The Art of Fiction: Notes on Craft for Young Writers

The Art of Fiction: Notes on Craft for Young Writers

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This classic guide, from the renowned novelist and professor, has helped transform generations of aspiring writers into masterful writers—and will continue to do so for many years to come.

John Gardner was almost as famous as a teacher of creative writing as he was for his own works. In this practical, instructive handbook, based on the courses and seminars that he gave, h...more
Paperback, 224 pages
Published June 4th 1991 by Vintage (first published January 12th 1984)
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John
This book on fiction writing is commonly recommended. I was less impressed by it than I had expected and hoped to be. Be forewarned: the prose is verbose, dull, rambling, and frequently wanders off into digressions. I found it hard to maintain interest.

High points: Gardner's concept of 'psychic distance' as part of POV; the concept of 'frigidity' (when the writer accidentally lets slip that he really doens't care about a character) and 'profluence', the reader's sense that the story is progressi...more
Christy
Nov 21, 2007 Christy rated it 4 of 5 stars Recommends it for: writing teachers and aspiring writers
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This is one of very, very many books on how to write fiction. Gardner's book strives to offer more than the multitude of alternatives do, however, and, generally, I'd say he succeeds.

The first half of the book is devoted to more theoretical discussions of the art of fiction, some of which is very useful and some of which is quite particular to Gardner's own literary tastes. And his tastes definitely color the advice he gives. It is mostly sound advice for those who wish to write fiction in the...more
Cassandra
"Nobody's perfect, they generously observe. But the true artist is impatient with such talk. Circus knife-throwers know that it is indeed possible to be perfect, and one had better be. Perfection means hitting exactly what you are aiming at and not touching by a hair what you are not."
Gardner is mercilessly, obsessively scrupulous, almost to the level of snobbishness, in his concern that fiction should be 'moral'--that is, that every little gesture, every syllable, should ring true to human exp...more
L.h.
for my creative writing class. 40 pages in, I've found a lot of useful thought, but my reactions scribbled in the margins have tended towards

"And Lord Gardner now graces the mere mortals with his beneficent gift of knowledge. How kind."

and

"Everytime you're a misogynist, God kills a kitten."

and

"I think every 11th grade English teacher in America would disagree, Johnny." (re: Steinbeck's "failure" of a novel, the unheard of and obviously inferior Grapes of Wrath)


REGARDLESS, if you want to write...more
Natasha Oliver
John Gardner let's you know in his preface that he is writing this book for the serious writer (who he defines as the literary writer), so my fellow sci fi and fantasy writers (genre), we are not his target audience. However, that does not mean we can not learn from him.

I do not recommend this to the writer who is beginning their journey. By beginning, I mean who has never written a novel-length manuscript (unpublished of course) or at least a novella. I think Gardner presents too much detail an...more
Will Gates
This book has been a haven for me as I write. There is an alarming mass of writing books out there that offer little in the way of criticism or objective direction -- they tend to emphasize emotion over craft with no standards by which to judge one's own writing, so long as it's "honest." Gardner here expresses definite opinions. He emphasizes natural talent and instinct, but does not leave the rest of us with no direction. He provides guiding goals and truths, along with practical techniques, e...more
James
I'm not going to count this toward my 2013 totals; firstly, because I haven't read all of it, and secondly, because I never really intend to complete it linearly. It's something to pick up when I'm feeling puzzled, delighted, frustrated, or utterly romantic about literature, or more often when I feel like getting down with some first-class iconoclasm. It also helps defuse, a bit, Garder's reputation as a mud-slinging crank. He emphatically dismisses any notion of limits on fiction. He praises th...more
Eric
The weight of the fourth (and possibly third) star comes from the chapters "Common Errors" and much of "Technique." These portions are where Garder's advice is most concrete, practical and most universal. That's not to say that a guide to writing should merely be a composition handbook since the advice is more complex than "no passive sentences." It delves into how a story can work line-by-line. That knowledge alone, I think, helps a writer become much more aware of what their work is doing.

Remo...more
Robert Harken
I came to this book after reading quotes (frequently the same quote) of Gardner's work in a number of technique books. When I read the same quoted material in different books I am tempted to believe the quoting works distilled the salient point and no further exploration is needed, but I have learned over time the flaws in this line of thought. I am glad I read the source.

“The Art of Fiction” strikes a similar note as Forster’s “Aspects of the Novel” – unique insight into literature as art. You...more
Jeff
I'm using this book to teach a fiction class, so naturally I found many usable points with which to supplement my own lectures, but there are some things that irk me about it.

For one, Gardner and myself have very different appreciations for literature. I get it, you think Hemingway, Faulkner, and Joyce were so-so writers. I think Grendal is stupid, there. (Actually, I didn't read it; I'm just a child).

It's easy to get over the more pretentious passages. At times, Gardner is so egotistical that...more
Rachael Sherwood
I typically walk away from books about writing with a few new tips or tricks and maybe a new idea. This book is very different. As the title reflects, it explores fiction as both craft and art. At first I worried that Gardner was kind of pretentious--his style is certainly very academic. But he managed to fuse together solid writing advice with interesting theory in a way that challenged me to think about how I approach writing (without making me feel like I had to write like ~*the classics*~)....more
Omri
I’ve been devouring this book, from the first page to the last one, in one single reading. It’s been a long while since I read a text book that made me absorb into it so easily. A fluent, though not too above the eye-level, language that carries you on it wings of the conceptuality behind the art of writing and the art itself. John Gardner created a perfect text book for what being a writer means, in his own personal perspective.

There are many text books out there that will tell you what is righ...more
Steven
Never having had the benefit of a creative writing class, I thought it would be a good idea to read this book (by one of my favorite twentieth-century novelists) as I began to dabble in some fiction writing of my own. I've read it through twice and continue to use it for reference. Gardner offers some useful guidance on topics that I suppose are standard components of the writer's curriculum, e.g., rhythm, plotting, point of view, and he includes some lucid opinions on the general purpose of fic...more
Katherine
Not an appropriate book for beginners, but rather for someone who's already got two or three failed novels stuffed away somewhere they'd rather not talk about. Nor for anyone who isn't prepared to take the good parts and discard the rest. And there's a fair bit of "the rest." Gardner is old-school in the worst ways - I thought the book had been published in the 20s or 30s until he name-checked Barthelme - and has plenty of essentializing and not-right-sounding theories about form and genre. But...more
Grace
On the outside, John Gardner's "The Art of Fiction: Notes on Craft for Young Writers" promises to be an intense and informative read on creating solid and effective fiction geared for new or fairly new writers. Instead, "The Art of Fiction" is half literary theory and assumptions that all readers of this book are college educated people and the other half is equally as pompous diatribe on the fundamentals of writing: rhythm, style, plot and point of view.

I am college educated. My degree is in W...more
Nina
Dear Mr. Gardner,

You don't know me, but I know you - particularly another work of yours, Grendel. I was intrigued by your sense of humor and your unerring ear for words. However, I figured this would be our first and last meeting.

Consider me surprised, then, when my parents gave your little gray book to me for Christmas. "Thought it might be interesting," they said, which is accurate; I plan to go into creative writing, and a little guidance would be helpful. Most advice I've gotten would have m...more
Garrett Cook
Jul 01, 2008 Garrett Cook rated it 3 of 5 stars Recommends it for: The dedicated, the mad
Recommended to Garrett by: Professors and teachers
Considered ideal for young writers, but its exercises are masochistic and often sheer folly. Gardner himself wrote "tedium is the worst pain" and trying to slog through Art of Fiction exercises would leave old Grendel raging at any number of additional Meadhalls. The text itself is good and you can find sound advice in it, but there are much better writing books out there. It might have paved the way, but so did 8 tracks.
Timmy
I don't mind what many term the "pompous jerk" and "elitist attitudes" of Gardner in this book, especially considering so much of the label comes from:

1. a general sarcasm and erudition that gives the book some pizazz
2. his knocking on the contemporary pop and pseudo garbage that people enjoy settling for as not merely a "nice little evening of reading" but rather an actual replacement, across the board, for good literature....and then work to proselytize the few "elitists" remaining through e...more
Gail
Kicking off this whole pursuit of mine to read more about the art of writing, I picked a haughty tome to start with. I wish I could gush about Gardner's teaching here the way others on Goodreads have, but his points (all of them valid and good) darn near were lost on me on account of his high-minded rhetoric and tone. (Not to mention the examples he chose to illustrate them with—-I've never been a mythology girl so following Gardner's advice on the art of plotting through his rehashing of the He...more
Dominic
Francine Prose, author of Reading Like a Writer, ponders at the beginning of her book about whether or not creative writing can be taught. For John Gardner (who wrote this book and is a nice companion piece to Prose's book, although twenty years separates them), there is no need to wonder because his answer would be a resounding "Well, of course it can!"

As a result, Gardner's book at times comes off incredibly pompous. Yet like a brilliant professor one both loves and can't stop griping about, G...more
Jason Coleman
So in the many years since I read this book, John Gardner not only kicked the bucket in a motorcycle accident but he somehow turned into John Champlin Gardner Jr. I had totally forgotten about this book--and Gardner's nearly identical On Becoming a Novelist--until I was poking around on this site a couple days ago, and there he was. If only through his books, Gardner was the first writing teacher I was ever exposed to, and so his ideas had a disproportionately strong grip on me. I remember being...more
Joseph
I've had a lot of writer's tell me about Gardner's book, but I never got around to reading it until now. I'm glad I did. It's a gem.
While an esteemed teacher of writing, as well as a well respected writer in his own right,Gardner freely admits there are no absolutes in creating fiction. All things are at least theoretically possible. I like his honesty and the relatively modest task he sets out for those who choose to teach creative writing.

Not surprising, is his assertion that a key to good w...more
Ryandake
quite probably the best book i've ever read on writing.

the finest part of it is that it skips all the simple stuff at the baseline level: characterization, metaphor, dialogue. not that gardner doesn't have a few things to say about each, but he clearly has assumed that his reader has educated herself on the basics.

so this is in some ways not really for absolute novice writers. it assumes at least some education (or habit) in analyzing a text critically.

so gardner is free to take off from the mid...more
David Wise
Of the very slim shelf of books on writing that are worth a damn, "The Art of Fiction" is by far the best. Passionate, evangelical, profound, deeply moving and extremely useful, it's meant for advanced writing students. But everyone interested in writing can benefit from reading it -- beginner, advanced and professional. Even book lovers who have no interest in becoming writers will become better readers for having come in contact with Gardner's wisdom.

How powerful is this book? After I gave my...more
Kip Williams
This book is recommended in SELF-EDITING FOR THE FICTION WRITER, a book I have read twice and enjoyed a great deal. I had to give Gardner a try.

This is a tough review to write because I can't say this is a fantastic book to help one write fiction. At the same time, there is little or nothing said that I disagree with. So, what's the problem?

My confusion starts with my expectations when reading a book about writing. It's a situation where I want to gain information and hints on how to write bett...more
Steve
Since 3 stars and a half is not an option, I decided for the lower rating. I had high expectations considering the book's status as a classic of the genre. I ended up with quite a few interesting passages I underlined and will come back to later, but most of the book I found more or less filled with usual and pretty basic info about how fiction works. When he gets into examples of stories in his discussion of plotting, it becomes downright boring. I also found some of his opinions about what con...more
John
Despite Gardner's claim that this is "the best book of its kind," I didn't find it helpful at all. Most of Gardner's ideas are surprisingly shallow considering how pretentiously (and obnoxiously) he writes. In describing how to write prose fiction, Gardner constantly encourages his readers to emulate Shakespear, Homer, Dante, Mellville and Joyce--despite the fact that Shakespear was a playwright, Homer and Dante wrote epic poems, and Melville and Joyce are virtually unreadable (and torturous) to...more
Shobasriaiyer
Brilliant.

John Gardner is the god of good punctuation. He can write interminably long sentences, each word of which flows naturally, with utter clarity into the next word, such that you don't have to read to get the full meaning.

He has taken the trouble to explain very many concepts of fiction, which for me who is on her very first book, was invaluable.

Loved all the examples he gave of past works, though he stuck to using the names of his favorite writers over and over again.
His criticism of...more
sarah gilbert
It may be wonderful praise, may be a cautionary tale, that I began this book as a lark undertaken in the midst of two classes on memoir (nonfiction is, I've always believed, my life's work) and serious work rewriting my food memoir's first chapter, and before I'd half-finished Gardner's book, I began a novel.

As inspiration, this is either all of it or a great chill; every sentence in this book is written with the clear undertone, "writing a novel is hard, hard work." That the work is worthwhile...more
Amy
Gardner’s primer on constructing “the vivid and continuous fictional dream” is so sweeping and generous that he can find something to admire in writers as diverse as Melville and Barthelme. At the same time, his savaging of rookie mistakes sent me hunting through the book to make sure he wouldn’t pronounce my work irredeemable. I believe he has, once and for all, shamed me out of my indiscriminate use of the introductory infinite-verb phrase. I also appreciated his advice on mastering the meter...more
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John Champlin Gardner was a well-known and controversial American novelist and university professor, best known for his novel Grendel, a retelling of the Beowulf myth.

Gardner was born in Batavia, New York. His father was a lay preacher and dairy farmer, and his mother taught English at a local school. Both parents were fond of Shakespeare and often recited literature together. As a child, Gardner...more
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“The primary subject of fiction is and has always been human emotion, values, and beliefs.” 15 people liked it
“To write with taste, in the highest sense, is to write [...] so that no one commits suicide, no one despairs; to write [...] so that people understand, sympathize, see the universality of pain, and feel strengthened, if not directly encouraged to live on.

If there is good to be said, the writer should say it. If there is bad to be said, he should say it in a way that reflects the truth that, though we see the evil, we choose to continue among the living.

The true artist [...] gets his sense of worth and honor from his conviction that art is powerful--”
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