The Dark Hills Divide (The Land of Elyon: Book 1)
by Patrick Carman
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Alexa, a spirited, independent twelve-year-old growing up in a complex of walled villages, longs for adventure and a chance to see what lies beyond the walls' boundaries. When she discovers a secret passage, she gets her wish, and more adventure than she bargained for in the process. For Alexa has been chosen to save her home from dark forces which seek its destruction, and she must act quickly to unravel the mystery that lurks inside the walls and threatens everything she holds dear. This fi...more
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Read in September, 2007
I love starting a new series and having the first book really, really make me want to read the second book! I really enjoyed this book and believe, though similar to many other fantasy type stories, the author has a real winner of a series on his hands.
The Dark Hills Divide by Patrick Carmen, is the first book in the Land of Elyon series. It begins with Alexa and her father, the mayor of Lathbury, heading to Bridewell for their annual summer trip. Alexa loves spending time in Bridewell, exp...more
The Dark Hills Divide by Patrick Carmen, is the first book in the Land of Elyon series. It begins with Alexa and her father, the mayor of Lathbury, heading to Bridewell for their annual summer trip. Alexa loves spending time in Bridewell, exp...more
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Read in May, 2008
I was hoping that this would be a series I could recommend to voracious middle-grade fantasy readers, but no such luck. There are the seeds of a good story here, with at least one good character and the possibility of a suspenseful plot. As it stands, though, they are overwhelmed by vast info-dump and the feeling that it doesn't matter if anything the characters do is something a real, sane person would do - if the author needs it to happen, it's going to happen regardless of how m...more
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Read in January, 2005
Twelve-year-old Alexa lives in a city surrounded by twenty-foot walls. The only way out is through a massive gate and down a road also lined on both sides by towering walls. There are a total of four cities connected this way, in the shape of a wagon wheel with one in the center and three forming a circle around it, and all of them contain only a few square miles of land crowded with buildings and houses no taller than two stories—else you could see over the walls. Alexa yearns to know what li...more
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Read in September, 2007
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Read in September, 2007
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intermediate fantasy fans
This is a fantasy series for 4th-6th grade students. Alexa escapes from a walled city to explore the world beyond and is able to communicate with animals who help her in her quests.
I have read all three of the Land of Elyon books. Patrick Carman's writing improves and becomes richer in each book. These are popular books with intermediate students so the imagery of the fantasy world portrayed must overcome the uneven writing and spotty plot development. I find it curious that he spend so mu...more
I have read all three of the Land of Elyon books. Patrick Carman's writing improves and becomes richer in each book. These are popular books with intermediate students so the imagery of the fantasy world portrayed must overcome the uneven writing and spotty plot development. I find it curious that he spend so mu...more
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Read in January, 2007
Cool concept, but a bit of a boring read. Elyon is a completely closed society (think "The Village"). No one's ever been outside its walls, except one man... and he's just kicked the can. Alexa, 12 years old and precocious, is there during Warvold's (yes, it's that kind of book) final moments, takes the key she finds on his COLD DEAD BODY and uses it to, DUN DUN DUN, go outside the walls. I stopped reading when she started carrying on conversations with a fox or a gopher or both becaus...more
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Read in June, 2007
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believers in magic
Ever wondered what a Jocasta stone was? The answer lies herein!
I was immediately drawn into the world of Elyon. It has a medieval feel to it, which I love. The story concept is original, and the theme is haunting and timeless: the loss of magic as a result of human "progress."
The story lost momentum a bit towards the middle, and the clues became a little too convenient and simple. But, I had to remind myself that this is a children's book, after all. The conclusion pulle...more
I was immediately drawn into the world of Elyon. It has a medieval feel to it, which I love. The story concept is original, and the theme is haunting and timeless: the loss of magic as a result of human "progress."
The story lost momentum a bit towards the middle, and the clues became a little too convenient and simple. But, I had to remind myself that this is a children's book, after all. The conclusion pulle...more
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Read in April, 2008
Not too shabby. I listened to this book on CD and was enthralled. I thought it was going to be a all fantasy-istic, but instead it surprised me by being a multi-genre young adult literature piece. There were elements of mystery, of fantasy, of possible dystopia, and adventure all packed into one very descriptive and interesting read. I was actually even surprised a little at one point, though there are also juvenile moments where it is very easy to tell what will happen or when a climax is r...more
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Read in January, 2007
I Really enjoyed this book and have read it twice. I think it has a very interesting storyline and the adventure Alexa (the Main Charachter) was put into enough detail that you could almost go along with her. The book is very well writen and it had a very exiciting start to it, most books start slow and get exciting during the end but this one brings you in at the very beginning. The Clifthanger ending made me want to go buy the seccond book right away.
So overall I would give the book 4 stars...more
So overall I would give the book 4 stars...more
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Jonah and I are reading this next. I went ahead and read all three books, wanting to check them out. LOVED them! They were a very fast read, certainly young adult or youth appropriate. I was thrilled to find alot of Christian overtones, creationism, etc. It was tender, and moving and interesting. Jonah is going to love it...he loves symbolism and this book has plenty. I highly recommend it..it is fantasy, but with plenty of very modern themes in it.
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Read in August, 2007
I'm on the hunt for a good series to hold my interest after Harry Potter. I'm a couple chapters into this one, and I'll let you know what I think at the end.
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I finished it late last night, and I really liked it! It was very suspenseful and a good mystery, and the main character is likable and smart. It's not HP, but it's a good magical series to start reading if you're regretting the end of Book 7.
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I finished it late last night, and I really liked it! It was very suspenseful and a good mystery, and the main character is likable and smart. It's not HP, but it's a good magical series to start reading if you're regretting the end of Book 7.
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Read in June, 2008
Not sure if this is quite a 3 -- maybe 2.75? I liked the main character and the premise, but I thought both could be explored much more fully. The author writes like children are idiots and can only grasp the most obvious symbolism. And writing it in the first-person was a mistake.
Still, a fairly enjoyable read. But nothing great, and I doubt I'll ever get around to the rest of the series.
Still, a fairly enjoyable read. But nothing great, and I doubt I'll ever get around to the rest of the series.
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I'm actually listening to this one on CD. It's a kids book but it gives me something to listen to in the car that's not to deep. Plus, I'm continually trying to appear cool to my nieces. So far I have them fooled. When I can talk about books they like, I score double cool points. I'll let you know what I think when I'm done.
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I really liked this book. It was very different, in the way it had magic and talking animals. Reading this book, I could visualize all of the things that are going on. That is very important in a book to me. I know a couple people who have also read this and liked it.
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At first, when i looked at this book, i thought it was going to be a bad book. But when i started reading it, it got really interesting. The plot of the story was really well thought out. I also liked how it used pictures during some part of the story.
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Read in May, 2008
Charmingly enough written but essentially forgettable. Usually YA fantasy (and most fantasy, really) needs to be more life and death/fate of the world, rather than unite a family of wolves. Not sure if I'm going to pursue the rest of the series.
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Read in August, 2005
This book is okay, I guess. The setting is interesting enough (a walled city with unknown creatures outside), with a curious girl (who else?) as the protagonist. The conflict... meh... it was all a bit too much-ado-about-nothing for me.
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This is a good story. I enjoyed it and plan to read the next 2 books. The writting is not the best though. The plot has holes you could drive a truck through. So even though it is a good story that is why it only got 3 stars.
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Read in June, 2008
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Young fantasy lovers
I read this book to prepare for writing a story about the author. It was very enjoyable. If I'd read it as a kid, I know I would have LOVED it because it's a fun fantasy with a young person as the heroine.
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avg rating (all editions): 3.83 (454 ratings) avg rating (this edition): 3.82 (436 ratings) number of reviews: 81popular shelves
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"If bringing down the wall would require you to fly, you must believe you can fly. Otherwise, when the decisive moment comes, you will surely discover you ahve no wings."
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