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The Blacksmith's Son (Mageborn #1)
by
Michael G. Manning (Goodreads Author)
Mordecai's simple life as the son of a blacksmith is transformed by the discovery of his magical birthright. As he journeys to understand the power within him he is drawn into a dangerous plot to destroy the Duke of Lancaster and undermine the Kingdom of Lothion. Love and treachery combine to embroil him in events he was never prepared to face. What he uncovers will change...more
Kindle Edition, 386 pages
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(first published July 3rd 2011)
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I received this novel for .99 on amazon. Money well spent!
The greatest wizard line and the people that protect them are assassinated--all except the infant son of the greatest wizard of all time. The infant is raised by a blacksmith and his wife, who are "the salt of the earth" type folks. At sixteen some supernatural type powers appear and he is let in on the secret of his heritage, just in time too, because there is a dark wizard set to take over the kingdom.
There were some laugh out loud mom...more
A bizarrely short book. From the description you expect some high fantasy coming of age story but the entire book doesn't even cover 2 weeks. Mort learns magic at a speed you could only expect in a really soft setting, everything falls into place with no effort required at all. None of this is particularly bad per se but it does leave me thinking this book is nothing more that a grand prelude to the rest of the series. Excluding the final chapter when the comically evil lord finally ends the boo...more
I got this on Kindle some months ago, started it, decided it was OK but run-of-the-mill as Fantasy goes, intended to finish it, got distracted . . .
Came back to it last week, started again, got past the rather conventional start and realised it was something rather better than first impressions had led me to believe.
Many things in here are conventional, and have been done before - the orphan becoming a wizard, self-training, discovery of skills, then challenges and dangers, and the final battle...more
Came back to it last week, started again, got past the rather conventional start and realised it was something rather better than first impressions had led me to believe.
Many things in here are conventional, and have been done before - the orphan becoming a wizard, self-training, discovery of skills, then challenges and dangers, and the final battle...more
It's been done to death, you know. It was old in Earthsea, and positively exhumed for Rowling. Yet this book was, quite honestly, one of the most enjoyable "teen gets magic" reads to ever have crossed my bookshelf. There's something about Mort, his personality is infectious, his style and whit both quick and memorable and the surrounds were very nicely done too.
There's a rather marvelous shift from third to first person narration in chapter 18, one of the most deftly executed and intricately wri...more
There's a rather marvelous shift from third to first person narration in chapter 18, one of the most deftly executed and intricately wri...more
The Blacksmith's Son (Mageborn #1) was recommended to me by Goodreads {dot com} based on the type of books that I had listed as completed. I did not know, going in to it, that it would be a young adult novel, nor that it would be so short, but I found that I "liked it" {tool text for a three star rating on Goodreads} anyway.
This novel follows the life of a young man named Mordecai who happens to be the heir to some-sort-of-nobility-that-is-three -degrees-removed-from-the-king. The fact that I ca...more
This novel follows the life of a young man named Mordecai who happens to be the heir to some-sort-of-nobility-that-is-three -degrees-removed-from-the-king. The fact that I ca...more
There are mild spoilers contained within this review.
Firstly, the good: I liked the story. It was a solid plot line with suitably likeable and hate-able characters. The imagery didn't leave me wondering what the surroundings were like, but at the same time didn't go into too much boring detail leaving nothing to the imagination. The main character had enough flaws to make him believable, but not so many that he was annoying; his self deprecating sense of humor was just goofy enough to make him l...more
Firstly, the good: I liked the story. It was a solid plot line with suitably likeable and hate-able characters. The imagery didn't leave me wondering what the surroundings were like, but at the same time didn't go into too much boring detail leaving nothing to the imagination. The main character had enough flaws to make him believable, but not so many that he was annoying; his self deprecating sense of humor was just goofy enough to make him l...more
The Blacksmith's Son is Michael Manning's first book and it as a really great read. It has some of the traditional elements of fantasy (wizards, mages, runes, spells, hero who doesn't know his power, love interest etc), but the Manning manages to make the story interesting and does a great job with the writing.
The general idea probably feels familiar to anyone who has read sufficient number of fantasy books - hero whose parents were killed when he was a baby, raised in relative poverty, discover...more
The general idea probably feels familiar to anyone who has read sufficient number of fantasy books - hero whose parents were killed when he was a baby, raised in relative poverty, discover...more
Estoy entre las 3 y las 4 estrellas con este libro.
Es claramente una primera novela, con errores ortotipográficos por todo el texto (los vocativos van con coma! -> "No(,) Mort, you use commas after you say no and a name"), intenta torpemente hacer saltos de la narración en primera y tercera persona, cambios del punto de vista de la narración, hay un montón de lenguaje anacrónico "huy, mi magia sale mejor ahora por la adrenalina que corre por mi sistema circulatorio claramente conocido por la...more
Es claramente una primera novela, con errores ortotipográficos por todo el texto (los vocativos van con coma! -> "No(,) Mort, you use commas after you say no and a name"), intenta torpemente hacer saltos de la narración en primera y tercera persona, cambios del punto de vista de la narración, hay un montón de lenguaje anacrónico "huy, mi magia sale mejor ahora por la adrenalina que corre por mi sistema circulatorio claramente conocido por la...more
The magic bits were intriguing. I liked the protagonist's self-deprecating manner (though sometimes it felt like a bit much). But, the way the author chose to describe the world took me out of the book completely. Here's one example why: at no point in a medieval setting would a boy raised as a blacksmith's son characterize a wizard's diary as a "lab notebook" this is because A) high school chemistry labs, and indeed, that kind of note taking, hadn't been invented yet and B) a blacksmith's son w...more
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I haven't finished this book yet and I honestly don't know if I will.
It's terrible. The language is so out of place, it keeps jarring me back to reality. He calls his parents mom and dad, and describes his girlfriend as sexy.
Not only is the language bizarrely modern, so are the attitudes of the characters.
The kid learns magic within about a week. From a book. By himself. The book was magically protected, but a kid who literally just discovered he has powers a day or two ago is able to get to it...more
It's terrible. The language is so out of place, it keeps jarring me back to reality. He calls his parents mom and dad, and describes his girlfriend as sexy.
Not only is the language bizarrely modern, so are the attitudes of the characters.
The kid learns magic within about a week. From a book. By himself. The book was magically protected, but a kid who literally just discovered he has powers a day or two ago is able to get to it...more
Interesting story, some good characters, and an intriguing magic system. I actually wanted to read the intro blurbs at the beginning of each chapter, which I usually find extraneous.
But what an up and down book this was. The very beginning felt a little cliche, but the bulk of the middle was very, very good, and then the author just completely lost me toward the end. One female character in particular made one of those major "huh?" decisions that seemed totally out of character and unnecessary....more
But what an up and down book this was. The very beginning felt a little cliche, but the bulk of the middle was very, very good, and then the author just completely lost me toward the end. One female character in particular made one of those major "huh?" decisions that seemed totally out of character and unnecessary....more
When I added this book to my "To Read" shelf, I did happen to glance at a few reader comments that mentioned some of the "modern language" the writer used. So I mentally prepared myself for a literary version of the Heath Ledger movie "A Knight's Tale," which was set in medieval times but featured modern wittiness, a rock and roll soundtrack, and even had the jousting audience singing along with Queen's "We Will Rock You." Something enjoyable but not to be taken too seriously.
Turns out, the majo...more
Turns out, the majo...more
First of all, my husband recommended this book to me and he has only recommended a couple of books to me in nearly 20 years, so I could simply end the book review there.
This book is a solid fantasy novel. (Which is my way of saying that I am not an expert in fantasy, but I can tell a good fantasy novel from a bad one.) Ultimately, my bookwormish heart belongs more to romance than any other genre and as we all know, fantasy and romance are very often hand in hand.
The Blacksmith's Son (Mageborn #1...more
This book is a solid fantasy novel. (Which is my way of saying that I am not an expert in fantasy, but I can tell a good fantasy novel from a bad one.) Ultimately, my bookwormish heart belongs more to romance than any other genre and as we all know, fantasy and romance are very often hand in hand.
The Blacksmith's Son (Mageborn #1...more
I will admit I was a little aprehensive about this book when I started it. Usually books with crappy covers mean crappy books (and yes I do know this to be a falsehood) but lets be honest. The more a publisher thinks the book will do well the more they spend on cover art!
Now there is one other thing that I also need to remark on: yes this kind of story has been told already, just like every other story out there and that doesnt bother me.
I definitely enjoyed this book more than I had anticipate...more
Now there is one other thing that I also need to remark on: yes this kind of story has been told already, just like every other story out there and that doesnt bother me.
I definitely enjoyed this book more than I had anticipate...more
Readers will also appreciate how Manning handles the fantasy elements in Mageborn. In any given fantasy series, hardcore fans always pay close attention to the rules governing magic. Does the author make the unbelievable... well, believable? In this respect Mageborn doesn’t disappoint. Readers will enjoy Marcus the Heretic’s chapter introductions, where he scientifically details the nature of magic in the Kingdom of Lothion.
The book is not without its flaws. Lord Devon Tremont, the villain, com...more
The book is not without its flaws. Lord Devon Tremont, the villain, com...more
All in all, this book was a decent read and worth the $.99 price tag. I found it to be in keeping with the "typical" fantasy story lines. The main character has no idea is a decent of an magical bloodline that is thought to be extinct. He quite suddenly comes into his power. He goes on to defeat the villain and get the girl. It is all very tidy.
First off, the prologue was not well written at all. The author seemed to stumble about in describing the scene. Just the prologue kept me from reading...more
First off, the prologue was not well written at all. The author seemed to stumble about in describing the scene. Just the prologue kept me from reading...more
The book had a lot of promise: an interesting and fairly original premise and magic system, and some entertaining moments. All-in-all I enjoyed it, and there are plenty of great moments, but the narrative is unpolished. The author re-uses the same expressions and constructs repeatedly and it felt very much like the tale would have benefited from delving much more deeply into some of the peripheral events. Occasionally the perspective shifts but the techniquemis not used consistently enough for i...more
I really enjoyed the first half. The second half I got hung up a bit on some rough spots that could have used some sanding. This is a first book and self published and by that note, it is easier to overlook. And indeed, the likable quality of the characters and the story made it easier to dismiss the rough edges.
I like Mordecai and his self-deprecating personality (though his side comments of "I told you I wasn't good with X" sometimes took away from a good sarcastic comment). I enjoyed Penny an...more
I'll be honest, it was 99 cents on my Kindle. But after being glued to the page while I read the book, I quickly purchased the second and third book of this series. The concepts of magic in this book still retained the same familiar feel of common fantasy magic, but added in a few new twists and insights.
I think perhaps the thing that got me most about this entire series was how raw the emotions seemed to be. I felt everything that happened within the story whether it was joy, anger, or even sad...more
I think perhaps the thing that got me most about this entire series was how raw the emotions seemed to be. I felt everything that happened within the story whether it was joy, anger, or even sad...more
i think i heard about this book from one of the book pages i follow on facebook and i decided to give it a shot
i loved this book so much! its sort of a high fantasy genre and it follows the life of a young Mordecai who is to his knowledge a commoner and son of a blacksmith. he comes to realize that he is capable of seeing glowing runes almost every where he goes. Once he confides in his parents they let him know of his true lineage and and that he should speak to the duke regarding who his pare...more
i loved this book so much! its sort of a high fantasy genre and it follows the life of a young Mordecai who is to his knowledge a commoner and son of a blacksmith. he comes to realize that he is capable of seeing glowing runes almost every where he goes. Once he confides in his parents they let him know of his true lineage and and that he should speak to the duke regarding who his pare...more
First, I barely read 100 pages or so of my edition before giving up. A book has to be pretty bad for me to put it down.
I could not stand the vulgar humour and lewd bends in conversation. These alone would have been enough to make me never recommend the author or pick up the rest of the series.
Then came the graphic rape scene. No more.
Sure, the idea of an abandoned boy brought up by foster parents suddenly displaying magical powers is a neat idea, but a lot of books use that idea. To make a good...more
I could not stand the vulgar humour and lewd bends in conversation. These alone would have been enough to make me never recommend the author or pick up the rest of the series.
Then came the graphic rape scene. No more.
Sure, the idea of an abandoned boy brought up by foster parents suddenly displaying magical powers is a neat idea, but a lot of books use that idea. To make a good...more
I really rather enjoyed this book. It has a interesting story line, maybe little cheesy with how some things line up. A good more traditional magic system. Even though it has a predictable format( I can't seem to find the words I want ), as in who the bests friend are, the story felt original. Some names might be similar to other names in popular books but really you can't avoid everything from someone's work, we don't have that manny words.
The only thing that bugged me and why I gave the book...more
This story had so much potential; but the immature writing style completely ruined the read. This book was written in a confusing 1st person point of view, but without any real insight into who the characters are. There are bizarre narrative details that would have been much better demonstrated through action; the sentence structure is simplistic and repetetive. The simple and immature writing style, and predictable storyline, make this seem to be a YA/tween novel, but there is a surprising amou...more
Mordecai is a blacksmith's son whose life changes when he sends his spirit into a horse to save it from drowning and then starts seeing magic. His friend (the son of his liege lord) convinces his family and Mordecai to help impersonate a noble scholar. Unfortunately, Mordecai makes a powerful enemy by accident and that enemy just might be a mage. Little do Mordecai and his friend realize that Mordecai's true father was from a line of powerful wizards who married a noble warrior.
This book was re...more
This book was re...more
I liked this book fairly well, although the end felt a little rushed and some of the character's decisions not as satisfying. The writing was fairly simple yet well done. I don't hold simple against it - sometimes it's quite nice to have a direct book. The story was overall good, and it was nice to have a first fantasy novel not try to be the epic journey (which I've hit quite a few of lately). The humor was generally good and I did like the writing style with some narrative from an older protag...more
A horrible, horrible book. It somehow manages to take every cliche from the last 50 years of fantasy writing and cram into into one volume. And not in a fun, ironic way. In a "gosh, aren't I clever and awesome for coming up with this derived crap" way.
Even that might be diverting, if it weren't for some of the worst dialogue that I've ever read. To cap it all off, though, the author has no concept of narrative point of view, freely switching back and forth between first-person and omnicient narr...more
Even that might be diverting, if it weren't for some of the worst dialogue that I've ever read. To cap it all off, though, the author has no concept of narrative point of view, freely switching back and forth between first-person and omnicient narr...more
I won't lie, I didn't really like this book very much. I found much of it overly simplistic, and I mostly just kept reading because of some relatively cliched plot hooks. I justified it by saying that my wife was the one that bought it. However, to my utter embarrassment, I found myself buying the sequel, and the sequel of the sequel. This book is still bad, make no mistake, but I am a little glad that I read it, because the next books pick up in quality.
As one of my friends said, often series d...more
As one of my friends said, often series d...more
This is Michael's first published work? What's that mean? That means that it only gets better from here. That is awesome. I think this is a diamond in the rough type of book. Even with the book reviews I opened the book being a little skeptical - its a book by an obscure first time writer. Let me tell you - the reviews were right, the book was good.
Were there some rough edges? Sure. That's to be expected I think. The story was gripping enough to forgive them though. I burned through this book in...more
Were there some rough edges? Sure. That's to be expected I think. The story was gripping enough to forgive them though. I burned through this book in...more
**I shall update this review once i have read the whole series, for now this is just a few quick thoughts upon finishing it**
Ooh this is a great start.
Bit of a weird writing style, i must admit that it took me a couple of chapters to get used to the rushed tone, and the mixture between modern humour and oldy-worldy talking. However, once it got into it, i was gripped. For something that seems so light-hearted at first it quickly became very very dark. I don't know how i feel for Mort's characte...more
Ooh this is a great start.
Bit of a weird writing style, i must admit that it took me a couple of chapters to get used to the rushed tone, and the mixture between modern humour and oldy-worldy talking. However, once it got into it, i was gripped. For something that seems so light-hearted at first it quickly became very very dark. I don't know how i feel for Mort's characte...more
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Michael Manning, a retired pharmacist, has been a fantasy and science-fiction reader for most of his life. He has dabbled in software design, fantasy art, and is an avid tree climber. He lives in Texas, with his stubborn wife, two kids, and a menagerie of fantastic creatures, including a moose-poodle, a vicious yorkie, and a giant prehistoric turtle.
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