Take Control - Erotica Romance Short Story
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Take Control - Erotica Romance Short Story

2.12 of 5 stars 2.12  ·  rating details  ·  72 ratings  ·  15 reviews
WARNING: EXPLICIT SEXUAL CONTENT! ADULTS ONLY You must be 18 years of age to read the contents. Austin is just dropping by his favorite bar for a little happy hour snack and cocktails before going to a friends party in SOHO. Karen has been feeling horny all day and in the mood for some good extra naughty sex and came prepared just for that. They both are like magnet and st...more
ebook, 14 pages
Published July 24th 2009 by Smashwords, Inc. (first published 2009)
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This is a 15 minute read and free. But I had hard time getting over lines like...

"Austin, I want to leave now. I want you inside of me melting your hot stick of love between my legs" LMAO


"Yes baby release all that warm juice in me now"

But other than that is is basically Kindle porn and pretty raunchy which isn't all that bad in my book except all the mistakes and corny lines. downlaod it if you would like a good laugh.

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This is the story of a business man named Austin who meets Karen at the bar, and things move very fast towards them hooking up and leaving the bar in Austin’s Limo. Things get very hot, very quick on the way to the Party at Austin’s friends house. Karen was prepared for a dirty night out on the town, and has a few surprises of her own.

I would have enjoyed a little more story, as things moved forward so quickly and then ended very abruptly. Some of the spelling and Grammatical errors ruined the s...more
Tami Montano
It was a sultry short story, with a few typos that I would chalk up to the intensity and the power of the fantasy described. If I were authoring the story there would be tons more typos. As for the theme of sexual dominance or control, it was on the soft side. This was a quickie adventure.
Kiree Bons
Well...I found it funny....really?

"What up dog. Damn! I am diggin' your sex triplets!"
Grammar and misspelled words took away from the rating.
Martha D
Title: Take Control – Erotica Romance Short Story
Author: Marion Francis
Rating: 1/5

Summary: Austin meets Karen. There is sex. There is bad dialogue. That’s all.

Review: Adult book. Adult review. Thank goodness this is a free book, or I would be crying at the waste of money spent on this fifteen minute, horrible story. I actually finished it, but couldn’t find the effort or the interest to give it anything higher than one star. The lines in this one are absolutely horrid, prime example is this lit...more
Shantella Bonds
Good with describing clothes but need more physical descriptions. Pace was too fast. Needed to describe sexual acts more to create tension and to make more stimulating. Too much unnecessay dialogue especially in the beginning. Most of dialogue seemed unnatural which made it unsexy. Could be a much better story if there were more details.
Why do you hurt me this way Nook freebies? With your bad writing and your cheesy dialogue. The guy is slimy, the girl is stupid, the set-up is completely ludicrous and pointless (if you just want them to screw than just have them screw, but don't fake me out by acting like there is some sort of plot.) In the end it was the horrible dirty talk that did me in, besides the fact that she said she wanted to sub but than she totally took control and wouldn't shut the F up!
N.L. Riviezzo
A pretty horrid read. The writing style is stilted and "childish". The author needs to take more time to hone her writing abilities before she publishes *anything*. Short story erotica is *no* excuse for autrocious writing.
Angel Martin
This was just a waste of my reading time. Simply lacking in plot and characters. Childish. Thank goodness it was a free read!
Jenny Houle
I know it was a free book, but I'd like to request a monetary refund for my time
Autumn Jean
If I could give this book negative stars I would. Don't bother with it.
Well, it was free and it was short. Those are the good points, need I say more?
Sep 28, 2011 Martha marked it as won-t-finish
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