The City in the Lake
by
Rachel Neumeier (Goodreads Author)
THE KINGDOM’S HEART is the City. The City’s heart is the King. The King’s heart is the Prince. The Prince is missing.
Ever since the Prince disappeared, nothing has been right in the Kingdom. Something has disturbed the strange, old magic that whispers around its borders . . . something cunning and powerful. And the disturbance extends to the farthest reaches of the Kingdom...more
Ever since the Prince disappeared, nothing has been right in the Kingdom. Something has disturbed the strange, old magic that whispers around its borders . . . something cunning and powerful. And the disturbance extends to the farthest reaches of the Kingdom...more
Paperback, 304 pages
Published
March 8th 2011
by Laurel Leaf
(first published 2008)
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The City in the Lake, with a subtly dreamlike feel and fluid magic, walks a thin line between fantasy and fairy tale. The story itself reminds faintly of Tam Lin -- a prince goes missing (kidnapped by a queen of fairy, perhaps?) and Timou, a mage's daughter, sets off to find him. But I wouldn't say this is a retelling, rather an original story strongly flavored with folklore. Much of it, such as the wild hunter, is seems of European origin, but bits and pieces, such as the talking serpent Timou...more
Oct 31, 2008
Linh
rated it
3 of 5 stars
·
review of another edition
Recommends it for:
younger teens and above
“THE KINGDOM’S HEART is the city. The City’s heart is the King. The King’s heart is the Prince. The Prince is missing.” From the moment the prince went missing, the whole kingdom is in disarray. From the heart of the kingdom to its outskirts, infants are born dead or dying. When Timou’s father, a mage, journeys to the City and never returns, Timou decides to go after him. She travels to the kingdom’s heart and there she faces powers much greater than her own and unravels the truth of her birth...more
Once upon a time...
OK, it doesn't really start that way, but it could as well have.
We're transported in a magical enchanted land with mages and kings and princes and a talking snake oh, and death personified as the Hunter.
The good guys are good and the bads guys are bad, and the ones that don't fit into the good or bad category but somewhere in the middle, like that snake I was telling about and the Hunter.
Overall, it's a nice fairy tale without any unicorns or dragons, it has a beginning where...more
OK, it doesn't really start that way, but it could as well have.
We're transported in a magical enchanted land with mages and kings and princes and a talking snake oh, and death personified as the Hunter.
The good guys are good and the bads guys are bad, and the ones that don't fit into the good or bad category but somewhere in the middle, like that snake I was telling about and the Hunter.
Overall, it's a nice fairy tale without any unicorns or dragons, it has a beginning where...more
When Timou's father, the mage Kapoen, disappears on a journey to find the missing heart of the Kingdom, Timou follows his footsteps to find the heirs to the kingdom. She encounters a prescence in the forest that is more powerful than she knows, and Timou slowly begins to understand so of her past.
More than a simple tale of a young mage on a quest for power, The City in the Lake is sprawling, carefully written look into the complicated lives of parents, ambitions, love, and much more. The fact t...more
More than a simple tale of a young mage on a quest for power, The City in the Lake is sprawling, carefully written look into the complicated lives of parents, ambitions, love, and much more. The fact t...more
A complete fantasy story in less than 300 pages. I was very impressed with how concise this was, without leaving anything out. Beautiful descriptions, real emotions and interesting magic. I recommend it for fantasy fans middle school and up. Some strong upper elementary readers may enjoy this as well.
I think I've found McKillip's heir.
I picked it up after reading the first paragraph on the inside jacket flap:
"The Kingdom's heart is the City. The City's heart is the King. The King's heart is the Prince. The prince is missing."
I'm glad I didn't read the back instead. This was all I needed to pick the book up.
It reads like a first novel -- heavy-handed, at times -- and it's marketed as young adult (I hate venturing into my library's Teen Zone when there are actual teenagers in the area... someh...more
I picked it up after reading the first paragraph on the inside jacket flap:
"The Kingdom's heart is the City. The City's heart is the King. The King's heart is the Prince. The prince is missing."
I'm glad I didn't read the back instead. This was all I needed to pick the book up.
It reads like a first novel -- heavy-handed, at times -- and it's marketed as young adult (I hate venturing into my library's Teen Zone when there are actual teenagers in the area... someh...more
I'm a rabid fan of stand-alone YA. I think that too often, YA are books which depend on their prequel or sequel. I have nothing against series of books (Harry Potter, Kristin Cashore - yes please!) I just prefer that they stand on their own, with a distinct beginning, middle, and most of all, end.
Neumeier's novel absolutely achieves that goal.
But I loved the book on its own merits, too, apart from my personal requirements for novels.
Neumeier's writing consists of nearly poetic language, though...more
Neumeier's novel absolutely achieves that goal.
But I loved the book on its own merits, too, apart from my personal requirements for novels.
Neumeier's writing consists of nearly poetic language, though...more
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After reading great reviews of this by Cybils panelists Charlotte's Library and The Puck in the Midden I was intrigued. I thought I'd remembered getting a review copy, so I dug through the never ending piles until I found it.
The City in the Lake is an immensely satisfying book heavy with myth, metaphor, and symbol. It's beautifully written book with a fairy-tale feel but more depth than a fairy tale. I recommend it for anyone who loves rich language, good writing, and depth of plot and character...more
The City in the Lake is an immensely satisfying book heavy with myth, metaphor, and symbol. It's beautifully written book with a fairy-tale feel but more depth than a fairy tale. I recommend it for anyone who loves rich language, good writing, and depth of plot and character...more
A beautiful, elegiac fantasy tale that is refreshingly small-scale and intimate, focusing on only a handful of main characters (with tiny entourages of supporting characters each). As all the reviews have mentioned, the writing is beautiful and lush but not so description-heavy (or high fantasy trope-heavy) as to put off readers not as familiar with the genre. In fact, the way the story is extremely grounded in our young heroine's POV should make it very accessible to all YA readers.
Speaking of...more
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This is an interesting fantasy story. A fairy tale, really. I found the unrestrained magic and wonder of the land in this multi-tiered kingdom to be the most intriguing part of the book. The pacing is somewhat sedate for much of the book, almost dream-like. The part when the villain makes her entrance gains some momentum, and that carries the book toward the finale rather well. Kudos to the author for daring to have a really irredeemable villain in a story for younger readers. The fact that the...more
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The City in the Lake is a quest-type YA fantasy novel. The whole kingdom starts to fall apart with the disappearance of the young Prince. Magic starts to go awry and mages have no idea why. Timou is a young woman raised by her mage father in an isolated village. When trouble reaches even their remote area, her father goes back to the city to investigate. When he doesn't return, it's up to Timou to discover what happened and she knows that her quest is tied with her search...more
The City in the Lake is a quest-type YA fantasy novel. The whole kingdom starts to fall apart with the disappearance of the young Prince. Magic starts to go awry and mages have no idea why. Timou is a young woman raised by her mage father in an isolated village. When trouble reaches even their remote area, her father goes back to the city to investigate. When he doesn't return, it's up to Timou to discover what happened and she knows that her quest is tied with her search...more
Beautiful prose, reminiscent of McKillip but more grounded in the everyday; some genuinely disturbing fairytale moments; an interesting plot that more or less coheres. The two great problems with this book are (a) its villain, who is evil and manipulative because she is evil and manipulative, and that's pretty much all we get; and (b) the ending, which is tidy to the point of glibness and rather left me with the impression that I was watching the marionettes gather for one final curtsey. Still,...more
Mar 22, 2011
Maureen E
rated it
4 of 5 stars
·
review of another edition
Shelves:
fantasy,
young-adult
by Rachel Neumeier
Opening line: “The City is beautiful at sunset, almost as beautiful as the Lake itself.”
There is a City which is built on a Lake. And “At the moment between sunset and dark, the wind off the Lake sometimes dies and the air becomes utterly still. If that pause lasts long enough, it is said, the water becomes a mirror in which a man may see his true face reflected, as well as the reflection of the eternal City.” The City is the heart of the Kingdom. The King is the heart of the C...more
I first read The City in the Lake last summer and instantly fell in love. Neumeier’s style in this particular book is rich and flowing, reminiscent of Robin McKinley’s prose. The book reads heavily though, and it wasn’t always easy to absorb. Most of the characters rarely say what they mean outright, so the reader has to do some interpretation between the lines.
The story itself is entertaining, and certainly has enough plot twists to keep the reader’s interest, but the world-building and charact...more
The story itself is entertaining, and certainly has enough plot twists to keep the reader’s interest, but the world-building and charact...more
Original review posted on Book Revels
Timou lives a quiet life in her village alongside her friends, learning to be a mage under the tutelage of her father. But when the Prince disappears, her quiet life is disturbed in ways she never imagined as something cruel and powerful seeps into the Kingdom and its magic. After her father heads for the City to put the Kingdom to rights and doesn’t return, Timou knows she must follow him. Soon Timou will confront her heritage and the mother she never knew....more
Timou lives a quiet life in her village alongside her friends, learning to be a mage under the tutelage of her father. But when the Prince disappears, her quiet life is disturbed in ways she never imagined as something cruel and powerful seeps into the Kingdom and its magic. After her father heads for the City to put the Kingdom to rights and doesn’t return, Timou knows she must follow him. Soon Timou will confront her heritage and the mother she never knew....more
Mar 18, 2013
TheBookSmugglers
rated it
5 of 5 stars
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review of another edition
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Originally Reviewed on The Book Smugglers: http://thebooksmugglers.com/2011/03/j...
REVIEW
First Impressions:
Thea: I’ve read two books by Rachel Neumeier prior to picking up The City and the Lake, and I can attest to her skill as a storyteller, especially in the fantasy arena. But Ms. Neumeier’s excellent The Floating Islands and Lord of the Changing Winds have got NOTHING on The City in the Lake. I have to admit, I’m not crazy about either cover for the book, but my goodness is the story within j...more
REVIEW
First Impressions:
Thea: I’ve read two books by Rachel Neumeier prior to picking up The City and the Lake, and I can attest to her skill as a storyteller, especially in the fantasy arena. But Ms. Neumeier’s excellent The Floating Islands and Lord of the Changing Winds have got NOTHING on The City in the Lake. I have to admit, I’m not crazy about either cover for the book, but my goodness is the story within j...more
May 12, 2013
Estara
rated it
3 of 5 stars
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review of another edition
Recommends it for:
Fans of House of Shadows
Recommended to Estara by:
http://thebooksmugglers.com/?p=13718
Shelves:
ebook,
read-in-2013
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Nov 24, 2012
Jennifer Wardrip
rated it
3 of 5 stars
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Reviewed by Breia "The Brain" Brickey for TeensReadToo.com
The story begins with the disappearance of a Prince. The heart of the Kingdom is the City, the heart of the City is the King, and the heart of the King is the Prince. After the disappearance of the Prince, many things go wrong, from the city to the farthest outlying villages.
Timou lives in a remote village where her father is a powerful mage. When the damage to the Kingdom becomes too much for them to ignore, Timou's father, Kapoen, make...more
The story begins with the disappearance of a Prince. The heart of the Kingdom is the City, the heart of the City is the King, and the heart of the King is the Prince. After the disappearance of the Prince, many things go wrong, from the city to the farthest outlying villages.
Timou lives in a remote village where her father is a powerful mage. When the damage to the Kingdom becomes too much for them to ignore, Timou's father, Kapoen, make...more
Nov 18, 2008
Lucy
rated it
5 of 5 stars
·
review of another edition
Recommends it for:
fans of Robin McKinley, Patricia McKillip
The Kingdom's heart is the City. The City's heart is the King. The King's heart is the Prince. And the Prince is missing--stolen, vanished, gone. And ever since he vanished, nothing has been right in the Kingdom. New life is stillborn, and there is a shadow that lies across everything. Everyone in the Kingdom can feel it.
Timou, in her remote village, can feel it too. Solemn, strange Timou, daughter of the mage Kapoen, has trained at her father's side for her entire life, and she can feel the wro...more
Timou, in her remote village, can feel it too. Solemn, strange Timou, daughter of the mage Kapoen, has trained at her father's side for her entire life, and she can feel the wro...more
This novel was so wonderfully written. It was so hard for me to put it down because it sucked me in so deeply. Setting down this book felt like a journey in itself because my mind had to travel back from this world to our own.
One of the things I loved about the book was that her world was too large to encompass in one novel. There are so many hints and promises discovered along the way that could never be explained in this novel. Yet, it doesn't feel like they are loose threads -- they make the...more
One of the things I loved about the book was that her world was too large to encompass in one novel. There are so many hints and promises discovered along the way that could never be explained in this novel. Yet, it doesn't feel like they are loose threads -- they make the...more
Enchanting. Extraordinary. Deserves far better cover artwork. Was this Neumeier's first book? The language is tinted a little lavender in spots, mostly in the beginning, gorgeous and lyrically descriptive in others, mostly toward the end, but all within what you'd expect from such a fantasy/original fairy tale sort of work. I enjoyed it so much more that Neumeier's other book I read, Lord of the Changing Winds (review). Reminded me of McKillip and some of McKinley's writing, and a little of Star...more
94/100
Quite a fascinating read. Like the lake central to the whole book, it reflects. And makes you reflect too, on various layers of reality. It's a book that you'll want to read again, and not only the exciting bits, but the whole book.
I noticed it during my frequent trips to the library because of its woodcut-ish cover art. Not that I liked the cover art much. It was acceptable, but not exactly my taste.
But the blurb seemed promising, so...
Quite a fascinating read. Like the lake central to the whole book, it reflects. And makes you reflect too, on various layers of reality. It's a book that you'll want to read again, and not only the exciting bits, but the whole book.
I noticed it during my frequent trips to the library because of its woodcut-ish cover art. Not that I liked the cover art much. It was acceptable, but not exactly my taste.
But the blurb seemed promising, so...
This is a gorgeous book and in a lot of ways reminds me of early Patricia McKillip in it's style. It's a definite fairy tale, but is well told and beautiful to read. I, sadly, devoured it in one gigantic bite so will probably have to reread it again someday. It was just the perfect story for me at this moment in time... a cold Sunday morning in winter.
This was also the 100th book I read in 2008. I have to create a new goal for myself.
This was also the 100th book I read in 2008. I have to create a new goal for myself.
A sweet and mystical fantasy that felt like an early Patrica A. McKillip story. Prettily written with a couple of decent protagonists and a big, bad evil that will soon smother their world.
All in all I quite liked this book but felt some of the characters fell a bit flat. I wasn't interested in Jonas at all and I wanted to know more about the dark Hunter.
But a valiant attempt and one that I quite appreciated it.
All in all I quite liked this book but felt some of the characters fell a bit flat. I wasn't interested in Jonas at all and I wanted to know more about the dark Hunter.
But a valiant attempt and one that I quite appreciated it.
Felt this one sort of fell apart halfway through--the interesting elements of the premise and prose were totally overshadowed by the use of a very cliched antagonist. The comparisons to McKillip's writings are apt, though McKillip's prose is still prettier; Neumeier's characters also aren't as interestingly offbeat as some of McKillip's best. All in all, I wasn't overly impressed by this novel, but it was promising enough that I'll probably investigate Neumeier's future work.
Oh, book. I tossed you across the room at one point. I don't toss books lightly.
The plot I wholeheartedly disapprove of. The resolution was subtle like a sledgehammer.
The saving grace was the characters--they were the only reason I finished this. I love some of them, but that's no great victory for the author: they're made to be loved.
I do not recommend this book, and I think the wonderful characters are reduced by being in it.
I would give it negative stars if I could.
The plot I wholeheartedly disapprove of. The resolution was subtle like a sledgehammer.
The saving grace was the characters--they were the only reason I finished this. I love some of them, but that's no great victory for the author: they're made to be loved.
I do not recommend this book, and I think the wonderful characters are reduced by being in it.
I would give it negative stars if I could.
My fascination to simplicity and the common life is reassured by this strikingly written epic chronicle that allows me to get acquainted with Timou, a young and keen girl learning to become a mage under the tutelage of his mage father. Her life in an idyllic village portrays and inspires a very refreshing impression, and maybe interesting on a different perspective. It makes me remember home and the neighbors and the usual mundane experiences. Like a typical individual, Timou has needs and longi...more
Nov 25, 2008
Abby
rated it
4 of 5 stars
·
review of another edition
Shelves:
sf-fantasy,
young-adult
This book is beautifully written. I love how vividly the author creates this world. My biggest complaint is that the abundance of metaphor and imagery, while thought provoking, sometimes detracted from the plot. Overall though it is an excellent read and I can't wait to read more by this author.
Timou leads a quiet and fairly contented life as a mage in training, but distant events - the sudden disappearance of the heir to the kingdom and then the king himself, bring Timou to the center of an evil power.
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Rachel Neumeier started writing fiction to relax when she was a graduate student and needed a hobby unrelated to her research. Prior to selling her first fantasy novel, she had published only a few articles in venues such as The American Journal of Botany. However, finding that her interests did not lie in research, Rachel left academia and began to let her hobbies take over her life instead.
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