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The Taking of Ariel, A Tale of Aeodar

3.10  ·  Rating Details  ·  63 Ratings  ·  13 Reviews
Lord Arius can't help but intercede when he sees a slave being mercilessly beaten. He confiscates the slaves, returning home with them after seeing justice done to their former master.

Rescued from a cruel fate and on the heels of a long journey, Ariel is more than ready for a bath, a shave and a thorough inspection from her new master.

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Mar 15, 2012 D rated it it was amazing
Second story I've read by this author...he really draws you into this fantasy world he's created. I would love to read more of this story-line and world. Not true erotica, but enough heat to make an enjoyable read (I'm naughty...I ninja-read this at work!)

(BTW- he has a great podcast too, that I just recently learned's making my work commute really fun!)
Future Slayer Girl
I think I'm in love.....

J.V. Just has a magical way of spinning his Fantasy world. He has built a world I believe in and would love to travel to!

He has expertly flushed out characters and I can't wait to read his full length novels!

Great writer, great erotica, great fantasy, GREAT STORY!
Nov 11, 2015 J.C. rated it liked it
I don't know how to categorize this book. it was originally marked bdsm?? no really only bdsm is a born slave calling her master, master..It's a cute read for such a short story, thank goodness it was free...but I also can say this story has so much potential to be so much better as well, if the author actually took their time and expanded on this story
Apr 05, 2012 Angie rated it really liked it
Thought for a short story this was great. It seemed more like a prologue to a full book, but I'll take what I can get. I liked the how well the slaves were to be treated, and how well Ariel was taken care of by Arius. I hope there are going to be more tales of Aeodar in the future.
Megan Riverina Romantics/Meggerfly
Um... not really sure what this was. It was supposed to be fantasy erotica but I didn't find it erotic at all. The world was cool though. I liked the "progressive" way that the Carellian's treated slaves.
Nov 30, 2011 Vivian rated it liked it
Shelves: erotica-fantasy
I'd probably have rated this higher if it were longer, as it stands it is a fine beginning or prologue, but is incomplete. Good writing and characters worth reading about; I just need more.
2-2 stars - Fantasy Erotic Short Story

Not bad for a random find and an erotic freebie that's a super quickie read...only 16 pages.
Carolyn F.
Dec 29, 2012 Carolyn F. rated it it was ok
Shelves: fantasy, ebook
Short story, 13 pages.

Lords and slaves and ships and kingdoms. Not my favorite genre. **
Jul 17, 2012 Shannon rated it liked it
Great short story, I can't wait to read more about Aeodar and the Lord of Exodus.
Jun 23, 2012 Keri rated it liked it
This was a pretty decent short story. I would read more by this author.
Nov 15, 2011 Theresa rated it liked it
Great premise...I so wish this was a longer story!
Nov 11, 2012 Gizzie rated it liked it
Shelves: 1-erotica
The sex in this very short story was hot.
Dec 09, 2013 Radiant rated it liked it
Overall a Fun read!
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