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False Start
by
Janey Chapel (Goodreads Author)
It's Tucker Locke's ten-year college reunion, and he doesn't have much to show for himself. Sure, he's a successful lawyer with a nice car and a nice apartment, but his life is empty, and Tucker knows why. A decade ago, not ready to come out of the closet, he left Whit Jamison behind. Tucker's spent ten years pretending to be straight-ten years thinking about his mistakes....more
ebook, 72 pages
Published
April 25th 2012
by Dreamspinner Press
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Everyone has to find their own way in life in their own time. Only when we are ready can we truly see, accept, and be ourselves. Be yourself sounds so easy, but as we all know, it’s not that simple. Coming out and living an openly gay life in a small, conservative, southern town is pretty fucking far from easy or simple. Tucker Locke and Whit Jamison meet and fall for each other in college, but their relationship will change, touch, and influence their whole lives.
I love when a character in fil...more
3.5 Stars!
I am absolutely loving all of these cute and sexy stories I've been reading! This little tale by Janey Chapel is no different.
At the beginning of his senior year in a small town college, Tucker Locke met Whit Jamison. Tucker was the small time track star and Whit was the slightly gawky freshman with the deep voice. What commences is a secret relationship between Whit and Tucker. They get hot and heavy on back roads, in abandoned barns and in dark corners of their little town. While Wh...more
I am absolutely loving all of these cute and sexy stories I've been reading! This little tale by Janey Chapel is no different.
At the beginning of his senior year in a small town college, Tucker Locke met Whit Jamison. Tucker was the small time track star and Whit was the slightly gawky freshman with the deep voice. What commences is a secret relationship between Whit and Tucker. They get hot and heavy on back roads, in abandoned barns and in dark corners of their little town. While Wh...more
I don't know if it's the mood that I am in, or the time of night, or because I needed a pick me up. All I know is that I loved this to pieces. From the beginning, it had me smiling like crazy. Half way through, with Tucker's reunion beer with Whit...yeah, it squeezed on my heart a bit. I couldn't put it down once I started and will definitely be on my re-read list. What a feel good story that leaves you wishing for more. I could read a dozen stories just about these two. Hint. Hint. 4.5/5 Stars
Just for fun (6-word plot): Reunited lovers work for second chance.
I'm a huge fan of this author, and reading this story reminded me of why: perfect, clear, vivid prose that you just sink into as if watching a movie, and sex scenes that are hot and emotionally wrenching.
The story involves two men in their late twenties who were secret lovers ten years ago when attending a small Southern college. Tucker was in the closet, and Whit was openly gay with the full support of his quirky parents. When T...more
I'm a huge fan of this author, and reading this story reminded me of why: perfect, clear, vivid prose that you just sink into as if watching a movie, and sex scenes that are hot and emotionally wrenching.
The story involves two men in their late twenties who were secret lovers ten years ago when attending a small Southern college. Tucker was in the closet, and Whit was openly gay with the full support of his quirky parents. When T...more
A charming short story that was refreshing and heartfelt despite its somewhat formulaic premise.
The story alternates between the first person POVs of the two main characters who have very distinct voices. On one hand there is Tucker Locke, former track athlete cum highly strung, extremely angsty, deeply closeted & sexually repressed individual who finally decides to take the bull by the horns and confront his inner demons by attending his tenth college reunion with a hope of reconciling wit...more
The story alternates between the first person POVs of the two main characters who have very distinct voices. On one hand there is Tucker Locke, former track athlete cum highly strung, extremely angsty, deeply closeted & sexually repressed individual who finally decides to take the bull by the horns and confront his inner demons by attending his tenth college reunion with a hope of reconciling wit...more
This was too short to earn more than 3 stars, but for what it was, it was well done. I am tired of the "but I don't want to be gay" angst but this one was sparse enough, and short enough, that it wasn't overdone or heavy handed. While it was also too short for the characters to be very well developed, I thought the emotions between them were presented well. This was a short sweet story that was more about the feelings it evoked than about any real plot or action. That's fine with me, that's the...more
4.5
This is a very good, very enjoyable story! Yes, it's a pretty common blurb and it's been told countless times before. But Janey Chapel's way of writing somehow resonates with me; it's not so much about the stories, it's about the characters and their honesty about their own failures and flaws, it's how she puts experiences into words that spell out simple but sage truths. (As an example, my favourite line here was: (view spoiler)...more
This is a very good, very enjoyable story! Yes, it's a pretty common blurb and it's been told countless times before. But Janey Chapel's way of writing somehow resonates with me; it's not so much about the stories, it's about the characters and their honesty about their own failures and flaws, it's how she puts experiences into words that spell out simple but sage truths. (As an example, my favourite line here was: (view spoiler)...more
False Start is a novella about second chances after love is lost. Written in the author’s usual clear, vivid, elegant prose, it effortlessly distinguishes between the two first-person viewpoints of an openly gay man Whit and a closeted gay man Tucker. It also manages to make Tucker the more relatable and likable character, which couldn’t have been easy.
My one regret is that the story didn’t set up more obstacles for Tucker to overcome to win back Whit. I found it improbable that a desirable guy...more
My one regret is that the story didn’t set up more obstacles for Tucker to overcome to win back Whit. I found it improbable that a desirable guy...more
I’m a fan of Chapel’s work and with this offering I realize I like her writing more than I like the actual plot. The story here is predictable though well told, and almost boring with its mundane and expected actions. There’s nothing unique or different to the story but Chapel’s clean, inviting prose makes it enjoyable to read anyway. She has a way of writing that invokes clear, impressionable imagery while being smoking hot every single time. It wasn’t until I hit the end of the novella that I...more
Author Janey Chapel writes a beautiful story of second chance in an economy of meaningful words and detail.
Whit Jamison and Tucker Locke grow up in a small town. The Downtown is all of 4 blocks in length. A town small enough to grasp the residents living there either know each other or know of each other through talk and gossip. Although the author doesn’t hit the readers over the head, we become aware by implication that Tucker’s family probably is prominent members of the community. Tucker is...more
Whit Jamison and Tucker Locke grow up in a small town. The Downtown is all of 4 blocks in length. A town small enough to grasp the residents living there either know each other or know of each other through talk and gossip. Although the author doesn’t hit the readers over the head, we become aware by implication that Tucker’s family probably is prominent members of the community. Tucker is...more
I liked this story very much. I enjoyed the fact that Tucker was so torn over his actions and his feelings for Whit. I loved how Whit was so 'confident' according to Tucker but really admitted is was because of Tucker. But what I liked most about it is that Whit made Tucker realize what he was missing. Even if it did take a decade.
While I enjoyed the story, I wasn't fond of the writing style. It's told in alternating first person POV's and while I liked that we got to experience things from both...more
While I enjoyed the story, I wasn't fond of the writing style. It's told in alternating first person POV's and while I liked that we got to experience things from both...more
Loved this short story. Wish it was much longer and REALLY hope we can read about Tucker and Whit again.
I was like in a trance reading this story. Just COULD NOT STOP. It's told in the 1st person POV and It alternates between Tucker and Whit who went to the same small college in Virginia. Whit was a freshman and out, Tucker a Senior who was deeply in the closet. Things ended, because Tucker could not admit who he was.
10 years later he's a lawyer in DC, but goes home for high school reunion. He s...more
I was like in a trance reading this story. Just COULD NOT STOP. It's told in the 1st person POV and It alternates between Tucker and Whit who went to the same small college in Virginia. Whit was a freshman and out, Tucker a Senior who was deeply in the closet. Things ended, because Tucker could not admit who he was.
10 years later he's a lawyer in DC, but goes home for high school reunion. He s...more
3.5 stars. I really enjoyed this shorter story about Tuck and Whit. While they went to the same high school in the same small town, their paths never really cross until they are senior and freshman in college respectively. While there, they begin an illicit affair. Whit does not hide his sexuality, hence the need for secrecy. At the end of his senior year, Tuck ignores Whit and doesn't stand up for him at all when his friends get on him at a movie theater. After graduation, he leaves town and do...more
2.5 stars
This book was consistent with what was promised in the blurb. Tucker and Whit were "together" in college 10 years ago, and reunite when Tucker comes back to town for his 10 year reunion.
I chose to read this because I loved the concept. I was a little disappointed with how it was handled. It all seemed too simplistic. Problems were solved almost magically and forgiveness was instantaneous and unhesitating.
(view spoiler)...more
This book was consistent with what was promised in the blurb. Tucker and Whit were "together" in college 10 years ago, and reunite when Tucker comes back to town for his 10 year reunion.
I chose to read this because I loved the concept. I was a little disappointed with how it was handled. It all seemed too simplistic. Problems were solved almost magically and forgiveness was instantaneous and unhesitating.
(view spoiler)...more
This is a nice book, but I wasn't wowed at all. I felt there's nothing new here. The story is the standard " one part of the couple is in the closet and asks for a second chance" story. The only different thing is the alternate narrative between the two MCs, but it becomes annoying to me since they're repetitive.
It's not bad, though. Although it's just convenient that when Tucker returned home, Whit was single and available. (view spoiler)...more
It's not bad, though. Although it's just convenient that when Tucker returned home, Whit was single and available. (view spoiler)...more
4.5 stars
What a wonderful story about old lovers who get a second chance.
Tucker makes the decision to go back to his small hometown for his 10 year college reunion. The past ten years have been good to him. He's a successful attorney and is doing quite well for himself. He has managed to avoid going home before now because he wasn't ready to face who he really is and the only person he's ever loved, Whit... who he ran from 10 years earlier. Tucker has pretended to be straight his entire life and...more
What a wonderful story about old lovers who get a second chance.
Tucker makes the decision to go back to his small hometown for his 10 year college reunion. The past ten years have been good to him. He's a successful attorney and is doing quite well for himself. He has managed to avoid going home before now because he wasn't ready to face who he really is and the only person he's ever loved, Whit... who he ran from 10 years earlier. Tucker has pretended to be straight his entire life and...more
Such a lovely story it made me sad that it had to end. Chapel has a very unique way writing emotions, she truly made my skin shiver with her wonderful descriptions. I felt like I could stretch my hand and literally touch the character’s feelings, their agony, fear, anticipation and their beautiful lovemaking.
This is the story of Tucker and Whit.
Whit is charming, with humor and guts. I totally loved him. The kind of character that knows who he is and is proud of it. And if you don’t like it too...more
This is the story of Tucker and Whit.
Whit is charming, with humor and guts. I totally loved him. The kind of character that knows who he is and is proud of it. And if you don’t like it too...more
4.5 stars
I really didn't know what to expect from this read. This is a new author to me and added to that: it's a short story with a very familiar trope: two young men with an immediate attraction, one is out the other isn't, it doesn't work out for obvious reasons, they part, they get back together years later...
How wondrous to be so engaged right from the start, to be sucked in so effortlessly. What sets this read apart is the sweet writing. Ms. Chapel seduces with her two distinctive voices...more
I really didn't know what to expect from this read. This is a new author to me and added to that: it's a short story with a very familiar trope: two young men with an immediate attraction, one is out the other isn't, it doesn't work out for obvious reasons, they part, they get back together years later...
How wondrous to be so engaged right from the start, to be sucked in so effortlessly. What sets this read apart is the sweet writing. Ms. Chapel seduces with her two distinctive voices...more
4.5 stars, rounded up because the writing was so effortlessly good. (Seriously! Most of it is written in present tense, and I didn't even notice until almost the end.) Janey Chapel can do more in a novella than many authors do in a full-length novel. Having said that, if she writes one in the future, I'll be first in line to read it.
Something about this story hit me right in the gut. The descriptions of how important Whit was to Tucker, the movie theater scene... I really love when stories make...more
Something about this story hit me right in the gut. The descriptions of how important Whit was to Tucker, the movie theater scene... I really love when stories make...more
Read this book!! I loved everything about this one and am adding it to my "favorites" shelf. The first person POV switches back and forth between the two main characters, so we get to experience their thoughts and emotions as they react to seeing one another again after all these years. The tension builds so beautifully, when they finally come together it is extremely satisfying. Now THAT is how you write a love scene!
I'm definitely going to check out more of this author's work.
I'm definitely going to check out more of this author's work.
Apr 30, 2012
Heather C
rated it
5 of 5 stars
Recommended to Heather C by:
Cole Riann
Shelves:
ebook,
pdoc,
read-2012,
short-stories,
gfy-ofy,
contemporary-romance,
m-m,
sex-after-40-percent
I adore this story! Of course I'm always a sucker for a sweet gfy/ofy. I think what made this story so special for me was the alternating first person POVs. I loved getting the voice of both MCs; the author did a great job portraying the different personalities and insecurities of both Whit and Tucker.
4.5 Stars I would have loved for it to be much longer with much more angst.
I ♥ Whit!...more
4.5 Stars I would have loved for it to be much longer with much more angst.
I ♥ Whit!...more
I liked it a lot, but I think I would have liked it even more as a novel. The book covers SO MUCH ground, and the author does a good job of keeping things interesting, but she's still 'telling' parts that I really would have liked to see 'shown' in a lot more detail.
But I still ended up caring about both characters and really wanting them to be happy, and I believed that they would be, so... job well done!
But I still ended up caring about both characters and really wanting them to be happy, and I believed that they would be, so... job well done!
I picked up this book because the author has the same name as my grandmother, and her MC has the same name as my grandfather. Weird, huh? Anyway, I'd never heard of her before, but I am SO glad I did. I thought this short story was wonderful. I loved how rich the characters were and how real everything between them felt.
Now I'm off to read her entire backlist!
Now I'm off to read her entire backlist!
Sep 23, 2012
Mandy*reads obsessively*
rated it
3 of 5 stars
Recommended to Mandy*reads obsessively* by:
Vio
Shelves:
ebook-owned,
m-m,
short,
cry-me-a-river,
feel-good-read,
gfy-ofy,
hurt-comfort-disability,
jerk-mc,
sweet,
way-too-short
Tuck a very closeted senior at college falls for Whit an out and proud freshman, they part on less than good terms after an 8 month secret relationship.
The story is told from alternating POV's which makes it interesting and I really liked Whit's voice.
They have both harbored feelings for each other in the intermittent 10years and when they finally meet again, Tuck is ready to be who he wants and needs to be.
(view spoiler)...more
The story is told from alternating POV's which makes it interesting and I really liked Whit's voice.
They have both harbored feelings for each other in the intermittent 10years and when they finally meet again, Tuck is ready to be who he wants and needs to be.
(view spoiler)...more
Because:
- Flawed characters (both MC)
- Avoided clichés like: jock-taller-bigger-more-confident & geek-shorter-smarter-weaker-bottom.
- The theme (college break-up + mature make-up) is cleverly explored
- Two MCs POVs.
- The book is short but it focuses solely on the two heroes relationships, so their story seems longer than it is.
- The sex is hot, intense.
- Flawed characters (both MC)
- Avoided clichés like: jock-taller-bigger-more-confident & geek-shorter-smarter-weaker-bottom.
- The theme (college break-up + mature make-up) is cleverly explored
- Two MCs POVs.
- The book is short but it focuses solely on the two heroes relationships, so their story seems longer than it is.
- The sex is hot, intense.
Maritime Menの作者さんだったんですねえ。あれ好きです。
カミングアウトできない、クローゼットに深く入った男と、カミングアウトして生きることを選んだ男。その出会いと、10年後の再会。
というわけであまり凝った筋立てではありませんが、どっちのキャラクターにも好感が持ててすんなりと最後まで読めました。二人の関係だけに焦点が当たっているので読みやすい一方、もう少し周囲との軋轢なんかも入ってきたらもっとドラマティックだったとも思う。
カミングアウトできない、クローゼットに深く入った男と、カミングアウトして生きることを選んだ男。その出会いと、10年後の再会。
というわけであまり凝った筋立てではありませんが、どっちのキャラクターにも好感が持ててすんなりと最後まで読めました。二人の関係だけに焦点が当たっているので読みやすい一方、もう少し周囲との軋轢なんかも入ってきたらもっとドラマティックだったとも思う。
I really, really enjoyed this story that flows so well due to the simple, easy and forthright 2-person narration. I've always been a big fan of Janey Chapel. It seems like every time I pick up a story of hers, I'm always surprised again by how much I love her style of writing.
These two characters were many, many things, from severely messed up to hilarious at times. More than anything, though, this story was just such a simple and easy read front to back.
What a lovely story!
These two characters were many, many things, from severely messed up to hilarious at times. More than anything, though, this story was just such a simple and easy read front to back.
What a lovely story!
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Janey Chapel found a paperback romance in her grandmother's bookcase at the age of eleven, inhaled it in one sitting, and then proceeded to devour thousands of romances in a variety of genres over the course of several decades. Eventually, her husband said, "Stop reading! Start writing!" After a lifetime in the South, Janey now lives in the Northeast with her husband and daughter, where she volunt...more
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Aug 22, 2012 11:55am
Thanks, Ladies! I just love Chapel’s style. It fits with me somehow. I still dream about her other guys—Eli &...more
Aug 22, 2012 02:51pm