Arrow's Fall (Heralds of Valdemar, #3)

Arrow's Fall (Valdemar (Chronological))

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With Elspeth, the heir to the throne of Valdemar, come of marriageable age, Talia, the Queen's Own Herald returns to court to find Queen and heir beset by diplomatic intrigue as various forces vie for control of Elspeth's future.

But just as Talia is about to uncover the traitor behind all these intrigues, she is sent off on a mission to the neighboring kingdom, chosen by t

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Paperback, 319 pages
Published January 5th 1988 by DAW (first published 1988)
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Amadei
Crossposted to my blog...

This actually is about all three of the books, but I figure you've probably read the first two before getting to this one.

Once, just once, I’d like to read a fantasy novel wherein the young protagonist doesn’t make everything one hundred percent worse by not telling someone in authority that there is a problem.

Take Arrows of the Queen, the first book in Mercedes Lackey’s The Heralds of Valdemar series. The protagonist, a young girl named Talia, is Chosen by one of the co...more
Melissa
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Allie
And so the disappointing Arrows of the Queen trilogy ends. This book is actually the best of the three as far as being an actual fantasy novel - we have a real mage-war, lifebonding, near-death experiences, use of Gifts, and some political intrigue. Unfortunately, all this excitement literally happens in the final third of the book. The latter two-thirds are AGAIN plagued with the what-if-she-thinks, what-if-he-thinks of the second book. People, you are GROWN ADULTS, some of you with TELEPATHIC...more
Mynameisntcollins
Such a fast-paced book! I was surprised to find myself so engrossed, because when I started, it had been full daylight, and when I finished, it had started to grow dark with the setting of the sun. My roommates were especially surprised to see that I had not moved in all that time. But I couldn't help it, as I usually can't when reading a good book. One page just seems to follow another, and before I know it, I'm finished.

Talia was everywhere in this novel. She had all of her duties as the Quee...more
Kristina
I loved this last installment to the Heralds of Valdemar series. That’s pretty much all I have to say – it’s a tie for my favorite book out of all three (the tie being with the first).

I think Mercedes Lackey read my previous reviews, because the pacing went up by a considerable amount. There were only a few places in the text where the plot lagged, and even when it did, I could see why it was written that way. Elspeth grew a lot this novel, I think, despite the meager amount that was written abo...more
Jessica
***some spoilers ahead!***


I never thought this series took off. It all felt like a big build up to nothing. The entire series, even this finale, felt like the main character encountered a problem then solved it, then encounters a new one, and solves it. There's no cohesion, no building up. In this book, the main bad guy is defeated rather handily, without much fan fair, actually. The secondary bad guy who might have held some depth besides just being evil, turns out to just be evil after all, an...more
Liza
Growing up my mom was always reading several books at once, usually biographies / autobiographies or other things that I deemed "serious" reading along with those cheap grocery-store checkout-aisle romance novels with the red covers. She called those her "candy novels"- little substance, quick and enjoyable reads, but they don't quite fill you up intellectually.
No offense intended, but Mercedes Lackey provides my "candy novels". The writing, plot line, character development and other literary el...more
Kelsey Dean


This is an interesting world, and I like the story. As far as plot goes, this one was definitely the most solid of the three books. However, there are a few things that are just so silly to me I can't take it seriously...like this thing for white leather and white velvet...have you ever seen someone dressed in white leather? And I have never even seen white velvet. That's just asking to be teased. Costumes aside, the way some characters switch to some other dialect in "intimate" moments as make...more
Gail
The last part of Talia’s story. She finally gets back to Haven to serve as Queen’s Own Herald, and try to work her love life out. She’s lifebonded to the homeliest of the Heralds, but he resists because he can’t believe she loves him, especially since she just spent a year with the handsomest Herald. There’s trouble over the border with Hardorn—the prince has sent a marriage proposal for Elspeth, heir to the throne—but the queen is wary because of her own history. She married a younger son of an...more
Rebecca
This, along with Arrows of the Queen, is one of those books that I go back to whenever I have a gap in my reading and an afternoon or so to fill, not wanting to dig into anything more substantial. It's a satisfying end to the trilogy, while still leaving the way for the series that she wrote about Valdemar after that. Elspeth's story in the Winds and Storm series in particular are teed up nicely. Make no mistake about it being a brutal book, though, with a whole section of rape and torture, alth...more
Anne Hromalik
Hm hm hm. What to think.

Arrow's Fall, third book in The Queen's Own of Valdemar. Book 3 fares better than Book 2 I thought; there was generally less dragging angst, lots more character interaction, and somewhat more sense made of Talia's Empath Gift.

I think ultimately, I find the rhythm of Lackey's writing odd. It seems like she presents plot events only as far as they develop character, and then they are swept away from view-- and though I am a big believer in character-driven stories, I walked...more
Bibliotropic
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With Elspeth, the heir to the throne of Valdemar, come of marriageable age, Talia, the Queen's Own Herald returns to court to find Queen and heir beset by diplomatic intrigue as various forces vie for control of Elspeth's future. But just as Talia is about to uncover the traitor behind all these intrigues, she is sent on a mission to the neighboring kingdom, chosen by the Queen to investigate the worth of a marriage proposal from Prince Ancar. And to her horror, Talia soon discovers there is far

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Jordan
The second book dragged a little, but this one made up for it. Everything that was kind of just floating around in the background for the first two books finally all came together. The lifebond stuff kind of made me roll my eyes, but I'm reading a book about magical white horses that telepathically bond to super special humans, so I guess I can deal with it. Despite the magical horses and such I really enjoyed the trilogy.

Two semi-minor dislikes. First, there's a period in the book where Talia m...more
Kathleen
This book concludes the trilogy centered on Talia very nicely with an epic battle and a wedding. The evil prince of the foreign kingdom manages to be frightening by employing magicians although the torture with his childhood nanny borders on comically evil. The characterization of Talia's love interest Dirk falters a little in this book as well, when their romance is left mostly to the magical life bond between the pair. I really preferred their love stemming from their shared snarkitude in Arro...more
emily
this whole trilogy underwhelmed me. the writing wasn't fantastic, it was a little simplistic both in plot and in character development. there was a lot of telling, not a lot of showing; there was barely a time when i felt any emotional connection to any of the characters. that said, the plot wasn't awful, the world creation was decent, and i think if the different plot threads had all been woven together instead of brought up and dealt with episodically the entire trilogy would have been much mo...more
Chuck
Ends the trilogy . . .Talia is sent with close friend Kris to represent the queen and a possible alliance between Velddemar and the neighboring kingdom. Although things seem all right in the kingdom at first, something is not quite right, and the two hear startling information about the king's son. While there, the king has his father killed, trying to pass the blame on Talia, Kris, and Valdemar. Talia escapes, barely, and tries to warn the queen and keep her from falling into a trap.

Although th...more
Victoria
Mercedes Lackey’s Valdemar series provides one of the cornerstones of my reading history. After discovering her when quite young, I still follow new additions to the series - nearly twenty years later! I read and re-read these books over and over again throughout my youth, but I haven't re-read this series in its entirety in a long time - and never as an adult. There are some new books added to the series since the last time I read them, so this re-reading project is pretty exciting for me since...more
Maria
Jun 21, 2012 Maria rated it 3 of 5 stars
Recommended to Maria by: Wyatt
Finally, finally, Orthallen gets his just reward. He was so sneaky, I wasn't sure it would ever happen. I was disappointed in Kris' fate, although I have to admit I have been disappointed in his character since book two. There was more about him than Dirk and I would have preferred the opposite, particularly since I didn't much like Kris in the first place. Also, the book wandered on a bit long after the climax, which I could have done without. The Exile books are still my favorites so far.
Jeremy Preacher
This is the strongest book in the trilogy, I think - the stakes are raised significantly, and there is some resolution to the major plot threads. The writing is again better than before. It's still flawed, though. The not-talking-to-each-other problem takes up the first third of the book, and is tedious in the extreme. The rape and torture in the middle third feels a bit... not gratuitous, exactly, but cheap, like Lackey couldn't think of a non-obvious way to heighten the tension. And the pacing...more
Widdershins
A fairly disappointing ending to a lackluster series. Very uneven depth to both the story and the characters - overdeveloped in some areas and bare bones in others. After having run across Mercedes Lackey's name so often over the years I am pretty disappointed in what I've read so far. I'll try one more book in the hope that this, which was her first outing, I think, is the weakest of her series. Not overly optimistic, though.
Erika
Probably my favourite of the trilogy. Emotional but well-written. Ties up most of the loose ends nicely. I always forget about the middle part though, probably because I mix it up with when they visit Hardorn in the later books. The ending is super sweet, but I don't mind because by that time Lackey has me in her thrall.

It's cute to come back to this original trilogy after reading all the other novels and see where she started from and how things don't quite mesh, but you ignore it anyway for th...more
Anna
To be fair, I felt like the storyline of this third book held together better than earlier books in the trilogy. However, I just didn't like it. The romantic tension just felt so forced --- if everyone had just talked to their friends a tiny bit, all of the angst would have all been avoided. And terrible events that occur seem to have less impact on the main character than I think they really would have.
James
Be careful what you wish for. My main criticism of the previous book in this series was that it appeared to almost completely drop the driving plot thread from the first book. Well this book brings it back, in the form of two cartoon-ish villains and their over-the-top conspiracies that Talia must now protect her country from. Overall a disappointing conclusion to an otherwise enjoyable trilogy.
Simeonberesford
it comes together in this the third book of a trilogy Lackey's plot often seems rather linear which is what makes me think of them as suitable for young adults.. But I cant think of one that was marketed as such in this case I suspect it is because the conservative American market would find the implied message that its okay to have sex with people that you just think of as friends as dangerous.
Megan
Wonderful story, poor editing. I love her stories, but her characters occasionally get on my nerves, because the editing leaves a little something to be desired, and eventually all of the characters' emotional issues drive me nuts...but I can't stop reading her stories!! I love the morals, the acceptance of shay'a'chern, the Valdemar stories, and the rewritten classic fairy tales.
Lisa (Harmonybites)
Apr 22, 2010 Lisa (Harmonybites) rated it 5 of 5 stars Recommends it for: Fantasy Fans
This is the conclusion to Arrows of the Queen and Arrows Flight, which should be read first. I think this is a satisfying resolution to all the threads established in the first books. I like how Talia grew through all three novels and Lackey certainly made me feel for her characters. Well, the ones on the "good" side. This author's and series greatest flaw is arguably that she creates a very black and white world, with villains in the twirl-the-mustache mold, and this is no exception. Combined w...more
Kris
I wasn't drawn into this world, this trilogy, sad to say. I liked some of her other worlds and stories so much better. It wasn't bad, per say, but near the end of the book when all of this action started to take place I just... couldn't find myself really caring all that much. Maybe I should just stick with her Dragon Jouster books which I dearly love...
Sherry
This was much better than the second...but maybe not as good as the first. There's a visit to another country, a war averted, but also fought, and Elsbeth grows into quite the character in this book. I liked it, but it left me wanting to read more from the Valdemar books. The trilogy could stand alone, but doesn't do so very well.
Kirsten
When Talia and Kris are sent as advance emissaries to the court of Hardorn, few suspect anything amiss. Things soon go awry, when the young prince seizes power is a murderous way, and Talia is trapped with no way to warn her friends or the queen that they are walking into a trap. A very emotional book, but it has a lovely ending!
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Mercedes entered this world on June 24, 1950, in Chicago, had a normal childhood and graduated from Purdue University in 1972. During the late 70's she worked as an artist's model and then went into the computer programming field, ending up with American Airlines in Tulsa, Oklahoma. In addition to her fantasy writing, she has written lyrics for and recorded nearly fifty songs for Firebird Arts &...more
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