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The Bronze Pen

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Twelve-year-old Audrey Abbott dreams of becoming a writer, but with her father's failing health and the family's shaky finances, it seems there is no room for what her overworked mother would surely call a childish fantasy. So Audrey keeps her writing a secret. That is, until she meets a mysterious old woman who seems able to read her mind. Audrey is surprised at how readi...more
Paperback, 200 pages
Published March 4th 2008 by Atheneum Books for Young Readers
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Brenda
This is one of those books that has all the right parts but is still missing just that little extra piece. Audrey has always dreamed of being a writer so much that when she finds a mysterious women in a cave she is given a magical bronze pen. The central theme for me is the old women's words to "use the pen wisely and for good purpose." Here is where my extra pieces comes in, there is so much adventure and fantasy or thrill or mystery that Audrey could have written about which would have made th...more
Leyla
May 20, 2009 Leyla added it
This is one of my favorite books. It is about a girl who loves writing stories. One day she finds a bronze pen. She uses the pen to write a story about a girl who can talk to animals. The next day she can talk to her dog.
Irene
The book "The Bronze Pen" is about a girl, Andrey, who gets a bronze pen from a mysterious woman in a cave. The woman told Audrey to use the pen wisely and for good purpose, but Audrey didn't know what that meant. So she started using the bronze pen to write stories and soon enough, some parts of the story came true!

The reason I picked this book up is because the summary was talking about a magical bronze pen. I then thought that this book is something that I would enjoy reading. Also, the cov...more
Charlyn  Trussell
Twelve-year-old Audrey is a quiet, lonely writer. She comes home from school early everyday to take care of her ailing father. To support the family, her mother works in an office where she is often criticized by her manager. One day, Audrey follows a white duck into a cave where she finds what appears to be an old woman. The lady gives her a bronze pen and instructs her to use it wisely. Audrey finds that when she writes stories with her pen, the plot comes true. Now Audrey must learn how to u...more
Roxanne Hsu Feldman
This happens to me with almost every book by Snyder: I became increasingly resentful and even angry at the posturing of the story being a magical or fantasy tale, where the author really just wanted to use the magical element to deal with real life crisis such as a sick father (like this one) to write something "wisely and to good purpose." (p. 200 -- the last paragraph of the story.) Grrr... The pacing is sluggish and the glints of magical happenings are so far apart and so few and there is so...more
Shelli
I really wanted to get into this book because it sounded like an interesting concept: a girl with a magical pen that could write things into reality. For me the book was just missing that special something. The character development was a little lacking so that may have been it. This is of course a short story for young readers but given more details and information about the characters this could have been a better book if is were longer. Also no real conclusion with what happened to the eccent...more
Josiah
The Bronze Pen is written with the good use of a solid, old-fashioned type of literary foundation that hearkens back to the time in which the story is set, the third quarter of the 1900s. It's good to see a writer such as Zilpha Keatley Snyder still going strong at it in her writing, producing new novels at a rate from which most writers of her time long ago relaxed. Some interesting and certainly noteworthy thoughts are sprinkled throughout the writing, giving the potential to enjoy The Bronze...more
Jodi
This had a very clever premise. An aspiring young (age 12) author is given a pen under mysterious circumstances and that pen has mysterious powers. I liked Audrey and her friend Lizzie. What confused me is why it was necessary to set this book in 1972. I realize it made the plot a little more exciting that her father needed heart bypass surgery in a time before that was done on a regular basis but most readers wouldn't know this fact. It would have been more interesting, in my opinion, had it be...more
Mathilde
I got this book from Scholastic, thinking my daugher would like it. I decided to read it first, at the halfway point I know she would find it exceedingly boring. At the halfway point, Audrey hadn’t yet figured out anything about the pen. And when she finally figured it out, the book just ended. And I thought her friend Lizzie was obnoxious. I don’t know when this book was written, but it was set in the early 1970s. In any case, I don’t consider this book a timeless treasure, and I will be donati...more
Professor Ritter
The Bronze Pen captured my attention early. It was mysterious and I thought I had an idea where is was heading and I was eagerly anticipating an exciting read. Although I felt the book lost momentum as an adventure, Snyder compensated by shifting the tension in the book from her dilemna with the bronze to pen, to the emerging crisis in her family. It was a fun read and I think a lot of kids woudl like it. I was considering it as a read aloud, but now I could see it as a lit circle book or an ind...more
Amy Carr
In my opinion, this was a terrible book. The concept was so appealing and interesting but everything about the execution of that concept failed terribly. The story was slow and lacked the type of depth and development that makes it "believable" and engages the reader with the characters and story. The characters were very flat and stereotypical. The plot just never moves and then on the last page, what little "tension" there was in the story all comes to a very abrupt end. What a waste of a geni...more
Rebecca Heywood
Also a easy read, I loved this story. It actually made me think of a couple ideas for stories I once had. The ending is very touching when she finally figures out what really matters to her and sometimes things happen in ways you don't expect. I kind of alike it to answers to prayers. You don't always get your answer right away, sometimes you don't recognize it as an answer, or sometimes it comes in a way you were not expecting.
Thom
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This book just wasn't gripping. The plot takes a long time in gaining momentum - much too long in fact. I gave it up about a third of the way through, just after Audrey receives the mystical bronze pen. I found myself guessing what was going to happen instead of anxiously enjoying the plot. Audrey and her dilemma with her father's illness just aren't interesting enough to care about.
Savannah
I like books that encourage kids to write, and this falls strongly into this category: a magic pen to be used "wisely and to good purpose" leads the protagonist on a series of adventures and friendships as she learns to use it in her writing. While I'd love to see the whole plot and characters fleshed out, the book is exactly the right length for the intended readers (young) without ever talking down to them.
Pandora
Could be I was just not in the right mood for reading this one. It seemed though the story was a little forced. That the narrator's voice was just a bit too pushy and talking down to the children who would be reading this book. Some though may like the magical elements of the pen. It did seem though it took an awful long time for Audrey to figure out how to best use the pen.
Minorlibrarian
Audrey Abbott is an introverted girl who likes to write, but does not want to tell anyone. She has an adventure involving a bronze pen that is given to her by a mysterious woman in a cave near her home. She ends up becoming friends with a girl who is a good artist and they make a book together. Audrey deals with her father's poor health and her family's financial problems.
Austin
Almost stopped reading about halfway through, because I was too bored, but I decided to finish it just to finish it. Pretty boring story most of the way through. I think the author actually got bored writing it, and decided to wrap up the story really quickly. The last paragraph was actually laughable, it was so poorly written. Very disappointed in this book.
Melanie
An okay book. I was hoping for more, since the catch line is about writing "well and to good purpose" so I was hoping to use it as a mentor text in my classroom. That won't be happening, as I feel like the story could've gone so many different places. I'll add it to my classroom library but I won't be reading it aloud to the whole class.
Aaryn
This book is a book about a girl called Audrey. Her dad have heart dease so her mom was not really cheerful. One day, she went to the house's roof and strarted writing poems. Then, she saw a duck. The duck brought her to a hole where she and another twins have been played before. What is inside the hole? Can't tell you. Find it yourself!
Joslyn
i loved this book i love the concept of having a magic pen but it doesnt work when you want it it only works when you well kinda need it ? if that makes sense i love the story line the beginging imedietly captured my interest with a strage old lady in a cave and following a white duck its a great book that i re-read all the time
Lindameredith07
Not sure if the book and/or the author is "loathed by Lemony Snicket". A budding author is given a magical "bronze pen" which inspires her writing; however, it comes with the warning to "write wisely and to good purpose." After trial and some error Audrey learns the meaning of that phrase.
Linda
Audrey has always used writing of fiction to cheer herself up or at least make her forget what was worrying her. But when she begins to use the bronze pen given to her by the ethereal lady in the cave animals begin to talk, dragons appear...
Maddy
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Shrika
This book was interesting but it was very bland. I enjoyed the detail and characters but I got really bored while reading the story. I thought it was cute and sweet but it didn't have as much drama and excitement I was hoping for.
Brandy
Nice story- definitely for a younger reader (4th-6th grade). I liked the main character- strong, sweet, and honest. Story moved a bit slow and I could see where it was going before every turn- young reader. Well written.
Dephny
I put down the book when I was done halfway. The Bronze Pen is not an interesting book. It seems kind of boring because the story wasn't really exciting. I didn't like how there wan't really any action in the book.
Landon Beeson
This was a very nice story that I believe to be about the importance and power of hope. It was a very quick read that was heart-felt and touching. I think that it is a great introduction to fantasy for younger readers.
Ever
Ohhh, there is such a good idea here, and the book ends before it can really catch fire. I do like how Snyder drops in little bits of wisdom for aspiring authors; she makes me want her as a writing instructor.
Suzanne Eastman
Writing is a powerful thing. Imagine if you find a magic pen that would do almost everything you wish for....just be careful what you wish for! Great story for those with big imagniations.
Ashtyn
This book is soooo good. This girl goes in this cave and heard noises and this old lady is there and gives her a bronze pen to write with!! And oh my gosh u guyz NEED 2 read it!!!!!!
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The recipient of three Newbery Honor Book awards for "The Egypt Game", "The Headless Cupid" and "The Witches of Worm", Zilpha Keatley Snyder has been writing books for children since 1964 when her first book, "A Season of Ponies", was published. Since that time she has completed 43 books, mostly for children aged 9 to 13, but also including two books for young adults, four picture books for younge...more
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