Seychelles Sunset (Cougar Challenge #2.5)
John and Edie are in a rut. At a loss for how to recapture their magic, they decide on a holiday in the Seychelles to talk and recuperate from their busy lives. When Edie arrives, she finds herself alone, and wonders if John is really committed to their affair. When John arrives he has surprising news for...more
Edie, a retired model and budding writer, is in her hotel room, awaiting the arrival of her plastic surgeon boyfriend, John. Edie is slightly insecure because she's ten year...more
This Naughty Nooner was hot an sweet. The characters seemed to be well thought out. I believe this is part of a bigger story and it shows. I felt like I was getting a lot of info about these people's lives that I would have cared much more about having read the main story that they are in. This is probably a much better story for those aquainted with the characters. Still, hot and sweet counts for something and it was well written.
This a a very short story told from one POV. It is basically one sex scene with a few bits of dialogue on either end of it. The conflict was something a lot of people deal with but it was resolved without the couple working it out together. I liked the writing but not the relationship.