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Bloodlines (Bloodlines #1)
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Lindsay Anne Kendal (Goodreads Author)
Keira Jameson used to lead a normal life, she just had a gift, passed down through the generations of her family. Now, after hearing voices, having strange dreams of others calling out to her, and her grandfather's last words haunting her, she sets out to find other families like hers. Along with her best friend Lily, the only person outside her family to know about her gi...more
Paperback, 1st Edition, 320 pages
Published
April 29th 2010
by Book Guild Limited
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Dec 16, 2011
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UPDATE the new version of Bloodlines is now available from Amazon.com. Kindle version also avaiable now. This is actually my own book, so its not fair to give it a rating.
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This book had such great reviews I purposefully sought it out when major book sellers, such as B&N, didn't carry it. I should have taken that for a sign.
My biggest gripes about this book are 1) a real editor needs to proof this book (a lot!) and 2) the author needs to do a much better job on researching her facts.
For my first issue I will say the flow, writing, building of the story, etc. is horrid. Thoughts are not presented clearly or reasonably as she jumps all around in her conversation...more
My biggest gripes about this book are 1) a real editor needs to proof this book (a lot!) and 2) the author needs to do a much better job on researching her facts.
For my first issue I will say the flow, writing, building of the story, etc. is horrid. Thoughts are not presented clearly or reasonably as she jumps all around in her conversation...more
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I really loved this story from the start till the end; there were some slow chapters but others were so full of action that the balance was just right. The characters are great; they all have different yet in some ways similar personalities. You can never know what the next happening will be; in most of the books I can predict the outcome, villain etc. but in this story everything was a surprise or I thought something else was gonna happen. It's so good that when you reach the end of the book; y...more
I very much enjoyed this book. Its a nice change from Vampires and the new Fallen angel craze that seems to be going on. I find this story to be very original.
I can relate with the main Character Keira. She feels isolated and very alone at first, desperate to find out where she comes from, and to be around people who are like her.
The other characters are very likeable and I do think Danny and Tyler sound rather hot. Shame they are ficticious.
I dont want to spoil this book for anyone so i wont...more
I can relate with the main Character Keira. She feels isolated and very alone at first, desperate to find out where she comes from, and to be around people who are like her.
The other characters are very likeable and I do think Danny and Tyler sound rather hot. Shame they are ficticious.
I dont want to spoil this book for anyone so i wont...more
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I hate to say anything bad about a book because I'm certain that, bad or good, the author loves it just the same and put in an equal amount of effort. I mean this only as constructive criticism.
That being said, despite its 310 pages the plot feels thin to the point of transparency, every turn is predictable. The characters read as caricatures, and the main character is a blatant Mary-Sue who displays behaviour only acceptable in a young teenage girl, not a girl in her early twenties.
Where was th...more
That being said, despite its 310 pages the plot feels thin to the point of transparency, every turn is predictable. The characters read as caricatures, and the main character is a blatant Mary-Sue who displays behaviour only acceptable in a young teenage girl, not a girl in her early twenties.
Where was th...more
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Wow! I don't want to be mean but...how can I not?! I couldn't even get past page thirty. The writing was childish and in desperate need of editing. I felt like I was reading a ten year old's, what I did for summer vacation, homework. For example: Why would she be telling her "best" friend that, of course, she didn't talk to her father about her powers because he was dead. Um, yeah. Wouldn't the best friend know that? I know the author was just trying to give us some background but having Keira d...more
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You guys will think I'm crazy.
Bloodlines is the story of Keira, a woman who goes to Salem, Massachusetts, to discover her past while sending the story in as many unrelated directions as possible and devoting minimal time to interesting aspects. Never mind the demons hunting the main characters and the supernatural mystery going on, we have a house to paint! (Seriously, there are about three chapters devoted to that house alone) Oh joy.
The plotting of this book, if it hasn't already been made app...more
Bloodlines is the story of Keira, a woman who goes to Salem, Massachusetts, to discover her past while sending the story in as many unrelated directions as possible and devoting minimal time to interesting aspects. Never mind the demons hunting the main characters and the supernatural mystery going on, we have a house to paint! (Seriously, there are about three chapters devoted to that house alone) Oh joy.
The plotting of this book, if it hasn't already been made app...more
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Bloodlines
By Lindsay Anne Kendal
“Keira Jameson used to lead a normal life, she just had a gift, passed down through the generations of her family. Now, after hearing voices, having strange dreams of others calling out to her, and her grandfather's last words haunting her, she sets out to find other families like hers. Along with her best friend Lily, the only person outside her family to know about her gift, Keira begins a hunt for her ancestors. A chance meeting with a young man, Lucian Turne...more
By Lindsay Anne Kendal
“Keira Jameson used to lead a normal life, she just had a gift, passed down through the generations of her family. Now, after hearing voices, having strange dreams of others calling out to her, and her grandfather's last words haunting her, she sets out to find other families like hers. Along with her best friend Lily, the only person outside her family to know about her gift, Keira begins a hunt for her ancestors. A chance meeting with a young man, Lucian Turne...more
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for a first novel i think this is fantastic............the plot is interesting the character personalities make you either love or hate them, which is great because i hate characters that leave you feeling indifferent. the story line leaves you guessing and is unique
well done Lindsay x
ADDITIONAL REVIEW OF NEWLY EDITED VERSION
Kiera knew she was different and after having strange dreams and hearing voices she felt the need to find her roots. Taking her friend Lily along with her they embark on an...more
well done Lindsay x
ADDITIONAL REVIEW OF NEWLY EDITED VERSION
Kiera knew she was different and after having strange dreams and hearing voices she felt the need to find her roots. Taking her friend Lily along with her they embark on an...more
Honestly I feel this book has potential to be great... Ignoring the twilight / Harry potter / Percy Jackson crossovers. I'm unsure of the intended audience, I felt the story could have been pursued in a far more mature manner. I honestly don't understand how this book got published with the quality of writing, however it does make me feel more positive about getting my own books published... If this quality of work is allowed on the shelf then I should have no problem!
Spoiler alert!!!...
I feel...more
Spoiler alert!!!...
I feel...more
This book needs to win an award for originality.
There are mixed reviews about this book, and some comments on the editing. I agree the sentences are choppy at times, but I urge people to look past this and actually pay attention to the storyline, since of course, we read the book for the story, the feelings you get when you read, the bond you feel with the characters, and feeling as though you are beside the character going through everything they go through.
Of course if your just an editor in t...more
There are mixed reviews about this book, and some comments on the editing. I agree the sentences are choppy at times, but I urge people to look past this and actually pay attention to the storyline, since of course, we read the book for the story, the feelings you get when you read, the bond you feel with the characters, and feeling as though you are beside the character going through everything they go through.
Of course if your just an editor in t...more
I really wanted to like this book. There was so much potential with the plot and I was curious about the main character, Keira, right off the bat. But, unfortunately, the writing just couldn't match up with the ambition of the story.
I think my biggest problem was with the dialogue. It was often contrived or being used as an info dump. The author is British, so some of the wording just didn't fit into how people would speak in Salem, Massachusetts. The male characters didn't speak like any 20-som...more
I think my biggest problem was with the dialogue. It was often contrived or being used as an info dump. The author is British, so some of the wording just didn't fit into how people would speak in Salem, Massachusetts. The male characters didn't speak like any 20-som...more
Keira Jameson, after the death of her grandfather, decides to find out where some comes from and how it is she came in the powers that she has. With her best friend, Lily, by her side she leaves West Chester, Pa and head to Salem, Ma. Paying for a cheap hotel for a week, the friends begin to visit different areas of Salem hoping to get answers to some of the clues Keira found in her grandfather's papers. What they find instead are a group of boys (I guess young men) who seem to follow Keira and...more
I was a little slow getting into this book, but once I had read a few chapters I was caught by the mystery, the magic and, most especially, the characters. Keira is a prickly individual with quite a temper; it is rather entertaining to watch her flinging attackers left and right and into trees. Her best friend Lily, while not nearly as tough, is also no shrinking violet. She is unfailingly loyal and sweet. The contrast and friendship between them is very well done.
As much as I liked watching Kei...more
As much as I liked watching Kei...more
Two stars for this. One to support the author and the other for the story idea itself. It is a refreshing idea and it is what kept me reading. I appreciate how much work goes into writing and therefore find it hard to criticise. The characters seemed rather immature to me and considering the power and family history they have this seemed a shame. We are told they are all in their twenties but with regards to relationships, it was like reading about young teens. The plot tended to jump around a b...more
Lindsay Anne Kendal did a fantastic job on this novel, and that took a lot for me to say, since I don't normally read this particular genre.
The plot line is extremely intriguing and contains a quite unique take on the hidden history of the Salem witch trials and the resulting generational impact that the actions of those individuals originally involved had on their subsequent "Bloodlines."
The main characters are immediately likable and the friendships that developed will make for interesting tie...more
The plot line is extremely intriguing and contains a quite unique take on the hidden history of the Salem witch trials and the resulting generational impact that the actions of those individuals originally involved had on their subsequent "Bloodlines."
The main characters are immediately likable and the friendships that developed will make for interesting tie...more
DNF
I was really looking forward to the book to be sorely disappointed, this was actually painful to read. My main beef with the book is Keira, I can understand the author trying to make the ideal female character but seriously, this woman is perfect! and there's nothing wrong with perfection except it makes it really hard for the reader to empathise and connect with the book. I knew I wouldn't like her the moment she described herself... no make up and athletic build without exercise? Please! Ev...more
I was really looking forward to the book to be sorely disappointed, this was actually painful to read. My main beef with the book is Keira, I can understand the author trying to make the ideal female character but seriously, this woman is perfect! and there's nothing wrong with perfection except it makes it really hard for the reader to empathise and connect with the book. I knew I wouldn't like her the moment she described herself... no make up and athletic build without exercise? Please! Ev...more
Ok so to be honest, I wasn't looking forward to reading this book after seeing some of the comments on here with regards to the editing. HOWEVER. I’m very glad I did, and this book is now one of my favourites of all time. The new version of this must read a lot better, since I couldn’t fault the editing at all.
I hate spoilers with a passion; I like to read the book for myself. So with that in mind I will simplify this as much as possible. The story follows a young girl Keira, and her friend Lil...more
I hate spoilers with a passion; I like to read the book for myself. So with that in mind I will simplify this as much as possible. The story follows a young girl Keira, and her friend Lil...more
I really enjoyed this book. I was hooked from the beginning because I didn’t know what Keira was or what her gift was, until I was given a hint in the first chapter.
Keira is looking for answers about her past and why she is hearing voices, but soon she realizes that maybe this wasn’t the wisest decision.
I really liked that there was a big group of characters – all of them playing an important part to the story. I connected with each one of them. At some points the dynamic of the group reminded m...more
Keira is looking for answers about her past and why she is hearing voices, but soon she realizes that maybe this wasn’t the wisest decision.
I really liked that there was a big group of characters – all of them playing an important part to the story. I connected with each one of them. At some points the dynamic of the group reminded m...more
What a waste of time, the back of the book reads very well,i'm sure this was written by someone with the ability of a 10 year old,i cant for the life of me see why a first time auther from England would attemp to americanise her first novel,it just doesnt make sense for example one sentence says "we went into the diner for a brew" the spelling mistakes are abundant,some of them even made me laugh,take this one for instance" i heard a loud nose behind me" i didnt enjoy the book at all but i stuck...more
A note to all British authors ...
Please stop writing as an American/from an American's point of view. I am tired of reading phrases in books knowing that no American speaks this way. Consider researching, not only the towns or cities, but also the colloquialisms used in these places.
Aside from this, the story had the potential to be interesting but never quite got there. The characters whose ages were supposed to range from 22-25 years of age appeared to be closer to the 14 year old students tha...more
Please stop writing as an American/from an American's point of view. I am tired of reading phrases in books knowing that no American speaks this way. Consider researching, not only the towns or cities, but also the colloquialisms used in these places.
Aside from this, the story had the potential to be interesting but never quite got there. The characters whose ages were supposed to range from 22-25 years of age appeared to be closer to the 14 year old students tha...more
First off, lemme give a huge kudos to the author for responding to most every review including the nasty ones, with grace.
For that she gets 5 stars!!!!
As for the book itself, I believe it could use some work.
The story itself has potential but the characters aren't that believable to me. The way the guys talk, I don't see any men in their 20s speaking or acting the way they are portrayed.
As for the American terminology issue that's been brought up, the author sounds British so it's understandabl...more
For that she gets 5 stars!!!!
As for the book itself, I believe it could use some work.
The story itself has potential but the characters aren't that believable to me. The way the guys talk, I don't see any men in their 20s speaking or acting the way they are portrayed.
As for the American terminology issue that's been brought up, the author sounds British so it's understandabl...more
I thought the first version of this book was brilliant. The only let down was the editing. But to be honest, I find errors in every book I read, so I tend not to pay much attention to punctuation and whatnot.
The story is unique, the characters interact well. I think this book is more a build up for what's to come. Kinda to set the mood and let you get to know the characters and what they can do. (the chapter called playtime - wow, that was brilliant). It gives you a lot of info and there are so...more
The story is unique, the characters interact well. I think this book is more a build up for what's to come. Kinda to set the mood and let you get to know the characters and what they can do. (the chapter called playtime - wow, that was brilliant). It gives you a lot of info and there are so...more
I really enjoyed reading this book. Right from the first chapter.
The story is different to what is out there at the moment, and it makes a refreshing change. The main character, Keira, is great. Not one of these needy helpless girls I've been reading about a lot lately. She has spunk. She is fiesty, and tough. Very nice.
When you read the book you feel as though you are taking every step the characters take, all of which by the way, are very likeable. I have a couple of favourites and cant wait...more
The story is different to what is out there at the moment, and it makes a refreshing change. The main character, Keira, is great. Not one of these needy helpless girls I've been reading about a lot lately. She has spunk. She is fiesty, and tough. Very nice.
When you read the book you feel as though you are taking every step the characters take, all of which by the way, are very likeable. I have a couple of favourites and cant wait...more
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A really great book mixing Demons and Witches ! I've always liked some stories about the Witches of Salem and these ones were very interesting ! I liked quickly the two main characters Lily and Kiera. They evolve all along the novel like sisters and it was a pleasure to follow their adventures. the story of Kiera and the one about her ancestors are very intriguing, and we're caught in a few tome in the story.
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Keira is a not so normal girl trying to lead a normal life. She has some special gifts that only her best friend knows about. When her grandfather dies, she sets out to find some answers of her own. With Lily in tow, she goes to Salem to find out more about her heritage and her bloodline in order to understand her powers and how she is supposed to deal with it. What she finds in Salem is that she is surprising. Will she find the answers she has been looking for? Will she be able to fulfill her d...more
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I really enjoyed this book. A lot happens in it and at the same time, you want even more to happen because you want to find out more about the histories of the families. There are so many unanswered questions and at first that frustrated me, but as the book goes on I think Lindsay does a really nice job of spreading out the answers that she reveals. It was not too slow, but at the same time you only got enough information to keep you on the edge of your seat and engaged in the book.
I loved gett...more
I loved gett...more
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I wasn't sure what to expect from this book, but have been wanting to read it for a while now. I got sucked in right form page one and never let go. Bloodlines is an exciting story about some young adults that are in the process of discovering their magical powers that have been passed down from generations before them. Now they need to find out where the power originated from and what to do with it.
Bloodlines has so many interesting plots and twists I can't even begin to name my favorite. The a...more
Bloodlines has so many interesting plots and twists I can't even begin to name my favorite. The a...more
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Lindsay Anne Kendal was born in Manchester in the 1980s, has had a love of fantasy and horror for as long as she can remember, and began writing in her early 20's.
Bloodlines is the first of a trilogy of novels.
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Bloodlines is the first of a trilogy of novels.
I have a blog site and website where you can find out more information. Please visit me at either...
http://lindsayannekendal.blogspot.com/
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“What exactly is your job here?’
‘So that’s what you’ve dragged yourself out here to ask. See now I’m disappointed, you could have at least come out in that state just because you wanted to see me,’ he said with a smirk.
‘How do you know that's not another reason?’
‘I don't!’ he said, walking towards me.
He stopped a few inches in front of me and looked deep into my eyes, while leaning on the car. I swallowed hard.”
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‘So that’s what you’ve dragged yourself out here to ask. See now I’m disappointed, you could have at least come out in that state just because you wanted to see me,’ he said with a smirk.
‘How do you know that's not another reason?’
‘I don't!’ he said, walking towards me.
He stopped a few inches in front of me and looked deep into my eyes, while leaning on the car. I swallowed hard.”
