.

Longer novels please!!
Zemira (Kylo Ren fangirl) Warner
Short and sweet.
Feb 04, 2012 Sassafrass rated it really liked it  ·  review of another edition
Shelves: taboo, z-2012
***3.5 stars***

This one was a little closer to my hard limit but still not truly daddy/daughter incest. I think I may have to stop there because I just don't think I can do it. I got a little more icked out with this one because it doesn't say how old Darla is and I'm thinking she's not an adult. That's hard for me to deal with. But, if I pretended that she was over the age of consent then I was much better with it. I didn't like how (view spoiler)
♆ BookAddict  ✒ La Crimson Femme
Darla loaded with Daddy abandonment issues is the star of this little porn session. The story is well edited and flows smoothly. It was just okay for me because there wasn't much to it and I couldn't really get into it. It reminds me of short stories I find on Literotica. I know Ms. Kitt originally started out on that site. Perhaps this is one of her earlier works. The only taboo part is sex with the man who helped raise you. Since it isn't blood relations, it wasn't as titillating or squicky fe ...more
Vivian Dominguez
Aug 01, 2013 Vivian Dominguez rated it liked it
Shelves: adult, erotica
A very short & quickie read.....I wanted something different from what I have been reading lately....and boy did I get different....!!!

...Enjoyed it more than I should have...the whole stepdaddy/ daughter taboo did push me way out of my comfort zone...but still a goody!!!
Rating overview

Overall: (3.66)


Very typical Selena Kitt, I've forgotten just how much of a delicious guilty-pleasure reads these are. Could have done with another chapter but all in all a fun half an hour!

Yeah. This story was one of those things for me. Unfortunately for me some things can't be undone. :/

The "review".

Daddy leaves. Gets new hunny. Teen daughter gets jealous. Sex happens. (That was a short "review".... so was the story... thank goodness.)

This wasn't a horribly written story btw, I love Selena Kitt's writing style.... It was the content... The whole she's-too-young vibe I got is not my cup of tea. And I don't remember getting the impression that was his stepdaughter... But I could
May 17, 2015 Jessica rated it liked it
The conversations between father and daughter were a little unrealistic but i still enjoyed the smutty read :)
The UHQ Nasanta
1.5 - 2 stars

My reaction after I finished this short story?


I've read Daddy-play/age-play in m/m romance, and well, it wasn't my favorite kink but it didn't really squick me out (um, maybe because there was no incest involved, lol). The pseudo-incest between adopted father and daughter in this case did a bit. I felt that this short story pushed me out of my comfort zone, which is usually fine with me. In this case, the eroticized nature of this relationship kind of missed me because all I cou
Jan 11, 2014 Crystal rated it did not like it
This was truly one of the most disturbing things I've ever read. I haven't read much erotica in general, so I just "grabbed" a bunch for my Kindle the other day, out of curiosity, and was amply punished for it. Kitt is good at making sex seem hot, but I could NOT get past the girl doing it with the man who's raised her and is her parental/ authority figure, as well as being obviously, significantly older than her. I don't care who the instigator was. It was just disturbing, and I wish I could er ...more
Apr 20, 2015 Arlyn rated it it was ok
Shelves: my-reviews
Not my favorite...Darla is an imbecile. She behaves like she's 5 years old. Every other word out of her mouth is "Daddy", which is a huge pet peeve of mine with stepfather taboo stories. Her father is a morally bankrupt adulterer and absent parent...until the little girl he's been ignoring for years starts humping him. Then he loves her. Then she's worthy of a little attention. He was her adopted father since she was a baby. Am I supposed to be convinced that he was helpless against her sophisti ...more
Darla and Lee. Darla babysat Lee’s daughter but she doesn’t want his money. She just wants his love. This was a quick story wish the ending was longer and we knew what happened to their relationship.
Jessica Gomez
It didn't have much heat. The father daughter thing was not surprising at all though. Was she younger than 18? She didn't have any breasts. She had nubbins. Was she even 14? I've read better.
It was a good hot read based on great writing style. Had to get past the father issue (the issue being it was her real father!) ick. Good that it ended right before it became uncomfortable and repugnant.
Future Slayer Girl
So, I'm in a 'amazon banned books spree' I try to read as many as I can before I fall asleep at night with all the book I have stored on my phone apps from purchases lol

This one is about a girl with abandonment issues. She's baby sitting Daddy's 'new' daughter, he drives her home, mommy isn't home when they get home and they have a sexual encounter.

It wasn't really all that shocking for me. I'm not sure if the 'Oh daddy I twalk like a baby and ask you to put it in me." is doing it for people,
Diana Uy
May 10, 2015 Diana Uy rated it liked it
This is a very short story, which I have to be honest, completely weirded me out. It was just a bit too taboo for me. Daddy, daughter, incest stories just are not my thing.
Just gave me the creeps!

Britta ★ Nachteule ★

Read as part of Taboo The Collection. Story Nr. 5

See, this brat Darla wants her Daddy back. What better way for it as to let him fuck her?

This was sooooo wrong on so many levels.

But it was hot!

And since when has PWP be realistic or right anyway?

Feb 12, 2012 Tony rated it really liked it  ·  review of another edition
Darla's step-father and mother have split up and as her step-father has found a new woman she senses their relationship slipping away, but as she's not one to stand idly by and let it happen she takes matters into her own hands and sets out to form a new bond.
A nice short story, with a nice Lolita vibe in a pseudo-incestuous setting.
Jun 29, 2012 Margaret rated it it was ok  ·  review of another edition
Shelves: erotic-fiction
Honestly, this story smacked of underage sex to me, even though the girl was said to be 18. The way her body was described just made her seem so much younger. Typically, I don't like to give less than 3 stars, but for the fact of the feel, I had to. If you put that out of your mind, the sex was hot between Darla and her step-father. This is another story that appears to be taboo, but they're not actually related.
Funzee Shu
Jan 02, 2014 Funzee Shu rated it it was ok
Shelves: taboo, incest

I like daddy-daughter-incest-story-type... ()
But well....this one not as good as what am expected...and way too fast and short, and not that "hot" either... :P

so, this one is just "so-so" for me.... :)
Charmaine Stephens
May 29, 2013 Charmaine Stephens rated it it was amazing
Shelves: taboo
Gotta admit I was hesitant to read this book seeing the daddy/daughter incest subject of it. Thank goodness it was a step-father & step daughter kind of thing. The STEP makes a big difference! I think I’d throw up in my mouth if they were biologically related. lol Still its taboo and can be a bit disturbing. But this book was a fun, sexy short read. I liked it!
Jan 21, 2011 Adele rated it it was ok
Recommends it for: Ages 18+(not for kiddies)
**** ages 18+(not for kiddies)****
involves incest
(not my favourite subject when i'm reading a book).

Darla has some serious Daddy issues. and instead of working it out with a threapist, she goes straight to the souce. and somehow along the way, convinces her father to screw her senseless!!!
thankfully its over quickly.
Dec 14, 2014 Angie rated it really liked it  ·  review of another edition
Shelves: freebies, adult, read-2012
Quickie Thoughts
I'll admit I'm a fan of more taboo erotic stories, and found this short quite enjoyable. Darla is 18, and "Daddy" is not her birth father so I didn't find anything wrong with her seducing him. This definitely won't be for everyone, so if you do find their relationship to be too close, skip this story.
Angie (Mind Malfunction)
Daddy's Favorites: Darla, is a short erotica story by Selena Kitt. The story is about a daughter seeking her father's attention and jealousy towards the woman he remarried. In this story, she seduces her father, who foolishly allows himself to be seduced by his adopted daughter. The story is hot, in a daddy-daughter erotica.
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Dirty, Dirty, Dirty Daddy and Darla! Holy Hotness! If the title didn't give it away, this is a taboo read about a sexual relationship between a STEP-FATHER and daughter - skirting the edge of taboo, but still tame enough to be sold on Amazon, but that doesn't put a damper on the level of heat in this quickie read!
Mar 29, 2013 Theresa rated it really liked it  ·  review of another edition
Kind of a let down...exactly the same as the free story Darla's Secret Wish, except Daddy has been changed to adoptive Daddy. I was really hoping for an expanded story. Too bad, but it doesn't detract from the original story which I loved.
Bottom line, save your money and grab the free version.
Sep 01, 2010 DW rated it liked it
Recommends it for: Those who love short reads and quick satisfaction.
Shelves: fiction, ebook, 2010, erotic
This book is more like a story in that it's short, but it was also a good read. It was a great diversion from my afternoon and considering it was also free I am far far from disappointed. I enjoyed the emotions present in the book and the finale.
May 10, 2013 Gerald rated it really liked it  ·  review of another edition
Darla gets her step father to show her some real step father/daughter love. Pseudo incest, skirting the edge of that taboo, but rest assured, it's hot, steamy, and very satisfying. An excellent level of heat for this quickie read!
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