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Under My Umbrella (Fated #1)

3.51  ·  Rating Details ·  796 Ratings  ·  39 Reviews

It’ll take more than a fire hose to cool down this attraction…

Fated, Book 1

Rain, rain, go away. That’s Jenna’s mantra as she suffers through yet another rain-soaked walk home from work. At least the tight butt of the guy walking in front of her offers some distraction. When he turns around and asks to share her umbrella, she realizes his front view is as smokin’ as the

Kindle Edition, 73 pages
Published (first published May 15th 2010)
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Apr 22, 2015 Talltree rated it liked it
Sweet and sexy low/medium angst novella read about a firefighter H and his neighbour. Safe romance.
3.5 stars
Heather in FL
Dec 09, 2010 Heather in FL rated it really liked it
This was a really cute story of fated love. I got a little tired of his inner dialogue about women who chase after men in uniform, lol, but other than that, it was a cute, quick read. And very steamy.
Nov 04, 2010 Sans rated it liked it
Short and sweet. Not how I like my men, but good things for an erotic short story. This didn't feel like erotica though. Sure they were getting the hot monkey boom boom on in less than an hour of meeting each other, but the lack of graphic description and the characters thinking, "It's fate. I love him/her. But I can't say anything, it's too soon! Oh woe is my damp panties/strained zipper!" made this read more like a romance than erotica.

Whether you believe in love at first sight or love within
Jennifer  E
I read the blurb and I knew it was a short story. So I knew what I was getting into but this story did not set my blood on fire. I kept reading but I really didn't find anything spectacular about it. It was just blah. My heart was not in this story at all. Their chemistry did not come across to me. It was just words.
Jan 08, 2013 ♥Trish♥ rated it it was amazing
Shelves: erotica
absolutly love these books! Great hot reads
May 31, 2013 Larissa rated it really liked it
Too short but a cute story..
Jan 21, 2011 Dre rated it liked it
Shelves: kindle, lendable
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Oct 06, 2012 Kimberly rated it it was ok
My review is cross-posted from Joyfully Reviewed:

Jenna hates walking home in the rain, but she’s thankful she at least remembered her umbrella. Especially when a handsome, soaking wet stranger asks to share it with her. It turns out the stranger, Brett, is a firefighter who lives nearby. When Jenna boldly asks Brett if he wants to dry off in her apartment, they go from strangers to lovers in a flash. Was their rainy day meeting a sign they’re fated to be
Feb 16, 2012 Anja rated it liked it
It's the first novella/short story of that kind I read and I have to agree with most of the comments that I kind of fell short. Yes, I get it's a short story and I know what to expect, but I kind of missed the tension, the build and the reward in the end when they finally got together. I don't mind thrown into hot sex right from the start, but give me at least a little bit story so I can get a hang of the characters, but didn't get any connection to the characters. I'm missing that too, because ...more
Amanda Sheila
What a short read.

I finished this one less than an hour, I thought it's going to be a long story but apparently it's not. But I enjoyed it anyway.

I don't really like the character's inner talk. It's boring and I crave for conversation between Jenna and Brett. And to be honest, Jenna seems a bit 'needy' to me. I mean, she's insecure and I think it's kind of annoying.

But overall, I liked this book even though not exactly my favorite.
Christina Montminy
Mar 29, 2013 Christina Montminy rated it liked it
it was a very short read only 8 chapters. It was a good story though about a fireman & a graphic designer meeting in a rain storm on the street on the way home from work. It's quick into bed & quick to fall in love even with the usual drama of does he or she really like me or is it a short lived romp. I wish that it would've gone on further & I hope that this couple is in the book 2 of this series.
Jeanna-Has Probably Read It!
This was cute story but um just seemed a little rushed to me for the love connection. But it was cute and I love a man in uniform. Still, how was she going to get upset with a man because she wanted to get down but he was at work. Can the man have a little respect for her? Dang... Seemed too much at once.
Dec 21, 2012 Purvika rated it it was ok
well i have read many short stories... they comes in full package short sweet sexy ...

but here i did not get that hold .. i mean, i get the Love at fight sight concept but sex at first sight ... don't know.. it lacked a spark you know, when you read something, you keep expecting like WOW what will come next...
but it was a ok Read.

Jun 23, 2010 Kathy rated it really liked it
Under My Umbrella is an engaging story about love at first sight and believing that Fate plays a hand in our lives. To read my review in its entirety, please visit
Lin #Historical lover...❤️
3.5 stars

This book did not have much to it beyond sex.
Typical I love you without the testing...
Happily ever after.

I've read better.... it was not a repulsive read in any way... But neither is it memorable.
Jun 18, 2011 Netanella rated it it was ok
This is one of the few books where I actually enjoyed the cover more than the contents. Not that the story was bad - it was just too short to be emotionally engaging, and I couldn't bring myself to like the female lead, particulary when she pressured Brett to get it on at his job site.
Aug 14, 2010 Tina rated it liked it
Heat: 3 out of 5

It was pretty good. I really can't put my finger on what is missing but I would like to read more by this author to see if she can write better. I did like the premise but didn't live up to my expectations.
May 30, 2012 Salim rated it really liked it
really hot, moved a bit too fast i think and was more about sex than love. if you really think about it you can't fall in love with someone in weeks in most of the time your having sex... can you? :s
Jennifer (random jendsmit)
Really liked it! I thought this would just steamy with no real story but there's some emotion involved and I really liked it!
Sofia Grey
Oct 06, 2012 Sofia Grey rated it really liked it
The first in the Fated series, with a chance meeting in the rain. Hot and sexy, a great feel-good book that's perfect for any weather :-)
Laura Gaudin
Jan 07, 2013 Laura Gaudin rated it it was amazing
This book rocked, good story and great sizzle!
Mar 08, 2012 Monica rated it liked it
A fun and fast paced little love story!
Apr 19, 2012 Njoyn rated it liked it
All they do is have sex. Then they decide they are in love. $2.80 on March 2011
Lade Tawak
Aug 17, 2013 Lade Tawak rated it it was ok
I liked how they met. I like how the "relationship" "develops".
but it was a bit meh
Feb 24, 2011 mad4rombks rated it liked it
Very quick read. New to me author.
Sep 02, 2015 ies rated it liked it
Shelves: romance
Ga sampai 100 page, tapi bukan ero si.. cuma emang singkat gitu "FATE" tanpa babibu ketemu langsung boom.. fall in love, namanya jg Fate series ehehehehehe

Oct 21, 2012 Kate rated it liked it
Didnt realize this was a novella and well I just wanted more!
Mar 31, 2014 Dee rated it really liked it
A hot and steamy fun story.

I don't normally buy into insta-love stories, but with the twist of 'fated' love this one worked for me. And boy did these two know how to heat things up :)
Gigi Melodias
Dec 19, 2014 Gigi Melodias rated it liked it
Had this series forever in my To Read list.
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USA Today bestselling author Karen Erickson lives in central California with her husband, three kids, one dog and too many cats. Being a romance writer and bringing her characters to life is her greatest dream come true.

She also writes new adult romance as NYT & USA Today bestselling author Monica Murphy.

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