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Jun 25, 2012
This has the makings of an interesting story. Sadly as it stands now its seems more like an idea the author had rather than a short story.
I don't expect great detail in shorts like this, but I do like some kind of reason. The author does say Please note: I hope people will realize that this little story is supposed to be humorous and not serious. Sadly it failed in that aspect for me too.
I don't expect great detail in shorts like this, but I do like some kind of reason. The author does say Please note: I hope people will realize that this little story is supposed to be humorous and not serious. Sadly it failed in that aspect for me too.
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Oct 06, 2012
3.5 stars
Short and sweet. I can see where it might bug some or be a little outside of their comfort zones but I liked it. Sure, there is not much to it and you get very little in regards to character and story development but it's perfect for what it is... a short story.
Short and sweet. I can see where it might bug some or be a little outside of their comfort zones but I liked it. Sure, there is not much to it and you get very little in regards to character and story development but it's perfect for what it is... a short story.
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Mar 28, 2013
I'm not sure what I am suppose to make of a foster dad suddenly getting together with his foster son. Nor do I imagine (if my maths is correct) that such a young guy would even get a foster son. I tried something out of my comfort zone and it didn't work.
Jun 25, 2012
Short and sweet but I would've loved it to have been a bit long or at least long enough to get some more character development from Patrick and Matt. I have to say, they do make a cute couple though. (",)
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Jan 16, 2012
I hope people will realize that this little story is supposed to be humorous and not something serious. Of course, my humor isn't to everyone's liking and I have a feeling the subject might offend some people, but heck, I like this story - even if it's my own ;)
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Sep 16, 2012
Engaging and cute and a bit funny, but I'd like to see a bit more development of both characters. When there are only two, there aren't a lot of excuses to not.
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Apr 06, 2013
I thought it was a really nice story. I know a lot of people cant get over the foster relation thingy, but I think its a sweet story regardless.
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Feb 20, 2012
Interesting free short story. I liked the writing style and would like to read some other stories from this author - which are in my TRB pile!
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Jul 24, 2012
How did you manage to make me laugh and cry in so few words? I loved Patrick! Hooray for hot, happy endings! :-)
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Mar 24, 2012
For such a short story and I mean very, very short, it was quite lovely indeed.
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Jan 17, 2012
Did not expect to like this short story but....I think I found a new kink!
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Mar 25, 2012
Cute and funny. Short though. I wish it were longer with a bit of backround.
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Jan 19, 2012
This is a very good short. I would love to see a more indepth sequel, really dig into their life and see how things ultimately work out.
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Feb 28, 2012
I'm changing this from 4 stars to 5. The story is just too funny and I love the writing style. Wish it was longer.
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