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Aaron & Keja: Time Dragon (Orgarlan Saga #1)

by Linda Nelson (Goodreads Author)

3.0 of 5 stars 3.00 · rating details · 36 ratings · 19 reviews

Elven Sorcerer, Lord Ky'debaul has found his magic powers waning. He devises a plan to restore these powers by killing a silver dragon. This dragon is not just a silver dragon, it is a time dragon. But in order for him to do this, he must send the dragon to another world where there are no laws written against killing a Time Dragon. Here on Orgarlan, killing a Time Dragon...more

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Published March 23rd 2012 by Createspace (first published July 9th 2011)

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Nov 07, 2011 Al Gritten rated it 1 of 5 stars

I received a free copy of this e-book in exchange for a review. The author has a vivid imagination and I believe she has a strong story line. However, her writing style is awkward and the story is not fully developed in its characterization.

She writes, in many places, in the passive voice which makes the writing awkward and difficult to read. She tends to switch between active and passive voice and while that is an issue, it is not the only issue. She also has several places where her verb tense...more I received a free copy of this e-book in exchange for a review. The author has a vivid imagination and I believe she has a strong story line. However, her writing style is awkward and the story is not fully developed in its characterization.

She writes, in many places, in the passive voice which makes the writing awkward and difficult to read. She tends to switch between active and passive voice and while that is an issue, it is not the only issue. She also has several places where her verb tenses do not agree. For example, in one paragraph where she seeks to explain the background to the feud between the elves, she writes, "After Ky’debaul finished his studies, he challenged Sarkus to a battle. This turned out to be a turning of time for the elven population. Their peoples were entered into a time of evil under the new rule of Ky’debaul. All elves had to accept his rule or be executed. Shortly after which, humans entered into bondage in their kingdom. This caused the ending of centuries of comradeship between the two races." This would be a much stronger paragraph in the active voice.

Additionally, the characters dialogue is stilted and the narrative, at times, is forced. This adds to the difficulties for the reader. Also, the story would be more compelling if she offered additional plot details. For example, the two worlds will be destroyed if the dragon isn't returned and the rift closed, but she doesn't explain why. The prophecy of the human and the dog, title characters, is assumed by the other characters, but not really explained so that the reader can follow the interchanges between the various characters.

Finally, she muddies her metaphors, as in one example, "Like a ritual the leaves cross the floor of the forest like that of a colorful carpet..." creating a confusing analogy that is, unfortunately, repeated again and again. All of these issues inhibit the flow of the story.

I believe there is a great story here, but it is hindered by the linguistic problems and mistakes. A really good edit would help this book tremendously along with some added depth to the characters and their dialogue. Please note, that I would have given this only a 1/2 star, but don't seem to be able to do that on Goodreads.(less)

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Mar 07, 2012 Lucinda rated it 5 of 5 stars

An apsolutely fanatstic read that would make any author look twice, including giving Sepehen Deas and Paolini a challenge! Any good novel has to be based around a solid storyline and plot which this novel certainly has and alongside Linda's fluid writing sytle it is definately a winner and a really enjoyable read. Suitable not only for any fantasy lovers or science-fiction but a wide range of readers who enjoy great storytelling and a mesmerising plot. I would definately like to read more by Lin...more

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May 11, 2012 Rhonda rated it 4 of 5 stars

Review: Aaron & Keja: Time Dragon by Linda Nelson
4 STARS
I listened to Aaron & Keja on my kindle and admit I did get
lost a few times and had to go back and read.
Thier was a lot of different characters in this story Aaron is one
of the humans in this story. She can hear and talk to different
animals. Keja is her dog.
Orc's are the good people. On thier world it is against the law
to kill dragons.
Elves want to kill a time dragon and harness its power so they
send it to a different world where...more

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Sep 13, 2012 Mirrani rated it 2 of 5 stars

Shelves: finished-and-reviewed

I found this story to be simple, but somewhat enjoyable. I was very interested in the idea that this is a fantasy plot that takes place in a more modern time, with cars and television. It also isn't often that elves are the bad guys and orcs are the better of the two.

The dragon doesn't really have much of a point in this book, so if you're picking this up because it has a Time Dragon in it, don't bother. Other than being a plot point, like the gold at the end of the rainbow that everyone wants,...more

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Feb 21, 2012 Alisha rated it 1 of 5 stars

Shelves: first-reads

I won this book through the goodreads first-reads program. Honestly, I haven't been this confused by a book in a long time, because it shouldn't have made it to the point it has. I'm guessing this is self-published because it's really awful. The story line is good, and could have been very interesting, especially as a children's book. However, there are just so many grammatical errors, switching between first and third person, words spelled wrong, fragmented sentences for this to even be read by...more I won this book through the goodreads first-reads program. Honestly, I haven't been this confused by a book in a long time, because it shouldn't have made it to the point it has. I'm guessing this is self-published because it's really awful. The story line is good, and could have been very interesting, especially as a children's book. However, there are just so many grammatical errors, switching between first and third person, words spelled wrong, fragmented sentences for this to even be read by a child. Not to mention the author is trying to use big words, made the book a little long, and basically just ruined the suitability for the age group it should be targeted to. My personal opinion is that the author should rewrite the book, editing it and making sure to use words on target with a 3rd grader so that this could be marketed as a intermediate children's book. Especially since she seems to not like to write any details at all and solve things in a very simple way, as you would expect from a book for that age level.

The only good things I can say about this book is that the story was fairly unique. The author seems to have a good imagination, and you can tell she wants to share that. The other thing that was kinda interesting about the book was how realistic the pets dialogue was, it's exactly how I would think my pets would think, even down to the details of the cat forgetting things after only a day. I think younger children would be excited by the idea of the Aaron being able to talk to her animals, and the conversations they have with each other. I really think with a rewrite it could be pretty successful in that market. However, if you are over the age of 8, or well anyone with how the book is now, you probably wont enjoy this book. Those of us who enjoy fantasy especially, enjoy our lengthy dialogue, our descriptive scenes, and our detailed action scenes. This book lacks all of that and more, even if I look at it as an intermediate book right now. Although honestly you can tell she was trying to aim more towards the 12 year old market, but it's a just a little to immature for that market, but still to many big words for the typical 6-8 year old. All I can say is I'm glad it was a short read and I was able to finish it in a couple hours otherwise I don't think I could have talked myself into finishing it at all. (less)

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Jul 11, 2012 Sherri Keller rated it 1 of 5 stars Recommends it for: Nobody

Shelves: 1-star, fantasy

I won this book in a LibraryThing giveaway.

We begin on the planet Orgarlan with Ky'debaul, an Elven sorcerer. His powers are waning, and they can only be restored by killing a silver dragon. However, if the silver dragon is killed, it could mean the end of existence. Killing a dragon on Orgarlan is against the law, so the elves send the dragon through a rift to Earth (or a planet like it), where it lives in a lake near Aaron's house. Aaron lives with her dog Keja and cat Chancy, both of whom she...more

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Sep 02, 2012 Johnathan rated it 3 of 5 stars

Shelves: first-read

I cannot wait to follow Aaron and her dog Keja on their next journey! The characters in this book all came to life immediately for me! I've read other reviews stating that there was too many characters with too much going on.. making this a hard book to follow at times. I disagree entirely. While there were many characters who all had their own lives going on at times.. Isn't that the realism that we live everyday? The characters were not just idle toons but real-life people whom you came to kno...more

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May 30, 2012 Angie ~aka Reading Machine~ rated it 4 of 5 stars · review of another edition

Shelves: first-reads-review-books

Lord Ky'debaul of the Cordan Elves is one ruler in the lands of Orgarlan. His magic is failing and he needs the essessence of a silver dragon, a Time Dragon. He makes plans to destroy one by following a Time Dragon thru a rift which brings him to Earth. He also needs a beastmaster to find the Time Dragon. Aaron is a very special girl she can speak to animals especially Keja the dog and Chancy the cat. Aaron is making her preparations for cold winter months. Aaron used to live with her aunt and u...more

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May 20, 2012 Cindy rated it 3 of 5 stars

Shelves: dragons, fantasy, elfs, dogs, cats, adventure, first-reads

I received the book through First Reads.

I have read many fantasy books set in an alternate world full of elfs, orcs, humans, dragons and other fantastic beings. In all except one of these orcs are not the good ones. Not so in Aaron and Keja: Time Dragon, which is one of the reasons why I wanted to read it.

Lord Ky'debaul, villain and leader of the elves, is after a time dragon. This leads him after it to a different human world. The orcs are aware and three of them Buggane, Barghest, and Spornek...more

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Oct 24, 2011 Michelle (In Libris Veritas) rated it 1 of 5 stars

Shelves: fantasy, first-reads

I had hopes for this novel since it was the first book I had won from First-reads in some time, but I suppose I was more then a little disappointed by it. The premise was intriguing and it seemed like it would be a entertaining short read, well it was short...and only a tad bit entertaining.

The first thing I noticed about this book was that the writing is very stiff. It felt more like a school paper then an actual published story. I really had trouble picturing anything because it was so forced...more I had hopes for this novel since it was the first book I had won from First-reads in some time, but I suppose I was more then a little disappointed by it. The premise was intriguing and it seemed like it would be a entertaining short read, well it was short...and only a tad bit entertaining.

The first thing I noticed about this book was that the writing is very stiff. It felt more like a school paper then an actual published story. I really had trouble picturing anything because it was so forced that I eventually just gave up on some of it. Another issue I had were the switching of tense. One moment you would be in the present and few seconds later the past. It happened so much that I had to force myself not to notice anymore. There were also times when the wrong word was used like 'waste' instead of 'waist', which i found fairly distracting as I would read the sentence as written and then get slightly confused.

The story holds promise and it is a pretty interesting concept,but the execution is so lacking that it falls flat. I liked the idea of Orcs and Elves switching positions on the good and bad scale, and the idea of there being seperate worlds that can be crossed between with rifts. However the characters themselves were only alright and their interactions with each other were just as stiff as the writing itself. I hated the three Orcs and could barely understand their interactions with each other and the elves came off as rather stupid creatures. Aaron was pretty interesting and nearly likable, I enjoyed the idea of her being able to communicate with the animals around her...though she doesn't seem to use it very often. Keja and Chancy are also pretty likable, and probably my favorite characters in the book. I know there is supposed to be another book after this but I would have liked to see the relationship between Aaron and Marshall actually go somewhere. It's mentioned like it's a big deal a few times but then nothing. There were also some moments in the book where I had to question the point of certain aspects, like the pendant that Barghast wears...it's supposed to give the wearer the ability to speak to all kind of creatures. But then later on the Orcs are talking to everyone with no issues even though only one wears the pendant. I also didn't like the ending, because it barely resolved the dragon issue.

I have the feeling that if the overall concept was expanded upon and cleaned up then it would be pretty decent, but as it is I found it to be too short and very glossed over. So much is supposed to happen and yet it all happens so quickly and without any real confrontation or explanation that it doesn't seem like anything happened at all.

At any rate I can't say I recommend this book really, even if it's free. It's not terrible but I didn't find it enjoyable at all. (less)

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Feb 19, 2012 Ryan Michael rated it 4 of 5 stars

Aaron and Keja: The Time Dragon" is a great book. I would give it 4 stars, and would suggest to young, and older readers. Linda Nelson has created a book to another world of imagination. Tying mystical creatures, and nature together to create an outstanding force, leaves the reader turning the pages. She also adds deep details, describing the animals communication well, and drawing details in your imaganation.
A good read!

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Nov 12, 2011 Amy rated it 3 of 5 stars

After reading some of the reviews on here I wasnt to sure at first...but I liked it I thought it was cute.I think this book would be great for younger kids in grade school.Teens not as much but I am well over a teen lol and I enjoyed it.I think if people look at it as a childrens book the reviews would be much better.While I was reading it I was thinking my son when he was younger would have loved it.

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May 30, 2012 Chrissy rated it 1 of 5 stars

I was pretty chuffed when I won this giveaway, and was excited to read it. Unfortunately, it was just one huge disappointment.
The shocking frequency of typos, spelling mistakes, bad punctuation and weird grammar made it really annoying to read. There were even a few sentences that were so confused I had no idea what they were meant to say. The author also used a pretty limited vocabulary, sometimes repeating the same word or phrase three or four times in a short paragraph, when there are plenty...more

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Feb 22, 2012 Wayne Michael rated it 3 of 5 stars

Very good story content...

The story does a well job of leading you onto the next event. Keeps your curiosity aroused.

overall the story was well imagined and put together.

I look forward to seeing more stories from Linda.

I also have to note that I received this book free as a goodreads giveaway.

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Feb 25, 2013 Hate2beLate rated it 5 of 5 stars

I enjoyed reading this very clean, fun adventure. I see there is a part 2 that I just MUST have! Easy to read and the characters are clearly written.

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Jul 07, 2012 Brianna Entriken rated it 1 of 5 stars

Shelves: did-not-finish

I received this book through Goodreads First Reads and I was looking forward to reading it as the idea of the book sounded good.

I must admit that I have not finished this book so story wise I do not know how this book pans out. However I could not bring myself to finish it as the writing style is really awkward and the spelling is awful, the odd typo is forgivable but spelling 'through' as 'thru' is unacceptable.

The author also does not explain the things that she should explain leaving out det...more

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Nov 24, 2012 Anne rated it 1 of 5 stars

Shelves: first-reads

In compliance with FTC guidelines, I received the book for free through Goodreads First Reads.

I can't make it past the first chapter.

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Jun 29, 2012 Melanie rated it 1 of 5 stars

Shelves: youth, fiction, abandoned, fantasy

I won this book in a contest here on Goodreads.

I'm not sure how good the story here is because the writing is so rudimentary, I cannot finish it. The dialogue is cheesy, the prose repetitive and immature.

Typically if a story is this bad within the first 4 pages, it has no hope. I find it sad that I have read so many good fanfiction and yet original work is so devoid of real quality.

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Jan 26, 2012 Deranged Pegasus rated it 4 of 5 stars

Shelves: won-books, 2012

A rather interesting look of a world not our own. This world parallel to our own and different in ways that draws those they encounter to prove their worth.

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Linda likes to write Teen Contemporary and Fantasy. Fantasy is her number one choice when it comes to writing and reading. She writes Teen Contemporary for one reason. Her children had social issues when they were growing up. These issues are the same issues many other teens deal with in their own lives. This being namely substance abuse and peer pressure.

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