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Most girls in the Kingdom of Sevalia would be thrilled to receive an invitation to become the first Queen’s Lady without noble blood, but for tomboy Jenna Mallory, it was her worst nightmare. She would need to overcome not only her lack of social status, but her mixed heritage. Jenna received the invitation because her father was a wealthy merchant, but since her mother wa...more
Kindle Edition, 476 pages
Published September 11th 2011 by Naomi Lane
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Claire
Apr 13, 2012 Claire rated it 1 of 5 stars
Recommends it for: Nobody
Shelves: one-star
I wanted to like this book, I really did. I mean, who goes into a story thinking it'll be complete waste of time? I don't like writing harsh reviews, but even after taking a lot of time to cool off I just can't find any redeeming merit in this work of fiction.

My first complaint is that Ms. Lane can't seem to decide exactly who she's writing for. The tale reads very much like a young adult novel; it tackles issues relating to growing up, relationships, and finding one's place in the world. There...more
Khanh (Kittens, Rainbows, and Sunshine)
The premise was so promising, and I really wanted to like this book, but ultimately it fell flat for me.

Jenna Mallory and her brother Peter are sent to the palace, he to train to be a knight, she to be one of the queen's lady in waiting. She has to hide her magic, but does so halfheartedly, using it whenever she wants. Supposedly using magic will get her into trouble, because only those of noble blood are supposed to be able to have magical abilities, but aside from some raised eyebrows, nobody...more
Melissa Wullur
I was tempted to give it a lower rating, but my conscience got the better of me. To be fair, the book had a good concept, an interesting world setting and, in my honest opinion, a lot of potential. So what was wrong with it?

Some reviewers mentioned that the main character was too young. I TOTALLY agree. The romance is too "heavy" (read: sexual) and unrealistic for an innocent 13 year old.

The deal breaker for me, though, was the irksome, bordering-on-repulsive Mary Sueness of the main character...more
Elisabeth Waters
This is a good book, but it suffers from being self-published. If it had been properly edited, it could have been a great book. As it is, it suffers from errors in grammar, character motivations that leave me wincing, and an unfortunate amount of telling instead of showing. It has a likable protagonist and some interesting plot twists, but it could have been a much better book if somebody had stood over the author and made her do another draft.
April
Good fantasy, excellent characters and some fun and interesting magic. Will keep an eye out for the sequel.
Emily H.
Secrets, Lies, and Magic. The only thing that could send two kingdoms’ into war and tear the countries apart. Could the only commoner of the Queen’s Lady save the kingdom?

In the Kingdom of Sevalia, tomboy Jenna Mallory wanted to be anywhere but at the castle of Sevalia. One would think that being a Queen’s Lady would be a thrill of a lifetime. For commoner Jenna, life at the castle is anything but ordinary. Not only from her dark skin, but the fact that she has very powerful magical strength. Th...more
Emmanuelle
I enjoyed reading this book. It's very well written and is say it would be appropriate to any teen over 12-13. It reminded me very much of books I read as a child by Tamora Pierce. If you liked this book, you'll like her series also. The character was believable in her struggle to understand who she is and what magic she possesses. She struggles also with external influences; various people keep telling her what she should or shouldn't say or who she should or shouldn't trust. You wonder at the...more
Laila
For the price, I thought the book was wonderful. It's not too dark or overfilled with intrigue. The author manages a balance between the two that is engrossing enough that you breeze through the book.
The main character, Jenna Mallory, lives in a world that is complex yet fits the book perfectly. As Jenna is merely a child, she stays primarily in the area of Sevalia, but there are other lands beyond that which I hope she will explore as she grows in the sequel (please come out soon!). 
What I enjo...more
Cheryl
I totally loved this book! I have only read a handful of high fantasy and almost all of them have been in the last year or so. The reason I have not been able to read high fantasy before is that I had an aversion to author-developed worlds, hence my preference for urban fantasy which is also not something I have always read. Previous to my introduction to urban fantasies I was strictly mysteries and thrillers and that period was the longest for me in my reading history. I have to see something i...more
Meghan
This was weird... But in a good way? See the main character was really young. Like 12 at the beginning. Some of the things she stumbles across at court are definitely not of the tween friendly variety. Which makes sense, because everybody knows royals and their fiends are super weird. Ok. I'm still with the book at this point. Then it was all- whoa- that's nasty. And hey-oh did they just go there? Yes they did. So then we are firmly in the not tween appropriate box. I find myself thinking "where...more
Cindy
May 25, 2013 Cindy rated it 1 of 5 stars
Recommends it for: NO ONE!!
Shelves: 2013, fantasy-teen, series
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Jenny Schwartzberg
I read this book on someone's recommendation, and to my surprise I couldn't stop reading it. It is self-published and it reads like it needed a good editor and more revisions. However, I liked the heroine, Jenna and her adventures. She may be too much of a Mary Sue figure, but she has a real relationship with her brother, with squabbles and arguments. She trips over her own feet, causes scandals, and is honest about her failings. Her teacher is a powerful mage, but he's kind, makes mistakes, and...more
10lees
This is my favorite type of book - an action/adventure featuring a young female lead. It is a little reminiscent of Tamora Pierce or Maria Snyder’s Poison Study, though I would say the flow of writing in this novel is superior to either. The plotting does seem a bit choppy in places and I would not say the character develops as much as she could, however I would expect changes over the course of a series not over one novel.

Overall it’s a great first novel (and I have a suspicion it’s self-publis...more
Anna Neal
I am no stranger to girly fantasy, and neither is Naomi Lane. She weaves a web of delightful fantasy in "To Play the Lady" that will leave you yearning for the next installment.

Jenna's adventures in this book had me turning the pages extremely quickly. By the end, everything seems to be set up of an even bigger adventure to come. The characters are left in a place that really will change the layout of the next book. This book definitely seems like the younger sibling; the setup for greater thin...more
Lea


This was incredibly disappointing. A story about a one-dimensional girl who not only gets everything she wants and doesn't learn anything, but has no personality to speak of. The premise - of a commoner lady going to train as a noble lady in the royal court, and learning magic, fighting arts and becoming a woman at the same time - is solid. The prose is well-written. But the story itself falls flat. Every thing is predictable, not one character struggles towards their goals, and I left annoyed...more
Chuck
I really enjoyed this book. Most independently published books are sub-par. To Play the Lady was well written. I ma glad the author took the time to write it and put in the effort to publish it. The style moves quickly, but with time to enjoy each chapter. I enjoy the personality of the main character, also the story moves along nicely as she discovers her abilities. The book deals with the issue of not fitting in and learning to value yourself for your unique gifts and abilities. Well written w...more
Opal
This is a rich coming of age fantasy novel. There is plenty of magic but there is a lot of her development that I considered very touching and sweet. Nothing too saccharine sweet though. There’s even a budding romance.

Jenna is an extremely likable character that is well-developed.

...Read more of my review at The Akamai Reader...
Alyssa
I happened to stumble across this book on Amazon and loved it!!!!!! I could not put it down and stayed up until I had finished the whole thing! Needless to say I was exhausted the next day but it was well worth it :) I am eagerly awaiting the sequel and can't wait to escape back into Jenna's world!!!!
Dan
Wish fulfillment novel. Thirteen-year-old girl is awesome at everything and everybody loves her.

I understand that people do in fact go on dates and have hot makeout sessions even when they are way underage. But I'd be happier if the book had not contained that particular story-arc.
Lorena
This was very enjoyable. Fans of Tamora Pierce and Sherwood Smith will especially like it. A young woman (a "commoner," but from a wealthy family) goes to become a Queen's Lady at court. Stuff happens. (Clearly I need to work on review writing...)
David Kinney
My only complaint is that it is a bit too much like Tamora Pierce's Lioness series. So basically the book is amazing and reminds me of one of my favorite series in the genre.
Andy Marsh
This book is really good. You should read it if you like horses, or magic, or magical horses, or breathing.
Laurel
Can't wait read the next one!
Tiffany
Overview: This book was entertaining and reminded me a bit of some of the Tamora Pierce Lioness and Protector of the Small series books that are out there. For I thought for it's low kindle price it was worthwhile and I will plan on reading the sequel when it is released.

Things I enjoyed:
1 - I like the combination of the two types of magic combined with Jenna's athleticism I thought that was nice.
2 - This book was like comfort food. You knew when you picked it up the general direction the story...more
Turtles
This was a really fun book despite the dismal cover. You also get the impression that it has a bit older heroine, but Jenna is 13 through most of the book. This was definitely a pseudo-Europe setting and in the tradition of Mercedes Lackney and Tamora Pierce, the author has created a wonderful fantasy world with some great magics! Jenna is an assumingly common girl coming to serves a Queen's lady (although I don't know why a Queen with 3 teenage sons needs a passel of teenage girls as her ladies...more
Carol
I got offered a free or 99-cent deal on this as a Kindle download, so I rolled the dice. (In retrospect, I hope it was a free download.) I thought the premise of the book had promise: a young woman is sent to be trained as a lady-in-waiting to the queen, even though she is not of noble birth. She is something of a tomboy, for example, preferring to ride astride rather than sidesaddle and more interested in learning how to use a sword than do needlework. This book is presented as a YA fantasy boo...more
Jaye K. Brown
Waiting for the next book

Waiting for the next book

great story, I was glued to it. the only criticism I have, is Jenna is unconscious so many times that it becomes irritatingly predictable. The author needs to find another way to convey distress other than to knock the poor girl out every other chapter. This aside, I think this was a really good book and I'm waiting for the next installment!


Mara
3 1/2 stars
A fantasy YA novel that reminded me pleasantly of Celine Kiernan's The Moorhawke Trilogy.

I'm reading plenty of free and indie books lately. And I'm so sorry to realize so many of them are pretty bad. So when I discover little gems like this book I'm always happily surprised.

The story might need some tightening and the heroine's voice sounds older than her 13 years [and as a characters she needs some flaws :)]. Apart from these points, I really liked this book. I would recommend it t...more
Kari Ramadorai
This is a hard book to rate because the world was very good. She started with a typical trope: tomboy girl thrown into a lady-in-waiting position who has to make it in with the others of her world. Then Naomi Lane added fairly typical magic and magical items like a sword and the ability to talk to horses. But! This author had an intricate plot and subterfuge not often seen in an idie writer. But I couldn't get as into the story as I wanted to be. No matter how hard I tried, or listened, I was al...more
heidi
Jul 03, 2012 heidi rated it 3 of 5 stars
Shelves: ya
Have you ever had one of those weeks? The ones where you start a new school and pass as a boy and soulbond with a horse and learn you have vast magical powers and foil a plot and save a prince's life? Jenna has.

After that first week, the pacing does moderate some, but the breathless rush at the beginning made me feel off balance for the whole book, waiting for something else to happen to even out the book.

I thought the plot and pacing were uneven, but the worldbuilding was interesting.

Read if: Y...more
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