Writing the Breakout Novel

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Take your fiction to the next level!Maybe you're a first-time novelist looking for practical guidance. Maybe you've already been published, but your latest effort is stuck in mid-list limbo. Whatever the case may be, author and literary agent Donald Maass can show you how to take your prose to the next level and write a breakout novel - one that rises out of obscurity and...more
Paperback, 264 pages
Published August 15th 2002 by Writer's Digest Books (first published May 10th 2001)
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Patrick
WARNING: The plot formulas exposed and lauded in this book can be toxic. May lead to dizziness, fits of cynicism, and paroxysms. Do not take this product if you harbor unrealistic expectations about what sort of books the American book-buying public actually consumes. Do not read if you are offended by the notion that trite, adolescent writing and conventional morality may be the most sellable commodity in today's literary marketplace. Do not take if you are allergic to any of the following:

Mich...more
Jane Stewart
2 stars for generalities, not enough specifics. 4 stars for some good ideas that are probably found in most writing books.

AUTHOR IDEAS I LIKED:
“the past perfect tense and its evil facilitator, the word “had” will always rob a scene of its vital immediacy. Even though we need to learn about events that have already happened, (the author) keeps the action always in the present. It has more impact that way.” (p.143)

Maass encourages combining roles, “as in the lifelong friend who is also a doctor, o...more
Sean Little
Mar 25, 2008 Sean Little rated it 1 of 5 stars Recommends it for: NO ONE
These books are all the same: Trying to sell dreams between covers. It doesn't work. Here's what does work: Writing...writing a lot...writing every day two or three hours...having an original idea and working it harder than you've ever worked something before...believing in yourself and your idea...and accepting the fact that somtimes, no matter how much you want it, you won't get it.

There's no magic recipe for writing a great novel. Just do it. Make your characters interesting. Make the plot ti...more
J.L. Dobias
Writing the Breakout Novel is clearly a book that every aspiring writer should consider reading.

As far as to say that Donald Maass is a definitive source or this is a definitive work would be presumptuous.

There are quite a few definitive ideas in here that I believe every writer should know. And I believe it is presented with an entertaining and authoritative air.

I must admit that I made the mistake of reading The Fire in Fiction first and I don't believe that it is quite as informative as this...more
Meena Fairoak
As an aspiring novelist, a friend gave me this book thinking I would like it.

I didn't.

First the pros: On one hand, the book gives a few basic pointers about storytelling and the publishing industry. The book offers a few interesting extract from novels. And maybe . . . maybe, you might like this book if you were a complete newbie.

But . . .

On the other hand, the author claims to have found the "magic formula" to write a hit book. And this is where everything goes wrong. The author of this book is...more
J. Wootton
I took a break from fiction to read this a second time - my first reading was almost ten years ago, and I was writing a different novel then. I felt it was time for a refresher, considering where I am in my current project (20k words into the first draft and still outlining).

Maas' title is corny. It's so corny that I might never have ordered it in the first place if I hadn't had a gift certificate for Writers' Digest books. It may sound like a hack's how-to book; but I assure you, it's anything...more
Cynthia Haggard
Donald Maass’ WRITING THE BREAKOUT NOVEL is a compendium of advice honed from Maass’ 30 plus years as an agent. This book is designed to help the novelist at any stage of her career write a breakout novel, by which Maass means a novel that gets onto the bestseller lists.

Even though this is a book written by a successful agent, it doesn’t feel like it. It feels like a book written for writers by a writer. Organized into eleven chapters, nine of those chapters are solid advice on craft. And the ad...more
Amy  Eller Lewis
I read based on Marissa Meyer's review, but was skeptical, as I am with most Books About Writing. But this is, without a doubt, one of the only writing books that gives actual *information* on writing a novel that is not obvious ("Novels are made of Scenes!"), condescending ("My advice to new writers? Don't do it.") or just so you-are-a-special-and-unique-snowflake that it turns me off. Donald Maass, a Publishing Veteran, does not think you are a special and unique snowflake. But your book needs...more
Brian Kelley
My professional development objective this year has been to improve my ability to teach our middle school creative writing class. While reading two YA novels on average per week has been my steady pace, I recently added resource and reference books to my book pile.


This week I read Donald Maass's Writing the Breakout Novel in an attempt to pull something for class. Read what the writer's read, right? I combed reading lists of various authors who I have met or established a correspondence with thi...more
Jacqui
I have a library of books on how to write, each supposed to rocket me to the next level, morph me from mid-list writer to best-seller. Each of them provided some tidbit that is now integral to my writing style, something I remember and use every time I sit down at my computer and unleash my muse.

Well if I'm honest, some of them were a waste of money. Those, I tossed so they don't remind me how I wasted my hard-earned money.

But Writing the Breakout Novel is one I keep as a reference. Donald Maas'...more
Kari Wolfe
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I’m still a few pages from being done with Donald Maass’s Writing the Breakout Novel and WOW.

For YEARS, I have been looking for what I consider the “perfect” writing book. And every time I go to a bookstore, I find yet another book on writing (or some aspect) I find to be utterly indispensible. I must have them.

I’m not going to talk about how many writing books I have. Let’s just say… A few.

However, there are only a few books I would recommend to people. A l...more
Jo
Everyone who's anyone in writing circles raves about this book, so I started reading it with a little trepidation. (Yes, I know that doesn't make much sense.) I really wanted to like it, but didn't want to set my expectations so high that I was disappointed.

I didn't really need to worry. The book was fantastic. It's a book that is clearly not designed for a beginning writer so much as someone who wants to improve their writing in a current or subsequent novel. It covers a broad range of topics i...more
Beth Cato
I approached this book as someone who has written several novels and has an agent. As I prepare to work on more novels, I wanted more insight into the process so I can do a better, more efficient job. I am familiar with Donald Maass and the fame of his agency, and I had this book recommended to me by other writers I respect.

Did I get what I wanted out of this book? Yes, I think so.

Many writing books out there are for beginners--something I know well, as I bought many of them as I started out! Th...more
Architeuthis
This book, unlike a lot of books about writing out there, addresses how to write books that are sellable. As such, it has some good advice about how to start with a strong premise, how to make sure your book "says" what you wanted it to, and some other stuff. But, it has some advice that I took with a grain of salt. Most of this stemmed from the fact that my end goal isn't to sell books as much as it's to satisfy my inner muse. So, his suggestion to write books that would all go on the same shel...more
Leslie Lindsay
Okay--I didn't want to like this book. I had heard good things about it from other writers, but I really didn't want to believe that reading it would *change* anything for me. I was wrong.

WRITING THE BREAK-OUT NOVEL (Maass, 2001) is like having an agent sit down with you and spell it all out in a casual-let's-do-coffee approach. Sure, there's a little tough love going on, "dark protagonists are wearisome,"..."backstory is more important to you, the writer than it is the reader," but there are a...more
Londonmabel Mabel
I have mixed feelings about this one. The classic advice we give to students writing papers is "say what you're going to say, say it, summarize what you just said." Maass isn't very good at the first part. He's not good at introducing his chapters--giving a clear idea of what the chapter's about, and what he's about to cover. So I'd start taking notes about one thing, and suddenly find we were on a different topic.

Here's what one amazon reviewer wrote re. Maass' fourth book: "I found myself lost...more
Brent Weeks
Don is my agent, so let's get that out of the way. However, I heard him speak, and I read this book before I ever signed on with him. One of his questions made me rewrite a book I thought was finished. I'd spent more than a year of my life on that book, and his questions made me spend another nine months at it. That book, The Way of Shadows, hit the New York Times bestseller list. (Low, but #29 is something a lot of writers would kill to hit.) And that's the genius of this book--not that it'll m...more
Seth
Aside from the bullet points at the end of each chapter:
- Creating High Human Worth: "to put a principled person at risk is to raise the stakes in your story to a high degree" = higher stakes when person is honest, integrity, loyal, kind, brave, trusting, etc.
- Personal Stakes: "How can what is happening matter more?"
- Narrator: Pair narrator w/theme--"who is in a position to learn most from the events of the story? Who will be the most changed by them?"
- Not just good vs. evil--mixed emotions i...more
Alycia Morales
Jul 30, 2012 Alycia Morales rated it 5 of 5 stars Recommends it for: writers, authors, editors
Of all the writing books I've read, this has to be one of my top three favorites. I've never been so inspired to run to my keyboard and start typing out fictional words as I have by this book. Donald Maass writes in a voice I love to read. His passion and enthusiasm have me hooked from page one.

If you want to write the next bestseller or if you want to simply write out that story that's playing out in your head, I highly recommend Writing the Breakout Novel. Covering many of the aspects of a fi...more
Margit Sage
Jan 16, 2012 Margit Sage rated it 5 of 5 stars Recommends it for: Aspiring novelists
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I finished reading "Writing the Breakout Novel" by Donald Maass today and got started on the exercises in the accompanying workbook. They really get you to think hard about developing depth in your characters. I had already done character sketches for my 6 main characters, but the first two exercises are getting me to dig even deeper, developing my two main characters further.

In one of the exercises, Maass has you think about four main characteristics of your protagonist, then write down the opp...more
Donald
Writing the Breakout Novel will not set you up to write a breakout novel. Only you can do that. You have to read a lot of books, good ones and bad ones. You have to understand what it is that works when you read it and you have to know why something sucks when it does.

You also have to write and rewrite and rewrite again. Then you must put it away, take it back out some time later to read as if for the first time and rewrite it several more times.

Writing the Breakout Novel will make you think abo...more
Maria Ramos
I put off reading this for a long time because I thought it would be about formulas. It wasn't. The ideas aren't exactly new--I have read almost all of them somewhere else. however, the book is very clearly written and got me motivated to make sure that there is tension on every page of my writing. It helped me think clearly about my own plot and what would appeal to readers. I also liked his perspective. Since he's an agent, it was from the perspective of being tired of having the same old sh%$...more
Alisdair
I have just finshed the last page of Writing the Breakout Novel, and I have never been so excited to revise a manuscript as I am right now.

Like many writers and aspiring writers, I have dozens of books on the art and craft of writing. This one now takes pride of place in my collection. It is a big-picture take on writing, but it I found it valuable to step back for a moment and consider the plot elements I've used in the broader context of fiction that has captured the imagination of hundreds o...more
Jean Tatro
An excellent book for someone who already has the basics, and perhaps a few finished manuscripts, under their belt. No Plot No Problem : A Low-Stress High-Velocity Guide to Writing a Novel in 30 Days and Stephen King's On Writing are better books for someone just starting out, but I'd recommend this book for someone who has written a book or two or is in the early stages of getting published.

It reads quickly and is written in a style that held my interest where I skimmed in other books. The advi...more
Catherine Grant
Donald Maass is brilliant, and in my wildest dreams he will be my agent. This book is unlike any other Writer's Digest book I've ever read in that it does not tell you how to write, but how to tell a story that will resonate with readers. Despite some of the reviews on here, it is NOT a "how to" book on how to write a formula novel. It is concise, practical advice from someone who has done his research and obviously cares very deeply for writers and for the art of storytelling. This book should...more
Chrissy Wissler
The only reason I didn't give this book five stars was because I sometimes had to dig for the advice on taking my fiction to the next level. In other words, how to apply these ideas to my story. Sometimes the right questions I needed to ask myself were hard to find; I had to dig a little, reread passages until I found what I was looking for. It's not always like this. In fact Maass does have some interesting exercises every writer should try in the 'Theme' chapter, but I really had to focus on t...more
Siobhan Russell
At the moment I read a paragraph on page 16 I felt reservation at reading the book further. Anything else I read felt like I had read it before or if I hadn't then I had reservations about taking anything I read seriously after this one paragraph. It totally stole my attention away from anything good he might've had to say.

"As a New York agent coming up on twenty five years of experience in the fiction game, it can be alarming to meet certain novelists at writers conferences. I feel a bit like a...more
Suzanne
Some of the information about publishing feels dated now (particularly with regard to e-books and cross-genre fiction), but overall, I think this book is a great resource for diagnosing (and fixing) boring premises, flat characters, weak plotlines, and low emotional tension in a manuscript. Maass shares some of the most common pitfalls and poses questions to ask yourself as you examine each of these elements in your own work.

Certainly there is no magic formula for producing a breakout novel, bu...more
Venetia Green
Donald Maass's novel-writing advice boiled down into its essence equates to this: THINK BIG! With an addendum of BE PASSIONATE! This is not a how-to book for beginner novelists, Writing the Breakout Novel is aimed at more experienced authors who want to give their drafts more kick. (Or grab. Or that pick me up and don't put me down factor.) It it full of excellent advice and tips gleaned from the author's many years of trawling through the slush pile. However, I did get a little irritated at the...more
Bobbie Darbyshire
Excellent overview of key points.

I take issue with the negativity in some reviews.
Yes, much of Maass's guidance is culled from other writing guides - but why not? - he acknowledges his sources and there is no copyright on ideas.
To criticise his taste in best sellers or suggest he is instructing us in how to churn out worthless pulp fiction wilfully misses the point he makes often and clearly: that following his guidance will increase the impact and appeal of your novel in ANY genre, including...more
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