Writing the Breakout Novel
Take your fiction to the next level
Maybe you're a first-time novelist looking for practical guidance. Maybe you've already been published, but your latest effort is stuck in mid-list limbo. Whatever the case may be, author and literary agent Donald Maass can show you how to take your prose to the next level and write a breakout novel - one that rises out of obscurity and
Paperback, 264 pages
Published
August 15th 2002
by Writer's Digest Books
(first published 2001)
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WARNING: The plot formulas exposed and lauded in this book can be toxic. May lead to dizziness, fits of cynicism, and paroxysms. Do not take this product if you harbor unrealistic expectations about what sort of books the American book-buying public actually consumes. Do not read if you are offended by the notion that trite, adolescent writing and conventional morality may be the most sellable commodity in today's literary marketplace. Do not take if you are allergic to any of the following:
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These books are all the same: Trying to sell dreams between covers. It doesn't work. Here's what does work: Writing...writing a lot...writing every day two or three hours...having an original idea and working it harder than you've ever worked something before...believing in yourself and your idea...and accepting the fact that somtimes, no matter how much you want it, you won't get it.
There's no magic recipe for writing a great novel. Just do it. Make your characters interesting....more
There's no magic recipe for writing a great novel. Just do it. Make your characters interesting....more
I took a break from fiction to read this a second time - my first reading was almost ten years ago, and I was writing a different novel then. I felt it was time for a refresher, considering where I am in my current project (20k words into the first draft and still outlining).
Maas' title is corny. It's so corny that I might never have ordered it in the first place if I hadn't had a gift certificate for Writers' Digest books. It may sound like a hack's how-to book; but I assure you, i...more
Maas' title is corny. It's so corny that I might never have ordered it in the first place if I hadn't had a gift certificate for Writers' Digest books. It may sound like a hack's how-to book; but I assure you, i...more
Donald Maass’ WRITING THE BREAKOUT NOVEL is a compendium of advice honed from Maass’ 30 plus years as an agent. This book is designed to help the novelist at any stage of her career write a breakout novel, by which Maass means a novel that gets onto the bestseller lists.
Even though this is a book written by a successful agent, it doesn’t feel like it. It feels like a book written for writers by a writer. Organized into eleven chapters, nine of those chapters are solid advice on craft. ...more
Even though this is a book written by a successful agent, it doesn’t feel like it. It feels like a book written for writers by a writer. Organized into eleven chapters, nine of those chapters are solid advice on craft. ...more
I read based on Marissa Meyer's review, but was skeptical, as I am with most Books About Writing. But this is, without a doubt, one of the only writing books that gives actual *information* on writing a novel that is not obvious ("Novels are made of Scenes!"), condescending ("My advice to new writers? Don't do it.") or just so you-are-a-special-and-unique-snowflake that it turns me off. Donald Maass, a Publishing Veteran, does not think you are a special and unique snowflake....more
My professional development objective this year has been to improve my ability to teach our middle school creative writing class. While reading two YA novels on average per week has been my steady pace, I recently added resource and reference books to my book pile.
This week I read Donald Maass's Writing the Breakout Novel in an attempt to pull something for class. Read what the writer's read, right? I combed reading lists of various authors who I have met or established a co...more
This week I read Donald Maass's Writing the Breakout Novel in an attempt to pull something for class. Read what the writer's read, right? I combed reading lists of various authors who I have met or established a co...more
I have a library of books on how to write, each supposed to rocket me to the next level, morph me from mid-list writer to best-seller. Each of them provided some tidbit that is now integral to my writing style, something I remember and use every time I sit down at my computer and unleash my muse.
Well if I'm honest, some of them were a waste of money. Those, I tossed so they don't remind me how I wasted my hard-earned money.
But Writing the Breakout Novel is one I keep as a ref...more
Well if I'm honest, some of them were a waste of money. Those, I tossed so they don't remind me how I wasted my hard-earned money.
But Writing the Breakout Novel is one I keep as a ref...more
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I’m still a few pages from being done with Donald Maass’s Writing the Breakout Novel and WOW.
For YEARS, I have been looking for what I consider the “perfect” writing book. And every time I go to a bookstore, I find yet another book on writing (or some aspect) I find to be utterly indispensible. I must have them.
I’m not going to talk about how many writing books I have. Let’s just say… A few.
However, there are...more
I’m still a few pages from being done with Donald Maass’s Writing the Breakout Novel and WOW.
For YEARS, I have been looking for what I consider the “perfect” writing book. And every time I go to a bookstore, I find yet another book on writing (or some aspect) I find to be utterly indispensible. I must have them.
I’m not going to talk about how many writing books I have. Let’s just say… A few.
However, there are...more
This book, unlike a lot of books about writing out there, addresses how to write books that are sellable. As such, it has some good advice about how to start with a strong premise, how to make sure your book "says" what you wanted it to, and some other stuff. But, it has some advice that I took with a grain of salt. Most of this stemmed from the fact that my end goal isn't to sell books as much as it's to satisfy my inner muse. So, his suggestion to write books that would all go on...more
I have mixed feelings about this one. The classic advice we give to students writing papers is "say what you're going to say, say it, summarize what you just said." Maass isn't very good at the first part. He's not good at introducing his chapters--giving a clear idea of what the chapter's about, and what he's about to cover. So I'd start taking notes about one thing, and suddenly find we were on a different topic.
Here's what one amazon reviewer wrote re. Maass' fourth book...more
Here's what one amazon reviewer wrote re. Maass' fourth book...more
Don is my agent, so let's get that out of the way. However, I heard him speak, and I read this book before I ever signed on with him. One of his questions made me rewrite a book I thought was finished. I'd spent more than a year of my life on that book, and his questions made me spend another nine months at it. That book, The Way of Shadows, hit the New York Times bestseller list. (Low, but #29 is something a lot of writers would kill to hit.) And that's the genius of this book--not that it'll m...more
I finished reading "Writing the Breakout Novel" by Donald Maass today and got started on the exercises in the accompanying workbook. They really get you to think hard about developing depth in your characters. I had already done character sketches for my 6 main characters, but the first two exercises are getting me to dig even deeper, developing my two main characters further.
In one of the exercises, Maass has you think about four main characteristics of your protagonist, the...more
In one of the exercises, Maass has you think about four main characteristics of your protagonist, the...more
I put off reading this for a long time because I thought it would be about formulas. It wasn't. The ideas aren't exactly new--I have read almost all of them somewhere else. however, the book is very clearly written and got me motivated to make sure that there is tension on every page of my writing. It helped me think clearly about my own plot and what would appeal to readers. I also liked his perspective. Since he's an agent, it was from the perspective of being tired of having the same ol...more
I have just finshed the last page of Writing the Breakout Novel, and I have never been so excited to revise a manuscript as I am right now.
Like many writers and aspiring writers, I have dozens of books on the art and craft of writing. This one now takes pride of place in my collection. It is a big-picture take on writing, but it I found it valuable to step back for a moment and consider the plot elements I've used in the broader context of fiction that has captured the imagination o...more
Like many writers and aspiring writers, I have dozens of books on the art and craft of writing. This one now takes pride of place in my collection. It is a big-picture take on writing, but it I found it valuable to step back for a moment and consider the plot elements I've used in the broader context of fiction that has captured the imagination o...more
An excellent book for someone who already has the basics, and perhaps a few finished manuscripts, under their belt. No Plot No Problem : A Low-Stress High-Velocity Guide to Writing a Novel in 30 Days and Stephen King's On Writing are better books for someone just starting out, but I'd recommend this book for someone who has written a book or two or is in the early stages of getting published.
It reads quickly and is written in a style that held my interest where I skimmed in other boo...more
It reads quickly and is written in a style that held my interest where I skimmed in other boo...more
Donald Maass is brilliant, and in my wildest dreams he will be my agent. This book is unlike any other Writer's Digest book I've ever read in that it does not tell you how to write, but how to tell a story that will resonate with readers. Despite some of the reviews on here, it is NOT a "how to" book on how to write a formula novel. It is concise, practical advice from someone who has done his research and obviously cares very deeply for writers and for the art of storytelling. This bo...more
The only reason I didn't give this book five stars was because I sometimes had to dig for the advice on taking my fiction to the next level. In other words, how to apply these ideas to my story. Sometimes the right questions I needed to ask myself were hard to find; I had to dig a little, reread passages until I found what I was looking for. It's not always like this. In fact Maass does have some interesting exercises every writer should try in the 'Theme' chapter, but I really had to focus on t...more
Some of the information about publishing feels dated now (particularly with regard to e-books and cross-genre fiction), but overall, I think this book is a great resource for diagnosing (and fixing) boring premises, flat characters, weak plotlines, and low emotional tension in a manuscript. Maass shares some of the most common pitfalls and poses questions to ask yourself as you examine each of these elements in your own work.
Certainly there is no magic formula for producing a breako...more
Certainly there is no magic formula for producing a breako...more
I didn't enjoy this book much. It was offputting more than anything. When reading some of his advice I thought of numerous books which used these methods and found them all so cliched. I imagine a lot of books that have won the Booker prize etc, don't follow them at all. Also, I found the examples of writing he used rather tedious. They were all, I think, examples from Amercian authors and there are a lot of American novels I just don't enjoy. I think I'll try and find a 'how to' book by a...more
Another excellent book on writing novels--
This book resonated with me more than other books. His advice is neither too specific or too general to make it worthless (the former suffers from the risk of making your writing too formulaic and rigid while the latter from uselessness when it comes to application).
The more I read this type of book on novel-writing, the more I realize the importance of a good story. Maas speaks from 20+ years of experience as a literary agent and...more
This book resonated with me more than other books. His advice is neither too specific or too general to make it worthless (the former suffers from the risk of making your writing too formulaic and rigid while the latter from uselessness when it comes to application).
The more I read this type of book on novel-writing, the more I realize the importance of a good story. Maas speaks from 20+ years of experience as a literary agent and...more
Not a how-to book, but a valuable read nonetheless for current or aspiring writers.
Some great advice in here. Each chapter has a bulleted summary at the end that I found to be pretty worthless. The real value lies in the scattered questions posed to the reader, aka potential writer. It would have been better to collect these questions at the end of each chapter as a reminder that these are things you should be asking yourself as you're conceptualizing and writing your novel. Perhaps ...more
Some great advice in here. Each chapter has a bulleted summary at the end that I found to be pretty worthless. The real value lies in the scattered questions posed to the reader, aka potential writer. It would have been better to collect these questions at the end of each chapter as a reminder that these are things you should be asking yourself as you're conceptualizing and writing your novel. Perhaps ...more
This is probably 4.5 stars, not quite 5, but only because it's a tiny bit dated (in that it was published 10 years ago, which means there are things about publishing and writing that have changed). That said, it is otherwise a STELLAR read. I would highly, highly recommend this to anyone I know who is a writer of fiction. Heck, any writer could probably benefit from the concepts about pushing your writing beyond what you usually do, but the specifics are tailored toward novel writers wanting to ...more
The thing I enjoyed most about this book is the emphasis that Donald Maass places on writing. At a time when there are more guides to what you "have to do" in terms of marketing, web-site building, book signings, convention attending, he makes a compelling argument reminding that in the end, it's the writing that matters most. It is easy to get lost in the myriad of other things professionals will tell you to do, and I appreciated this reminder.
There are some very useful t...more
There are some very useful t...more
It’s been awhile since I read a writing guide, but as I make the final sprints on my first draft of Winter and prepare to dig into Scarlet revisions in the next couple of weeks, I figured it was time to start thinking quality-over-quantity again. I’d heard lots of good things about Writing the Breakout Novel and it sounded like it could be just the ticket for taking the next draft of Scarlet to that hypothetical next level.
I enjoyed reading this and can see why it’s received so much pr...more
I enjoyed reading this and can see why it’s received so much pr...more
Writing The Breakout Novel by Donald Maass
If you're ever looking for a literary agent, you should try to get someone that knows something about how to tell a great story.
Donald Maass (a literary agent) has written one of the finest books on the subject of storytelling. I was amazed to see so many practical techniques for writing in this book.
While simply getting published is the goal of many writers, you need to keep in mind that this is not the end of the story where it...more
If you're ever looking for a literary agent, you should try to get someone that knows something about how to tell a great story.
Donald Maass (a literary agent) has written one of the finest books on the subject of storytelling. I was amazed to see so many practical techniques for writing in this book.
While simply getting published is the goal of many writers, you need to keep in mind that this is not the end of the story where it...more
Chrissa
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Recommends it for:
novelists who have a work to apply the information to
Recommended to Chrissa by:
my writer's group
Despite myself, I enjoyed this book. Mr. Maas did an excellent job of describing what areas to review in your novel in order to increase it's chances of generating the word of mouth needed to find increased success. His emphasis on taking the time to build upon themes, characters, and plots already existent in a draft novel was a welcome change from what I had expected.
Most of the novels that were presented as examples I have not read, which leads me to believe that the author and ...more
Most of the novels that were presented as examples I have not read, which leads me to believe that the author and ...more
Well, I had a longer review planned and then GoodReads erased it in front of my eyes!
Anyway, Maas's book is one of two books on writing novels that I've found the most useful, although I have yet to absorb and put into practice what he has to say about writing a "breakout" novel. By breakout, he means a novel that sells well. He believes that readers determine breakout novels, not publishers or their PR budgets. He also believes that standout writing literally stands out, ...more
Anyway, Maas's book is one of two books on writing novels that I've found the most useful, although I have yet to absorb and put into practice what he has to say about writing a "breakout" novel. By breakout, he means a novel that sells well. He believes that readers determine breakout novels, not publishers or their PR budgets. He also believes that standout writing literally stands out, ...more
There's good advice here, although depressingly often it seems to boil down to, "If you want to write a breakout novel, write a breakout novel!". Yes, Mr Maass, that's helpful.
Other bits of advice are, however, much more useful than "just do it". For example, the advice on having sub-plots reflect the central conflict is obvious, once it's set out in words. But it's not something I could immediately have formulated myself.
Some of the examples Maass g...more
Other bits of advice are, however, much more useful than "just do it". For example, the advice on having sub-plots reflect the central conflict is obvious, once it's set out in words. But it's not something I could immediately have formulated myself.
Some of the examples Maass g...more
God, this book was irritating. Every time I read a "this is how you write" book by a non-writer I swear I'll never do it again. Then I end up doing it again because someone will swear "oh this one is different." Nope. Not different. Exactly the same, actually. 260 pages of selling (in this case he's selling the phrase "breakout novel") and about 1 or 2 useful ideas. Nothing new, mind you, just useful to be reminded of them. I suppose actually reading a good n...more
There are definitely some really good advices in this book, but I feel it is heavily biased towards the success of certain genre authors. I mean, if a new author writes the same way as all these authors quoted in the book, I doubt he/she would break out. Still, if you already have a brilliant story, follow the advices in the book to sharpen it. If you try to build a novel following the path painted for you, I suspect breaking out will remain a dream.
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