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Storms and Stars
by
Neena Jaydon (Goodreads Author)
It's lonely at the top for Commander Villam Elding, who has always ranked loyalty to the empire and career ambition over romance. He finds it easier to love ideas than people; without military life, he's lost. Even so, it's his close relationship with Kardiell, a popular officer, that tears him from his life. Those with competing ambitions try to take Villam hostage to lev...more
ebook, 1st Edition, 247 pages
Published
January 4th 2012
by Torquere Press
(first published January 3rd 2012)
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Enough stars in space so where can I get one to add a sixth star here?
Admittedly I had trouble getting into the story with all the gadgets,gizmos and many characters introduced but it turned out to be my first favorite book in 2012.
A SciFi novel of all things - this is a contradiction if there ever was one...so not my prefered genre...
Perhaps I will write a bit more about the story and the two men I fell in love with later,but for now I must come back from space and recover from the shock first....more
Admittedly I had trouble getting into the story with all the gadgets,gizmos and many characters introduced but it turned out to be my first favorite book in 2012.
A SciFi novel of all things - this is a contradiction if there ever was one...so not my prefered genre...
Perhaps I will write a bit more about the story and the two men I fell in love with later,but for now I must come back from space and recover from the shock first....more
I debated quite a lot with myself whether to give this 3 or 4 stars but then I found out that this is Neena Jaydon's debut novel, so I'll cut her some slack here.
The world building was pretty interesting. Let's face it, the sci-fi stuff takes a backseat to the romance in the book. I mean, Jaydon gave enough attention while constructing her universe at the outset but all that is sort of relegated to the background as the plot inches closer to the end. Like I said, the romance aspect is pretty we...more
The world building was pretty interesting. Let's face it, the sci-fi stuff takes a backseat to the romance in the book. I mean, Jaydon gave enough attention while constructing her universe at the outset but all that is sort of relegated to the background as the plot inches closer to the end. Like I said, the romance aspect is pretty we...more
4.5 stars. Really absorbing Scifi/Adventure Romance of the M/M variety! The story is about Villam, a newly promoted Commander in the Imperial Forces. Villam is strong, idealistic and very loyal to his Imperial rulers. He has lived the military lifestyle since childhood and his whole sense of self stems from his training and his responsibilities. Unbeknownst to Villam, he has an enemy who is envious of his advancement and is plotting to bring him (and his superior officer) down.
Luke has been brou...more
Luke has been brou...more
First, I wasn't sure if I should read this book or not, I didn't know the author and the story in the summary seemed not very convincing to me.
But, ok, I thought I could give it a try, I have read worse before.
AND: I'm so happy that I gave it a shot!
This book is smashing! The two characters are hot and I was in love with them after a short time.
The development of their relationship, their strong and palpable feelings for each other, the things they did and gave up for each other....
The whole sto...more
But, ok, I thought I could give it a try, I have read worse before.
AND: I'm so happy that I gave it a shot!
This book is smashing! The two characters are hot and I was in love with them after a short time.
The development of their relationship, their strong and palpable feelings for each other, the things they did and gave up for each other....
The whole sto...more
I don't normally write reviews unless it's a really good book that I enjoy, and this being one of them.
Villam Elding recently been promoted to a top rank. Everything was going well for him in his career. However he gets kidnapped and in the attempt the spaceship he's on crash on an uninhibited planet. Worse, there's only two survivors, him and his kidnapper. They must work together in order to survive but can they put their differences aside?
From the minute I read the summary I was immediately e...more
Villam Elding recently been promoted to a top rank. Everything was going well for him in his career. However he gets kidnapped and in the attempt the spaceship he's on crash on an uninhibited planet. Worse, there's only two survivors, him and his kidnapper. They must work together in order to survive but can they put their differences aside?
From the minute I read the summary I was immediately e...more
I love a good claustrophobic romance, by that I mean the kind of stuck-with-you relationship that develops from the close proximity of the characters, especially when there's a good long build-up and raging sexual tension. I also love believable sci-fi. I also love all things military... Hey, would you look at that, this is book is cover-to-(virtual)-cover full of things that I love. It's a great story about a galactic military officer who ends up stranded on an uninhabited planet with his would...more
All I can say is...WOW!!! This is one of those few books that gave me a good lasting aftertaste. The pacing was perfect and the characters are wonderful. Most of the authors in this genre have a hard time balancing plot/romance/sex but Neena Jaydon got it right on. I love (view spoiler)...more
*** See the full review, including Memorable Quotes and other book recommendations, at GraveTells.com here! ***
Villum is a student of philosophy... steady, loyal, cool under pressure, capable, and driven, this man is more than merely likeable: he commands respect, and is the kind of man I'd want by my side as a friend, lover, or colleague. Raised in a poor society that experiences such a high mortality rate that they condition their children to cut themselves off from emotion, Luke is a monk tra...more
Villum is a student of philosophy... steady, loyal, cool under pressure, capable, and driven, this man is more than merely likeable: he commands respect, and is the kind of man I'd want by my side as a friend, lover, or colleague. Raised in a poor society that experiences such a high mortality rate that they condition their children to cut themselves off from emotion, Luke is a monk tra...more
"The fire you kindle for your enemy often burns yourself more than him"
Chinese proverb
The plot
Two enemies, in an alien hostile planet.
Commander Seventh Rank, Villam Elding

Severe, proud of his mission in The Imperial Majesty spaceship fleet. He is a man, with no fears, no regrets and endless courage.
Ittuluke tyv scinik, a Sigliuk

a monk, a life to pray... and in a mission, to his people salvation. He despise all imperial goats (as he call them) for their blind love for the oppressive monarchy.
Ca...more
For many years, Villam Elding has worked his way up to becoming one of the youngest Commanders’ of the Imperial Empire. Villam is a philosopher at heart, but he lives and breathes the military, and by the honor of the Imperial’s code. Although he has a few friends, there are still people will do not like Villam, nor do they like that he’s been promoted to Commander, and vow to destroy Villam and everything he’s worked so hard to achieve.
Ever since Ittuluke (Luke) was sent to the monastery as a c...more
Ever since Ittuluke (Luke) was sent to the monastery as a c...more
I read a wonderful review for this book (by one of the lovely ladies at the Grave Tells blog- no they don't pay me for the promo) and decided to cross my fingers and take a chance on it. So glad that I did.
I am coming to truly enjoy and appreciate the world building of a well written and developed Sci-Fi Romance. This one was so well balanced between many incredibly well written components- world building, plot and pace, characterizations and the romance. Not one of the components over-powered t...more
I am coming to truly enjoy and appreciate the world building of a well written and developed Sci-Fi Romance. This one was so well balanced between many incredibly well written components- world building, plot and pace, characterizations and the romance. Not one of the components over-powered t...more
A very well written sci-fi m/m romance adventure about a two enemies who crash on an uninhabited planet and have to learn to get along to survive (along with dealing with feelings of deeper intimacy), especially when they find that they are not alone as they thought.
What I liked: The world-building was really well done. Jaydon added a lot of layers to the societies that the MCs come from but did the reader the favor of not spelling everything out in big dumps of exposition. Her writing is also v...more
What I liked: The world-building was really well done. Jaydon added a lot of layers to the societies that the MCs come from but did the reader the favor of not spelling everything out in big dumps of exposition. Her writing is also v...more
The first bit of this book almost put me off finishing it. I felt like I was reading something from Asimov's Lucky Starr series. But after that first bump everything smoothed out beautifully. Wonderful character development and gorgeously evolved love story. And the tension (along with my nerves) over the last chapters was strung out perfectly. I would have almost been satisfied if we had not gotten our HEA but thank Akuna we did.
What a great story! I'm not really a fan of Scifi books since they're just too complicated for my simple mind but I really enjoyed this book. I loved the way the relationship slowly develops and the MCs are simply lovable. However, I think the story wrapped up a little too nicely and everything was solved a bit too easily towards the end. Still a fun read!
Competent Sci-fi mystery. I found Luke's easy acceptance of affection and sex in the end unbelievable, and frankly unecessary. I think it would be ok if he were a bit akward/reluctant about it given his history and it wouldn't have detracted from what he felt for Willam. I also found Willams discharge unbelievable. Other than that it was an excellent story.
3.5
If you like sci-fi, you'll love the universe created in this book. It's an enemies-to-lovers story and they have a whole planet to themselves, so expect it to be full of tension and very hot. The only thing that was a bit jarring was the use of the word "lad" as an appellative between lovers. It just doesn't work.
If you like sci-fi, you'll love the universe created in this book. It's an enemies-to-lovers story and they have a whole planet to themselves, so expect it to be full of tension and very hot. The only thing that was a bit jarring was the use of the word "lad" as an appellative between lovers. It just doesn't work.
What struck me most about Storms and Stars was how simplistic the plot and character development were compared to how lengthy and often downright tedious the book felt. It would have been substantially improved if it had been cut down to novella length. The story was just not complex enough for a full-length novel. I was particularly frustrated by all the scenes from the perspectives of minor characters. They were boring, and most of them had nothing to do with what was happening between the mai...more
A serviceable sci-fi romance. It doesn't invent the wheel, but the writing is good and the characters are pleasant to spend a little time with. I was particularly taken by Luke, who was cute in his weirdness.
However: a lot of the science fiction aspect of it felt like shoddily-done window-dressing; everything seemed a little bland and distant to me, and when I tried to picture the universe they were existing in, I came up short. This wouldn't be such a big deal in a contemporary or historical n...more
However: a lot of the science fiction aspect of it felt like shoddily-done window-dressing; everything seemed a little bland and distant to me, and when I tried to picture the universe they were existing in, I came up short. This wouldn't be such a big deal in a contemporary or historical n...more
Wow what a story. I finished it and I'm still in a shock.
Villam and Luke were interesting characters. They developed true the whole story so dramatically, it was like a night and day. Their emotions in which they scold each other, so amazingly written.
I rather say GO read this amazing adventure, you won't regret it!
Villam and Luke were interesting characters. They developed true the whole story so dramatically, it was like a night and day. Their emotions in which they scold each other, so amazingly written.
I rather say GO read this amazing adventure, you won't regret it!
It was a great story. The worlds, the different cultures, interesting caracters, all of it made "Storms and stars" a really amazing book. I recomend it to anyone who likes stories about military, survivors and love that conquers all.
4.5 I wasn't sure where this was going at the start but this turned out to be a very good sci fi romance. There was some confusion in the beginning due to the difficulty distinguishing names and ranks but I do prefer this style where we're shown rather than just told the story.
I really enjoyed this sci-fi adventure story. The slowly developing love between these two interesting MCs was sweet and I especially liked the ending.
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Neena Jaydon is a graduate student working on her English MA. When she's not researching or teaching, she writes M/M romances set in SF/F universes. Distracting her are a household crammed full of family and pets, the Intarwebz, and a growing army of Asian Ball-jointed Dolls. Her first novel, Storms and Stars, was published by Torquere Press in January of 2012. She's currently working on a novella...more
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“I'm not afraid of the thought of being stuck with only one other person for the rest of my life. I'm afraid that I won't be.”
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“We lived like the only two people on the planet because we thought we were, I still need to know that... That you are still the only person in my world.”
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