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Betrayal (Immortal #2)

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There are the small betrayals: the unkind word, the petty lies. And there are the betrayals that break hearts, destroy worlds, and turn the strong sweet light of day into bitter dust.

When Evie Johnson started at Wyldcliffe Abbey School for Young Ladies, her life changed in ways she couldn't possibly have envisioned: the discovery of her link with Lady Agnes, her special b
Hardcover, 359 pages
Published August 3rd 2010 by Katherine Tegen Books
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Nov 09, 2010 Kristy rated it it was ok
The cover says:
"Your Heart tells you to trust...
Your head tells you to run."

I wish i would have listened to my head! I should've put this book down and
Run Forest Run!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Doing this would have been less painful than reading
This Garbage!

I'm going to follow the Golden Rule: Do unto others as you would have them do unto you

I'm telling you right now, DO Not read this book!

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I'm such a little Angel ;)
Aug 14, 2010 Samantha rated it really liked it
Shelves: favorites
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Apr 10, 2011 Hoang-lan rated it really liked it
Shelves: really-like, magic
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This is a not-so good book.
The series wasn't that strong and it lack a lot of things. It has a great potential but the author blew it.
I couldn't feel the romance between Sebastian and Evie. It's just difficult to follow. It's like they were not really meant to be together. What's annoying is that Evie is just so desperate to find answers and for me, it seems like she just used her sisters for her own benefit. Seriously. She didn't even consider others and she just want to make out with Sebastian
Victoria Edwards
May 23, 2011 Victoria Edwards rated it it was ok
Recommends it for: a curious reader
Trust me, stick to the first one! All Evie and Sebastian talk about is how much they miss and love each other for 3/4ths of the book. It's annoying! I still don't like Sebastian, the cute stable guy is much likeable. Sebastian does a 180 followed by a 360 in his personality! Skip his "private letters" they repeated hat Evie has already said! All the flaws in the first book, become maddening in the sequel! I strongly dislike this book!
Savannah (Books With Bite)
I read the first book a lllloooonnnngggg time ago, way before I was a blogger. I liked it and when Waldenbooks (AKA Borders) went out of business, I end up picking up this book. I hoped that since the first book fell a little flat for me, the sequel will pick up.

Plot: This plot remains the same as the first with a few differences. Evie is back at the border school, picking up what is left of her life. We all know that in a border school no secrets stay hidden. And before you know it, Evie is bac
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Jul 20, 2012 Taylor rated it liked it
Shelves: witches-wizards
YAY! Josh is in this book more!

Besides thaT, the book is similar to the first. While good, I find some things irritating:
-Gypsies: I did not know that they still existed, and I find that they just happen to be there odd.
-Miss Scratton: I won't give away the big thing here, but it seems that Gillian Shields just made something up to make it seem plausible that she would be helping. It was a plot twist that was just dropped on me and I found it annoying.
-Harriet: How does a person possess a person
Alexandra Bayer
May 31, 2013 Alexandra Bayer rated it really liked it
When Evie returns to Wyldcliffe Abbey School for Young Ladies for another term full of magic and danger, all she wants to do is save Sebastian, her love, from the fate he has brought on himself. On the way back, she meets Harriet, a young girl who clings to Evie innocently - except for her flashes of temper and dangerous sleepwalking habits. The Coven of Sisters, who are Sebastian's followers and helped him earn with his fate, are determined to secure immortality, at any cost. Evie must suffer ...more
Yogesh Jain
Feb 16, 2016 Yogesh Jain rated it really liked it
Shelves: fantasy-romance

This book was far better than the last book. I really liked the dairy of Sebastian. It was absolutely wonderful reading his pov. The romance and good writing keeps you going. The suspense was kept in till very end which made it more interesting compared to previous part.

What's good.

This book shows us what does a true love mean. To what extent can someone go to save his love.

What's bad

The book is very rushed at the areas where we require more details when fighting against coven and st
Gigi Hudson
Feb 05, 2011 Gigi Hudson rated it it was ok
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Sep 02, 2010 Michaela rated it really liked it
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Feb 03, 2011 Carla rated it it was ok
The storyline looked so promising.... Evie, A haunted academy, an evil coven, a secret love that combs through time as an immortal but has now been bound to be devoured by a demon, puzzles to unlock, and a talisman that links it all. Say that really fast. I felt as though at times I had to force myself to stick with this book. Unfortunately, Ms. Shields can create amazing sentences and paragraphs, just to leave you hanging wanting for that magic again for another chapter or two to find it again. ...more
Feb 05, 2016 Mary rated it really liked it
In the second book in the Immortals series, Evie returns for the second term at Wyldcliffe Abbey School for Young Ladies. She longs to help her love, Sebastian, who is fading away into darkness. She will need the help of her sisters in the Mystic Way if she is to have any hope of saving his soul before it is too late. Yet, dark forces are at work at the school. Can Evie and her friends Helen and Sarah protect themselves long enough to find a way to help Sebastian?

While I felt this was not quit
Aug 26, 2014 Ally rated it it was ok
Betrayal is better than Immortal. I think I might give Betrayal a raise ever since Gillian Shields killed off... Oh. Sorry. Spoilers. But if you do want to know, then read the next paragraph in parentheses. If not, then skip the paragraph. Spoilers are never kind on the soul or heart. Or the mind. The mind always tend to remember the most annoying things of all details.

(Sebastian dies. Can we open the bottle yet?)

After that wonderful plot twist, I think I can relax now. However, I still remain d
Brittany Perry
Feb 02, 2015 Brittany Perry rated it liked it
I am sitting here in the aftermath of this novel distraught by what I have read. How could a book 2 end this way? How why? I am just in utter shock.

Also in this novel I actually kind of hated the main character. I mean I get that Harriet was evil deep down because of being possessed but I mean really? In the beginning she was alright and our beloved Evie was still a nasty piece of work to her.

I was rooting for Sebastian and I love that the author had the guts t
Mar 05, 2015 Pili rated it liked it  ·  review of another edition
Shelves: ebooks
3,25/5 - Dans ce second tome, on avance beaucoup plus dans le dénouement de l'histoire emprunte de magie, noire ou non. Je n'ai toujours pas réussi à m'attacher au personnage principal, ce sont vraiment les aventures que celle-ci vit avec ses amies qui m'ont permis d'arriver au bout de ce roman. Il y a un peu plus d'actions que dans le premier tome, mais je trouve que l'histoire d'amour entre Sebastian et Evie n'a pas été exploitée comme elle aurait dû l'être. L'auteure ne s'attarde, à mon goût, ...more
Jun 25, 2014 Maria rated it did not like it
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Dec 29, 2014 Jacqueline rated it liked it
Still not up to 4-star material, Shields! Although, you *have* earned that third star because the characters definitely seem to have matured and become more sophisticated, which is an excellent way of progressing a series. The drama is still laid sickeningly thick, though- once again, it's simultaneously pleasing and annoying. I think you were born several decades too late, Shields; your writing reminds me of the way authors commonly wrote in older books, which would be fantastic, except that bl ...more
Olivia Script
May 13, 2015 Olivia Script rated it really liked it
Second book really wrap things up it really explain a lot of things explained about the girls and their powers explained about the main love interest in his situation. Though during the end of the book you could tell that the writer was going to drag on the story even though she just finished the story you would think. No there's a whole Nother part of it that apparently has not been told yet and is going to be told in the next two books. I will read on further to see what happens the second boo ...more
Sofia  Oliveira
Senti uma clara evolução neste segundo livro!

Os tradutores são já "meus conhecidos" e nota-se claramente uma diferença na linguagem utilizada. A história em si está mais leve (se bem que esta não é a palavra mais adequada), mais atractiva e mais clara.

Infelizmente, à semelhança do primeiro livro, este também não foi muito surpreendente, apesar de se notar uma melhoria significativa.

O final não é decepcionante e isso é também um ponto a favor!

É uma leitura, no geral, fácil e rápida. No entanto n
Laura Landis
Jul 08, 2014 Laura Landis rated it liked it
Pretty good. The story picked up right where the first book ended. The series is moving along nicely. It's definitely a YA book with the usual angst of the teens. The main character, Evie, is searching for a way to save her boyfriend, Sebastian, who actually lived hundreds of years ago but found a way to cheat death. Now she has to find a way to save him before he fades away and becomes a servant to the Dark Lord. She works with her two best friends to use their relatively new found powers over ...more
Jul 26, 2011 Pam rated it it was ok
Evie returns to Wyldcliffe following winter break, anxious to reconnect with Sarah and Helen. She’s surrounded by teachers that are “Dark Sisters” and she’s worried that if she doesn’t figure out how to release the powers from her talisman using the Mystic Way she will lose Sebastian forever to the dark side.

I’m sorry but I was totally “meh” over this book. I couldn’t get it over with fast enough. Evie continually whined about possibly losing Sebastian. She was absolutely SURE she figured out ho
Patricia (Patricia's Particularity)
Gillian Shields continues Evie Johnson's journey through her past to save her future at Wyldcliffe Abbey. But Evie Johnson is not just trying to save her own future, she is trying to save the future of her new found sisters, Helen and Sarah, and true love, Sebastian. In her journey to find a cure to keep Sebastian from forever becoming part of the darkness, Evie also learns more about her past and the past of the Talisman. She also learns who is her enemy and who she can trust.

Gillian Shields'
Jun 13, 2015 Liz rated it really liked it
Shelves: series, fantasy
"Your real's love, isn't it?"

A great follow up to Immortal. Surprising, suspenseful and shall I say a bit disappointing?? Don’t get me wrong, the story was great filled with all the artful details as was in the first book however the outcome was not what I had expected and left me feeling a little empty.

Once again we spend our time with Evie, Helen and Sarah. These “sisters” are fun and inspiring with just the right amount of awkward imperfection. Gillian again enriched us with such
Oct 04, 2011 Shannon rated it it was ok
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Aug 04, 2010 Heather rated it really liked it
Betrayal is the companion novel to Immortal by Gillian Shields. The story continues by following Evie Johnson and her sisters, Sarah, Helen, and Lady Agnes as they fight to heal Sebastian James Fairfax from the darkness through the Mystic Way.

From Evie's first days at Wydecliffe Abbey school for Young Ladies she realizes that things are not as they seem. Now starting the second term of the year 16 year-old Evie has found that she cannot trust anyone but her sisters and possibly one teacher, Miss
Jan 29, 2011 Alisha rated it it was amazing
Recommends it for: YA readers, Paranormal readers, Romance fanatics
Plot: This is the sequel to Immortal and I was excited to finally get my hands on Betrayal. I was a bit confused when I started to read it. I haven't read Immortal in almost a year and Betrayal took some time to recount what happened. Evie would just say that she couldn't believe what happened and how horrible she felt for what she had done and I'm staring at the book trying to remember what happened in Immortal. I did, however, love the concept of the book. It was a nice take to see the heroin ...more
Sep 12, 2010 Erin rated it liked it
I just finished this book and though I 'liked' the first IMMORTAL book, but I had a lot of high expectations for BETRAYAL. Unfortunately, I was utterly disappointed in this novel, not because of the novel's writing - since that was very well done, but because the storyline seemed pointess, especially in its ending. From the beginning towards the middle cut of the book it had started off great, you know - it was all fast paced just the way I like it, but as the middle cut passed through I felt th ...more
Feb 05, 2016 Krissy rated it it was amazing
Shelves: own
For me personally, I felt that Betrayal was a bit harder to start than Immortal was. It took me a very long time to actually get past the first hundred or so pages in this book, but I'm glad I finished it.

What really stood out to me was Evie in this book. I felt that she actually grew as a character, but yet the other characters seemed a bit weaker in development to me, but that could just be me. I think the plot wasn't as rich as I felt the first one was. There was more predictability in Betra
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Gillian Shields was born and brought up in Yorkshire, in the north of England. As she grew up, she had two passions:books and theater. Gillian’s love of books led her to read English at St. Catharine's College, Cambridge. After university she studied acting in London. She then taught in a drama school, the Academy of Live and Recorded Arts, for several years, becoming Vice Principal. She recently ...more
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“There are many kinds of betrayals. There are the small ones: the unkind word, the laughter behind someone's back, the petty lies. And there are the betrayals that break hearts, destroy worlds, and turn the strong, sweet light of day into bitter dust.” 60 likes
“Every ending is also a beginning. We'll meet again, I promise.” 35 likes
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