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Preview — Keeker and the Sneaky Pony by Hadley Higgenson
Keeker and the Sneaky Pony (Sneaky Pony #1)
Meet Plum. Plum is a Shetland pony (who's known to be a teeny bit sneaky). She rarely, if ever, thinks about little girls. She certainly doesn't want one.
When Plum moves to Keeker's farm, Keeker faces the challenge of winning a pony's trust and friendship. And when Plum and...more
To a fiction writer and editor..... ACK. Weird POV issues. Every few sentences the point of view changes from the little girl's thoughts to the pony's thoughts. They are both identified as female so everyone is a "her" and it was hard to keep track o ...more