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Rachel has had a crush on her spin instructor Toni for months. One late night visit to the locker room steam cabin transforms her fantasies into hot, steaming reality.

Warning: This title contains graphic language and f/f sex.
(2500 word erotic short story)
ebook, 16 pages
Published June 21st 2012 by Smashwords (first published June 20th 2012)
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Kelly Maybedog
Since practically all I read is M/M right now, and I'm bi, I thought I should branch out a bit and try lesbian fiction again as I used to read f/f erotica a lot. So far I've got 0 for 2. I was in a 6 year relationship with a woman, why is this stuff so not turning me on? I think it's just bad, bad, bad. And I think part of it is that it's written too masculine. Just like M/M can be written too femmy, this story felt like it was a woman lusting after a man, or even a man lusting after a man. At o...more
Alex is The Romance Fox
A hot & more than steamy short story……..too short. It would have been great to see where the “shower” interlude would go next.

I am really keen to read a full novel by this author. She has such a fabulous writing style…..the story just flows so nicely.
Joanne Jones
Right this is a little short story and I mean short!!!
This is a nice little story about a lesbian who is crushing on her spin instructor but doesn't really know if the other chick is gay.
Good story but I wished it was longer because there could of been something there.
Hot little sex scene but again could of been better if it was longer, gave it 4 stars because...lets face it, I love lesbians and what is in this book was sexy...
RagingBookReviews
I really liked this authors character, Rachel. She's strong, sexy and shifts to commanding later in the story. I found myself stopping and coming back later because it didn't capture me at first. The author missed the orgasm scene completely. I had to read back to make sure the character actually orgasmed. And I thought that was supposed to be the high note of the story. I liked the book but found it a bit flat, not raising my adrenaline as some other books have in this genre.
Lyra Dimagiba
I don't get it. What's the goal of this story? To turn the readers on or to tell us a story? Because, if it's the first one, it really has no effect on me and if it's the latter, then, I don't get the plot. I think it's because it's too short.

But, if it became longer, or if it's an introduction to a longer story, I think I would've liked it.

So, there. :D
Rosezetta
Rachel has the hots for the fitness instructor. She's been oogling her for a while, one night after class she has her chance to act on her infatuation. (I should say this is a short story.) I kind of find the whole situation unbelievable. It wasn't really a hot scene, and it was kind of a cliff hanger.
M
Jun 25, 2012 M rated it 4 of 5 stars
Shelves: l-books
Short but oh so sweet! Really enjoyed the spin class setting (only male instructors whenever I have inflicted this on my unwilling and weak body). Left wanting desperately want to know what happened the following week. Feel forced to go out and buy more of her work.
Paisley Smith
Hot, free short I downloaded from Amazon. Harper Bliss whet my appetite for more. Every time I see Jillian Michaels on TV, I think about this little freebie. :)
Saritza
For a freebie read, it's not bad. Just a smutty moment in a locker room but it does give you a chance to see if you like the author's voice which is nice.
Trena
This was my 1st f/f story & I feel cheated. It was over before it started. I guess that's why it's a short story.
Shanese La'tia M
It would have gotten a better rating if it was longer.
Skye Burling-Briggs
HOTT!! Whew might need a shower myself after that lol!!
Maggie
???
There was no story? It was just a scene?
Lissa
Well, I got this (very) short story for free, so I can't really complain. It took me about four minutes to read, so I can't say that there was any character development at all. Basically, it was a porn without plot short, and I've read better ones than this.
Karine
While this is my first f/f erotic read, I just wasn't feeling it. A just felt something was missing. Maybe if it was a bit longer or there was more of an introduction to the characters I could have liked it a bit more.
Jim
A Penthouse letter length, lesbian erotica tale that could benefit with a bit of character development. Bliss can deftly handle the sex scenes but I would like to see the same craft applied to the seduction - which can generate more heat than the sex itself. I cannot tell if Rachel is 28 or 48. Some additional touches could have been added without greatly increasing the length of the piece. For example what if Toni and Jimmy both walked into the steam room? I'm not suggesting the need for a thre...more
Lance
The instructor in Rachel's spinning class is causing Rachel to get warm from more than just the exercise in this short story. Toni has a body Rachel is lusting after and when Toni stays in the shower area longer after Rachel supposedly is hurt, the sparks start to fly.

Because this is a very short story, there is very little character development or plot. That is the intention of this book. It is one that is meant to be read as a quick hot read. It does the job well! While it would have been bet...more
Mummy's Naughty Corner
Cover :- 4 stars
Sex/steaminess :- 5 stars
Story line :- 4 stars
Characters :- 4 stars
Overall rating :- 4.25 stars

Personal rating :- 4 stars

Book Pairing:- F/F
Did it give me a book hangover :- No
Is this a review book or personal read :- Personal Read

Why I chose this book?

I love Harper and I'm gradually working my way through all of her work.

What I liked about this book.

* A quick steamy read.
* Original story line.

What I didn't like about this book.

There was nothing wrong with this book as far as I co...more
Mark
Free from Amazon. 14 pages long in print. Not the best thing out there but fast, free and easy.
Mags Pereira
it was definitely short and to the point. it wasn't bad and for a very quick read I'd recommend it.
Yashiro Isana
My first F/F romantic novel and it was... Too short!
Caroline
Very short f/f read. No real chemistry.
Justin
this one was very short and very forgettable. there wasn't enough detail to the story to set it apart from the other stories I have read with the same premise and not enough details in the sex to really make it hot. also it was one of those stories that had no kind of seduction at all, one minute she has no idea that the woman she has been fantasizing about is into girls and the next they are having sex. I did give it one extra star because it was not full of typos and unreadable sentences like...more
beppy
synopsis:
rachel is attracted to her spin class teacher. one day, toni joins her in the sauna, and rachel gets dizzy when she leaves, so toni offers to take a shower at the same time. when rachel falls again, toni comes into her shower stall, and when someone else comes into the women's washroom, they close the door on the stall and get it on.

what i liked: nothing

what i didn't like: this read more like straight up porn than anything else; no character developement, no story; in fact, i could see...more
Amy
Short read but good.
Kathryn Parry
A hot little story with F/F action. I liked the build up in the story and would not mind reading more in this story. A little short because it could be made longer as there is a story there.
onwardandbookward
Rachel's lusting after her spin instructor, Toni, motivated her to work up quite a sweat in class. Afterwords, a visit to the locker room steam cabin and a feigned swoon transformed her fantasies into hot, steaming reality.
This story wasn't unforgettable, but it was fun. It's the first I've read by this author and I liked her writing style enough that I'd like to read a longer, more developed story by her.
Angel **Book Junkie**
Novella/Short Story Ratings
Book ♥ 1 Stars


Very short story with little to nothing in it. Rachel has a crush on Toni (her spin instructor) one night they meet in the locker room and do it. Okay end of story. Um the entire story was just that a quick romp in the locker room with one unexpected visitor. I did not like this book at all and would not recommend it to anyone.
hanifah presley
Short

this was short...took me about fifteen minutes to read but I enjoyed the story. it was quick but worth the read.
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Harper Bliss has travelled the world in search of sexual satisfaction. She now resides in a hot Asian country and dedicates her time to writing down the stories that have inspired and aroused her.
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