The Beach House
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The Beach House (Hot Summer Days)

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3.52 of 5 stars 3.52  ·  rating details  ·  98 ratings  ·  17 reviews
Free short story written for the M/M Romance group's "Hot Summer Days" event.

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Genres/Tags: Gay M/M / Contemporary / M/M/M / Barely Legal / High School
Approx. Word Count: 4,051
free online fiction, 14 pages
Published August 5th 2011 (first published August 2011)

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Serena Yates
This was a really cool story about three young guys who decide to get together at a deserted beach house. I liked the way Marco was slowly pulled into what Sam and Darrin already had going. The sadness of Darrin leaving at the end of the summer was poignant, and Sam's sweet longing for Marco was clear. As with many three-way relatinships that are merely physical, the implications of what the future will bring hung heavily over this one. I definitely want to see more of these characters! It feels...more
SueM
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Lutawolf
I truely liked the story or the plot of it. Of a boy who is determined to make the other boy notice him and in a story that I felt was way too freaking fast, she made me feel the emotion. I just felt like I wasn't fully grasping the whole story and that was because it was fast however I have to give it a four star just because of the how well the author wrote the emotional play.
Wendy (wluvsbooks)
Very interesting twist to the story! I'm glad that Darrin was decent enough to invite Marco to the "party" for Sam's benefit even though he had to have known Sam's feelings. I'd love to read more about these guys with happy endings all around:) Great job, Elizabeth - loved it!!!

SheReadsALot
Fourteen pages = short review from me.

Hot, sweaty, teenage angst-ish, crushes, man-love, menage, short story, fun?



Hmm...'twas yum and free!

3.5 Stars
Vivian Archer
Sweet and sexy young love. An unexpected invitation leads to a couple discoveries. Good character development in a short time with a well defined scene and resolution.
Tamela
I like the story until the end. The flip/flop kind of ruined it for me. It's a good read and the ending might not affect someone else the way it affected me.
Bookbee
So good! But now I want more of Sam & Marco's story, and I definitely want to see that look of sadness disappear from Darrin's eyes.
Sadonna
Aug 12, 2011 Sadonna rated it 3 of 5 stars
Shelves: free, mm
Sweet hot story of three young guys who have more in common than they think!
JustJen
Cute story about 3 teens - boy 1 has a crush on boy 2, boy 2 is messing around with boy 3. They invite boy 1 to join them at an abandoned beach house where boy 1 discovers he really has feelings for boy 3 instead. It was short, sexy, then sweet.
Bella Leone
Wonderful, hot, and sweet!
Josephine
short and sweet and hot :)
Sylvia
Sweet, with a hint of sad
Summer


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Bubbles  Hunty
Jun 10, 2012 Bubbles Hunty marked it as not-for-me
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Thanks but no thanks, just not for me, see this review
Vio
Jun 14, 2013 Vio marked it as maybe
I.Am.Reader
Jun 10, 2013 I.Am.Reader marked it as mm
Lynette
Jun 04, 2013 Lynette marked it as to-read
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Wendy
May 28, 2013 Wendy rated it 3 of 5 stars
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I live in Ottawa, Ontario, Canada with my husband and two children. I have a BA in Psychology and a certificate in Dramatic Scriptwriting. I very much enjoy writing erotic fiction and exploring the vast arena of sexuality and relationships.

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