Lyon's Crew (The Lyon #1)
I seriously am out of words for this book!
This will be a long review..with spoilers..
First things first.. The book starts out ok.. so your hopes are flourishing and then..
BAM the book shows it's true colors..
Rushed, stupid, poorly executed, unreal and so the list goes on..
Let me start with Colton, he is a billionaire who makes bikes and has his own crew.. With the way he acts i wouldn't trust him with a fish not a whole crew..He is just a rich pompous ass who thinks he is Robbin Hood..
On t ...more
I loved that Kat knew she was kinky, even when she was still a virgin. I was the same way. I was extremely sheltered (home-schooled), but I longed to be tied up and rode hard. Kat had been assaulted and almost raped, which she was healing from, but that didn't change who she was. She needed and wanted someone to t ...more
The male narrator was ok. The female, not so much. In my opionion, the voices didn't match the characters, especially Colton's parents.
This was simply a hot mess. The story was there but it lacked any sort of structure and cohesiveness. POV changed so frequently that I kept having to re-read paragraphs to see if I could decipher who last spoke and who else was in the scene. The dialogue would actually jump from character to character with no introduction, no explanation. This made it extremely confusing and hard to follow.
The story as I mentioned was okay but it was also familiar....more
There were aspects I li ...more
In addition Lyon is chauvinist, scary and I would say disgusting as well. Having the " heroine" to be a 18 year old virgin whereas the " hero" is a 32 year old biker was something I didn't like. Sorry, but trying to convince us that she is " mature" because she went through a trauma is laughable!
Then why I give it 3 stars? Well, because however bad ...more
This is an inexcusable mess. Poorly written with poorly developed "plot" and characters. The supposed leading man is a Neanderthal, with ideas about women that belong in the dark ages. I regret using my commute and lunch break to read this.
There were absolutely no transitions whatsoever in this book. It went from one scene to the next, with no explanation of how the characters got to their destinations. There were a lot of things left unresolved in the book, and I had so many questions left over. A sentence or two between each "chapter" (or rather line break) would have been nice.
I do agree that for a man to have an 11.5 inch ...more
he is Domineering,possessive, alpha biker, rich and owns a customer bike store. He tells her what she can and cannot do and she is expected to h ...more
Colton Lyon is the tattooed, pierced (with an Apadravya) leader of a bike crew. His wealthy background and bad boy good looks makes him every young girl's fantasy but Lyon has sworn off women. That is until he meets Katarina, the young wounded friend of one of his crew members and the thirty two year old heartthrob falls hard and fast and sets out to heal his little Angel.
I always smile when I read books with strong alpha males. They are always so sure that they are in control of ...more
Bottom line, if you're curious and you have some audible credits laying around - give this a whirl rather than reading.
The characters were hard to truly engage with ...more
I wasn't too impressed with this story at the beginning. As the story went on I really started liking Colton and Kat more and more. He became more of a possessive caveman and she well... can you blame her for falling for him?? (That was one hell of a first night together!!!!) Enter the Rosetti's.... lots of drama and Jennifer, Colton'e ex, was on a whole new level of a bitch. Also enter Colton wanting to put the perpetrators from Kat's past to pay for their crimes... ...more
This story is not so bad you can't read it but honestly not so good either. I feel that the emotions and situations between hero and heroine are kinda too much rushed. It's just that it all goes from 0 to 100 in a turn of page. One moment she's his nothing and the next one she's his everything. A makeover and ne ...more