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Tempestuous Relations (Mackenzie Twins #1)

3.13 of 5 stars 3.13  ·  rating details  ·  381 ratings  ·  35 reviews
Dominic Mackenzie isn’t too proud to take advantage of the local gloryhole. As far as he’s concerned, there’s nothing better than a warm, wet mouth without any strings attached. It’s only by accident that he discovers the shocking identity of the man on his knees. Once the secret’s out, then all bets are off.

Warning: This title contains m/m sex and twincest.
ebook, 32 pages
Published September 14th 2009 by Excessica (first published August 30th 2009)
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Judging by their anatomy, these bros are not the first in their family who are fond of twincest. For your reading pleasure, may I suggest replacing that cover with the Sampaio twins?

So this book about twin brothers that "just want to have a loving, incestuous relationship"(GUFAW!)..

Sorry, I got carried away a bit there.

..Anyway, I can't say that it was very good or even just good. But I ended up liking it anyway. Partly because I buddy read this with my partners in twincest; Jenna and Lo-Lo. Bu
This short involves twincest ... so definitely NOT for everyone. One of the taboo things that I have reluctance to. The fact that this is coming from Amanda Young is the only reason that I'm willing to try. I guess I sort of exploring to the dark side with m/m genre

Honestly, even with the twincest issue, this story is really good and tender. I believe in the love between the two brothers. It sort of reminds me of this short movie of another incest, "Starcrossed", which is as beautiful
Elisa Rolle
This is another twincest story and so probably no up for everyone out there. I actually don't mind read them, as I said, probably due to the simple fact that, being both men, there is no chance of an unwilling pregnancy that could be quite risky. And so, for me, a twincest has a reason to be if the two men involved are in love, and I don't believe it's so hard that it happens between identical twins, as one of the two men in this story thinks in his mind, it's like loving yourself, a modern vers ...more
Well, this checked the porny twincest box rather nicely :)

Full of cliches, full of annoyances: 'his lover,' 'his seed,' cheesy dialogue, chanting each other's names at the moment of orgasm, but guess what? Yep, I can overlook all that, cos it's hot.

Yum, yum, pigs bum.

ETA: oh, and I forgot, 'briny' tasting precum - gag! But yeah, still hot.
Well, I popped my twincest cherry with this short PWP, but because it lacked a plot, I don't feel like I got the full effect. I think I'd need to read the next book where their secret gets out to really experience the whole taboo feeling about their relationship.

I thought the way these two started their sexual relationship was very interesting and creatively done! I haven't come across that scenario in a book before.

The sex was hot, but (for me) not because they were twins. I can't say I've ever

Parts of this were hot, parts of it just simply a little creepy... But what do you expect with Twincest?

Creepier still, were lines like this;

Together they pushed and pulled, working as one towards a common goal.

Common goal? Really? This is an m/m twincest book not a business report.

Expect pwp and practically no dialogue (other than moans) and you'll get through this one ok.
Charmaine Stephens
This was a very short twin bros incest story. I think it was pretty hot! But I just wish it would've given a bit more of a background into who these characters truly are. Maybe if the book was a bit longer it could've gone there.
Alexis Woods
This was a sweet little read. "Older" brother Dominic and his twin, Manson, used to fool around when they were younger. Now Dom's just trying to get a little action and was using the local glory hole for release, reccommended by Mason. When he discovers whose been on the other side of the hole, Dom's world tilts. (view spoiler) ...more
This is a down-and-dirty short story with a great plot and delicious taboo elements that are great for a quick read at work during your break or at lunch. Just don't blame me if you return back to your desk with a grin on your face and quizzical look on your coworker's faces. ;)

Summary: Dominic Mackenzie isn’t too proud to take advantage of the local gloryhole. As far as he’s concerned, there’s nothing better than a warm, wet mouth without any strings attached. It’s only by accident that he dis
Taylor Siluwé
Dominic and Mason always had a bond, but when it suddenly gets deeper, crosses all the lines of decency, they know it will always be the two of them against the world.

This story kept me aroused in that evil, dirty sort of way - like when I was teenager reading smutty pulp fiction late at night by flashlight. Amanda Young pulls no punches with this taboo love story. Heavy on the sex (which usually isn't my cup of tea), but it was so deeply taboo and well-written that I couldn't put it down.

Kimberley Dane
Twincest - Oh my! Yeah, okay, I don't shock easily, I can suspend my disbelief and remember that it's just fiction. Isn't it funny though? How can you help but have it slip into your mind, to put yourself in Dom's shoes?

Don't think about it!

So I kept having to say that to myself while reading, but it didn't stop me enjoying the story. I couldn't help thinking though, that there could have been a little more emotional turmoil after Dom's realisation that the anonymous dude he's been getting off w
These two guys are hot! I really enjoyed these two. The author took what is a taboo topic and made it work for these two guys. I could really see how they cared for each other and understand why their relationship developed as it did. For such a short read the author really packed a lot of emotion into the story.
There's nothing better, than well-written incest story and here's the fine example ;)
Classic scenario, where one of the brothers had come to accept his feelings and even trying to act on it, and the other one is still in denial. Just the right amount of angst and the conquering it all brotherly love.
~Lei ~  Reading Is An Adventure ~

Not much to this, one brother has been down at the local glory hole giving and the other's been taking and they realize each other's identities and go a bit farther than oral. Not one of the better twincest reads for me. [Ok, did that seem like a weird statement?]
Oct 17, 2010 Chris added it
Shelves: 2010, dnf, gay, ebook, twincest, short
How did I miss that this was twincest?! DNF.
The story begins with Dom visiting a glory hole in a men's toilets where he's given an exquisite blow job by a mystery man. Dom has been visiting this glory hole each Friday for several weeks after overhearing his twin brother discussing it with a friend. On this occasion, after being blown, he bends down to pick up his cap from the floor and looks through the hole to see his twin brother Mason on the other side. After flying off the handle and storming off, Dom then returns home to discuss with ...more
I really don't know how to review this one ... without reading other books in the series, I'd have to assume that the relationship is developed in following stories which makes me think this is more of a serial than a series ... this short only took me 15 minutes to read which really doesn't qualify as a first installment ... more like a first chapter ... the writing style was a little bit clunky and wooden ... I found the characters a bit two-dimensional and bland ... there were annoying contra ...more
Nile Princess
3.5 Straightforward and uncomplicated. Not a lot of build up, but I liked that it gave me what I wanted. I felt the love between the brothers and it was hawt. Given the page count, I was happy. Onto book 2.
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Short, but involving. The Mackenzie twins' relationship may not be for everyone given the taboos around incest. While such taboos are well founded for male/female relationships in that inbreeding will occur, the line blurs between brothers - what harm could it do? Breakups would be difficult, social situations would be awkward...?
Aug 21, 2014 Amanda added it
I liked it. I'm not gonna lie the whole twincest/brother aspect kinda got me hot. Ive been reading a lot of M/M fiction lately and it is very good. Dom and Mason are sweet together. I really felt for Mason, loving Dom the way he did, but thinking he'd never get to be with him.
This story wasn't bad but it was way to short. It's almost the length of a long excerpt. Other than it's shortness I liked it, and if you want something that is super short and you only have about 15-20 minutes to read a story all the way through I would recommend it.
This was a short twincest book and didn't have much substance to it! I'd like to read a really good book dealing with twincest but it seems all we get are these short snippets of twincest! I'm hoping the next book gives us more substance between Dom and Mason...


This is nice steamy PWP. As expect there isn't much to the plot but the hot smex make up to it (oh, and the twincest too!! XD)
Not to my taste. This story may be written well, but the story didn't draw me in emotionally and that is why I give it a one star.
Don Bradshaw
Short but hot story about identical twins and the choice they make to live as lovers.
I wasn't overly impressed. Very short, really no plot. Was kind of a disappointment.
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