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You and a Billion Blue Tiles (Hot Summer Days)
by
Missy Welsh (Goodreads Author)
Free novelette written for the M/M Romance group's "Hot Summer Days" event.
Adam Grindall and Lincoln Stone are two 18-year-olds in the final days of their senior year of high school at the Bennington Academy for Young Gentlemen in Upstate New York. Adam is convinced it's fate that draws him into the showers after a night of studying so he can finally get a chance to be wit...more
Adam Grindall and Lincoln Stone are two 18-year-olds in the final days of their senior year of high school at the Bennington Academy for Young Gentlemen in Upstate New York. Adam is convinced it's fate that draws him into the showers after a night of studying so he can finally get a chance to be wit...more
free online fiction, 22 pages
Published
July 24th 2011
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LOVED this one. This story was another of the short stories available in the M/M group's free GayRomLit 2011 compilation. Adam and Lincoln are about to graduate from boarding school, and this story portrays the wonder of their recognizing and fulfilling their respective fantasies about each other. The author alternates between the two POVs to great effect. We see Adam's overcoming his shyness to act on his attraction for Lincoln and, once in the thick of things, Adam's willingness and eagerness...more
Oh...wow. *happy sigh* What an incredibly sweet, sexy story! And the ending...*sniff*...made me cry. So, so wonderful! I loved it! :)
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Story Prompt:
I would love it if these boys could tell us the story of how they came together. Starting from that mind-numbing blowjob in the showers at high-school. One of the boys could simply no longer hide his feelings and lust and spurred by the acceptance of intimate contact by his colleague, he confessed his love. And was rewarded with a...more
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Story Prompt:
I would love it if these boys could tell us the story of how they came together. Starting from that mind-numbing blowjob in the showers at high-school. One of the boys could simply no longer hide his feelings and lust and spurred by the acceptance of intimate contact by his colleague, he confessed his love. And was rewarded with a...more
Naturally this short story was all wet and steamy sex!
Missy Welsh painted a super yummy portrayal of Adam with endearing qualities to match. The other MC (Lincoln) maintained a pleasant presence despite appearing as more of a supportive role for me.
If you're looking for some quick bookie nookie, this should not disappoint :)
Missy Welsh painted a super yummy portrayal of Adam with endearing qualities to match. The other MC (Lincoln) maintained a pleasant presence despite appearing as more of a supportive role for me.
If you're looking for some quick bookie nookie, this should not disappoint :)
While this wasn't my favorite photo (it wasn't as artistic as some of the others and had more of a bow-chicka-bwa-wow feel to it), I think Missy Welsh did an excellent job with the story. It must be difficult to see a photo and then create an entire story and characters around one single moment in time. I love Adam's character - he was so sweet and innocent. I liked the way the relationship started but I particularly liked the 10 years later epilogue. That was the best part of the story for me....more
This was one 1/2 hour and 22 pages of AWESOME!!
It's 2am, Adam's done studying, and exhausted. But all the caffine in his system has got him feeling a bit jittery. Yeah, maybe a nice hot shower in the communal bathroom of the dorm floor would help. And, while he's in there, he can tug one out before hitting the sheets...
As he nears, he hears a shower already running. Damn!!
Still tempted by the thought of hot water, he enters, and freezes. GOOD GOD, Lincoln is standing with the curtain open as the...more
It's 2am, Adam's done studying, and exhausted. But all the caffine in his system has got him feeling a bit jittery. Yeah, maybe a nice hot shower in the communal bathroom of the dorm floor would help. And, while he's in there, he can tug one out before hitting the sheets...
As he nears, he hears a shower already running. Damn!!
Still tempted by the thought of hot water, he enters, and freezes. GOOD GOD, Lincoln is standing with the curtain open as the...more
90% lust and 10% plot
I don't know what to say in this novel. It's just nothing in there.
Writing Style:
I had a hard time grasping what the author wanted to do with her scenes. Narration was absent almost all the time, and I think that was the reason the novel felt empty. The words she used were not bran new to my ears, so there's no hard work involved.
Pace:
Super slow! The whole novel got stuck in one scene and it did not move at all until that last 3 pages.
Character Development:
It's hard to...more
I don't know what to say in this novel. It's just nothing in there.
Writing Style:
I had a hard time grasping what the author wanted to do with her scenes. Narration was absent almost all the time, and I think that was the reason the novel felt empty. The words she used were not bran new to my ears, so there's no hard work involved.
Pace:
Super slow! The whole novel got stuck in one scene and it did not move at all until that last 3 pages.
Character Development:
It's hard to...more
I'm not sure what should I write about this story. I read it some time ago and even if I remember the "plot" and my impressions, I don't remember details...
This is a sweet short novella about two college students. When I'm in the mood, that's exactly my thing. I liked it, but I can't give more than 3 stars. It basically a description of one night&morning, then, there is some kind of epilogue, where we can find out that, after a couple of years, MC's are still together.
Some people have mentio...more
This is a sweet short novella about two college students. When I'm in the mood, that's exactly my thing. I liked it, but I can't give more than 3 stars. It basically a description of one night&morning, then, there is some kind of epilogue, where we can find out that, after a couple of years, MC's are still together.
Some people have mentio...more
Im sorry, I can't be objective with this one. The first five chapters, and a big part of the six chapter too, remind me of one of the sadest situations in my life. I live something really similar this year, just some months ago, I was backpacking -alone- around South America, and I met a guy, to make it short, my story with him has a sad end (At least for me).
So, even though this story was just an erotism, and does not have any development of the characters, I think is real, and it has its cruel...more
So, even though this story was just an erotism, and does not have any development of the characters, I think is real, and it has its cruel...more
I didn't like Lincoln. It seemed like anyone could have walked into that bathroom and if they had a penis he would have invited them to wash his back. All of his own thoughts were slutty of other guys he has been with and stuff.
"In Lincoln's experience, guys went straight for the goods whenever they got him naked. Mostly, they went for his ass."
Then someone calls him slutty and he says he tells Adam he isn't because he has only let one guy penetrate him anally but he is only 18 and all of his t...more
"In Lincoln's experience, guys went straight for the goods whenever they got him naked. Mostly, they went for his ass."
Then someone calls him slutty and he says he tells Adam he isn't because he has only let one guy penetrate him anally but he is only 18 and all of his t...more
A short story about the unexpected romance between schoolmates.
Shy Adam encounters bold Lincoln in the school showers one late night and they both decide to make something out of that meeting.
Despite the fact that the story is short, both characters develop rather nicely, and the emotions they have for each other are pictured clearly; so are their thoughts. I was worried Lincoln might not be the man I thought him to be, but his behavior later on was far more than I'd ever expected.
So, overall, i...more
Shy Adam encounters bold Lincoln in the school showers one late night and they both decide to make something out of that meeting.
Despite the fact that the story is short, both characters develop rather nicely, and the emotions they have for each other are pictured clearly; so are their thoughts. I was worried Lincoln might not be the man I thought him to be, but his behavior later on was far more than I'd ever expected.
So, overall, i...more
4.5 stars
*big smile*
Okay, we are being seriously spoiled by all the fabulous stories that have been written for HSD - here's another one!
Loved Adam's shy nervousness and Lincoln's cocky bravado hiding a vulnerable heart; their connections was hot, sweet and wonderful. Then to have a scene 10 years down the track where their connection is not only stronger but sweeter too! And my favorite mental image?
'bopped their dicks together like clinking champagne flutes'
Thanks Missy for this heart-warmin...more
*big smile*
Okay, we are being seriously spoiled by all the fabulous stories that have been written for HSD - here's another one!
Loved Adam's shy nervousness and Lincoln's cocky bravado hiding a vulnerable heart; their connections was hot, sweet and wonderful. Then to have a scene 10 years down the track where their connection is not only stronger but sweeter too! And my favorite mental image?
'bopped their dicks together like clinking champagne flutes'
Thanks Missy for this heart-warmin...more
This review was originally published on my blog Joyfully Jay
Adam Grindall is exhausted but wired from a late night spent studying. He decides to take the edge off with a hot shower and some quality alone time. As he walks into the dorm bathroom, he is stunned to find the object of his crush, Lincoln Stone, already there showering. Caught staring, Adam is stunned when Lincoln invites him to join him.
Lincoln has been curious about Adam for a while and is pleasantly surprised when the shy, sweet gu...more
Adam Grindall is exhausted but wired from a late night spent studying. He decides to take the edge off with a hot shower and some quality alone time. As he walks into the dorm bathroom, he is stunned to find the object of his crush, Lincoln Stone, already there showering. Caught staring, Adam is stunned when Lincoln invites him to join him.
Lincoln has been curious about Adam for a while and is pleasantly surprised when the shy, sweet gu...more
Nov 12, 2012
Bettye Kanady
rated it
3 of 5 stars
Recommended to Bettye by:
Love is Always Write List
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This was a very cute story. I thought at first that this was going to be a fantasy for Adam. And, I may be dating myself here, but the thought that ran through my head was the shower scene from Weird Science, when the boys were showering with Kelly LeBrock; they had their pants on! Totally hilarious. But then, Lincoln actually spoke to Adam and got him to enter the shower, and that's where the "magic" began to happen. It was short, but sweet. A good read.
Oh, young love and HEA - one of my favorite combinations! This was such a romantic story. I loved Adam for his sweet, slightly awkward and enthusiastic way. I loved Lincoln's playful attitude and quite the creative twist on monkey see, monkey do;) Their internal dialogue and conversations had just the right dose of humor to add the fun element to the story. And you gave us the perfect ending - a definite HEA. Wow, just awesome! Thank you, Missy!!!
What a beautiful story! Adam was such a lovely character! So open and giving and loving--he was the most amazingly perfect balance to Lincoln. The two of them together were pure magic, the way they seemed to complete and balance each other out. The beginning scenes were hot, but my favorites were the later scenes when we get to see Linc's tenderness and just how amazing Adam really is.
I truly enjoyed reading this story. Adam and Lincoln are both in the upper class in the academy. An encounter in the bathroom in the middle of the night gives them something that would last long. Adam is a virgin who has crush on Lincoln. Despite being out for long and with more experience, Lincoln is experiencing something that he's never felt before: love.
A very romantic story.
A very romantic story.
Free read! When the M/M Romance Group in here issues a writing challenge, I seem unable to resist. Here's another response to a reader's letter requesting a story. The cover is pretty close to what the inspiring image contained -- except that it's missing one boy, but let's pretend he's taking the photo. Hope you enjoy this one!
Well first, I have waited for this story ever since Missy chose to write it.
Second, once read, it blew me away because Lincon and Adam are so beautiful together. The 10 yrs later was perfect, as well as the gift given for their anniversary, which btw, was adorable.
And third, WOW, just WOW.
Great job Missy!!!
Second, once read, it blew me away because Lincon and Adam are so beautiful together. The 10 yrs later was perfect, as well as the gift given for their anniversary, which btw, was adorable.
And third, WOW, just WOW.
Great job Missy!!!
Fave Quote: '"It's not working", Adam whispered, needing Lincoln to talk and to stop looking so hopeless.
"What?"
"Our psychic connection. You're going to have to say it out loud."'
- Storyline - 4/10
- Hero - 10/10
- Hero - 10/10
- Chemistry - 10/10
- Steaminess - 8/10
- Sweetness - 10/10
- Secondary Characters - 1/10
- Setting - 10/10
- Details/Quirks - 10/10
- Banter/Humor - 7/10
- Ending - 10/10
- Ridiculousness - 0/10
- Annoying the shit out of me factor - 0/10
- This book described in one word/phrase - Fr...more
"What?"
"Our psychic connection. You're going to have to say it out loud."'
- Storyline - 4/10
- Hero - 10/10
- Hero - 10/10
- Chemistry - 10/10
- Steaminess - 8/10
- Sweetness - 10/10
- Secondary Characters - 1/10
- Setting - 10/10
- Details/Quirks - 10/10
- Banter/Humor - 7/10
- Ending - 10/10
- Ridiculousness - 0/10
- Annoying the shit out of me factor - 0/10
- This book described in one word/phrase - Fr...more
This was just the most adorable thing I've read in ages! Adam and Lincoln are both so very sweet. They click immediately and the sexual tension is palpable. A good 80% of the story is sex and it is hot and steamy! And the ending is lovely. A great feel good story. Will read again.
I loved this! One of my favorites...I just love Missy's writing and how easy and real it all feels. I loved both guys and how nervous they were and I just LOVED the ending!
It had everything I love about books and more. Amazing story that I know I'll will repeat read. Thank You so much for this wonderful story!
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Romance has always been the main theme of her writing, even when she was twelve and concocting little tales for her friends. She grew up watching tough-guy action movies with her dad and stealing her mom’s romance novels, so it seemed perfectly normal to pair up the two and see what happened. As long as there are men being brave and falling love, Missy plans to fantasize about them— Um, she means...more
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