Exile: The First Book of the Seven Eyes
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Exile: The First Book of the Seven Eyes (The Seven Eyes #1)

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Draken vae Khellian, bastard cousin of the Monoean King, had risen far from his ignominious origins, becoming both a Bowrank Commander and a member of the Crown’s Black Guard. But when he is falsely condemned for the grisly murder of his beloved wife, he is banished from the kingdom and cast upon the distant shore of Akrasia, at the arse-end of the world.

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Hardcover, 320 pages
Published February 5th 2013 by Night Shade Books
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I gladly took this submission when the author suggested it. The blurb offered me a hope for a unique setting, and I was hoping the book offered something a little different as well. I also fully admit I was intrigued knowing the author was from my home state, which shouldn’t affect which books I pick but did.

A strong hook pulled me in early. Protagonist Draken is wrongly accused of the murder of his wife, and we first meet him on a ship “walking the plank” into a new land; a f...more
I'm a little over half way into this book and read more of it every chance I get. I love the world Dornbusch has created, as well as the characters. The story just gets deeper and deeper with twists and turns that leave me wanting to read more to find out what happens next and what the main characters are going to do!

A thrilling, fast pace read. I can't wait to see more from Ms. Dornbusch.
This book frustrated the heck out of me. I wanted to like it, because it sounded like a great idea, but after the first few chapters, the writing just became so oblique. It was like the editor went through and chopped out everything but the bare bones of the story -- every iota of context that would explain why everyone suddenly trusted Draken and was giving him things he never even asked for.

I kept reading the book because I was hoping the author would pull the threads together and explain some...more
I give this 3.5 stars.

I won't give a summary. The one given by Goodreads is accurate.

I enjoyed the story. Good characters and story. Some interesting magic and action. Some nice twists and turns. Kept me up at night reading.

My main complaint is that some things came too easy for the main character, Draken, that shouldn't have. He's dropped in a new land with nothing, and suddenly he just gains assistance instead of suffering and earning the help. People just seem to like him and trust him at tim...more
I Am only on page 15 out of 286, but i love it ...it will be one of the books that i can't stop reading. :)

Oh ye! I couldn't stop reading it.
Brandon Zarzyczny
My experience with this book was a little different, as my Dad had an emergency that sent him into the hospital, so I started and read most of this book in one long day in waiting rooms. I then finished the book in the next day or so in a hospital room. It was an odd way to read a book, as I usually take around a week to read an average book, instead of ingesting it in one day when my psyche was probably a little messed up. Still, however my experience affected it, I really loved this book. Ther...more
Full disclosure: I won this in a Goodreads giveaway.

It's very, very rare to come across a truly original entry in the epic fantasy world, these days. Though in some ways I'm not even sure fantasy describes this book. Yes, it's obviously fantasy with magic and different races and such things, but at the same time it doesn't seem to focus on those things. It doesn't have the 'feel' of a typical fantasy book, and to me that's a good thing. Perhaps because it lacks some of the heaviness that many se...more
Wayne McCoy
The book starts right in on the action, with the main character, Draken, being tossed off a ship into exile in the land of the country he has been fighting against for years. He anticipates his survival rate to be pretty low. His crime was apparently killing his wife, but he knows the truth.

Of course, he doesn't die, and along the way he makes friends and allies with a variety of interesting characters. There are banes loose, which are powerful supernatural creatures, and they may have been loos...more
Jonathan Paul
Exile by Betsy Dornbusch tells the story of Draken, a half breed of royal and slave blood who is exiled from his kingdom after being accused of the murder of his own wife by the king who happens to be his cousin. The book revolves around Draken’s quest to return back home and avenge the death of his wife and prove himself innocent. Along the way be meets many characters who are of importance to him as they help him come closer and closer to finding out the murderer. After arriving at Akrasia wit...more
I'll admit that I don't read much epic fantasy, but this story was absorbing and intriguing right form the start. The world is vast and complex, but is revealed gradually as the hero, Draken, travels through the kingdom of Akrasia, neatly named 'the arse-end of the world'. Lots of magic, action and great characters - and although I'm not a big fan of politics and military maneuvering, it was well woven into the story and even my simple brain managed to master it. Fast moving and exciting all the...more
Lauren Bachle
truth: I picked this up off the library shelf because the guy on the cover looks like Tom Hiddleston in Loki make-up.

Once I read the back cover blurb, I decided to go ahead and check it out.

Exile is really well written. It takes place in a compelling and completely fleshed out fantasy world. Having said that, it was a struggle to get through. I just felt like the story should have picked up more, or that I was going to connect more to Draken. I don't quit books though, and am glad to have finish...more
Michael Haspil
Thoroughly enjoyed this book. It introduced new elements of fantasy rather than the same old elves, dwarves, dragons and orcs. I liked the way magic worked and the world was very well developed. I was a little disappointed that one particular element of Manse magic wasn't explored more thoroughly in the novel, but after all, this is only the First Book of the Seven Eyes. So I anxiously await the sequel.
Season Meyers
I received this book as an ARC from Goodreads Firstreads. The story had a lot going on but I really, really enjoyed this book. The plot had substance without overdoing it. The main characters were strong and flawed at the same time which made it more believable for me. Definitely recommend this one as must read!
Kenny Soward
Loved the mix of characters, especially the Moonlings; love the little folk :) Great interaction between Elena and Drakken and the rest of this crazy cast. Some parts were a little slow due to some complex plotting, but overall a nice first book in the series.
Nov 11, 2012 Liviu marked it as tried-but-not-for-me
very fast moving, kept my interest for 100 pages or so but then it became just too pulpy and without anything special (impressive characters, narrative power) to continue
David Marshall
A perfect example of how not to write a sword and sorcery novel.

Tessa Eger
A little rough in places, but fair. Characters need a little work, too...
Decent enough book. Not to my liking however.
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Betsy Dornbusch is a writer and editor. Her books are Quenched, Quencher, Lost Prince, Archive of Fire, and Exile. Her short fiction has appeared in print and online venues such as Sinister Tales, Big Pulp, Story Portal, and Spinetingler, as well as the anthologies Tasty Little Tales and Deadly by the Dozen. She’s been an editor with the ezine Electric Spec for six years and regularly speaks at fa...more
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