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The Pale King
The agents at the IRS Regional Examination Center in Peoria, Illinois, appear ordinary enough to newly arrived trainee David Foster Wallace. But as he immerses himself in a routine so tedious and repetitive that new employees receive boredom-survival training, he learns of the extraordinary variety of personalities drawn to this strange calling. And he has arrived at a mom...more
The agents at the IRS Regional Examination Center in Peoria, Illinois, appear ordinary enough to newly arrived trainee David Foster Wallace. But as he immerses himself in a routine so tedious and repetitive that new employees receive boredom-survival training, he learns of the extraordinary variety of personalities drawn to this strange calling. And he has arrived at a moment when forces within the IRS are plotting to eliminate even what little humanity and dignity the work still has.
The Pale King remained unfinished at the time of David Foster Wallace's death, but it is a deeply compelling and satisfying novel, hilarious and fearless and as original as anything Wallace ever undertook. It grapples directly with ultimate questions--questions of life's meaning and of the value of work and society--through characters imagined with the interior force and generosity that were Wallace's unique gifts. Along the way it suggests a new idea of heroism and commands infinite respect for one of the most daring writers of our time.(less)
The Pale King remained unfinished at the time of David Foster Wallace's death, but it is a deeply compelling and satisfying novel, hilarious and fearless and as original as anything Wallace ever undertook. It grapples directly with ultimate questions--questions of life's meaning and of the value of work and society--through characters imagined with the interior force and generosity that were Wallace's unique gifts. Along the way it suggests a new idea of heroism and commands infinite respect for one of the most daring writers of our time.(less)
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As most of the people in my corner of a corner of a corner of Goodreads know—just as well as they know about my rabid, undying affection for David Foster Wallace—I tend to use Occam's razor to slash through supernaturalistic irrationality on a pretty regular basis. Despite this reflexive skepticism, I couldn't help feeling like this book was somehow written for me while reading it. Working the graveyard shift at a residential treatment facility for "at-risk youth" (the second such facility I'd c...more
As most of the people in my corner of a corner of a corner of Goodreads know—just as well as they know about my rabid, undying affection for David Foster Wallace—I tend to use Occam's razor to slash through supernaturalistic irrationality on a pretty regular basis. Despite this reflexive skepticism, I couldn't help feeling like this book was somehow written for me while reading it. Working the graveyard shift at a residential treatment facility for "at-risk youth" (the second such facility I'd consecutively worked at) and popping pharmaceutical grade amphetamines may have also contributed to such feelings. Of course, I never really lost sight of the breadcrumb trail of rational explanations for why I felt this way, but as I moved on through the book it just kept raising up remarkable coincidences, one after the other, in its numerous references to IL's Cook and Lake County area locales, drug (ab)use and shifting attitudes towards said drug (ab)use, working at a psychiatric facility, shifting attitudes towards intellectual pursuits, and ongoing transformations within big ol' overarching worldviews, and various other details.
During these graveyard shift reading experiences—which made up most of my time with this deeply personal, unfinished swan song—I took copious notes on two pieces of scrap paper that began solely as a makeshift bookmark.


Among these notes is a scattered list of numerous places mentioned that are all very close by and a part of the greater Chicago region, the place I've occupied for nearly all of my life. Continually seeing the name of the itty bitty suburban town I lived in during high school written inside of this book (in reference to a fictional college, but still) was a bit of a thrill. So not only was I able to get the deeper, personal Identification with Wallace's words that I've come to expect and that he's generously supplied me with throughout the years, but so much of it was literally mentioning specific places I've been to and/or driven through, exploring the nature of the specific drugs I was taking at the time, and the ins and outs of the specific kind of job I'd been working at for the last year plus and was sitting at while I read. It all made me feel even "closer" to the man whom I've never met or spoken to and who doesn't even exist anymore.
To quickly rehash what most people even peripherally familiar with this book might already know: it's unfinished and assembled by Wallace's longtime editor Michael Pietsche who whittled down the 1000+ pages stacked neatly on DFW's desk at the time of his suicide down to a about half that size. Pietsche has stated that all together, counting floppy disks, hand written and typwritered bits, etc., the work is originally more like 3,000 pages. He writes a lovely foreword to the book explaining the great emotional pains and the redeeming pleasures of the editing process and I can't think of anyone better to have taken up the task.
Much like Infinite Jest, the more I think about this book the more overwhelmingly detailed and lengthy the review brewing in my head becomes. Looking at the tiny scrawl of my notes isn't helping to preemptively trim this down, neither is thinking about all of the broad, associative ways in which to connect the details of this book and my experience with it to Wallace, my life, and Life generally. Here's the attempt.
In the time leading up to the publication of The Pale King the word on the street was that this book was about boredom and about the IRS.{1} Despite the way this sounds, big DFW fans were still drooling with anticipation, knowing full well that Wallace has a well-documented knack for making the mundane magical. While the book is in part about these things, it's also about so much more. Instead of saying that the theme is simply "boredom and taxes" it does it much more service to say that the book is thematically concerned with the importance of a self-disciplined use of one's attention as a means of overcoming—not only boredom—but the apathy, cynicism and nihilism that triangulate to cause the symptoms of boredom and its close causally-connected relative: depression.
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{1} See message 59 in the comment section for my pre-reading placeholder "review".
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As I was thinking about writing this review it occurred to me that The Pale King is a kind of response to the previous "long thing" (a term DFW used at various times to describe all three of his extended works, i.e. novels). Infinite Jest details the cultural-psychological problems of modern, first world life (e.g. pathological distraction through trivial entertainment and advertising, inter-/intra-personal disconnection, depression, addictive thought and behavior, et al.) and in a way The Pale King is an attempt to offer solutions. The outline of solutions can be found in the now famous keynote address he gave at the Kenyon College graduation ceremony in 2005, which went on to be published in a (somewhat controversial) form entitled This is Water.
The persistent thematic concern with thinking carefully and compassionately is spread throughout these unfinished pages. Wallace is rarely triumphant in tone, but offers his tenative theories with profound earnestness, encircling the demons of unthoughtful selfish self-destruction with both an analytic precision and a provisional caution that is his trademark style of inquiry. The idea seems to be to simply try and think harder about why people behave the way they do and to never fail to indict ourselves in the process. That all sounds very pat and obvious, but that's the best way I can seem to relay it at the moment. In a big way this book just has to be read to really be felt and understood, but I'll do my best to set up road signs pointing in the general direction of the book's powerful content.
Wallace's somewhat self-depreciating use of the term "long thing" to describe his novels is really pretty apt when it comes to The Pale King, moreso than with his first two novels. It may be a symptom of the unfinished quality, but this book is much more of a collection of vignettes than anything one might call a novel. People often say this about Infinite Jest as well, but IJ revisits characters and plots throughout its course in a way that this posthumous production does not. This fact of the matter is not a problem for me in the least, because when I read DFW I'm not in need of the suspension of disbelief that people seem to yearn for a lot of the time. I make the connections to what I know about his life, I imagine his writing process as I read his words, and this is immensely satisfying. That's not to say that I can't feel for the characters-as-characters, because I very much do, but I don't need to know everything about them, or for them to have wildly distinct ways of thinking and speaking. I don't need traditional story arcs laid out before me—I'm accustom to fragmentation, and so is the culture at large—this is a fast-cut edited world we live in, afterall. Chapters in this book aren't even called "chapters" rather the double-S section symbol (§, i.e. signum sectionis) is used both as an allusion to tax code and legal documents, and, I think, as a way of nodding to the largely disconnected narrative structure of the book. None of this is a problem in the least because the content within the incohesive plotlines is solid DFW gold, and there's a deeper, more unusual kind of coherence that ties the vignettes together: it's more thematic and between the lines than a typical novel.
§ 5 is easily the funniest section of the entire book. It describes a do-gooder child that embodies such over the top polite and nerdy perfection that it simply has to be read to be appreciated. I read this section a total of three times before moving on significantly through the rest of the book. One time I read it aloud, something I'd never done with any of DFW's writing before. It was illuminating. I've written before about how I really never notice the epic sentence-length that he tends to go to because I'm usually too wrapped up in the content to notice the lack of periods. However, the run-on nature of his writing hit me hard while reading it outloud. Much laughter was had between myself and the listener, in between large gulps of air at the rest stops of commas and em dashes. The listener had never read DFW but laughed so hard that they fell out of bed. I would direct skeptics and naysayers of Wallace to read this section if they're ever willing to give him a(nother) chance.
§ 8 is one of the most gorgeously written sections of the book. The language might be characterized as more "poetic" than DFW usually is or is usually characterized as being. A trailer park scene as viewed by a, say, Updikean prose stylist. The main characters from this scene are not mentioned again until a taut, dramatic bit towards the tail end of the book.
§ 15 was what prompted my pen to make initial contact with the aforeillustrated scrap sheet of Adderall-scrawl above. This section begins to more clearly define what's happening within the head of IRS agent Claude Sylvanshine, the first character we meet the thoughts of in § 1. A syndrome called Random Fact Intuition is described and eventually attributed to Sylvanshine. The syndrome consists of the suffer ("those possessed with RFI almost universally refer to it as an affliction or disability") being filled with random facts at random times about any number of random things. This is one of the most potent passages in the book. In three pages Wallace manages to distill the entire (now fairly commonly understood{2}) idea of 'the information overload in the Internet Age' down to its essence and to emit a personal SOS distress signal—DFW once said something, half-jokingly, about his trademark headgear being worn to keep his head from exploding.
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{2} I should mention that in the time it took me to find a magazine image about information overload I was distracted multiple times by various things on the internet for probably a good 20 minutes before finally focusing and finding something. Meta-info-overload.
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The section ends with this paragraph:
§ 19 is a brilliant extended meditation on extremely important and more-relevant-than-ever topics about (mostly) American socio-economic-cultural issues as told through a conversation held in an elevator between a few mostly nameless, presumably well-educated characters that work in various capacities for the Internal Revenue Service. Fantastic insights and penetrating questions fill these pages from stem to stern, while hugely complex ideas are made clear and direct without sacrificing nuance and doubt. It's also the first time I've seen the concept of corporate personhood pop up in a novel and brought up with an interesting twist (for the record, nothing in this book is said to extend beyond the mid 1980s):
As the conversation proceeds about how individuals and communities and public and private institutions all interact, corporate power and personal responsibility, et al., one character is led to breathlessly rattle off a stunning, page-long (p. 143) block of text about the inevitability of death, a topic Wallace's writing, fiction and non, seemed to have largely avoided previously for whatever reason(s). It's achingly beautiful in the way such things often are. At the end of this soliloquy of sorts the tone turns on a dime from unspeakably sad and impassioned to this:
This is the most directly intellectually stimulating section of the book and keeps the ledger balanced with neither humor or seriousness toppling the scales, while hearty servings of both are piled high.
Clocking in at 98 pages § 22 is the longest section in the book and comes to mind first as the most rewarding. It's also the most autobiographical from what I can tell. [I just wrote and then erased "I don't even know what to say about it" which is not true. I have many things to say about it. I just wrote the following words down to try and make a sort of outline: Drugs, Attention, Dad, Growing Up. Actually, I'm going to leave it at that because I could go on and on and on about this section and this review's length is already probably testing some readers' endurance and the maximum character count for GR reviews.] I'll just say that this section is amazingly fun and sad and wise, and is the one with the most references to my neck of the woods, and has a great bit about being stoned and watching As The World Turns, and about taking prescription amphetamines being the birth of meta-awareness, and about what it means to grow up, and about the highs and lows of the parent/child relationship, and about shifting one's way in the world from apathetic nihilism to carefully attentive compassion.
Perhaps the most perplexing swaths of the book are two boldly metafictional sections where Wallace addresses the reader as himself. It seemed out of place to me, not just because a Foreword is usually at the beginning of a book, but because since the publication of the magisterial attack/tribute to metafiction that rounds out Girl With Curious Hair ("Westward the Course of Empire Takes Its Way") Wallace hasn't really been so overtly metafictional in-print. I feel like there must be more to it than I realize but I can't quite seem to figure out what that "more" is. The obvious intuitions would be that it's peturbing the sense that the novel exists seperately from the author, all that "Death of the Author" theoretical lit crit stuff, etc, or even making fun of that kind of stuff, ultra-metafictionally. But all this seems far too facile for a man who so thoroughly trounced the pretensions of generationally regurgitated styles and artistic programmes of experimental/avante garde/metafictional techniques as far back as 1989 (in "Westward") or with mind-blowing precision and cogency in this well-known interview in 1993. It's puzzling because he often criticized this kind of thing. The first interruption, which begins with the words "Author here" is § 9, entitled "Author's Foreword" which goes on to claim that "The Pale King is, in point of fact, more like a memoir than any kind of made-up story" and involves a whole thing about the legal disclaimer placed in the copywrite, et al. section of nearly all novels about 'The characters and events in this book are fictitious.' A few pages later the point is made blunty again that "The Pale King is basically a non-fiction memoir, with additional elements of reconstructive journalism, organizational psychology, elementary civics and tax theory, & c." Well, whatever it really is, it's emotionally jarring and deeper than the Nile. There's an interesting bit in this section (which leads into a whole series of musings about writing memoirs for money) about Wallace selling term papers while in college and getting caught and then kicked out, which weirdly enough for this section, is totally made up, at least the kicked out part. The same goes for his claim to have worked at the IRS during a period of taking time off from school. The questions about what's memoirish and what isn't all get very confusing and maybe, probably, that's the point he was aiming for, but despite all of that: within this bizarre framework remain top-notch musings and fascinating storytelling.
§ 46 is a lengthy conversation between two IRS workers at a bar, which eerily alludes to a character's superhuman ability to focus attention (which is obliquely mentioned elsewhere as something that powers-that-be might be interested in getting their hands on—reminiscent of a certain sought after video cartridge in another book) and involves a really moving and disturbing account of mental health treatment and marital disarray.
§ 48 is so bizarre and frightening—it's like David Lynch's darkest, strangest moments all packed into a single scene. Stunning stuff.
There's a section in which each sentence is more or less 'So and so turn another page. Such and such coughed.' Ad nauseum. But nestled within this exercise of banal description is a gem of a phrase "Every love story is a ghost story." This act of watching boredom transform into beauty is a powerful small scale version of (one of) the big thematic idea(s) in The Pale King: that finding things of lasting beauty and meaning isn't always easy. That it takes effort. That "[s]ometimes what's important is dull," as an agent declares during the civics conversation.
This is a weird and beautiful book and its weirdness and beauty are strung together with a dazzlingly complex intelligence at play, all encouraging the reader to exert real attentional effort and thoughtful engagement while still passively getting spoon-fed doses of pure entertainment. There are big, important ideas anchoring this thing, and the details are so rich and amusing and transcendently pleasurable to grapple with that it's the kind of book that can be re-read and re-re-read with exponential gains.
The sadness that permeates and surrounds the book has an obvious source—its lasting and redemptive value is a true gift.
"Every love story is a ghost story."(less)
During these graveyard shift reading experiences—which made up most of my time with this deeply personal, unfinished swan song—I took copious notes on two pieces of scrap paper that began solely as a makeshift bookmark.


Among these notes is a scattered list of numerous places mentioned that are all very close by and a part of the greater Chicago region, the place I've occupied for nearly all of my life. Continually seeing the name of the itty bitty suburban town I lived in during high school written inside of this book (in reference to a fictional college, but still) was a bit of a thrill. So not only was I able to get the deeper, personal Identification with Wallace's words that I've come to expect and that he's generously supplied me with throughout the years, but so much of it was literally mentioning specific places I've been to and/or driven through, exploring the nature of the specific drugs I was taking at the time, and the ins and outs of the specific kind of job I'd been working at for the last year plus and was sitting at while I read. It all made me feel even "closer" to the man whom I've never met or spoken to and who doesn't even exist anymore.
To quickly rehash what most people even peripherally familiar with this book might already know: it's unfinished and assembled by Wallace's longtime editor Michael Pietsche who whittled down the 1000+ pages stacked neatly on DFW's desk at the time of his suicide down to a about half that size. Pietsche has stated that all together, counting floppy disks, hand written and typwritered bits, etc., the work is originally more like 3,000 pages. He writes a lovely foreword to the book explaining the great emotional pains and the redeeming pleasures of the editing process and I can't think of anyone better to have taken up the task.
Much like Infinite Jest, the more I think about this book the more overwhelmingly detailed and lengthy the review brewing in my head becomes. Looking at the tiny scrawl of my notes isn't helping to preemptively trim this down, neither is thinking about all of the broad, associative ways in which to connect the details of this book and my experience with it to Wallace, my life, and Life generally. Here's the attempt.
In the time leading up to the publication of The Pale King the word on the street was that this book was about boredom and about the IRS.{1} Despite the way this sounds, big DFW fans were still drooling with anticipation, knowing full well that Wallace has a well-documented knack for making the mundane magical. While the book is in part about these things, it's also about so much more. Instead of saying that the theme is simply "boredom and taxes" it does it much more service to say that the book is thematically concerned with the importance of a self-disciplined use of one's attention as a means of overcoming—not only boredom—but the apathy, cynicism and nihilism that triangulate to cause the symptoms of boredom and its close causally-connected relative: depression.
____________________________________________
{1} See message 59 in the comment section for my pre-reading placeholder "review".
____________________________________________
As I was thinking about writing this review it occurred to me that The Pale King is a kind of response to the previous "long thing" (a term DFW used at various times to describe all three of his extended works, i.e. novels). Infinite Jest details the cultural-psychological problems of modern, first world life (e.g. pathological distraction through trivial entertainment and advertising, inter-/intra-personal disconnection, depression, addictive thought and behavior, et al.) and in a way The Pale King is an attempt to offer solutions. The outline of solutions can be found in the now famous keynote address he gave at the Kenyon College graduation ceremony in 2005, which went on to be published in a (somewhat controversial) form entitled This is Water.
"The really important kind of freedom involves attention and awareness and discipline, and being able truly to care about other people and to sacrifice for them over and over in myriad petty, unsexy ways every day."
The persistent thematic concern with thinking carefully and compassionately is spread throughout these unfinished pages. Wallace is rarely triumphant in tone, but offers his tenative theories with profound earnestness, encircling the demons of unthoughtful selfish self-destruction with both an analytic precision and a provisional caution that is his trademark style of inquiry. The idea seems to be to simply try and think harder about why people behave the way they do and to never fail to indict ourselves in the process. That all sounds very pat and obvious, but that's the best way I can seem to relay it at the moment. In a big way this book just has to be read to really be felt and understood, but I'll do my best to set up road signs pointing in the general direction of the book's powerful content.
Wallace's somewhat self-depreciating use of the term "long thing" to describe his novels is really pretty apt when it comes to The Pale King, moreso than with his first two novels. It may be a symptom of the unfinished quality, but this book is much more of a collection of vignettes than anything one might call a novel. People often say this about Infinite Jest as well, but IJ revisits characters and plots throughout its course in a way that this posthumous production does not. This fact of the matter is not a problem for me in the least, because when I read DFW I'm not in need of the suspension of disbelief that people seem to yearn for a lot of the time. I make the connections to what I know about his life, I imagine his writing process as I read his words, and this is immensely satisfying. That's not to say that I can't feel for the characters-as-characters, because I very much do, but I don't need to know everything about them, or for them to have wildly distinct ways of thinking and speaking. I don't need traditional story arcs laid out before me—I'm accustom to fragmentation, and so is the culture at large—this is a fast-cut edited world we live in, afterall. Chapters in this book aren't even called "chapters" rather the double-S section symbol (§, i.e. signum sectionis) is used both as an allusion to tax code and legal documents, and, I think, as a way of nodding to the largely disconnected narrative structure of the book. None of this is a problem in the least because the content within the incohesive plotlines is solid DFW gold, and there's a deeper, more unusual kind of coherence that ties the vignettes together: it's more thematic and between the lines than a typical novel.
§ 5 is easily the funniest section of the entire book. It describes a do-gooder child that embodies such over the top polite and nerdy perfection that it simply has to be read to be appreciated. I read this section a total of three times before moving on significantly through the rest of the book. One time I read it aloud, something I'd never done with any of DFW's writing before. It was illuminating. I've written before about how I really never notice the epic sentence-length that he tends to go to because I'm usually too wrapped up in the content to notice the lack of periods. However, the run-on nature of his writing hit me hard while reading it outloud. Much laughter was had between myself and the listener, in between large gulps of air at the rest stops of commas and em dashes. The listener had never read DFW but laughed so hard that they fell out of bed. I would direct skeptics and naysayers of Wallace to read this section if they're ever willing to give him a(nother) chance.
§ 8 is one of the most gorgeously written sections of the book. The language might be characterized as more "poetic" than DFW usually is or is usually characterized as being. A trailer park scene as viewed by a, say, Updikean prose stylist. The main characters from this scene are not mentioned again until a taut, dramatic bit towards the tail end of the book.
§ 15 was what prompted my pen to make initial contact with the aforeillustrated scrap sheet of Adderall-scrawl above. This section begins to more clearly define what's happening within the head of IRS agent Claude Sylvanshine, the first character we meet the thoughts of in § 1. A syndrome called Random Fact Intuition is described and eventually attributed to Sylvanshine. The syndrome consists of the suffer ("those possessed with RFI almost universally refer to it as an affliction or disability") being filled with random facts at random times about any number of random things. This is one of the most potent passages in the book. In three pages Wallace manages to distill the entire (now fairly commonly understood{2}) idea of 'the information overload in the Internet Age' down to its essence and to emit a personal SOS distress signal—DFW once said something, half-jokingly, about his trademark headgear being worn to keep his head from exploding.
____________________________________________
{2} I should mention that in the time it took me to find a magazine image about information overload I was distracted multiple times by various things on the internet for probably a good 20 minutes before finally focusing and finding something. Meta-info-overload.
____________________________________________
The section ends with this paragraph:
"Tastes a Hostess cupcake. Knows where it was made; knows who ran the machine that sprayed a light coating of chocolate frosting on top; knows that persons weight, shoe size, bowling average, American Legion career batting average; he knows the dimensions of the room that person is in right now. Overwhelming." (p. 121)
§ 19 is a brilliant extended meditation on extremely important and more-relevant-than-ever topics about (mostly) American socio-economic-cultural issues as told through a conversation held in an elevator between a few mostly nameless, presumably well-educated characters that work in various capacities for the Internal Revenue Service. Fantastic insights and penetrating questions fill these pages from stem to stern, while hugely complex ideas are made clear and direct without sacrificing nuance and doubt. It's also the first time I've seen the concept of corporate personhood pop up in a novel and brought up with an interesting twist (for the record, nothing in this book is said to extend beyond the mid 1980s):
"Corporations aren't citizens or neighbors or parents. They can't vote or serve in combat. They don't learn the Pledge of Allegiance. They don't have souls. They're revenue machines. I don't have any problem with that. I think it's absurd to lay moral or civic obligations on them. Their only obligations are strategic, and while they can get very complex, at root they're not civic entities. With corporations, I have no problem with government enforcement of statutes and regulatory policy serving a conscience function. What my problem is is the way it seems that we as individual citizens have adopted a corporate attitude. That our ultimate obligation is to ourselves." (p. 137)
As the conversation proceeds about how individuals and communities and public and private institutions all interact, corporate power and personal responsibility, et al., one character is led to breathlessly rattle off a stunning, page-long (p. 143) block of text about the inevitability of death, a topic Wallace's writing, fiction and non, seemed to have largely avoided previously for whatever reason(s). It's achingly beautiful in the way such things often are. At the end of this soliloquy of sorts the tone turns on a dime from unspeakably sad and impassioned to this:
'This is supposed to be news to us. News flash: We're going to die.'
'Why do you think people buy health insurance?'
'Let him finish.'
'Now this is depressing instead of just boring.'
This is the most directly intellectually stimulating section of the book and keeps the ledger balanced with neither humor or seriousness toppling the scales, while hearty servings of both are piled high.
Clocking in at 98 pages § 22 is the longest section in the book and comes to mind first as the most rewarding. It's also the most autobiographical from what I can tell. [I just wrote and then erased "I don't even know what to say about it" which is not true. I have many things to say about it. I just wrote the following words down to try and make a sort of outline: Drugs, Attention, Dad, Growing Up. Actually, I'm going to leave it at that because I could go on and on and on about this section and this review's length is already probably testing some readers' endurance and the maximum character count for GR reviews.] I'll just say that this section is amazingly fun and sad and wise, and is the one with the most references to my neck of the woods, and has a great bit about being stoned and watching As The World Turns, and about taking prescription amphetamines being the birth of meta-awareness, and about what it means to grow up, and about the highs and lows of the parent/child relationship, and about shifting one's way in the world from apathetic nihilism to carefully attentive compassion.
Perhaps the most perplexing swaths of the book are two boldly metafictional sections where Wallace addresses the reader as himself. It seemed out of place to me, not just because a Foreword is usually at the beginning of a book, but because since the publication of the magisterial attack/tribute to metafiction that rounds out Girl With Curious Hair ("Westward the Course of Empire Takes Its Way") Wallace hasn't really been so overtly metafictional in-print. I feel like there must be more to it than I realize but I can't quite seem to figure out what that "more" is. The obvious intuitions would be that it's peturbing the sense that the novel exists seperately from the author, all that "Death of the Author" theoretical lit crit stuff, etc, or even making fun of that kind of stuff, ultra-metafictionally. But all this seems far too facile for a man who so thoroughly trounced the pretensions of generationally regurgitated styles and artistic programmes of experimental/avante garde/metafictional techniques as far back as 1989 (in "Westward") or with mind-blowing precision and cogency in this well-known interview in 1993. It's puzzling because he often criticized this kind of thing. The first interruption, which begins with the words "Author here" is § 9, entitled "Author's Foreword" which goes on to claim that "The Pale King is, in point of fact, more like a memoir than any kind of made-up story" and involves a whole thing about the legal disclaimer placed in the copywrite, et al. section of nearly all novels about 'The characters and events in this book are fictitious.' A few pages later the point is made blunty again that "The Pale King is basically a non-fiction memoir, with additional elements of reconstructive journalism, organizational psychology, elementary civics and tax theory, & c." Well, whatever it really is, it's emotionally jarring and deeper than the Nile. There's an interesting bit in this section (which leads into a whole series of musings about writing memoirs for money) about Wallace selling term papers while in college and getting caught and then kicked out, which weirdly enough for this section, is totally made up, at least the kicked out part. The same goes for his claim to have worked at the IRS during a period of taking time off from school. The questions about what's memoirish and what isn't all get very confusing and maybe, probably, that's the point he was aiming for, but despite all of that: within this bizarre framework remain top-notch musings and fascinating storytelling.
§ 46 is a lengthy conversation between two IRS workers at a bar, which eerily alludes to a character's superhuman ability to focus attention (which is obliquely mentioned elsewhere as something that powers-that-be might be interested in getting their hands on—reminiscent of a certain sought after video cartridge in another book) and involves a really moving and disturbing account of mental health treatment and marital disarray.
§ 48 is so bizarre and frightening—it's like David Lynch's darkest, strangest moments all packed into a single scene. Stunning stuff.
There's a section in which each sentence is more or less 'So and so turn another page. Such and such coughed.' Ad nauseum. But nestled within this exercise of banal description is a gem of a phrase "Every love story is a ghost story." This act of watching boredom transform into beauty is a powerful small scale version of (one of) the big thematic idea(s) in The Pale King: that finding things of lasting beauty and meaning isn't always easy. That it takes effort. That "[s]ometimes what's important is dull," as an agent declares during the civics conversation.
This is a weird and beautiful book and its weirdness and beauty are strung together with a dazzlingly complex intelligence at play, all encouraging the reader to exert real attentional effort and thoughtful engagement while still passively getting spoon-fed doses of pure entertainment. There are big, important ideas anchoring this thing, and the details are so rich and amusing and transcendently pleasurable to grapple with that it's the kind of book that can be re-read and re-re-read with exponential gains.
The sadness that permeates and surrounds the book has an obvious source—its lasting and redemptive value is a true gift.
"Every love story is a ghost story."(less)
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Mariel
rated it
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When someone says something is "universal" I don't always feel like it quite applies to me, or it is some big cliche to describe just what people are used to. The big stuff like young love, birth, taking a crap, death. Sure, that's all universal and it happens to everyone (maybe not young love). Still, I don't think it's a word that I hop to and use to describe stuff like we're all gonna nod and be in the know. Yeah, I get that. Now I say but damn if The Pale King didn't feel something like this...more
When someone says something is "universal" I don't always feel like it quite applies to me, or it is some big cliche to describe just what people are used to. The big stuff like young love, birth, taking a crap, death. Sure, that's all universal and it happens to everyone (maybe not young love). Still, I don't think it's a word that I hop to and use to describe stuff like we're all gonna nod and be in the know. Yeah, I get that. Now I say but damn if The Pale King didn't feel something like this "universal" to me over and over again, like my reading it and getting it made it universal. The "I didn't know other people felt this way" and "I thought I was all alone" and feeling too familiar and then pleased at the recognition. It can prickle a bit like talking to someone who calls you on your shit and manages to sound generic psychic hotline lady (I've never called one of those)/cocky therapist (maybe because people are sometimes generic) and still be right enough to make you feel uncomfortable. I appreciated this feeling about The Pale King the most (maybe something else will get me later in future musings but for now this is it). Something I like to do is try to pay attention to mannerisms of other people, especially if they are around family. If I catch myself doing something someone else does that pleases me even more. I'm really into this self awareness stuff. Bordering the line between too damned painful and looking for patterns in behavior and what is like someone else. It got me when a character finds out that other people take lots of "breaks" when studying (here is a youtube clip from the Uk series Spaced of Daisy the writer taking any break she can think of - even cleaning!- to avoid actually working. That scene is the best depiction of this I've ever seen). The "I didn't know that other people did this". Leaving your own personal area of the familiar and then venturing into what's also familiar, but surprisingly so because you didn't know you would see it there.
Chris the wastoid and his father with their controlled anxiety about not getting there on time. I've had those same exact train platform crazy paranoid fantasies right down to how the dad died. I didn't know anyone else was that crazy! When you are driving on the road are any other driver's paranoid that a woman in a house dress will step onto the road and you won't see her in time to stop? I go through a lot of what ifs. I love to trace mental trains and wonder what led to what. I love to imagine it could stop somewhere else. Chris talks about his shameful past, how his dad must have seen him with his fellow wastoid friends. The painful self awareness. The kind that can stop in time to not do anything about it and come back in time to keep you from accepting yourself enough to feel good. Chris's mental trains must go back a lot and without their '70s speed. I wish I could say I needed drugs to have those moments like Chris does. No weed. I felt that universality again reading it. Self conscious is right on. DFW knows. Two left feet in the mouth.
Meredith's obsession with not being seen how she wanted to be seen and the talking and talking circles around the truth (that old cliche that's true) and doesn't get there because she probably talks about it too much (her husband was right that she wanted to be flattered, I felt). I haaaaaaaated Meredith for a good while. I liked her a bit more when she bothered to see if Shane Drinion was listening, like it mattered what he thought. I couldn't be judgmental after that, at least I didn't wish she'd stop talking any longer. There was no way she had solved her problem from six years ago when she was a teenager and married her husband the dying guard from the psych ward. She was too happy that her beauty could make a man cry and run away. What's the cure? Could it ever be talk? It was fascinating that Drinion didn't have my kind of context when I think I "know" the type and don't want to listen to the "I need to lose weight" spiel again when said person is twenty pounds lighter than I am. Who else could this chick possibly talk to? It would be interesting to not be "you", exactly, when approaching other people's shit. It would be a different kind of a sponge to soak up all the influence and shit in the world. Or facts. I'm not good at facts. I guess I'm like the anti-Shane (other than feeling just as clueless when faced with people talking). I'd be looking and then I'd have to compare for patterns.
Probably not ever a cure, though. I don't have that much faith in the healing powers of talk. Scratching an itch, maybe.
Their ending in the notes made me laugh and feel bad at the same time. I don't like having those cynical observations that a chick is with some ugly guy to feel charitable about herself. I mentally smack myself when I think something like that. That's being an asshole).
Boredom is universal. Tedium is every day. Okay, I read this ages before I read The Pale King. I was expecting it to be different. I don't know what I was expecting but I was expecting it to be hard. Reading TPK to me felt like if you could sit down some place busy (or shut in like an IRS office?) and mind read. Like what if you didn't know what was going to be the important part and you had to process everything. Then the point turned out to be that you took in everything without the point. The boredom and the tedium wasn't what got to me. It was the spacing out and arriving at what feels like it could be important when you weren't really doing anything, like walking or tying your shoes, and you don't really know if it actually is important. I kind of just value that quiet of the thinking without trying, like it could be some kind of peace. I don't feel truly bored unless I feel like I'm trapped, though. Put me somewhere I can't leave and I'm going to be bored no matter what. What's hard is trying to make it all make sense to someone else. Trying to make something of worth out of talk. I didn't mind that it was unfinished. I liked the thinking about it parts too much.
I started reading The Pale King during one of my I can't get interested in anything mood. TPK got me out of it because I read these instances of people not really doing anything but thinking like it could go anywhere. Just don't stick me somewhere thoughtless.
Well, I felt all wise and thoughtful and shit while I was reading it, anyway.
P.s. I forgot to mention that fans of The Pale King's hated benevolent little boy will want to read City Boy by Herman Wouk. I'd also recommend the film Barton Fink. I love this kind of story.(less)
Chris the wastoid and his father with their controlled anxiety about not getting there on time. I've had those same exact train platform crazy paranoid fantasies right down to how the dad died. I didn't know anyone else was that crazy! When you are driving on the road are any other driver's paranoid that a woman in a house dress will step onto the road and you won't see her in time to stop? I go through a lot of what ifs. I love to trace mental trains and wonder what led to what. I love to imagine it could stop somewhere else. Chris talks about his shameful past, how his dad must have seen him with his fellow wastoid friends. The painful self awareness. The kind that can stop in time to not do anything about it and come back in time to keep you from accepting yourself enough to feel good. Chris's mental trains must go back a lot and without their '70s speed. I wish I could say I needed drugs to have those moments like Chris does. No weed. I felt that universality again reading it. Self conscious is right on. DFW knows. Two left feet in the mouth.
Meredith's obsession with not being seen how she wanted to be seen and the talking and talking circles around the truth (that old cliche that's true) and doesn't get there because she probably talks about it too much (her husband was right that she wanted to be flattered, I felt). I haaaaaaaated Meredith for a good while. I liked her a bit more when she bothered to see if Shane Drinion was listening, like it mattered what he thought. I couldn't be judgmental after that, at least I didn't wish she'd stop talking any longer. There was no way she had solved her problem from six years ago when she was a teenager and married her husband the dying guard from the psych ward. She was too happy that her beauty could make a man cry and run away. What's the cure? Could it ever be talk? It was fascinating that Drinion didn't have my kind of context when I think I "know" the type and don't want to listen to the "I need to lose weight" spiel again when said person is twenty pounds lighter than I am. Who else could this chick possibly talk to? It would be interesting to not be "you", exactly, when approaching other people's shit. It would be a different kind of a sponge to soak up all the influence and shit in the world. Or facts. I'm not good at facts. I guess I'm like the anti-Shane (other than feeling just as clueless when faced with people talking). I'd be looking and then I'd have to compare for patterns.
Probably not ever a cure, though. I don't have that much faith in the healing powers of talk. Scratching an itch, maybe.
Their ending in the notes made me laugh and feel bad at the same time. I don't like having those cynical observations that a chick is with some ugly guy to feel charitable about herself. I mentally smack myself when I think something like that. That's being an asshole).
Boredom is universal. Tedium is every day. Okay, I read this ages before I read The Pale King. I was expecting it to be different. I don't know what I was expecting but I was expecting it to be hard. Reading TPK to me felt like if you could sit down some place busy (or shut in like an IRS office?) and mind read. Like what if you didn't know what was going to be the important part and you had to process everything. Then the point turned out to be that you took in everything without the point. The boredom and the tedium wasn't what got to me. It was the spacing out and arriving at what feels like it could be important when you weren't really doing anything, like walking or tying your shoes, and you don't really know if it actually is important. I kind of just value that quiet of the thinking without trying, like it could be some kind of peace. I don't feel truly bored unless I feel like I'm trapped, though. Put me somewhere I can't leave and I'm going to be bored no matter what. What's hard is trying to make it all make sense to someone else. Trying to make something of worth out of talk. I didn't mind that it was unfinished. I liked the thinking about it parts too much.
I started reading The Pale King during one of my I can't get interested in anything mood. TPK got me out of it because I read these instances of people not really doing anything but thinking like it could go anywhere. Just don't stick me somewhere thoughtless.
Well, I felt all wise and thoughtful and shit while I was reading it, anyway.
P.s. I forgot to mention that fans of The Pale King's hated benevolent little boy will want to read City Boy by Herman Wouk. I'd also recommend the film Barton Fink. I love this kind of story.(less)
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Mariel
I'm going to go read it now! I haven't checked my update feed yet. I was scared of all the Girl with the Dragon Tattoo reviews flooding it the past tw...more
I'm going to go read it now! I haven't checked my update feed yet. I was scared of all the Girl with the Dragon Tattoo reviews flooding it the past two days. Isn't that ride over yet?
Brazil is wonderful.(less)
23 feb. 15:34
Brazil is wonderful.(less)
23 feb. 15:34
Jason
"It was the spacing out and arriving at what feels like it could be important when you weren't really doing anything." This.
21 lug. 05:52
21 lug. 05:52
THE PALE KING
I saw pale kings and princes too,
Pale warriors, death-pale were they all;
They cried — “La Belle Dame sans Merci
Hath thee in thrall!”
(In this poem by John Keats La Belle Dame Sans Merci is a symbol of the Internal Revenue Service.)
*
Well, it's an appropriate day to be reviewing The Pale King. Look at today's news headlines, here in the UK. They couldn't be duller!
Plans announced to end confusion over complex domestic fuel tariffs
EU heads agree on new bank supervision rules
Ministers...more THE PALE KING
I saw pale kings and princes too,
Pale warriors, death-pale were they all;
They cried — “La Belle Dame sans Merci
Hath thee in thrall!”
(In this poem by John Keats La Belle Dame Sans Merci is a symbol of the Internal Revenue Service.)
*
Well, it's an appropriate day to be reviewing The Pale King. Look at today's news headlines, here in the UK. They couldn't be duller!
Plans announced to end confusion over complex domestic fuel tariffs
EU heads agree on new bank supervision rules
Ministers criticise banking regulators over RBS purchase of ABN Amro
Okay! Let's go.
Right there on page one, alright, page 3 actually if you're pedantic, and if you're not pedantic then please stay FAR away from this novel, which is a full-throttle celebration of pedantry, amongst many other things, and doesn't have a plot, which I know many readers hanker for, is this :
invaginate volunteer beans
What a lovely phrase. Come on, let's have a few more – on page 5 :
A staggering girl underhanding you nuts
(that's a description of a stewardess on a very small plane!). Another one, a bit longer :
The birds at dusk and the smell of snapped pine and a younger one's cinnamon gum. The shimmying motions resemble those of a car travelling at high speeds along a bad road, making the Buick's static aspect dreamy and freighted with something like romance or death in the gaze of the girls who squat at the copse's risen edge, appearing dyadic and eyes half again as wideand solemn, watching for the sometime passage of a limb's pale shape past a window (once a bare foot flat against it and itself atremble), moving incrementally forward and down each night in the week before true spring, soundlessly daring one anotherto go get up close to the heaving car and see in, which the only one who finally does sothen sees naught but her own wide eyes reflected as from inside the glass comes a cry she knows too well, which wakes her again each time across the trailer's cardboard wall.
I could copy pages of this stuff out with pleasure, about 25% of the book is like that, but we must get on. Hustle, bustle.
One thing novels do, which they've always done, and it might be not one thing but the thing, is drag in enormous chunks of human experience for our contemplation, to try to make some kind of sense of. They set you behind the eyes of a multiplicity of characters, who usually aren't like ourselves at all except in a you are me and we are all together kind of way, and The Pale King is no exception, it is dragging in the subject of stultifyingly tedious deskwork for our edification, which actually means, since also, there is nothing you could mistake for a plot even if you have really poor eyesight and the characters fade in and out randomly, that The Pale King is more like our own lives than a lot of other novels where you get things actually happening and outcomes and motivations made clear and exciting events like kissing and policemen and all that. We will always need novels because we will always need to compare realities, yours with mine and theirs, and because we need to counteract our own technologically-induced solipsism, which you might say is an odd thing to say, since non-readers think of readers as somewhat on the introverted-solipsistic side, but you are not alone when reading, you are the opposite, you're right inside someone else's thought, an intimate relationship you hardly get anywhere else. What you're reading really is what the author thought.
But otherwise The Pale King does pretty much the opposite of all other novels, it's about all the stuff novelists avoid like the plague, it revels in boring technical jargon, it bathes you in excruciating detail, people say shit like "Here they get standard kicks from Martinsburg, plust ESTs, plus exam requests from CID. They do fats that St Louis doesn't even bother to open they're so fat. They do contract work for Corporate Audit when a CA goes multiyear. The whole thing's almost Phillygrade."
I will be frank – if you take the 25% of this novel which isn't like that, isn't all about the hapless wigglers, is about, instead, the bizarre story of the boy who wished to press his lips to every part of his own body (he begins this task by giving himself a spinal injury), or chapter 8 (early life of Toni Ware), all this other non-IRS stuff, what you have there is the beginning of one of the all time great American novels. But that is not the novel DFW wanted to write. Unfortunately for me! He wanted to write this one, or some approximation thereof, since it's unfinished.
Reading and reviewing TPK is a double problem, the same one posed by the monologues of Spalding Gray (which also revel in run-on sentences and "tornadic" presentation; and both witty brilliant men bursting with life and ideas in their art, and suffering chronic depression in their life and presenting us with this painful conundrum) plus the other one you get from Mervyn Peake's Titus Alone and Dickens' Edwin Drood. You just don't know if some sections were first drafts which he would have fixed. One character, for instance, repeats the phrase "Type of thing" so many times it becomes enraging and puerile. But maybe that was his intended effect. And maybe he would have rewritten that section. Another instance is chapter 46, a 60 page conversation between a devastatingly beautiful woman and a complete dork. To steal a line from that well-known sitcom Friends (!I know!), it's not that this chapter is bad, it's that it's so bad it makes me want to push my finger through my eye into my brain and swirl it around. So yes, there are multiple problems with this document called The Pale King.
If I didn't know that DFW intended his novel to be "a series of set-ups for things to happen but nothing ever happens" (DFW quoted by the editor) then I'd be describing the whole thing as like watching a big beautiful bird with a broken wing making numerous painful attempts to get airborne but always crashing back and trying again. Just when you think the novel has found the take-off point, it stops and reboots.
I only found one single bad review of this novel, in the Washington Post, which was saying its publication was merely a cynical cash-in, and unworthy. I disagree. But I also disagree with the reviewers who find traces of grand themes and big points here. I don't think Wallace got that far. It seems this thing would have needed to be another thousand-pager. It's possible he WAS going to make such points as that government bureaucracy is actually a bastion against chaos and not the enemy it is knee-jerkily scapegoated as; that there was a battle for the soul of the IRS going on in the 1980s; and that this battle was joined by IRS wigglers who had curious and very mild super-powers (two such people are mentioned); or that
Almost anything that you pay close, direct attention to becomes interesting.
And surely we are getting close to some kind of declaration of intent in the following great quote from a substitute lecturer :
I wish to inform you that the accounting profession to which you aspire is, in fact, heroic...gentlemen: here is a truth : enduring tedium over real time in a confined space is what real courage is...No one to applaud, to admire. No one to see you. Do you understand? Here is the truth - actual heroism receives no ovation, entertains no one. No one queues up to see it, no one is interested.
And later, on p 438 :
It is the key to modern life. If you are immune to boredom, there is literally nothing you cannot accomplish.
(Note – I have seen that given as the explanation for Stalin's mysterious ascent in the Bolshevik party. None of the other revolutionaries could be bothered with the bureaucratic grinding involved in actually running the party, but he could – nicknamed Stone-arse for his ability to sit at his desk for hours. He could have been a great wiggler.)
So – this could have been a towering novel but what we actually have is a hotch-potch. There are stretches of insanely tiresome dialogues, there are beautiful vignettes, there is deadpan satire and there are really long sentences. Do I recommend it? Well…. You know, what can I say except
Invaginate volunteer beans!
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Some previous notes which can now be ignored.
Half-way!
A Guardian review of TPK said :
. There's a wonderful 100-page monologue in the middle of the book describing a man's quasi-religious awakening from slacker "wastoid" to the high calling of accountancy, after an accidental encounter with a Jesuit teacher. There's a stunning passage about men on a work break: they're just standing outside talking about nothing in particular, but the few pages nail a condition of bleak office-life vacancy with definitive accuracy.
Alas, I didn't find the 100 page monologue wonderful (except for little tiny bits) or the work break chapter stunning. What I did find is that our author by the use of multi-layered irony is able to have his cake and eat it too. In the 100 page monologue the at-that-point unnamed Chris Fogle grinds on and on about several tedious topics in awful and improbable detail (unless he's the reincarnantion of Funes the Memorious, which maybe he is) - his father's dress sense, his recreational drug intake, blah blah - all punctuated with the phrase "I'm not sure I'm explaining this very well" at frequent intervals. His locutions are clumsy, no raconteur is he, a depressing kind of guy with an autistic-spectrum tendency to geek out for pages and pages about IRS procedures and other similar stuff. Then, in the next but one chapter, the fake David Foster Wallace pops up in the by now not unexpected post-modern way and complains about the previous chapter!
I'm not going to be one of those memoirists who pretends to remember every last fact and thing in photorealist detail. The human mind doesn't work that way and everybody knows it...At the same time I'm not going to waste time noodling about every last gap and imprecision in my own memory, a prime cautionary example of which is "Irrelevant" Chris Fogle's vocational soliloquy
"DFW" then calls Chris Fogle a "maundering grandstander" and I'd have to agree with that.
It's not by any means all grim, of course, but the bits where I'm perking up and exclaiming "wow this guy can really write" are few and far between.
**************
First 100 pages - progress report !
I'm getting the very strong impression that DFW was a writer of immense gifts and brains who never really found his thing, his field, whatever you call it, so he ended up writing about any thing he happened to trip over (the non fiction) and then two giant anti-novels - this one's acknowledged "subject" is dull jobs which is a kind of admission of defeat which he then turns into a demonstration of virtuosity - look, I can even write great stuff about boredom. But this can also look like flailing about - this is called a(n unfinished) novel by default, because it's not anything else particularly; but so far it's actually a collection of disconnected DFW writings, some of which are about the IRS and some not. Every chapter in this book so far is in a different style, a different tangent, like a collection of unrelated short stories or riffs. So far it's different and not too difficult. Interestingly, the hardest chapter was far and away the best.
Maybe the rest of the book will tie all this disparateness together but since it was unfinished I'm thinking not. But we will see!
(My cat just poked his head round my monitor and looked at me with an expression which said "are you sure about all this?" No, Hatter, i'm not!
***
Smites brow, emits blasphemy - I just realised I have my own IRS story although as I'm English my run-in is with HM (=Her Majesty's) Revenue & Customs.
PB's STUPID STORY
18 months ago I noticed mysterious amounts were appearing in my current account. Regularly. Every week! They came from the tax office and they were tax credits. I hadn't applied for any tax credits. So I phoned them up. They said "We can't stop it unless we know what account these monies SHOULD be paid into and we won't know that until someone complains." I said well, what are you going to do? they said, we'll be in touch. So - last month I got a letter through the post saying oh, remember all that dough we paid you by mistake, well now we want it back. Total of money paid to me which shouldn't have been : £4026 ($6493).
Well it wasn't my money so i hadn't spent it so I can pay it back but you know, I'm a little peeved with their casual maladministrative ways and who's to know that if I send the idiots a cheque they might lose it or cash it and stick it in the wrong account.
**********
MY UNFINISHED SYMPATHY
Am I really doing this? I feel like a boxer in his corner being checked over by my trainer, checking my mouthguard, checking my gloves, checking if I feel okay – do you feel okay? Yeah boss – are you gonna get this bastard? Yeah boss – well lemme hear you say it – yeah boss YEAH BOSS – that's better, what are you gonna do to this sucker? I'm gonna read it, boss, READ IT – yeah, that's right, you's the champ you know that – yeah boss
Well in spite of my previous run-ins with this much-loved author I do feel all right about The Pale King because
a) as I understand it, it's about really crushingly tedious jobs, so that sounds like something I can relate to on a hormonal level because my job is crunching and titivating databases for clinical trials and dealing with frazzled/frantic nurses on the phone, most of whom have English as their second language, who are calling up because our fucking IVR system has broken again and they have 10 patients waiting very impatiently for it to start working again so they can get their meds and get out the clinic door to their actual jobs, though bless them they don't say exactly that; so it's a job that marries extreme dullness with extreme anxiety – just like the IRS
b) I peeked at the opening sentence and it was astonishingly lovely, that's a very good sign
c) I just read a blistering attack on DFW by none other than BEE, yeah Mr Easton Ellis; so that kind of inspired me on the principal that my enemy's enemy is my friend
d) it's unfinished – so that at the end of it I can say "well, clearly, he didn't have time to cement everything in place so there are many incoherencies here and frankly it's all a bit incomprehensible and I couldn't make head nor tail of it but that's not because of me, no, it's because it's unfinished, see?"
So here we go.
(less)
I saw pale kings and princes too,
Pale warriors, death-pale were they all;
They cried — “La Belle Dame sans Merci
Hath thee in thrall!”
(In this poem by John Keats La Belle Dame Sans Merci is a symbol of the Internal Revenue Service.)
*
Well, it's an appropriate day to be reviewing The Pale King. Look at today's news headlines, here in the UK. They couldn't be duller!
Plans announced to end confusion over complex domestic fuel tariffs
EU heads agree on new bank supervision rules
Ministers...more THE PALE KING
I saw pale kings and princes too,
Pale warriors, death-pale were they all;
They cried — “La Belle Dame sans Merci
Hath thee in thrall!”
(In this poem by John Keats La Belle Dame Sans Merci is a symbol of the Internal Revenue Service.)
*
Well, it's an appropriate day to be reviewing The Pale King. Look at today's news headlines, here in the UK. They couldn't be duller!
Plans announced to end confusion over complex domestic fuel tariffs
EU heads agree on new bank supervision rules
Ministers criticise banking regulators over RBS purchase of ABN Amro
Okay! Let's go.
Right there on page one, alright, page 3 actually if you're pedantic, and if you're not pedantic then please stay FAR away from this novel, which is a full-throttle celebration of pedantry, amongst many other things, and doesn't have a plot, which I know many readers hanker for, is this :
invaginate volunteer beans
What a lovely phrase. Come on, let's have a few more – on page 5 :
A staggering girl underhanding you nuts
(that's a description of a stewardess on a very small plane!). Another one, a bit longer :
The birds at dusk and the smell of snapped pine and a younger one's cinnamon gum. The shimmying motions resemble those of a car travelling at high speeds along a bad road, making the Buick's static aspect dreamy and freighted with something like romance or death in the gaze of the girls who squat at the copse's risen edge, appearing dyadic and eyes half again as wideand solemn, watching for the sometime passage of a limb's pale shape past a window (once a bare foot flat against it and itself atremble), moving incrementally forward and down each night in the week before true spring, soundlessly daring one anotherto go get up close to the heaving car and see in, which the only one who finally does sothen sees naught but her own wide eyes reflected as from inside the glass comes a cry she knows too well, which wakes her again each time across the trailer's cardboard wall.
I could copy pages of this stuff out with pleasure, about 25% of the book is like that, but we must get on. Hustle, bustle.
One thing novels do, which they've always done, and it might be not one thing but the thing, is drag in enormous chunks of human experience for our contemplation, to try to make some kind of sense of. They set you behind the eyes of a multiplicity of characters, who usually aren't like ourselves at all except in a you are me and we are all together kind of way, and The Pale King is no exception, it is dragging in the subject of stultifyingly tedious deskwork for our edification, which actually means, since also, there is nothing you could mistake for a plot even if you have really poor eyesight and the characters fade in and out randomly, that The Pale King is more like our own lives than a lot of other novels where you get things actually happening and outcomes and motivations made clear and exciting events like kissing and policemen and all that. We will always need novels because we will always need to compare realities, yours with mine and theirs, and because we need to counteract our own technologically-induced solipsism, which you might say is an odd thing to say, since non-readers think of readers as somewhat on the introverted-solipsistic side, but you are not alone when reading, you are the opposite, you're right inside someone else's thought, an intimate relationship you hardly get anywhere else. What you're reading really is what the author thought.
But otherwise The Pale King does pretty much the opposite of all other novels, it's about all the stuff novelists avoid like the plague, it revels in boring technical jargon, it bathes you in excruciating detail, people say shit like "Here they get standard kicks from Martinsburg, plust ESTs, plus exam requests from CID. They do fats that St Louis doesn't even bother to open they're so fat. They do contract work for Corporate Audit when a CA goes multiyear. The whole thing's almost Phillygrade."
I will be frank – if you take the 25% of this novel which isn't like that, isn't all about the hapless wigglers, is about, instead, the bizarre story of the boy who wished to press his lips to every part of his own body (he begins this task by giving himself a spinal injury), or chapter 8 (early life of Toni Ware), all this other non-IRS stuff, what you have there is the beginning of one of the all time great American novels. But that is not the novel DFW wanted to write. Unfortunately for me! He wanted to write this one, or some approximation thereof, since it's unfinished.
Reading and reviewing TPK is a double problem, the same one posed by the monologues of Spalding Gray (which also revel in run-on sentences and "tornadic" presentation; and both witty brilliant men bursting with life and ideas in their art, and suffering chronic depression in their life and presenting us with this painful conundrum) plus the other one you get from Mervyn Peake's Titus Alone and Dickens' Edwin Drood. You just don't know if some sections were first drafts which he would have fixed. One character, for instance, repeats the phrase "Type of thing" so many times it becomes enraging and puerile. But maybe that was his intended effect. And maybe he would have rewritten that section. Another instance is chapter 46, a 60 page conversation between a devastatingly beautiful woman and a complete dork. To steal a line from that well-known sitcom Friends (!I know!), it's not that this chapter is bad, it's that it's so bad it makes me want to push my finger through my eye into my brain and swirl it around. So yes, there are multiple problems with this document called The Pale King.
If I didn't know that DFW intended his novel to be "a series of set-ups for things to happen but nothing ever happens" (DFW quoted by the editor) then I'd be describing the whole thing as like watching a big beautiful bird with a broken wing making numerous painful attempts to get airborne but always crashing back and trying again. Just when you think the novel has found the take-off point, it stops and reboots.
I only found one single bad review of this novel, in the Washington Post, which was saying its publication was merely a cynical cash-in, and unworthy. I disagree. But I also disagree with the reviewers who find traces of grand themes and big points here. I don't think Wallace got that far. It seems this thing would have needed to be another thousand-pager. It's possible he WAS going to make such points as that government bureaucracy is actually a bastion against chaos and not the enemy it is knee-jerkily scapegoated as; that there was a battle for the soul of the IRS going on in the 1980s; and that this battle was joined by IRS wigglers who had curious and very mild super-powers (two such people are mentioned); or that
Almost anything that you pay close, direct attention to becomes interesting.
And surely we are getting close to some kind of declaration of intent in the following great quote from a substitute lecturer :
I wish to inform you that the accounting profession to which you aspire is, in fact, heroic...gentlemen: here is a truth : enduring tedium over real time in a confined space is what real courage is...No one to applaud, to admire. No one to see you. Do you understand? Here is the truth - actual heroism receives no ovation, entertains no one. No one queues up to see it, no one is interested.
And later, on p 438 :
It is the key to modern life. If you are immune to boredom, there is literally nothing you cannot accomplish.
(Note – I have seen that given as the explanation for Stalin's mysterious ascent in the Bolshevik party. None of the other revolutionaries could be bothered with the bureaucratic grinding involved in actually running the party, but he could – nicknamed Stone-arse for his ability to sit at his desk for hours. He could have been a great wiggler.)
So – this could have been a towering novel but what we actually have is a hotch-potch. There are stretches of insanely tiresome dialogues, there are beautiful vignettes, there is deadpan satire and there are really long sentences. Do I recommend it? Well…. You know, what can I say except
Invaginate volunteer beans!
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Some previous notes which can now be ignored.
Half-way!
A Guardian review of TPK said :
. There's a wonderful 100-page monologue in the middle of the book describing a man's quasi-religious awakening from slacker "wastoid" to the high calling of accountancy, after an accidental encounter with a Jesuit teacher. There's a stunning passage about men on a work break: they're just standing outside talking about nothing in particular, but the few pages nail a condition of bleak office-life vacancy with definitive accuracy.
Alas, I didn't find the 100 page monologue wonderful (except for little tiny bits) or the work break chapter stunning. What I did find is that our author by the use of multi-layered irony is able to have his cake and eat it too. In the 100 page monologue the at-that-point unnamed Chris Fogle grinds on and on about several tedious topics in awful and improbable detail (unless he's the reincarnantion of Funes the Memorious, which maybe he is) - his father's dress sense, his recreational drug intake, blah blah - all punctuated with the phrase "I'm not sure I'm explaining this very well" at frequent intervals. His locutions are clumsy, no raconteur is he, a depressing kind of guy with an autistic-spectrum tendency to geek out for pages and pages about IRS procedures and other similar stuff. Then, in the next but one chapter, the fake David Foster Wallace pops up in the by now not unexpected post-modern way and complains about the previous chapter!
I'm not going to be one of those memoirists who pretends to remember every last fact and thing in photorealist detail. The human mind doesn't work that way and everybody knows it...At the same time I'm not going to waste time noodling about every last gap and imprecision in my own memory, a prime cautionary example of which is "Irrelevant" Chris Fogle's vocational soliloquy
"DFW" then calls Chris Fogle a "maundering grandstander" and I'd have to agree with that.
It's not by any means all grim, of course, but the bits where I'm perking up and exclaiming "wow this guy can really write" are few and far between.
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First 100 pages - progress report !
I'm getting the very strong impression that DFW was a writer of immense gifts and brains who never really found his thing, his field, whatever you call it, so he ended up writing about any thing he happened to trip over (the non fiction) and then two giant anti-novels - this one's acknowledged "subject" is dull jobs which is a kind of admission of defeat which he then turns into a demonstration of virtuosity - look, I can even write great stuff about boredom. But this can also look like flailing about - this is called a(n unfinished) novel by default, because it's not anything else particularly; but so far it's actually a collection of disconnected DFW writings, some of which are about the IRS and some not. Every chapter in this book so far is in a different style, a different tangent, like a collection of unrelated short stories or riffs. So far it's different and not too difficult. Interestingly, the hardest chapter was far and away the best.
Maybe the rest of the book will tie all this disparateness together but since it was unfinished I'm thinking not. But we will see!
(My cat just poked his head round my monitor and looked at me with an expression which said "are you sure about all this?" No, Hatter, i'm not!
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Smites brow, emits blasphemy - I just realised I have my own IRS story although as I'm English my run-in is with HM (=Her Majesty's) Revenue & Customs.
PB's STUPID STORY
18 months ago I noticed mysterious amounts were appearing in my current account. Regularly. Every week! They came from the tax office and they were tax credits. I hadn't applied for any tax credits. So I phoned them up. They said "We can't stop it unless we know what account these monies SHOULD be paid into and we won't know that until someone complains." I said well, what are you going to do? they said, we'll be in touch. So - last month I got a letter through the post saying oh, remember all that dough we paid you by mistake, well now we want it back. Total of money paid to me which shouldn't have been : £4026 ($6493).
Well it wasn't my money so i hadn't spent it so I can pay it back but you know, I'm a little peeved with their casual maladministrative ways and who's to know that if I send the idiots a cheque they might lose it or cash it and stick it in the wrong account.
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MY UNFINISHED SYMPATHY
Am I really doing this? I feel like a boxer in his corner being checked over by my trainer, checking my mouthguard, checking my gloves, checking if I feel okay – do you feel okay? Yeah boss – are you gonna get this bastard? Yeah boss – well lemme hear you say it – yeah boss YEAH BOSS – that's better, what are you gonna do to this sucker? I'm gonna read it, boss, READ IT – yeah, that's right, you's the champ you know that – yeah boss
Well in spite of my previous run-ins with this much-loved author I do feel all right about The Pale King because
a) as I understand it, it's about really crushingly tedious jobs, so that sounds like something I can relate to on a hormonal level because my job is crunching and titivating databases for clinical trials and dealing with frazzled/frantic nurses on the phone, most of whom have English as their second language, who are calling up because our fucking IVR system has broken again and they have 10 patients waiting very impatiently for it to start working again so they can get their meds and get out the clinic door to their actual jobs, though bless them they don't say exactly that; so it's a job that marries extreme dullness with extreme anxiety – just like the IRS
b) I peeked at the opening sentence and it was astonishingly lovely, that's a very good sign
c) I just read a blistering attack on DFW by none other than BEE, yeah Mr Easton Ellis; so that kind of inspired me on the principal that my enemy's enemy is my friend
d) it's unfinished – so that at the end of it I can say "well, clearly, he didn't have time to cement everything in place so there are many incoherencies here and frankly it's all a bit incomprehensible and I couldn't make head nor tail of it but that's not because of me, no, it's because it's unfinished, see?"
So here we go.
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It was a strange experience reading The Pale King when set against that of Infinite Jest: having entered into it with a degree of trepidation—due to a combination of the novel's unfinished status, the advance warning I'd received about Wallace's determined efforts to capture the essence of (workplace) tedium and graft it within the story's very being, and another cyclically harrowed state of mind—it all made for a dispassionate progression. At no time, as before, did I feel completely enrapt in...more
It was a strange experience reading The Pale King when set against that of Infinite Jest: having entered into it with a degree of trepidation—due to a combination of the novel's unfinished status, the advance warning I'd received about Wallace's determined efforts to capture the essence of (workplace) tedium and graft it within the story's very being, and another cyclically harrowed state of mind—it all made for a dispassionate progression. At no time, as before, did I feel completely enrapt in what was transpiring on the page; I forged near zero connexions with any of the characters receiving a fruitful degree of page time; and, most prominently in the retrospective gaze, not once did I crack a chuckle, indeed rarely became aware of a smile having formed amid the flow of words, let alone finding myself reduced to helpless, tear-pissing laughter as so frequently proved the case with the set piece hilarity of Wallace's wonderful second novel. Which is all to say that on every level The Pale King made for a muted textual passage, a subdued still life as set against the boisterous and carnivalesque roller coaster of the Jest pulled upon an ONANist world.
Not that I greatly minded the difference in the moment, since I was, for the most part, enjoying what I was ingesting at a steady rhythm; but that kind of somber progression built upon its very essence, such that, when I had turned the final page, I set aside this pieced together, final novel from Wallace with a numbness in lieu of the exhausted exhilaration that coursed throughout my frame at the completion of its younger kin. And the very first thought which pushed through the jumble and announced itself was a question: Have I lost the capacity to be dissolved within a novel? It's an odd and plaintive query to have formed, but one perhaps long gestating and brought to the forefront by the changes that have taken place in how I consume books these days. With IJ, the act of reading was one of immediacy, an attunement with story alone; whereas I find that, some four hundred-plus reviews later, I currently make my way through a book with a degree of detachment, analyzing what's before me, making comparisons, taking note of phrases, characters, events, connexions; finding flaws and distractions where previously existed nothing but brushed-aside niggles. I am now ofttimes composing a review as I'm reading, when the old method had no concern for the critical apparatus ere the entirety had been laid to rest. It's not a case of better or worse, but simply different—and I've been circling around that difference ever since. What's more, the lack of firm answers—and troubling nature of the question—has been part of what's blocked me from assembling words into a coherent review. Books are all that I have left. And if the trade is one of a better understanding of any single work, both as an individual work of art and a component of a literary whole, for that unconcerned enthusiasm that used to rev up near the redline, it is enough to give me pause. Which is all of a one with the rather fragmented nature of the following: whether it all adds up to anything or not, I've got to purge myself of The Pale King, that I can move on to different fictional pastures.
I believe that a considerable part of this surprisingly somnolent state was engendered by the fact that I was much more aware of the author as a person—IJ was the very first thing by Wallace that I read, whereas my entry into The Pale King had been preceded by a number of the late author's essays and short stories, as well as a greater immersion within and grasp of his importance to a broad swathe of the reading public; and, of course, permeating it all is the sad reality that he has passed from our world, that a man whose energies were channeled that he might explicate the myriad ways in which we suffer—however inane we deem the roots to be—and how that knowledge could lead to an extension of our humanity, a willingness to commit and dare to be hurt, an opening limned to the spiritual element that resides within every single fiber of an otherwise deadened and deadening materiality, the outreach and connexion available as an ameliorative egress from a suffocating solipsism, could not himself endure another lived moment. That knowledge somehow carried into The Pale King as a tactile disquiet; I had trouble absorbing the succinct opening chapter, with its restrained request to read these. Oh, I would: but accompanied by a sense of the finality and, ultimately, the loss of it all.
You cannot get away from the fact that The Pale King exists as Wallace's long-time editor, Michael Pietsch, pieced it together; it's impossible to know what the late author would have amended or discarded, reworked or introduced, had he lived to see it through to completion. What's been given us is a series of chapter-length vignettes of varying length, temporal reference, and point-of-view, centred around a group of IRS workers in Peoria, Illinois, in the mid-eighties—and including David Foster Wallace himself—of whom a select number display unusual aptitudes and talents that lend themselves, upon one side or the other, to a looming showdown between an IRS old guard believing in the vitality of the human element within its bureaucratic structure, and the incursion of a well-connected team of adepts determined to march the service into the modern era by computerizing, automating, and standardizing its money-assessing and -gathering mechanisms. Operating in tandem with this disjointed IRS theatre is an exploration, exquisitely, almost lovingly undertaken, of the tedium of existence, particularly within the sclerotic confines of a bureaucratized routine, wherein the passage of time is stapled to a series of movements of ordered minutiae both known and capable of being perceived running, in an unattenuated chain, into a second-, minute-, and hour-handed future intuited unto an enervating degree of precision. That Wallace strained to reproduce the thin substance of tedium within the procession of words is absolutely remarkable, and the more so in that, for myself at least, its draining nature was conveyed to perfection while yet never affecting me as regarded the chore of making my way through one thickly measured paragraph after another of that very art. In a moment of pure genius, one of the benumbed IRS workers, Lane Dean, Jr, pictures himself running out into an empty field, flapping his arms all the while: releasing subdued energy? Attempting lift-off from a world of appalling existential demands? Finding within absurdity the existence of a vital human release valve that might allow joy, however bruised, to inflow within the emptied spaces? All of the aforesaid? It's a bit of authorial leavening magic that almost snaps on a page packed to the brim with monotonic and trudging words. The same Lane is also privy to an appearance by the phantom of the Peoria office, a spectral presence summoned when the depths of tedium have been plumbed with such concentration that a level of transcendence is achieved. The ghost proceeds to discourse to a stricken Dean upon the etymological roots of the word boring, having incorporeally discerned its birth within a newly arisen industry and its pressed servant, mass man; a linguistic representation of a drilling into, a hollowing out, worked against the human soul even while its entombing body performs the same actions upon inanimate matter. Being stretched upon the rack of time is, of course, an experience humanity has always possessed itself of—but Wallace here gives a nod to its modern refinements, wherein one is no longer a hunter, a gatherer, nor a farmer, but rather one who simply endures.
Throughout the book, but particularly within the first score of sections, Wallace revealed himself as a writer at the height of his powers. In particular, §8, in which we are introduced to Toni Ware, a quiet and early-steeled young girl living a peregrine existence with her raw-living mother, which meant enduring a steady succession of brutal, coarse, leering men all twitchy with violence and lust, eying the child not as a figure to be cared for or protected, but exploited for their own undisciplined needs, is breathtakingly good. You could have placed it within, say, Denis Johnson's Already Dead, at any point, and it would mesh imperceptibly with the whole. Each of the (regrettably few) times she made an appearance, I was amazed. Having survived a pubescence of routine exposure to insanity, immorality, groping, and blood, she emerges as perhaps the sole character whose dysfunctions are not self-agonizing. Early inured to suffering and boredom and existential anxiety, Toni seems coldly and clearly aware that life is neither promised nor meant to be easy—and when she acts, she does so quickly, efficiently, evincing few regrets or hesitations. Surrounded by sections packed to the brim with self-doubt and self-recriminations, Ware is ice enfleshed; her way of living is linear, not circular. Jack Benny's hardly the man to bring her down.
Which leads to §22, the longest section of The Pale King and, in many ways, its greatest. It's a manner of bildungsroman narrated by an employee of the Peoria REC—a former wastoid going by the handle 'Irrelevant' Chris Fogle—who has taken the request to speak about himself to heart in a way nobody could have been prepared for. It's glacially-paced, peppered with a steady stream of hasty and formulaic qualifications, that the repeated attempts by Fogle to reach deep into the generalized banality of his young, cool-seeking, drug-imbibing, aimlessly-drifting life as the son of a father who always seems to be eying him with disappointment and ridicule, and a mother whose mid-life crisis leads to a lesbian relationship that terminates her marriage, and draw a measure of profundity from that life experience, might not appear so sincere as to be worthy of dismissal or mockery. In the story's unfolding Fogle comes to view his deceased father, and remorse-stricken mother, in a new and fulsome light, trying to piece together where they came from, why they lived as they did—which leads him to an admiration for how his father refused to let recurring disappointment derail him from the responsibilities and demands required of the choices he had made. To the question that torments the modern generation—Am I happy?—Fogles' father answered with a shrugged Whatever. Towards the end Fogle describes how he awoke from his wastoid slumber via a transcendent experience with a Jesuit accounting professor. Having come across this figure through an erroneous understanding of college architecture, Fogle is awoken to the potential for fulfilment within the world of an ordered reckoning of the mathematical figures that render unto Caesar what is Caesar's. A man who seems relatively content with his lot in a life of organized tedium, Fogle's is the first, and strongest, inclination of the potentials within a stultifying boredom for pushback against modern malaise. It's a part of an understanding at play in The Pale King—addressed superbly in §19, a dialogued discussion of US politics in the mid-eighties—that the end for modern civilized man cannot be, perhaps should not be, to live a life of ease without test or suffering—for such will breed its own antithesis. That Wallace is so well-equipped to depict those tests, that suffering, is one of the strands of irony within, and which, of the latter, the author had previously stated as being both a harmful force for a member of postmodern societies and yet almost impossible to extricate oneself from.
Other reviews have excellent summaries of the various sections, which serve to either introduce, often via childhood glimpses, the various personalities involved in the looming IRS internal struggle, or their aligning of means and ways in setting the stage for its undertaking. Wallace tries his hand in a variety of forms, from page-turning subsumption within boredom of a near divine essence, to nightmare panels of voiced chaos and vignettes of a quiet that hum with humor and/or menace. But there's a reason I gave the book four stars, and I'd like to try and get a handle on that below. And be warned: if you thought the above was an impressively portentous amount of pud-pullage, what follows is sure to leave all the came before in the dust.
So it is that everything was trucking along swimmingly until §24, wherein the David Foster Wallace earlier incarnated inside The Pale King—a reflection of the author's substance, not his essence—makes a lengthier appearance, narrating his arrival in Peoria, excruciatingly stretched car journey to the REC, and confused introductory tour of the facility by an attractive Persian known as The Iranian Crisis. I was so utterly absorbed in the Wallacian strength and shine of what had come before—particularly the lengthily and patiently unfolded §22 mentioned above—that the sudden intrusion of Wallace, very meta, very ironic, very purposively comic, jarred me out of that bemused reverie to a degree that I resented. Neither because of its quantity nor its quality—the former was no problem, the latter attendant in abundance—but because of the tone. In the fictive state of mind I had attained up to that point, §24 had no place. As an IRS-themed essay, it would have been marvelous; as a section of The Pale King in its pieced-together existence, in my opinion it simply does not belong. Doesn't fit. Shatters the glass so beautifully set into place, piece by piece, in all that had come before. I'm not normally a stickler for these kinds of things, but it honestly felt to me like an intrusion, a lack of commitment to, or belief in, what had come before: almost as if Wallace felt he needed a tried-and-trusted to glue the whole together. Now, that plaint is directed at this version of The Pale King which the author had no control over—perhaps he would have removed his self-narrated parts. And maybe I'm just digging for a chest that doesn't exist: all I know for sure is that §24 snapped me out of a book-slung reverie, jolted me sufficient that I never quite attained the same degree of fused comfort afterwards.
Which might explain my otherwise inexplicably edgy response to §46, one of the longest sections of the book and which transpires almost entirely inside of Meibeyer's Bar, a drinkery popular with the REC crew, and wherein we are privy to a remarkable interlocution between Meredith Rand, the IRS resident hottie, and Shane Drinion, an artless, perhaps autistic young man with a penchant for speaking a carefully- and thoughtfully-arrived at truth. Meredith, intrigued by Shane's candid persona, unloads upon him a voluminous tale of how she met her aged (and dying) husband when he counselled her during her admission to the Zeller institute, a stay occasioned by the acceleration of her habit for cutting herself. The story, and the characters, were great: what began to eat away at me in the course of reading, and the more in considering it all afterwards, was how Wallace configured it: Meredith, having deep-rooted insecurities about her beauty being the only thing men value in her—and, at a deeper, darker level, the only quality she believes she possesses that is worth offering—cannot achieve a cathartic transcendence from her lengthy unburdening if she suspects the man opposite is maneuvering within it for a pass. As luck would have it, Drinion is incapable of abrading her suspicions at any of the levels she is probing. And that came to strike me as too pat, too convenient; that Wallace used this paradigmatic male, as per Meredith, that he could tell what he was interested in—her story—without having to bother with the complexities and difficulties of crafting ordinary, real people, with all of their hidden agendas and non-copacetic traits—would perforce need to have that tale pried out by means of entwined, messy, sometimes argumentative or hostile or misunderstood conversation, instead of a lopsided, narrative outpouring. In other words, it speaks to us, but only of an us who are nearly non-existent archetypes. It struck me, both in the moment and then stronger subsequent, as taking the easy way out. Abandoning an opportunity for deep revelations as against more of a bout of armchair story-dumping by controlling all of the variables.
Sound ridiculous? Well, that's how unbalanced and interiorized I had become by that point in the story, perhaps dragging far too much of what I (mis)understood from Wallace's fantastic essay, E Unibus Pluram, and believing, in this unfinished labour of love, that he was going to use his mature authorial skills to take me to a different, irony-shedding level. So I was chewing on this one particular nugget of disappointment—surrounded by copious amounts that I loved—working to mine it of something profound, something stirring, perhaps in the process revealing myself as displaying a better ability to think through fictional works. Snagged on a rock and concentrating upon it, at the expense of the gorgeous waters, and riverine scenery, that surrounded me otherwise. And then, blossoming from within a frustrated discontent, the dawning awareness that Wallace had a purpose in this alignment of gorgeous and garrulous young woman opposite a male counterpart incapable of using her loquaciousness as a tool of attempted seduction, or even derailment via sexual fascination shrink-wrapped within fear. Rightly or wrongly, I've come to believe that I had been overlooking the fact, as Wallace most certainly did not, that life is abundant with minor travails that develop an existentially gravitational mass; that the shallowest cuts, when accumulated, are enough to fell us on the quick. That we are so often ultimately brought low by the combined weight of otherwise trivial disappointments, fears, desires, and hatreds—and that the knowledge of their insignificance tends to rendering us helpless to address them at the root until they've become terrifyingly daunting, rooted like a mountain—is addressed by the author through their revelation, in their minute composition, within scenarios oversized in every way. Being put off by the unrealistic nature of a Wallace segment, or believing he should be able to move beyond mining the humor and absurdity into a steady gravitas, is to demand the man address something beyond that which he desired to. With this scene in The Pale King we peel away the grossly-sized whole that me might espy the thousand cuts that led to the (near) death of something dear and vital within Meredith. In other words, I've accepted that this was a case of wishing the author had written a different novel, which is simply a futile way to go through literature even when it isn't a posthumously-assembled work.
And which may all be another generous dollop of Sastrean horseshit. After all this time entangled within the book, its marvels and mishits, magnificence and miscues, I can no longer tell. But here's the thing: every single day, when I arrived home from work, I took in the overabundance of pagewise choice immediately at hand, of which at least a dozen titles were competing against The Pale King—and yet every single time it was the book I picked up, and after but a second's consideration. If I experienced little giddiness within, it was there upon each renewed entrance; and so while it may be that I wasn't, in fact, dissolved within the novel, I am still dissolved, nightly, in reading. And in that losing of myself, I'm still finding all kinds of amazing, life-worthy things. So how about that?(less)
Not that I greatly minded the difference in the moment, since I was, for the most part, enjoying what I was ingesting at a steady rhythm; but that kind of somber progression built upon its very essence, such that, when I had turned the final page, I set aside this pieced together, final novel from Wallace with a numbness in lieu of the exhausted exhilaration that coursed throughout my frame at the completion of its younger kin. And the very first thought which pushed through the jumble and announced itself was a question: Have I lost the capacity to be dissolved within a novel? It's an odd and plaintive query to have formed, but one perhaps long gestating and brought to the forefront by the changes that have taken place in how I consume books these days. With IJ, the act of reading was one of immediacy, an attunement with story alone; whereas I find that, some four hundred-plus reviews later, I currently make my way through a book with a degree of detachment, analyzing what's before me, making comparisons, taking note of phrases, characters, events, connexions; finding flaws and distractions where previously existed nothing but brushed-aside niggles. I am now ofttimes composing a review as I'm reading, when the old method had no concern for the critical apparatus ere the entirety had been laid to rest. It's not a case of better or worse, but simply different—and I've been circling around that difference ever since. What's more, the lack of firm answers—and troubling nature of the question—has been part of what's blocked me from assembling words into a coherent review. Books are all that I have left. And if the trade is one of a better understanding of any single work, both as an individual work of art and a component of a literary whole, for that unconcerned enthusiasm that used to rev up near the redline, it is enough to give me pause. Which is all of a one with the rather fragmented nature of the following: whether it all adds up to anything or not, I've got to purge myself of The Pale King, that I can move on to different fictional pastures.
I believe that a considerable part of this surprisingly somnolent state was engendered by the fact that I was much more aware of the author as a person—IJ was the very first thing by Wallace that I read, whereas my entry into The Pale King had been preceded by a number of the late author's essays and short stories, as well as a greater immersion within and grasp of his importance to a broad swathe of the reading public; and, of course, permeating it all is the sad reality that he has passed from our world, that a man whose energies were channeled that he might explicate the myriad ways in which we suffer—however inane we deem the roots to be—and how that knowledge could lead to an extension of our humanity, a willingness to commit and dare to be hurt, an opening limned to the spiritual element that resides within every single fiber of an otherwise deadened and deadening materiality, the outreach and connexion available as an ameliorative egress from a suffocating solipsism, could not himself endure another lived moment. That knowledge somehow carried into The Pale King as a tactile disquiet; I had trouble absorbing the succinct opening chapter, with its restrained request to read these. Oh, I would: but accompanied by a sense of the finality and, ultimately, the loss of it all.
You cannot get away from the fact that The Pale King exists as Wallace's long-time editor, Michael Pietsch, pieced it together; it's impossible to know what the late author would have amended or discarded, reworked or introduced, had he lived to see it through to completion. What's been given us is a series of chapter-length vignettes of varying length, temporal reference, and point-of-view, centred around a group of IRS workers in Peoria, Illinois, in the mid-eighties—and including David Foster Wallace himself—of whom a select number display unusual aptitudes and talents that lend themselves, upon one side or the other, to a looming showdown between an IRS old guard believing in the vitality of the human element within its bureaucratic structure, and the incursion of a well-connected team of adepts determined to march the service into the modern era by computerizing, automating, and standardizing its money-assessing and -gathering mechanisms. Operating in tandem with this disjointed IRS theatre is an exploration, exquisitely, almost lovingly undertaken, of the tedium of existence, particularly within the sclerotic confines of a bureaucratized routine, wherein the passage of time is stapled to a series of movements of ordered minutiae both known and capable of being perceived running, in an unattenuated chain, into a second-, minute-, and hour-handed future intuited unto an enervating degree of precision. That Wallace strained to reproduce the thin substance of tedium within the procession of words is absolutely remarkable, and the more so in that, for myself at least, its draining nature was conveyed to perfection while yet never affecting me as regarded the chore of making my way through one thickly measured paragraph after another of that very art. In a moment of pure genius, one of the benumbed IRS workers, Lane Dean, Jr, pictures himself running out into an empty field, flapping his arms all the while: releasing subdued energy? Attempting lift-off from a world of appalling existential demands? Finding within absurdity the existence of a vital human release valve that might allow joy, however bruised, to inflow within the emptied spaces? All of the aforesaid? It's a bit of authorial leavening magic that almost snaps on a page packed to the brim with monotonic and trudging words. The same Lane is also privy to an appearance by the phantom of the Peoria office, a spectral presence summoned when the depths of tedium have been plumbed with such concentration that a level of transcendence is achieved. The ghost proceeds to discourse to a stricken Dean upon the etymological roots of the word boring, having incorporeally discerned its birth within a newly arisen industry and its pressed servant, mass man; a linguistic representation of a drilling into, a hollowing out, worked against the human soul even while its entombing body performs the same actions upon inanimate matter. Being stretched upon the rack of time is, of course, an experience humanity has always possessed itself of—but Wallace here gives a nod to its modern refinements, wherein one is no longer a hunter, a gatherer, nor a farmer, but rather one who simply endures.
Throughout the book, but particularly within the first score of sections, Wallace revealed himself as a writer at the height of his powers. In particular, §8, in which we are introduced to Toni Ware, a quiet and early-steeled young girl living a peregrine existence with her raw-living mother, which meant enduring a steady succession of brutal, coarse, leering men all twitchy with violence and lust, eying the child not as a figure to be cared for or protected, but exploited for their own undisciplined needs, is breathtakingly good. You could have placed it within, say, Denis Johnson's Already Dead, at any point, and it would mesh imperceptibly with the whole. Each of the (regrettably few) times she made an appearance, I was amazed. Having survived a pubescence of routine exposure to insanity, immorality, groping, and blood, she emerges as perhaps the sole character whose dysfunctions are not self-agonizing. Early inured to suffering and boredom and existential anxiety, Toni seems coldly and clearly aware that life is neither promised nor meant to be easy—and when she acts, she does so quickly, efficiently, evincing few regrets or hesitations. Surrounded by sections packed to the brim with self-doubt and self-recriminations, Ware is ice enfleshed; her way of living is linear, not circular. Jack Benny's hardly the man to bring her down.
Which leads to §22, the longest section of The Pale King and, in many ways, its greatest. It's a manner of bildungsroman narrated by an employee of the Peoria REC—a former wastoid going by the handle 'Irrelevant' Chris Fogle—who has taken the request to speak about himself to heart in a way nobody could have been prepared for. It's glacially-paced, peppered with a steady stream of hasty and formulaic qualifications, that the repeated attempts by Fogle to reach deep into the generalized banality of his young, cool-seeking, drug-imbibing, aimlessly-drifting life as the son of a father who always seems to be eying him with disappointment and ridicule, and a mother whose mid-life crisis leads to a lesbian relationship that terminates her marriage, and draw a measure of profundity from that life experience, might not appear so sincere as to be worthy of dismissal or mockery. In the story's unfolding Fogle comes to view his deceased father, and remorse-stricken mother, in a new and fulsome light, trying to piece together where they came from, why they lived as they did—which leads him to an admiration for how his father refused to let recurring disappointment derail him from the responsibilities and demands required of the choices he had made. To the question that torments the modern generation—Am I happy?—Fogles' father answered with a shrugged Whatever. Towards the end Fogle describes how he awoke from his wastoid slumber via a transcendent experience with a Jesuit accounting professor. Having come across this figure through an erroneous understanding of college architecture, Fogle is awoken to the potential for fulfilment within the world of an ordered reckoning of the mathematical figures that render unto Caesar what is Caesar's. A man who seems relatively content with his lot in a life of organized tedium, Fogle's is the first, and strongest, inclination of the potentials within a stultifying boredom for pushback against modern malaise. It's a part of an understanding at play in The Pale King—addressed superbly in §19, a dialogued discussion of US politics in the mid-eighties—that the end for modern civilized man cannot be, perhaps should not be, to live a life of ease without test or suffering—for such will breed its own antithesis. That Wallace is so well-equipped to depict those tests, that suffering, is one of the strands of irony within, and which, of the latter, the author had previously stated as being both a harmful force for a member of postmodern societies and yet almost impossible to extricate oneself from.
Other reviews have excellent summaries of the various sections, which serve to either introduce, often via childhood glimpses, the various personalities involved in the looming IRS internal struggle, or their aligning of means and ways in setting the stage for its undertaking. Wallace tries his hand in a variety of forms, from page-turning subsumption within boredom of a near divine essence, to nightmare panels of voiced chaos and vignettes of a quiet that hum with humor and/or menace. But there's a reason I gave the book four stars, and I'd like to try and get a handle on that below. And be warned: if you thought the above was an impressively portentous amount of pud-pullage, what follows is sure to leave all the came before in the dust.
So it is that everything was trucking along swimmingly until §24, wherein the David Foster Wallace earlier incarnated inside The Pale King—a reflection of the author's substance, not his essence—makes a lengthier appearance, narrating his arrival in Peoria, excruciatingly stretched car journey to the REC, and confused introductory tour of the facility by an attractive Persian known as The Iranian Crisis. I was so utterly absorbed in the Wallacian strength and shine of what had come before—particularly the lengthily and patiently unfolded §22 mentioned above—that the sudden intrusion of Wallace, very meta, very ironic, very purposively comic, jarred me out of that bemused reverie to a degree that I resented. Neither because of its quantity nor its quality—the former was no problem, the latter attendant in abundance—but because of the tone. In the fictive state of mind I had attained up to that point, §24 had no place. As an IRS-themed essay, it would have been marvelous; as a section of The Pale King in its pieced-together existence, in my opinion it simply does not belong. Doesn't fit. Shatters the glass so beautifully set into place, piece by piece, in all that had come before. I'm not normally a stickler for these kinds of things, but it honestly felt to me like an intrusion, a lack of commitment to, or belief in, what had come before: almost as if Wallace felt he needed a tried-and-trusted to glue the whole together. Now, that plaint is directed at this version of The Pale King which the author had no control over—perhaps he would have removed his self-narrated parts. And maybe I'm just digging for a chest that doesn't exist: all I know for sure is that §24 snapped me out of a book-slung reverie, jolted me sufficient that I never quite attained the same degree of fused comfort afterwards.
Which might explain my otherwise inexplicably edgy response to §46, one of the longest sections of the book and which transpires almost entirely inside of Meibeyer's Bar, a drinkery popular with the REC crew, and wherein we are privy to a remarkable interlocution between Meredith Rand, the IRS resident hottie, and Shane Drinion, an artless, perhaps autistic young man with a penchant for speaking a carefully- and thoughtfully-arrived at truth. Meredith, intrigued by Shane's candid persona, unloads upon him a voluminous tale of how she met her aged (and dying) husband when he counselled her during her admission to the Zeller institute, a stay occasioned by the acceleration of her habit for cutting herself. The story, and the characters, were great: what began to eat away at me in the course of reading, and the more in considering it all afterwards, was how Wallace configured it: Meredith, having deep-rooted insecurities about her beauty being the only thing men value in her—and, at a deeper, darker level, the only quality she believes she possesses that is worth offering—cannot achieve a cathartic transcendence from her lengthy unburdening if she suspects the man opposite is maneuvering within it for a pass. As luck would have it, Drinion is incapable of abrading her suspicions at any of the levels she is probing. And that came to strike me as too pat, too convenient; that Wallace used this paradigmatic male, as per Meredith, that he could tell what he was interested in—her story—without having to bother with the complexities and difficulties of crafting ordinary, real people, with all of their hidden agendas and non-copacetic traits—would perforce need to have that tale pried out by means of entwined, messy, sometimes argumentative or hostile or misunderstood conversation, instead of a lopsided, narrative outpouring. In other words, it speaks to us, but only of an us who are nearly non-existent archetypes. It struck me, both in the moment and then stronger subsequent, as taking the easy way out. Abandoning an opportunity for deep revelations as against more of a bout of armchair story-dumping by controlling all of the variables.
Sound ridiculous? Well, that's how unbalanced and interiorized I had become by that point in the story, perhaps dragging far too much of what I (mis)understood from Wallace's fantastic essay, E Unibus Pluram, and believing, in this unfinished labour of love, that he was going to use his mature authorial skills to take me to a different, irony-shedding level. So I was chewing on this one particular nugget of disappointment—surrounded by copious amounts that I loved—working to mine it of something profound, something stirring, perhaps in the process revealing myself as displaying a better ability to think through fictional works. Snagged on a rock and concentrating upon it, at the expense of the gorgeous waters, and riverine scenery, that surrounded me otherwise. And then, blossoming from within a frustrated discontent, the dawning awareness that Wallace had a purpose in this alignment of gorgeous and garrulous young woman opposite a male counterpart incapable of using her loquaciousness as a tool of attempted seduction, or even derailment via sexual fascination shrink-wrapped within fear. Rightly or wrongly, I've come to believe that I had been overlooking the fact, as Wallace most certainly did not, that life is abundant with minor travails that develop an existentially gravitational mass; that the shallowest cuts, when accumulated, are enough to fell us on the quick. That we are so often ultimately brought low by the combined weight of otherwise trivial disappointments, fears, desires, and hatreds—and that the knowledge of their insignificance tends to rendering us helpless to address them at the root until they've become terrifyingly daunting, rooted like a mountain—is addressed by the author through their revelation, in their minute composition, within scenarios oversized in every way. Being put off by the unrealistic nature of a Wallace segment, or believing he should be able to move beyond mining the humor and absurdity into a steady gravitas, is to demand the man address something beyond that which he desired to. With this scene in The Pale King we peel away the grossly-sized whole that me might espy the thousand cuts that led to the (near) death of something dear and vital within Meredith. In other words, I've accepted that this was a case of wishing the author had written a different novel, which is simply a futile way to go through literature even when it isn't a posthumously-assembled work.
And which may all be another generous dollop of Sastrean horseshit. After all this time entangled within the book, its marvels and mishits, magnificence and miscues, I can no longer tell. But here's the thing: every single day, when I arrived home from work, I took in the overabundance of pagewise choice immediately at hand, of which at least a dozen titles were competing against The Pale King—and yet every single time it was the book I picked up, and after but a second's consideration. If I experienced little giddiness within, it was there upon each renewed entrance; and so while it may be that I wasn't, in fact, dissolved within the novel, I am still dissolved, nightly, in reading. And in that losing of myself, I'm still finding all kinds of amazing, life-worthy things. So how about that?(less)
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Chris
Sorry, Ian, I've been remiss in checking back into this thread.
Character limits have forced me to do the same daunting task of going back and trimming...more Sorry, Ian, I've been remiss in checking back into this thread.
Character limits have forced me to do the same daunting task of going back and trimming the word count: what I'm often reduced to is eliminating italic brackets or HTML code, so that I can squeeze it all in without that annoying and harshly red voice of GR demanding that the shears be further wielded. No word of a lie, when I had finished this puppy and posted it, I had three character spaces available. That's about as close a word shave as you can get...(less)
updated 16 apr. 15:48
Character limits have forced me to do the same daunting task of going back and trimming...more Sorry, Ian, I've been remiss in checking back into this thread.
Character limits have forced me to do the same daunting task of going back and trimming the word count: what I'm often reduced to is eliminating italic brackets or HTML code, so that I can squeeze it all in without that annoying and harshly red voice of GR demanding that the shears be further wielded. No word of a lie, when I had finished this puppy and posted it, I had three character spaces available. That's about as close a word shave as you can get...(less)
updated 16 apr. 15:48
Ian Graye
I was fascinated to read on one of MJ's threads this morning that he sets himself a limit of ten minutes to write a review. That makes me respect his...more
I was fascinated to read on one of MJ's threads this morning that he sets himself a limit of ten minutes to write a review. That makes me respect his reviews even more.
Brevity is a funny beast. I think there's a difference between what you want to say and how long it takes you to say it (i.e., on a point by point basis).
I think my problem is that I want to say too many discrete things. I'm reluctant to edit further, because I'm already conscious of what I already omitted, by not writing about it at all.
I used to write 70 and 200 word reviews for the press, and loved the discipline.
With my personal canon, I like to spread out a little bit.
Oops, I've gone on too long again...(less)
16 apr. 16:01
Brevity is a funny beast. I think there's a difference between what you want to say and how long it takes you to say it (i.e., on a point by point basis).
I think my problem is that I want to say too many discrete things. I'm reluctant to edit further, because I'm already conscious of what I already omitted, by not writing about it at all.
I used to write 70 and 200 word reviews for the press, and loved the discipline.
With my personal canon, I like to spread out a little bit.
Oops, I've gone on too long again...(less)
16 apr. 16:01
As you know I have a lot of difficulty with DFW. I find him difficult! Also exasperating, brilliant, funny, also thinking he’s funnier than he is, also no doubt a genius writer, all of that, and virtually impossible. A difficult case. So I came across a review of The Pale King in the Sunday Times by Theo Tait which explains the problem with DFW. As the Sunday Times is part of the Evil Murdoch Empire and is no longer free online, I thought I would excerpt the best bits as a service I am happy to...more
As you know I have a lot of difficulty with DFW. I find him difficult! Also exasperating, brilliant, funny, also thinking he’s funnier than he is, also no doubt a genius writer, all of that, and virtually impossible. A difficult case. So I came across a review of The Pale King in the Sunday Times by Theo Tait which explains the problem with DFW. As the Sunday Times is part of the Evil Murdoch Empire and is no longer free online, I thought I would excerpt the best bits as a service I am happy to render to all goodreading DFW fans and fence-sitters alike:
“The novel contains a mass of technical detail and jargon about tax collection; satire about bureaucracy; digressions on work, routine and boredom; miniature treatises on ‘organisational psychology, elementary civics and tax theory’; ghost stories; minutely detailed traffic jams; and long passionate descriptions of the acountant’s vocation. All this is executed in Wallace’s unmistakable style, with ultra-long sentences that in some cases cover more than four pages; footnotes; footnotes within footnotes; brackets within brackets; and many ‘cute self-referential paradoxes’. (One of the narrators is David Foster Wallace writing his memoir of working in the IRS, which he claims is 100% true, but obviously isn’t.) Plots and characters emerge from nowhere and disappear back into it. This is partly because the novel is unfinished… but Wallace’s other novels are also, by conventional standards, unfinished.
Wallace, in short, is a fairly maddening writer. His career illustrates an intriguing paradox: that it is possible for an American novelist to have a mighty critical reputation and to sell books in large numbers – while being pretty much unreadable and indeed unread on a huge scale (I know only one person who actually claims to have finished Infinite Jest). And The Pale King seems to me like its predecessors to be fundamentally wrong-headed, a deeply unserious endeavour undertaken in a deeply serious fashion – or perhaps it is vice versa, I find it hard to tell.
Which is not to say Wallace’s reputation is undeserved. On the contrary, I would say his almost certainly a genius… [great praise for his style follows]… but whereas the style is mostly an immediate pleasure in his nonfiction, his novels come replete with thich wodges of hyper-detailed, impenetrable prose up front, like keep-out signs. They seem to be aimed primarily at literature students or other writers, rather than your average paying customer. I read The Pale King in a week when as it happened I has practically nothing to do. And after some desperate struggling early on, I began not just to enjoy it, but in places to love it… but if I had read it for fun in the course of a normal life, snatching a bleary half hour before bed or on public transport, there is no doubt at all : I would have thrown in the towel around page 50.”
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“The novel contains a mass of technical detail and jargon about tax collection; satire about bureaucracy; digressions on work, routine and boredom; miniature treatises on ‘organisational psychology, elementary civics and tax theory’; ghost stories; minutely detailed traffic jams; and long passionate descriptions of the acountant’s vocation. All this is executed in Wallace’s unmistakable style, with ultra-long sentences that in some cases cover more than four pages; footnotes; footnotes within footnotes; brackets within brackets; and many ‘cute self-referential paradoxes’. (One of the narrators is David Foster Wallace writing his memoir of working in the IRS, which he claims is 100% true, but obviously isn’t.) Plots and characters emerge from nowhere and disappear back into it. This is partly because the novel is unfinished… but Wallace’s other novels are also, by conventional standards, unfinished.
Wallace, in short, is a fairly maddening writer. His career illustrates an intriguing paradox: that it is possible for an American novelist to have a mighty critical reputation and to sell books in large numbers – while being pretty much unreadable and indeed unread on a huge scale (I know only one person who actually claims to have finished Infinite Jest). And The Pale King seems to me like its predecessors to be fundamentally wrong-headed, a deeply unserious endeavour undertaken in a deeply serious fashion – or perhaps it is vice versa, I find it hard to tell.
Which is not to say Wallace’s reputation is undeserved. On the contrary, I would say his almost certainly a genius… [great praise for his style follows]… but whereas the style is mostly an immediate pleasure in his nonfiction, his novels come replete with thich wodges of hyper-detailed, impenetrable prose up front, like keep-out signs. They seem to be aimed primarily at literature students or other writers, rather than your average paying customer. I read The Pale King in a week when as it happened I has practically nothing to do. And after some desperate struggling early on, I began not just to enjoy it, but in places to love it… but if I had read it for fun in the course of a normal life, snatching a bleary half hour before bed or on public transport, there is no doubt at all : I would have thrown in the towel around page 50.”
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What renders a truth meaningful, worthwhile, & c. is its relevance, which in turn requires extraordinary discernment and sensitivity to context, questions of value, and overall point-otherwise we might as well all just be computers downloading raw data to one another.
In the interest of full disclosure as a 'novel' this work is not five-stars. As a collection of chapters, stories, asides and footnotes it is quite close to being five stars.
I have no idea how to review this.
I'm more than a li...more What renders a truth meaningful, worthwhile, & c. is its relevance, which in turn requires extraordinary discernment and sensitivity to context, questions of value, and overall point-otherwise we might as well all just be computers downloading raw data to one another.
In the interest of full disclosure as a 'novel' this work is not five-stars. As a collection of chapters, stories, asides and footnotes it is quite close to being five stars.
I have no idea how to review this.
I'm more than a little surprised at myself for reading it. I haven't been able to bring myself to finish the stories in Oblivion because of the finality I seem to feel hovering around finishing any of the DFW works that I had been saving for those long dry periods between his work when he died. Pale King I had the feeling would be the work that would forever linger unread on a bookshelf.
Then I got the urge to read it as soon as it came out in paperback. I would read the paperback (thus buying the book new twice, which is fine, but I would feel even more uncomfortable reading the hardcover because of weird feelings I have towards the physicality of books and the admittedly arbitrary fact of a book having a one in the printing history located on the verso title page causing me to handle the book like it's a delicate object, worrying about any damage it might receive and being fearful of underlining the book or doing anything to it that does more than the minimal damage necessary to the book from reading it. If you are one of those heathens who reads a book and makes it look like it's been through a war with duct tape holding it together and the pages puffed out from dropping it in puddles and all of that, please keep your opinion to yourself about my admittedly arbitrary analness when it comes to certain books and their treatment). The paperback that I would have no trouble underlining in, marking up, writing notes and having a grand old time with. For three or four days I eagerly awaited the arrival of the paperback Pale King into the store. The book was in the warehouse at the start of the week (Tuesday) but didn't arrive in the store until the Bookazine delivery on Friday afternoon. I checked almost hourly during that time on Bookmaster to see if the book had arrived. I was ready for it (and I bought the book during my five o'clock break on Friday, a time I never buy books at, about an hour and a half after the book arrived in the store, but because I had promised to read The Night Circus for Karen's Reader's Advisory group read I didn't get to start the book until Monday, this caused me a certain amount of psychological discomfort, mostly because I was afraid my resolve at actually reading the book would disappear after actually owning the book for a few days if I didn't start it ASAP. I was fairly worried about this, but the worries ended up being unfounded (obviously)).
And I read it.
A few days later.
--(I sat down to write this review a few days after I sat down to write the review a day or so after I sat down to write the review immediately following when I finished the book. Now I'm deleting just about everything I've written up until point, except for the very boring story above about how I came to read the book at the present time.
The above story, in all it's stupidness is seriously what it's kind of like being in my head or spending anytime around me. I'm very uninteresting, boring and tedious, but most likely you don't know this because a) you don't actually have to spend anytime around me because or b) if you do spend anytime around me I don't say very much and keep the boring crap inside me.
Seriously, is that story anything you would tell someone? And for me that was probably one of the more interesting things that happened to me during my working week (Sundays not included, that is the one day that is more interesting, but only because of Karen).
Again, seriously, because this is oh so serious, why would I share that stupid story? I don't know. Maybe because I believe, like everyone else(?), that the daily minutia of my life is so important that it must be as captivating to others as it is to me? You know, sort of like everyone thinks that their dreams (the ones they have when they are asleep) are so interesting but they never really are that interesting to anyone you tell them to? Why flood the world with some more bits of non-essential information, why subject you to having to be exposed to this non-essential data and force you to shift through it to come to the point that you've just been exposed to some stuff that you didn't need to know about and now you are being exposed to even more non-essential data that is being gratuitously added to an already uninteresting mess. Is it some attempt for me to get your sympathy ("No, Greg you aren't boring, you're liked, I look forward to reading about the mundane details of your life, please share more."), or to try to be understood, to communicate in some way with some people from my real life and a handful of relative strangers? (To evoke some kind of empathy? To feel less isolated and alone and convince myself in someway that any of the stupid bullshit I feel is shared by others who are similar (even if paradoxically different) from myself*), or for some other reason. (I get the feeling...that what you're imparting might be unclear or uninteresting and must get recast and resaid in my different ways to assure yourself that the listener really understands you (504))** )--
11:44 pm. Sunday April 15th, 2012.
All of this stuff has been worked on Tax Day, one year after The Pale King was released. The story at the start of the review was written earlier in the week, but all of the cutting up of my worked on review, the notes and asides and general self-deprecating that I seemed to need to share in order to get to this point was done at various times during this evening. I need to write this review because it's looming over me, it's making me anxious/depressed and feeling like I never want to write another review again. I don't want to take these feelings with me when I go to visit my parents tomorrow, and I rarely write reviews when I'm at their house so I just want to get this done now.
Besides it's fitting to finish this review on Tax Day, right?
If you made it this far in the review and are looking for an actual review of the book you should just stop reading now. It's not going to happen. MFSO has written a very good review / thoughts on the book and I'd recommend you read (or re-read) his review in place of mine. I agree with a lot of what he says and he writes in a clearer manner than I do.
Some of these chapters are just about the best writing DFW ever had published. Some of the chapters make no sense and I can only believe that they would have fit in with the overall structure of the book if it had been finished, or else not been included.
I read the paperback copy (as I've already stated above), so I had the 'extra scenes'. I'm more than a little baffled about why the longish bonus scene about a man planning to take time off work to watch every minute of broadcast television for the month of May isn't in the actual book. It stars mostly characters that never appear in any of the other chapters, but there are quite a few chapters with characters that never show up again and which are wonderful creations that were probably going to be like the great one-off characters in certain Infinite Jest sections or else that might have been developed further if the book had actually been finished. I'd recommend reading those extra scenes. I'd also recommend reading the notes for the various chapters, they sort of fill in what the finished novel might have looked like (I was afraid maybe those weren't included in the hardcover version, but they are, phew).
Since DFW's death I've been on some level looking for someone to take his place. Probably even before he died, in the years between the last time I read IJ and 2008 I was on the lookout for DFW-esque authors, someone to help fill in the time I expected to have to wait between any new work. I figured I'd have to be patient with him, great big works aren't written overnight. I've thrown the DFW-esque tag on quite a few people, sometimes in reviews and more often in my head while reading someone. For example while reading some of Zadie Smith's essays you could feel the DFW-ness to them, Adam Levin's use of words in certain stories in Hot Pink, the ballsy size and scope of his The Instructions. George Saunders with his sort of playfulness and weird world that could be other parts of the world that IJ takes place in. Jonathan Lethem in his essays, just to name a few, but there are more. DFW left a huge mark on the way people could write, what could be said in an essay, how a story could read. Even if all of these people weren't ripping him off, you can tell that they were liberated in some way by his influence.
When DFW's writing is merely a memory, in between actually reading him and reading others I can see hints of him in others and say (out loud, in reviews or just in my head) this is like DFW and at the moment what I'm reading that reminds me of some part of something I'd read of him that is true, but only sort of. The thing is none of these people measure up to him, there is something so huge and powerful in his work that other people might have bits and pieces of it down, but they don't have what feels like the all-consumingness that DFW's work has for me (and this is fine, I would probably feel disgust in an author who was just blatantly ripping off DFW, sort of the way I felt during the start of Eggers Heartbreaking Work... (which wasn't a total rip-off but felt too much like someone going out of his way to capture the tone that DFW had), for example, I like that Adam Levin has so many DFW elements but that he still has his own thing going on, or that Zadie Smith is not a DWF clone but a really intelligent and great writer who also shares some of the sensibilities that he had (does this make any sense?)). I don't know what words to say to really explain what I mean by this. It's not just that he wrote big novels, or long stories but most of the time, or at least when he was 'on' what he was writing felt gigantic, like a whole world in itself, like something I could stay interested in and occupy for a long long time. For example, chapter 46 with the long conversation that is really a fairly uninteresting conversation, topic wise, between Drinion and Meredith Rand, could have been an entire novel and I would have loved it. The point of that example is that it isn't even a short chapter that should have worked, it should have been boring and trite, some office drones going out for Happy Hour drinks where two of them have a conversation that isn't on the surface all that interesting and probably shouldn't be a seventy page chapter but it works and it's engrossing and awesome and is just one example of what I love so much about him and how I can't think of anyone else writing who could do something like that and do it so well (Adam Levin in some of his Talmudic side stories of The Instructions might come closest, I'm thinking his Slip Slap / 9/11 back story specifically). Some critics of DFW have pointed out that at times he is just showing off how well he can do different voices, but that to me is one of his great feats, he can move through so many different interior worlds and get the words feeling like they are part of the damaged thoughts of people. That he can write all these different people and feel like he's writing from their perspective and not necessarily just as a narrator looking over his creations.
I don't know what I'm trying to really say, except that he is unique and his writing isn't for everyone but for those who he does speak to, I don't think there is anyone else out there to replace him. He was just so fucking good and it because I'm a self-centered asshole I think it sucks that I'll never get to read another new great big work of his.... but at least we were left with this, flawed as it is for not being finished but still filled with mainly with amazing moments.
Post-script?
Ok, this review is a failure. I've made a fool of myself and excised whatever awfulness I'd been feeling about writing this review and I'm just going to post it as is. Consider this part a spoiler. It's a question about the book, it's not a big spoiler, but it's something that is built up to in one of the chapters. Consider it my own reading group guide question. (view spoiler)[In the very long Chris Fogle chapter, his father dies from a freak mechanical accident involving the door of a public transit train. Himself killed himself in Infinite Jest by re-engineering a microwave oven to work in a freak manner, with what can be thought of as an intentional malfunction of the door mechanism, and subsequent failure of the safeguards which should have not allowed the train / oven to still be able to function in the manner it did. What do you make of these two fairly prominent deaths of fathers in fairly grotesque manners and the viewing / coming upon the dead fathers in both cases by the son (which in both cases is a DFW-esque character (if you read IJ as I do to see Hal as a version of DFW)) (hide spoiler)].
*This was in mention to a delated part of the former review. I got lost while writing it though, but here it is:
I can't remember where in the book these thoughts came from, but I'm certain that they must have been spurred on by something in the text, possibly chapter 19. We are no unique. We like to think of ourselves as unique and feel our pains and problems as being something unknown by others who are free of the doubts and fears and even good stuff that works through our brains, but we aren't. Everyone experiences mostly the same sort of shit. Well, no shit? Right? But the flip side is true, too. You are unique, everyone isn't the same, what's good for him isn't going to work for her. Blah, blah, blah. How do you reconcile this apparent conflict? (a)
**Sorry, there were probably more reasons I was going to write there but my mind got really distracted while writing the stuff that falls under the (a) note from the above note. If I actually planned and worked on these reviews I'd probably not get into these messes, but at least in this reviews case I just need to plow through it and get it done. This review is causing me quite a bit of mental turmoil, and I feel like I need to get it done even though I also feel like more people are probably going to be paying attention to this review than others I write because I'm one of the outspoken fanboys of DFW, the fact is that I can't write this review. All of this nonsense is just hiding the fact that I can't get the shit in my head to make up coherent thoughts on this book that I really did love in parts, although not nearly as much as I've loved Infinite Jest or some of his other work. In my head right now I believe that no one will be reading by this point, I'm making the review difficult to follow, and this is in a 'footnote' which is a pretentious tool to use most of the time and in a review using the very limited html protocols allowed by goodreads it's basically a major pain in the ass for anyone reading the review to follow. So many things that I feel like I want to say I keep self-censoring. How do you write about DFW when the Great Big Awful Thing happened and it keeps showing up throughout the book. And how the GBAT made you not just sad because it happened but how it scared the shit out of you.
(a) Why delete parts of the review if I'm just going to share them as notes? I don't know. I actually have been dwelling on this paradoxical situation of being essentially no different from everyone else vs being infinitely different / isolated from everyone else. I can't remember where in the book these thoughts started to grow, but it was in passages of The Pale King. The problem (in explaining, not in the philosophical / existential variety that this sort of paradox opens up) is that I can't get what I've been thinking about to come out in words that make any sense beyond a handful of boring platitudes that when put next to each other look stupid.
The basic problem (as I'll try to lay out here, why not in the review? I don't know, I'm here right now typing is as good a reason as any) is:
A) Everyone (assumption, I'm generalizing, but this is the way I see the problem) thinks that his or her awful mental states are unique to them. No one else feels the awkwardness that I do, the sadness, the guilt, the regrets or whatever is bothering a person at the time when they think this way.
B) Everyone has these awful states. (Insert the good states too, although I don't think most people are as prone to feeling so unique while feeling really great about themselves (I realize that people in 'love' do, love is another state that feels totally unique and you can't imagine that anyone else has ever felt the way you do (another reason (if you can follow the jump I'm making in my head) to view love (romantic love) as generally a sickness / pathological problem).
C) Pretty much all of your hopes / dreams / thoughts etc., i.e., internal states are actually shared by just about everyone.
D) You are not unique.
E) Major problems arise by believing everyone thinks and feels like you do. Part of being a mature person is realizing the differences between yourself and others, realizing that others have different feelings and acting in a way that doesn't force your own ways on to others. Children generally can't do this, adults are supposed to be able to. But what about C and D?
F) At different levels (what are the levels? It would seem like this is the key to getting out of this problem) one would seem to need to realize that they are not unique, but be able to understand what it is that is shared among people and what is possibly shared but in different ways. I can't quite put this into words that make sense (this is part of the problem perhaps?).
G) Is this even a problem? Is it only a problem for a certain type of person (who is thus unique at least as far as he or she is different from people who go through their lives without wondering about stupid shit like this)?
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In the interest of full disclosure as a 'novel' this work is not five-stars. As a collection of chapters, stories, asides and footnotes it is quite close to being five stars.
I have no idea how to review this.
I'm more than a li...more What renders a truth meaningful, worthwhile, & c. is its relevance, which in turn requires extraordinary discernment and sensitivity to context, questions of value, and overall point-otherwise we might as well all just be computers downloading raw data to one another.
In the interest of full disclosure as a 'novel' this work is not five-stars. As a collection of chapters, stories, asides and footnotes it is quite close to being five stars.
I have no idea how to review this.
I'm more than a little surprised at myself for reading it. I haven't been able to bring myself to finish the stories in Oblivion because of the finality I seem to feel hovering around finishing any of the DFW works that I had been saving for those long dry periods between his work when he died. Pale King I had the feeling would be the work that would forever linger unread on a bookshelf.
Then I got the urge to read it as soon as it came out in paperback. I would read the paperback (thus buying the book new twice, which is fine, but I would feel even more uncomfortable reading the hardcover because of weird feelings I have towards the physicality of books and the admittedly arbitrary fact of a book having a one in the printing history located on the verso title page causing me to handle the book like it's a delicate object, worrying about any damage it might receive and being fearful of underlining the book or doing anything to it that does more than the minimal damage necessary to the book from reading it. If you are one of those heathens who reads a book and makes it look like it's been through a war with duct tape holding it together and the pages puffed out from dropping it in puddles and all of that, please keep your opinion to yourself about my admittedly arbitrary analness when it comes to certain books and their treatment). The paperback that I would have no trouble underlining in, marking up, writing notes and having a grand old time with. For three or four days I eagerly awaited the arrival of the paperback Pale King into the store. The book was in the warehouse at the start of the week (Tuesday) but didn't arrive in the store until the Bookazine delivery on Friday afternoon. I checked almost hourly during that time on Bookmaster to see if the book had arrived. I was ready for it (and I bought the book during my five o'clock break on Friday, a time I never buy books at, about an hour and a half after the book arrived in the store, but because I had promised to read The Night Circus for Karen's Reader's Advisory group read I didn't get to start the book until Monday, this caused me a certain amount of psychological discomfort, mostly because I was afraid my resolve at actually reading the book would disappear after actually owning the book for a few days if I didn't start it ASAP. I was fairly worried about this, but the worries ended up being unfounded (obviously)).
And I read it.
A few days later.
--(I sat down to write this review a few days after I sat down to write the review a day or so after I sat down to write the review immediately following when I finished the book. Now I'm deleting just about everything I've written up until point, except for the very boring story above about how I came to read the book at the present time.
The above story, in all it's stupidness is seriously what it's kind of like being in my head or spending anytime around me. I'm very uninteresting, boring and tedious, but most likely you don't know this because a) you don't actually have to spend anytime around me because or b) if you do spend anytime around me I don't say very much and keep the boring crap inside me.
Seriously, is that story anything you would tell someone? And for me that was probably one of the more interesting things that happened to me during my working week (Sundays not included, that is the one day that is more interesting, but only because of Karen).
Again, seriously, because this is oh so serious, why would I share that stupid story? I don't know. Maybe because I believe, like everyone else(?), that the daily minutia of my life is so important that it must be as captivating to others as it is to me? You know, sort of like everyone thinks that their dreams (the ones they have when they are asleep) are so interesting but they never really are that interesting to anyone you tell them to? Why flood the world with some more bits of non-essential information, why subject you to having to be exposed to this non-essential data and force you to shift through it to come to the point that you've just been exposed to some stuff that you didn't need to know about and now you are being exposed to even more non-essential data that is being gratuitously added to an already uninteresting mess. Is it some attempt for me to get your sympathy ("No, Greg you aren't boring, you're liked, I look forward to reading about the mundane details of your life, please share more."), or to try to be understood, to communicate in some way with some people from my real life and a handful of relative strangers? (To evoke some kind of empathy? To feel less isolated and alone and convince myself in someway that any of the stupid bullshit I feel is shared by others who are similar (even if paradoxically different) from myself*), or for some other reason. (I get the feeling...that what you're imparting might be unclear or uninteresting and must get recast and resaid in my different ways to assure yourself that the listener really understands you (504))** )--
11:44 pm. Sunday April 15th, 2012.
All of this stuff has been worked on Tax Day, one year after The Pale King was released. The story at the start of the review was written earlier in the week, but all of the cutting up of my worked on review, the notes and asides and general self-deprecating that I seemed to need to share in order to get to this point was done at various times during this evening. I need to write this review because it's looming over me, it's making me anxious/depressed and feeling like I never want to write another review again. I don't want to take these feelings with me when I go to visit my parents tomorrow, and I rarely write reviews when I'm at their house so I just want to get this done now.
Besides it's fitting to finish this review on Tax Day, right?
If you made it this far in the review and are looking for an actual review of the book you should just stop reading now. It's not going to happen. MFSO has written a very good review / thoughts on the book and I'd recommend you read (or re-read) his review in place of mine. I agree with a lot of what he says and he writes in a clearer manner than I do.
Some of these chapters are just about the best writing DFW ever had published. Some of the chapters make no sense and I can only believe that they would have fit in with the overall structure of the book if it had been finished, or else not been included.
I read the paperback copy (as I've already stated above), so I had the 'extra scenes'. I'm more than a little baffled about why the longish bonus scene about a man planning to take time off work to watch every minute of broadcast television for the month of May isn't in the actual book. It stars mostly characters that never appear in any of the other chapters, but there are quite a few chapters with characters that never show up again and which are wonderful creations that were probably going to be like the great one-off characters in certain Infinite Jest sections or else that might have been developed further if the book had actually been finished. I'd recommend reading those extra scenes. I'd also recommend reading the notes for the various chapters, they sort of fill in what the finished novel might have looked like (I was afraid maybe those weren't included in the hardcover version, but they are, phew).
Since DFW's death I've been on some level looking for someone to take his place. Probably even before he died, in the years between the last time I read IJ and 2008 I was on the lookout for DFW-esque authors, someone to help fill in the time I expected to have to wait between any new work. I figured I'd have to be patient with him, great big works aren't written overnight. I've thrown the DFW-esque tag on quite a few people, sometimes in reviews and more often in my head while reading someone. For example while reading some of Zadie Smith's essays you could feel the DFW-ness to them, Adam Levin's use of words in certain stories in Hot Pink, the ballsy size and scope of his The Instructions. George Saunders with his sort of playfulness and weird world that could be other parts of the world that IJ takes place in. Jonathan Lethem in his essays, just to name a few, but there are more. DFW left a huge mark on the way people could write, what could be said in an essay, how a story could read. Even if all of these people weren't ripping him off, you can tell that they were liberated in some way by his influence.
When DFW's writing is merely a memory, in between actually reading him and reading others I can see hints of him in others and say (out loud, in reviews or just in my head) this is like DFW and at the moment what I'm reading that reminds me of some part of something I'd read of him that is true, but only sort of. The thing is none of these people measure up to him, there is something so huge and powerful in his work that other people might have bits and pieces of it down, but they don't have what feels like the all-consumingness that DFW's work has for me (and this is fine, I would probably feel disgust in an author who was just blatantly ripping off DFW, sort of the way I felt during the start of Eggers Heartbreaking Work... (which wasn't a total rip-off but felt too much like someone going out of his way to capture the tone that DFW had), for example, I like that Adam Levin has so many DFW elements but that he still has his own thing going on, or that Zadie Smith is not a DWF clone but a really intelligent and great writer who also shares some of the sensibilities that he had (does this make any sense?)). I don't know what words to say to really explain what I mean by this. It's not just that he wrote big novels, or long stories but most of the time, or at least when he was 'on' what he was writing felt gigantic, like a whole world in itself, like something I could stay interested in and occupy for a long long time. For example, chapter 46 with the long conversation that is really a fairly uninteresting conversation, topic wise, between Drinion and Meredith Rand, could have been an entire novel and I would have loved it. The point of that example is that it isn't even a short chapter that should have worked, it should have been boring and trite, some office drones going out for Happy Hour drinks where two of them have a conversation that isn't on the surface all that interesting and probably shouldn't be a seventy page chapter but it works and it's engrossing and awesome and is just one example of what I love so much about him and how I can't think of anyone else writing who could do something like that and do it so well (Adam Levin in some of his Talmudic side stories of The Instructions might come closest, I'm thinking his Slip Slap / 9/11 back story specifically). Some critics of DFW have pointed out that at times he is just showing off how well he can do different voices, but that to me is one of his great feats, he can move through so many different interior worlds and get the words feeling like they are part of the damaged thoughts of people. That he can write all these different people and feel like he's writing from their perspective and not necessarily just as a narrator looking over his creations.
I don't know what I'm trying to really say, except that he is unique and his writing isn't for everyone but for those who he does speak to, I don't think there is anyone else out there to replace him. He was just so fucking good and it because I'm a self-centered asshole I think it sucks that I'll never get to read another new great big work of his.... but at least we were left with this, flawed as it is for not being finished but still filled with mainly with amazing moments.
Post-script?
Ok, this review is a failure. I've made a fool of myself and excised whatever awfulness I'd been feeling about writing this review and I'm just going to post it as is. Consider this part a spoiler. It's a question about the book, it's not a big spoiler, but it's something that is built up to in one of the chapters. Consider it my own reading group guide question. (view spoiler)[In the very long Chris Fogle chapter, his father dies from a freak mechanical accident involving the door of a public transit train. Himself killed himself in Infinite Jest by re-engineering a microwave oven to work in a freak manner, with what can be thought of as an intentional malfunction of the door mechanism, and subsequent failure of the safeguards which should have not allowed the train / oven to still be able to function in the manner it did. What do you make of these two fairly prominent deaths of fathers in fairly grotesque manners and the viewing / coming upon the dead fathers in both cases by the son (which in both cases is a DFW-esque character (if you read IJ as I do to see Hal as a version of DFW)) (hide spoiler)].
*This was in mention to a delated part of the former review. I got lost while writing it though, but here it is:
I can't remember where in the book these thoughts came from, but I'm certain that they must have been spurred on by something in the text, possibly chapter 19. We are no unique. We like to think of ourselves as unique and feel our pains and problems as being something unknown by others who are free of the doubts and fears and even good stuff that works through our brains, but we aren't. Everyone experiences mostly the same sort of shit. Well, no shit? Right? But the flip side is true, too. You are unique, everyone isn't the same, what's good for him isn't going to work for her. Blah, blah, blah. How do you reconcile this apparent conflict? (a)
**Sorry, there were probably more reasons I was going to write there but my mind got really distracted while writing the stuff that falls under the (a) note from the above note. If I actually planned and worked on these reviews I'd probably not get into these messes, but at least in this reviews case I just need to plow through it and get it done. This review is causing me quite a bit of mental turmoil, and I feel like I need to get it done even though I also feel like more people are probably going to be paying attention to this review than others I write because I'm one of the outspoken fanboys of DFW, the fact is that I can't write this review. All of this nonsense is just hiding the fact that I can't get the shit in my head to make up coherent thoughts on this book that I really did love in parts, although not nearly as much as I've loved Infinite Jest or some of his other work. In my head right now I believe that no one will be reading by this point, I'm making the review difficult to follow, and this is in a 'footnote' which is a pretentious tool to use most of the time and in a review using the very limited html protocols allowed by goodreads it's basically a major pain in the ass for anyone reading the review to follow. So many things that I feel like I want to say I keep self-censoring. How do you write about DFW when the Great Big Awful Thing happened and it keeps showing up throughout the book. And how the GBAT made you not just sad because it happened but how it scared the shit out of you.
(a) Why delete parts of the review if I'm just going to share them as notes? I don't know. I actually have been dwelling on this paradoxical situation of being essentially no different from everyone else vs being infinitely different / isolated from everyone else. I can't remember where in the book these thoughts started to grow, but it was in passages of The Pale King. The problem (in explaining, not in the philosophical / existential variety that this sort of paradox opens up) is that I can't get what I've been thinking about to come out in words that make any sense beyond a handful of boring platitudes that when put next to each other look stupid.
The basic problem (as I'll try to lay out here, why not in the review? I don't know, I'm here right now typing is as good a reason as any) is:
A) Everyone (assumption, I'm generalizing, but this is the way I see the problem) thinks that his or her awful mental states are unique to them. No one else feels the awkwardness that I do, the sadness, the guilt, the regrets or whatever is bothering a person at the time when they think this way.
B) Everyone has these awful states. (Insert the good states too, although I don't think most people are as prone to feeling so unique while feeling really great about themselves (I realize that people in 'love' do, love is another state that feels totally unique and you can't imagine that anyone else has ever felt the way you do (another reason (if you can follow the jump I'm making in my head) to view love (romantic love) as generally a sickness / pathological problem).
C) Pretty much all of your hopes / dreams / thoughts etc., i.e., internal states are actually shared by just about everyone.
D) You are not unique.
E) Major problems arise by believing everyone thinks and feels like you do. Part of being a mature person is realizing the differences between yourself and others, realizing that others have different feelings and acting in a way that doesn't force your own ways on to others. Children generally can't do this, adults are supposed to be able to. But what about C and D?
F) At different levels (what are the levels? It would seem like this is the key to getting out of this problem) one would seem to need to realize that they are not unique, but be able to understand what it is that is shared among people and what is possibly shared but in different ways. I can't quite put this into words that make sense (this is part of the problem perhaps?).
G) Is this even a problem? Is it only a problem for a certain type of person (who is thus unique at least as far as he or she is different from people who go through their lives without wondering about stupid shit like this)?
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As good as all his other stuff. No less finished-seeming than anything else he ever did. No plot, but thematic balls are always in the air and bouncing around, plus the prose is always so readable -- often easier, more mature, steadier, less trying to impress than his earlier stuff? Only had to look up two or three vocab words. Awarded the fifth star to encourage the writer to one day finish it properly -- for now, this collection of 540+ bound pages of DFW's writing, whether it's an unfinished...more
As good as all his other stuff. No less finished-seeming than anything else he ever did. No plot, but thematic balls are always in the air and bouncing around, plus the prose is always so readable -- often easier, more mature, steadier, less trying to impress than his earlier stuff? Only had to look up two or three vocab words. Awarded the fifth star to encourage the writer to one day finish it properly -- for now, this collection of 540+ bound pages of DFW's writing, whether it's an unfinished novel, linked collection of stories, fragments, dialogues -- whatever you call it -- like a massive Snickers bar offered to all those famished for Mr. Wallace's particular sort of caloric content, really satisfied on micro and macro levels.
Not really an office novel. More like a longer Brief Interviews with Hideous Men than a shorter Infinite Jest. A++ sequencing job by the editor -- seems like controlled pomo chaos instead of old-fashioned mess. Conflicts and thematic dealios are explicated by the author in the final "notes and asides" section: maturity/responsibility requires ability to pay attention, especially in the face of "boredom," which is really just an inability to pay sufficient attention -- and paying attention has a moral dimension. Apparently purposefully dull passsages come studded with easter eggs -- toward the end of a long dull footnote there's a "woodpeckerishly intensive round of fellatio" --- fellatio performed by an Iranian women who seems sort of like the Indian woman in "Freedom" -- wonder if Franzen cribbed her, or if he and DFW colluded to sexualize the long liquid hair of such women, or maybe as an inside joke re: their attraction to Jhumpa Lahiri?
Minor magic realism: a character just barely levitates when he's immersed, paying serious attention to work or listening to someone. Also a pair of minor phantoms. Four major writers mentioned in the book as major writers a writer might aspire to be like are echoed throughout: Gaddis (dialogue onslaughts of JR), Perec (Life: A User's Manual -- attention to detail, structure, the name Sylvanshine echoes the name Bartlebooth), Sherwood Anderson (Winesburg, Ohio -- portraits of an ensemble cast in the midwest), Balzac (ridiculous attention to detail? I haven't read enough to have much insight). LOLs a-plenty, often at revelation of a paradox (see essay on humor in Kafka, the bit about "A Little Fable"). Several dozen pages turned down, sometimes top and bottom corners turned in -- first time I've done that since Gilead.
A systems novel -- like most of DeLillo or Kafka -- focused on individual/very much individuated lives (thanks to author's observations) inside a major faceless institution. Structurally, the book would've been loosely organized to have something to do with a yaw system -- that is, attention, responsibility, maturity are the rotor that turns the propeller that cuts through the wind of boredom, loneliness, excessive thought, and, as Shane Drinion demonstrates, enables levitation/flight (temporary transcendence). As noted early on in the book, "yaw" backwards is "way," which is the English word for "tao."
For a 1200-word version of this impression, get the tenth edition of The Lifted Brow.(less)
Not really an office novel. More like a longer Brief Interviews with Hideous Men than a shorter Infinite Jest. A++ sequencing job by the editor -- seems like controlled pomo chaos instead of old-fashioned mess. Conflicts and thematic dealios are explicated by the author in the final "notes and asides" section: maturity/responsibility requires ability to pay attention, especially in the face of "boredom," which is really just an inability to pay sufficient attention -- and paying attention has a moral dimension. Apparently purposefully dull passsages come studded with easter eggs -- toward the end of a long dull footnote there's a "woodpeckerishly intensive round of fellatio" --- fellatio performed by an Iranian women who seems sort of like the Indian woman in "Freedom" -- wonder if Franzen cribbed her, or if he and DFW colluded to sexualize the long liquid hair of such women, or maybe as an inside joke re: their attraction to Jhumpa Lahiri?
Minor magic realism: a character just barely levitates when he's immersed, paying serious attention to work or listening to someone. Also a pair of minor phantoms. Four major writers mentioned in the book as major writers a writer might aspire to be like are echoed throughout: Gaddis (dialogue onslaughts of JR), Perec (Life: A User's Manual -- attention to detail, structure, the name Sylvanshine echoes the name Bartlebooth), Sherwood Anderson (Winesburg, Ohio -- portraits of an ensemble cast in the midwest), Balzac (ridiculous attention to detail? I haven't read enough to have much insight). LOLs a-plenty, often at revelation of a paradox (see essay on humor in Kafka, the bit about "A Little Fable"). Several dozen pages turned down, sometimes top and bottom corners turned in -- first time I've done that since Gilead.
A systems novel -- like most of DeLillo or Kafka -- focused on individual/very much individuated lives (thanks to author's observations) inside a major faceless institution. Structurally, the book would've been loosely organized to have something to do with a yaw system -- that is, attention, responsibility, maturity are the rotor that turns the propeller that cuts through the wind of boredom, loneliness, excessive thought, and, as Shane Drinion demonstrates, enables levitation/flight (temporary transcendence). As noted early on in the book, "yaw" backwards is "way," which is the English word for "tao."
For a 1200-word version of this impression, get the tenth edition of The Lifted Brow.(less)
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Ian Graye
There comes a time when you have to stop tampering with your book, even when you're dead. Nice review, too, assuming you're still alive.
10 gen. 02:47
10 gen. 02:47
Original review: May 10, 2011
100 Words in Search of a Precis (For Those of Us Who Prefer the Short Form of Stimulation)
DFW is calling on us to become Heroes or Pale Kings.
There is something Proustian at work in “The Pale King”.
DFW isn’t so much in search of lost time or even perceptions; he is in search of a lost ability to “perceive” or to “sense” or to make things “interesting”.
In a time when there is so much boredom, DFW is offering us a way of seeing and engaging with the parts of the wor...more Original review: May 10, 2011
100 Words in Search of a Precis (For Those of Us Who Prefer the Short Form of Stimulation)
DFW is calling on us to become Heroes or Pale Kings.
There is something Proustian at work in “The Pale King”.
DFW isn’t so much in search of lost time or even perceptions; he is in search of a lost ability to “perceive” or to “sense” or to make things “interesting”.
In a time when there is so much boredom, DFW is offering us a way of seeing and engaging with the parts of the world within our gaze perceptively, sensuously and appreciatively.
“The Pale King” might be the culmination of both his literary and philosophical endeavours.
Review
Because of the length of my review, I have placed it here:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
It is chapter 11, in case you get lost in the My Writings page.
Earlier Fictitious Review
Here is an earlier fictitious, more light-hearted review I wrote before finishing the novel:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Reading Notes
I made copious notes while I was reading the novel.
There are many issues that I have omitted from my final review, because the review would have just got too long.
I have put my reading notes here:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Extract
Below is an extract from the first section of my review:
Some Perceptions in and about the Structure
The Pale King (TPK) is not a conventional linear narrative.
It’s not really even a narrative or a story, in the sense that a number of events are described in a way that aggregates into something meaningful, once they are absorbed by the reader.
So DFW did not really use the structure of the novel to play with time.
However, I think there is a sense in which he uses the novel to explore and play with our perceptions or, at least, the way we perceive.
There are 50 chapters, some of which are less than a page, others anywhere between 50 and 100 pages.
It would be tempting to say that the longer chapters are more important, because of their length.
However, ultimately, the importance of each chapter derives from its subject matter, no matter how long or how short.
I don’t think it would be correct to speak of the chapters as short stories.
They are definitely part of the one creative enterprise.
Each chapter derives meaning from some or all of the other chapters.
Individually, they are discrete. Collectively, they influence each other.
They form a society that creates meaning.
Individually, the chapters are verbal portraits.
Collectively, they constitute pictures at an exhibition about 20th and 21st century life.
Click here to read the rest of the review:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...(less)
100 Words in Search of a Precis (For Those of Us Who Prefer the Short Form of Stimulation)
DFW is calling on us to become Heroes or Pale Kings.
There is something Proustian at work in “The Pale King”.
DFW isn’t so much in search of lost time or even perceptions; he is in search of a lost ability to “perceive” or to “sense” or to make things “interesting”.
In a time when there is so much boredom, DFW is offering us a way of seeing and engaging with the parts of the wor...more Original review: May 10, 2011
100 Words in Search of a Precis (For Those of Us Who Prefer the Short Form of Stimulation)
DFW is calling on us to become Heroes or Pale Kings.
There is something Proustian at work in “The Pale King”.
DFW isn’t so much in search of lost time or even perceptions; he is in search of a lost ability to “perceive” or to “sense” or to make things “interesting”.
In a time when there is so much boredom, DFW is offering us a way of seeing and engaging with the parts of the world within our gaze perceptively, sensuously and appreciatively.
“The Pale King” might be the culmination of both his literary and philosophical endeavours.
Review
Because of the length of my review, I have placed it here:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
It is chapter 11, in case you get lost in the My Writings page.
Earlier Fictitious Review
Here is an earlier fictitious, more light-hearted review I wrote before finishing the novel:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Reading Notes
I made copious notes while I was reading the novel.
There are many issues that I have omitted from my final review, because the review would have just got too long.
I have put my reading notes here:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Extract
Below is an extract from the first section of my review:
Some Perceptions in and about the Structure
The Pale King (TPK) is not a conventional linear narrative.
It’s not really even a narrative or a story, in the sense that a number of events are described in a way that aggregates into something meaningful, once they are absorbed by the reader.
So DFW did not really use the structure of the novel to play with time.
However, I think there is a sense in which he uses the novel to explore and play with our perceptions or, at least, the way we perceive.
There are 50 chapters, some of which are less than a page, others anywhere between 50 and 100 pages.
It would be tempting to say that the longer chapters are more important, because of their length.
However, ultimately, the importance of each chapter derives from its subject matter, no matter how long or how short.
I don’t think it would be correct to speak of the chapters as short stories.
They are definitely part of the one creative enterprise.
Each chapter derives meaning from some or all of the other chapters.
Individually, they are discrete. Collectively, they influence each other.
They form a society that creates meaning.
Individually, the chapters are verbal portraits.
Collectively, they constitute pictures at an exhibition about 20th and 21st century life.
Click here to read the rest of the review:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...(less)
The Pale King is a skyscraping achievement. Separating Wallace's backstory from the novel might be impossible, but the edited text, however incomplete, astonishes. The Pale King doesn't need a sympathy vote; the book soars on its own merits.
I should also point out that, after two attempts, I never finished Infinite Jest. A couple years back I recommended IJ to my friend James because he plays tennis and I remembered something in that doorstop about a tennis camp. James is still mad. So I didn't...more The Pale King is a skyscraping achievement. Separating Wallace's backstory from the novel might be impossible, but the edited text, however incomplete, astonishes. The Pale King doesn't need a sympathy vote; the book soars on its own merits.
I should also point out that, after two attempts, I never finished Infinite Jest. A couple years back I recommended IJ to my friend James because he plays tennis and I remembered something in that doorstop about a tennis camp. James is still mad. So I didn't approach The Pale King slobbering over DFW's fiction. By this novel's end I felt like I had experienced a masterwork.
The Pale King revolves around an Internal Revenue Service center in Peoria, Illinois. IRS personnel gather and engage in the implementation of the potentially soul-killing detail inherent in tax law and policy. Others have written, of course, of paperwork's drudgery, but only Wallace, in my experience, captures the way one's mind navigates eight hours of precise, abstract analysis. Some characters develop panicked, sweat-laden self-talk and almost turn hallucinatory in their attempts to master tasks or accelerate minutes. Getting caught in traffic in a packed, airless car, for example, allows the author an opportunity for a brilliant, dizzying inner monologue about how the roads could have been better designed, the IRS's policies concerning warning stickers on windshields, and whether or not fellow passengers can sense the narrator's anxiety. But it's more than that. Way more. It's the tight-wire tension of a potentially cute girl sitting behind you while you worry that you're going to sweat through your clothes. It's nerds sharing office legends. It's meticulously cataloging every act in a quiet room. It's making little promises like “I will finish the next two tax returns before I check the time.” It's very hard to explain but penetrates every American's (if not human's) existence. It's a conversation about the type of people drawn to tax auditing. It's a man in a bar listening so intensely to a woman's story that he starts to levitate. It's trying to separate important facts when your mind processes trivia. It's believing that everyone around you knows more and feels more comfortable than you. Wallace doesn't mythologize as much as he obsessively itemizes office hours with endless sentences that mirror the way a train of thought rapid-fires into the next. So were I, for example, to recommend The Pale King to James, I would probably say “It's about working in a Peoria IRS Center but it's about boredom and hope and despair and more but I can't explain it well so you're on your own.” The Pale King is filled with wonder and a curious and powerful paradox of magical realism crossed with an uncomfortable claustrophobic reality. Wallace seems to have found a frantic and exhausting joy in close observation.
I read this book over ten days in part because I only had fourteen days with the library copy. But now that I've finished The Pale King I've needed time to readjust to normal novels, you know, the kind with plots and main characters and recognizable storylines. David Foster Wallace's The Pale King is so unique and spellbinding that it's beyond imitation. This book inhabits its own stratosphere. Five stars. No doubt.(less)
I should also point out that, after two attempts, I never finished Infinite Jest. A couple years back I recommended IJ to my friend James because he plays tennis and I remembered something in that doorstop about a tennis camp. James is still mad. So I didn't...more The Pale King is a skyscraping achievement. Separating Wallace's backstory from the novel might be impossible, but the edited text, however incomplete, astonishes. The Pale King doesn't need a sympathy vote; the book soars on its own merits.
I should also point out that, after two attempts, I never finished Infinite Jest. A couple years back I recommended IJ to my friend James because he plays tennis and I remembered something in that doorstop about a tennis camp. James is still mad. So I didn't approach The Pale King slobbering over DFW's fiction. By this novel's end I felt like I had experienced a masterwork.
The Pale King revolves around an Internal Revenue Service center in Peoria, Illinois. IRS personnel gather and engage in the implementation of the potentially soul-killing detail inherent in tax law and policy. Others have written, of course, of paperwork's drudgery, but only Wallace, in my experience, captures the way one's mind navigates eight hours of precise, abstract analysis. Some characters develop panicked, sweat-laden self-talk and almost turn hallucinatory in their attempts to master tasks or accelerate minutes. Getting caught in traffic in a packed, airless car, for example, allows the author an opportunity for a brilliant, dizzying inner monologue about how the roads could have been better designed, the IRS's policies concerning warning stickers on windshields, and whether or not fellow passengers can sense the narrator's anxiety. But it's more than that. Way more. It's the tight-wire tension of a potentially cute girl sitting behind you while you worry that you're going to sweat through your clothes. It's nerds sharing office legends. It's meticulously cataloging every act in a quiet room. It's making little promises like “I will finish the next two tax returns before I check the time.” It's very hard to explain but penetrates every American's (if not human's) existence. It's a conversation about the type of people drawn to tax auditing. It's a man in a bar listening so intensely to a woman's story that he starts to levitate. It's trying to separate important facts when your mind processes trivia. It's believing that everyone around you knows more and feels more comfortable than you. Wallace doesn't mythologize as much as he obsessively itemizes office hours with endless sentences that mirror the way a train of thought rapid-fires into the next. So were I, for example, to recommend The Pale King to James, I would probably say “It's about working in a Peoria IRS Center but it's about boredom and hope and despair and more but I can't explain it well so you're on your own.” The Pale King is filled with wonder and a curious and powerful paradox of magical realism crossed with an uncomfortable claustrophobic reality. Wallace seems to have found a frantic and exhausting joy in close observation.
I read this book over ten days in part because I only had fourteen days with the library copy. But now that I've finished The Pale King I've needed time to readjust to normal novels, you know, the kind with plots and main characters and recognizable storylines. David Foster Wallace's The Pale King is so unique and spellbinding that it's beyond imitation. This book inhabits its own stratosphere. Five stars. No doubt.(less)
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RandomAnthony
Heh. Moira, James and I were talking book shorthand, in front of the shelves...I would say I regret the error, but, in retrospect, it was kind of funn...more
Heh. Moira, James and I were talking book shorthand, in front of the shelves...I would say I regret the error, but, in retrospect, it was kind of funny.(less)
23 ott. 15:43
23 ott. 15:43

The Goodreads gods are jerks.
***
Dear Goodreads gods,
If I win the First Reads giveaway for this book, my entire life will have meaning. Every book I've ever read, and every review I've ever written, will have led me to this crowning moment. I've even created a new shelf just for The Pale King: to-read-immediately. I promise to neglect every other aspect of my life, including my dog and my boyfriend and my work, to read this when it comes.
PLEASE GIVE ME THIS BOOK PLEASE?
Sincerely yours,
oriana
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Jimmy
Just rip off the covers. You've been known to do worse to books, right? ;) I seem to remember something about dividing a book into 3 volumes for easie...more
Just rip off the covers. You've been known to do worse to books, right? ;) I seem to remember something about dividing a book into 3 volumes for easier carrying... was that you?(less)
updated 16 mag. 10:02
updated 16 mag. 10:02
oriana
Haha yup, that's true. I did that with Infinite Jest and Bone. I hadn't actually thought of doing it to a hardcover, but you may be on to something...
16 mag. 10:06
16 mag. 10:06
May 01, 2011
Chris
rated it
3 of 5 stars
·
review of another edition
Recommended to Chris by:
Scott Gates
I've spend many, many hours arguing about (mostly against) DFW's merits and place in literature since reading Infinite Jest, way back in 1999 on vacation in Spain; toting the gigantic English paperback edition around from hostel to hostel, taking it on buses and trains through Andalucia, having bought it on the insistent and frenzied recommendation of my dear friend, Scott. A challenging book, annoyingly demanding the use of two bookmarks, and endless flipping from the chapter to the endnotes. N...more
I've spend many, many hours arguing about (mostly against) DFW's merits and place in literature since reading Infinite Jest, way back in 1999 on vacation in Spain; toting the gigantic English paperback edition around from hostel to hostel, taking it on buses and trains through Andalucia, having bought it on the insistent and frenzied recommendation of my dear friend, Scott. A challenging book, annoyingly demanding the use of two bookmarks, and endless flipping from the chapter to the endnotes. Not the most enjoyable book, but there were passages and ideas which showed the mark of genius.
I rebelled against the time commitment DFW selfishly demands up on his reader, and faux-academic use of footnotes and endnotes, in what I have always perceived to be an essentially adolescent attempt to appear clever and complex and to give his books a textbook quality, to make the reader feel that they are being confronted with something challenging, and that they should Pay Attention, because things are going to get complex!
Greater authors would be able to do that with standard text alone, but DFW had to get clever, had to pull tricks. Regardless of this, and the solipsism that drives writing overly long run on sentences, with clauses after clauses, a easy trick to make the reader gain speed and confuse them, make them navigate the text, confront the text as a challenging slalom of thought, endlessly coruscating ever forward with no promise or hint of resolution or conclusion, all in an attempt to appear ever more comprehensive and observant, or perhaps not more observant so much as omniscient in a way that also conveys care in making the reader aware of precisely everything that the author wishes to convey, perhaps going over details again and again, but from different angles, or perhaps slightly different phrases so as to really clue the reader into just how difficult it really is to truly convey the existence of something and not just the experience of perceiving that something and in this manner etc., etc., there are usually good moments to be had.
So, I know that DFW is widely loved, and even taught fiction, but I still feel that his authorly tricks have been done before, and I've never been impressed by these authorly tricks, which serve to obscure the fact that all novels need character, plots, insight into human personality and behavior, and an ability to convey ideas. DFW excels only at the latter, but here he truly does excel. The best I can say of DFW is that compared to the current crop of American authors, DFW was many times better that his contemporaries, in both his powers of observation and the ingenious ideas he sometimes was able to articulate.
For a full treatment of The Pale King, his final project, I defer to the NYRB...
http://www.nybooks.com/articles/archi...
This book pales compared to say, Stephen Hero
However, it was very enjoyable to read, both easier and more enjoyable than Infinite Jest, and the other DFW I have read (not all). The characters are supposed to be facing crushing boredom working at the IRS, and this book was written when DFW himself was also going off the rails and rapidly downward to, let's confront it, his own suicide - his own 'Oblivion'. However, this "book", or collection of drafts for a book, was easy and enjoyable to read, and I even recommend it over Infinite Jest. Plenty of rewarding passages with novel ideas, and the right amount of complexity that revisiting it in a few years will reap rewards to the patient and indulgent reader.
Scott, I await your comments(less)
I rebelled against the time commitment DFW selfishly demands up on his reader, and faux-academic use of footnotes and endnotes, in what I have always perceived to be an essentially adolescent attempt to appear clever and complex and to give his books a textbook quality, to make the reader feel that they are being confronted with something challenging, and that they should Pay Attention, because things are going to get complex!
Greater authors would be able to do that with standard text alone, but DFW had to get clever, had to pull tricks. Regardless of this, and the solipsism that drives writing overly long run on sentences, with clauses after clauses, a easy trick to make the reader gain speed and confuse them, make them navigate the text, confront the text as a challenging slalom of thought, endlessly coruscating ever forward with no promise or hint of resolution or conclusion, all in an attempt to appear ever more comprehensive and observant, or perhaps not more observant so much as omniscient in a way that also conveys care in making the reader aware of precisely everything that the author wishes to convey, perhaps going over details again and again, but from different angles, or perhaps slightly different phrases so as to really clue the reader into just how difficult it really is to truly convey the existence of something and not just the experience of perceiving that something and in this manner etc., etc., there are usually good moments to be had.
So, I know that DFW is widely loved, and even taught fiction, but I still feel that his authorly tricks have been done before, and I've never been impressed by these authorly tricks, which serve to obscure the fact that all novels need character, plots, insight into human personality and behavior, and an ability to convey ideas. DFW excels only at the latter, but here he truly does excel. The best I can say of DFW is that compared to the current crop of American authors, DFW was many times better that his contemporaries, in both his powers of observation and the ingenious ideas he sometimes was able to articulate.
For a full treatment of The Pale King, his final project, I defer to the NYRB...
http://www.nybooks.com/articles/archi...
This book pales compared to say, Stephen Hero
However, it was very enjoyable to read, both easier and more enjoyable than Infinite Jest, and the other DFW I have read (not all). The characters are supposed to be facing crushing boredom working at the IRS, and this book was written when DFW himself was also going off the rails and rapidly downward to, let's confront it, his own suicide - his own 'Oblivion'. However, this "book", or collection of drafts for a book, was easy and enjoyable to read, and I even recommend it over Infinite Jest. Plenty of rewarding passages with novel ideas, and the right amount of complexity that revisiting it in a few years will reap rewards to the patient and indulgent reader.
Scott, I await your comments(less)
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Scott Gates
I understand what you’re trying to say when you talk about time demands, but is it really a fault for a given work to require more time than another?...more
I understand what you’re trying to say when you talk about time demands, but is it really a fault for a given work to require more time than another? If so, Laurence of Arabia and Bach’s Goldberg Variations should also be criticized for the “selfish” and unfair demands these works put on us. All this time they take! Pop songs and short films would win the day.
And you seem to fixate on DFW as Author as a kind of taskmaster, or adolescent desperate for attention. People are mysteries: Maybe DFW saw himself as both of these things (and in interviews he’s basically acknowledged his penchant for showing off and wanting to appear intelligent to the reader). So, fair enough. But I think you thus do the Text an injustice, and that it would be better for your literary sensibilities if you eased up on the Author-fixation and become a kind of atheist when it came to Authorhood. Then you’d see that these hundreds of thousands of innocent words mean you know harm, and are aloof from the petty motivations DFW confessed to. It’s like when Adorno says that the true act of genius is out of the “genius’s” hands.
And in spite of the trickiness (something he shares with your friends Joyce and RAW, may their two names never be this close again), for the most part DFW's stuff reads with extreme lucidity. So, though he is sometimes painfully meta, and though the architecture of his novels is a total mess, Wallace is all about communication. If anything, he’s too clear, he explains way too much and you’re right that this is at times employed as an unnecessary trick to bewilder the reader and obscure essential plot items (but it's mostly because he couldn’t help himself, I think). Imagine a human, let’s call him Davin, who is so anxious for you to understand what he’s saying that he’s willing to take his brain out and lend it to you unedited so that you can see for yourself how he’s thinking. This is something like what DFW reads like.(less)
14 lug. 11:05
And you seem to fixate on DFW as Author as a kind of taskmaster, or adolescent desperate for attention. People are mysteries: Maybe DFW saw himself as both of these things (and in interviews he’s basically acknowledged his penchant for showing off and wanting to appear intelligent to the reader). So, fair enough. But I think you thus do the Text an injustice, and that it would be better for your literary sensibilities if you eased up on the Author-fixation and become a kind of atheist when it came to Authorhood. Then you’d see that these hundreds of thousands of innocent words mean you know harm, and are aloof from the petty motivations DFW confessed to. It’s like when Adorno says that the true act of genius is out of the “genius’s” hands.
And in spite of the trickiness (something he shares with your friends Joyce and RAW, may their two names never be this close again), for the most part DFW's stuff reads with extreme lucidity. So, though he is sometimes painfully meta, and though the architecture of his novels is a total mess, Wallace is all about communication. If anything, he’s too clear, he explains way too much and you’re right that this is at times employed as an unnecessary trick to bewilder the reader and obscure essential plot items (but it's mostly because he couldn’t help himself, I think). Imagine a human, let’s call him Davin, who is so anxious for you to understand what he’s saying that he’s willing to take his brain out and lend it to you unedited so that you can see for yourself how he’s thinking. This is something like what DFW reads like.(less)
14 lug. 11:05
Oct 25, 2012
Nathan "N.R." Gaddis
rated it
5 of 5 stars
·
review of another edition
Shelves:
after-joyce,
david-foster-wallace
"'The Human Heart is a Chump': Cataloging The Pale King"; Jenn Shapland works in the Ransom Center and writes in The Millions about her experience cataloging The Pale King archival material:
http://www.themillions.com/2012/10/th...
The final paragraph:
"I don’t know what people will find in these folders or how they’ll choose to interpret this new installment to the record of Wallace’s works. What I’m certain they will discover is that within the boxes, numbered 36-41, lies not a single unfinished...more "'The Human Heart is a Chump': Cataloging The Pale King"; Jenn Shapland works in the Ransom Center and writes in The Millions about her experience cataloging The Pale King archival material:
http://www.themillions.com/2012/10/th...
The final paragraph:
"I don’t know what people will find in these folders or how they’ll choose to interpret this new installment to the record of Wallace’s works. What I’m certain they will discover is that within the boxes, numbered 36-41, lies not a single unfinished work but an infinite web of possible works. The Pale King as we know it is, in the end, just one of these, one possible iteration. There are many years of life left in these pages. I hope other readers of the archive experience something like the joy and wonder and despair and unending strangeness I’ve felt, swimming around in another person’s thoughts for a few months."
[Thanks to Friend Geoff for bringing this to my attention.]
And for folks with an archival bent, here is a blog from the Ransom Center, avec photos:
http://www.utexas.edu/opa/blogs/cultu...
______________
Ladies and Gentlemen, I implore you, this interrupted masterpiece was on its way to join other 20-years-in-the-writing novels of the late-20th/early 21-st century -- The Tunnel, JR, A Frolic etc, Women and Men, (something from Mr Vollmann, certainly), etc. What remains are a few crumbs and a clear idea that what our friend Dave had set before himself to accomplish would not be so terribly simple or easy to bring off. The crumbs that remain are delicious.
Re: The Pale King as a paean to Boredom. For better or worse the book is not boring. In the philosophical wars of the 20th century Dave was clearly on the Wittgensteinian side, but it is from the other side, from Martin Heidegger, that we find a full treatment of the experience of boredom which ought to supplement the thematic material of The Pale King. See Herr Heidegger's The Fundamental Concepts of Metaphysics: World, Finitude, Solitude. Had Dave been familiar with this work maybe -- just maybe -- The King, Pale, may have gotten itself more fully completed? Wishful what-iffings. . . .
Damn to mourn the loss of such a fine voice, a true believer in fiction, a rare human being.(less)
http://www.themillions.com/2012/10/th...
The final paragraph:
"I don’t know what people will find in these folders or how they’ll choose to interpret this new installment to the record of Wallace’s works. What I’m certain they will discover is that within the boxes, numbered 36-41, lies not a single unfinished...more "'The Human Heart is a Chump': Cataloging The Pale King"; Jenn Shapland works in the Ransom Center and writes in The Millions about her experience cataloging The Pale King archival material:
http://www.themillions.com/2012/10/th...
The final paragraph:
"I don’t know what people will find in these folders or how they’ll choose to interpret this new installment to the record of Wallace’s works. What I’m certain they will discover is that within the boxes, numbered 36-41, lies not a single unfinished work but an infinite web of possible works. The Pale King as we know it is, in the end, just one of these, one possible iteration. There are many years of life left in these pages. I hope other readers of the archive experience something like the joy and wonder and despair and unending strangeness I’ve felt, swimming around in another person’s thoughts for a few months."
[Thanks to Friend Geoff for bringing this to my attention.]
And for folks with an archival bent, here is a blog from the Ransom Center, avec photos:
http://www.utexas.edu/opa/blogs/cultu...
______________
Ladies and Gentlemen, I implore you, this interrupted masterpiece was on its way to join other 20-years-in-the-writing novels of the late-20th/early 21-st century -- The Tunnel, JR, A Frolic etc, Women and Men, (something from Mr Vollmann, certainly), etc. What remains are a few crumbs and a clear idea that what our friend Dave had set before himself to accomplish would not be so terribly simple or easy to bring off. The crumbs that remain are delicious.
Re: The Pale King as a paean to Boredom. For better or worse the book is not boring. In the philosophical wars of the 20th century Dave was clearly on the Wittgensteinian side, but it is from the other side, from Martin Heidegger, that we find a full treatment of the experience of boredom which ought to supplement the thematic material of The Pale King. See Herr Heidegger's The Fundamental Concepts of Metaphysics: World, Finitude, Solitude. Had Dave been familiar with this work maybe -- just maybe -- The King, Pale, may have gotten itself more fully completed? Wishful what-iffings. . . .
Damn to mourn the loss of such a fine voice, a true believer in fiction, a rare human being.(less)
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Nathan "N.R." Gaddis
s.penkevich wrote: "You always direct us to such great articles, thanks for that. Does he mention Wittgenstein much in this book, he seems to allude t...more
s.penkevich wrote: "You always direct us to such great articles, thanks for that. Does he mention Wittgenstein much in this book, he seems to allude to him heavily in most of his short stories and articles (his articl..."
This was pointed out to me by Friend Geoff, whom I failed to initially credit.
I can't say that I recall anything particular about Ludwig, but he's in DFW's blood and in mine, so a) I wouldn't particularly notice it because Wittgenstein is now mostly common sense and b) you can be sure that Ludwig is somewhere in the background. I assume that everyone is a DFW completist, so, yes, you will read this soon. Do read Wittgenstein, also, his Philosophical Investigations especially. And for the The Pale King, the paperback has additional material; but if you prefer the hardcover, I can trade with you (I've got two of 'em).(less)
25 ott. 09:49
This was pointed out to me by Friend Geoff, whom I failed to initially credit.
I can't say that I recall anything particular about Ludwig, but he's in DFW's blood and in mine, so a) I wouldn't particularly notice it because Wittgenstein is now mostly common sense and b) you can be sure that Ludwig is somewhere in the background. I assume that everyone is a DFW completist, so, yes, you will read this soon. Do read Wittgenstein, also, his Philosophical Investigations especially. And for the The Pale King, the paperback has additional material; but if you prefer the hardcover, I can trade with you (I've got two of 'em).(less)
25 ott. 09:49
s.penkevich
Nathan "N.R." wrote: "s.penkevich wrote: "You always direct us to such great articles, thanks for that. Does he mention Wittgenstein much in this book...more
Nathan "N.R." wrote: "s.penkevich wrote: "You always direct us to such great articles, thanks for that. Does he mention Wittgenstein much in this book, he seems to allude to him heavily in most of his short stories and ..."
I've been brushing up on my LW this summer, I finally finished the Blue/Brown books and I'm working through On Certainty right now. Sadly the 'Major Works' collection I have doesn't have Philosophical Investigations, so I'll probably be picking that up as soon as I polish this collection off.(less)
25 ott. 10:08
I've been brushing up on my LW this summer, I finally finished the Blue/Brown books and I'm working through On Certainty right now. Sadly the 'Major Works' collection I have doesn't have Philosophical Investigations, so I'll probably be picking that up as soon as I polish this collection off.(less)
25 ott. 10:08
Jul 20, 2012
Jason
rated it
5 of 5 stars
·
review of another edition
Recommends it for:
someone who's read Infinite Jest
So I don't feel like I have anything substantive to say about the book and (see spoiler if you dare) I don't want to add a lot of redundant information, but I can say that The Pale King really solidified the feelings I had about DFW. I have a lot more to say about him after reading this, but that's for another venue.
For starters, going into the book knowing that one of the major themes was supposed to be about life’s boringness, and for all the reviews I had read that mentioned the same, I reall...more SoI don't feel like I have anything substantive to say about the book and (see spoiler if you dare) I don't want to add a lot of redundant information, but I can say that The Pale King really solidified the feelings I had about DFW. I have a lot more to say about him after reading this, but that's for another venue.
For starters, going into the book knowing that one of the major themes was supposed to be about life’s boringness, and for all the reviews I had read that mentioned the same, I really expected a bunch of difficult passages, where David’d thoroughly narrate checking one or twenty 1040s, that would bring my pace to a halt. There was a handful of these necessary evils in Infinite Jest, so I knew what he was capable of. But the parts of the book that I think were meant to be dry I just found interesting, even if the procedures and organizational structure of the IRS from, say, 1977–1984 have no relevance to my life. De gustibus non est disputandum. But the writing throughout was as you’d expect: fluent and readable. So the book itself wasn't boring, and it even may get you thinking about the activity of reading itself (again).
I kept thinking throughout the book that it’s a shame DFW isn’t around to write anymore. Not just because of the obvious, but specifically because, while IJ remains and probably always will be my favorite book, The Pale King was clearly written a good 10 years’ worth of wisdom (this coming from a know-nothing twenty-something) and skill refinement after IJ. If he had finished this book, he almost certainly would have outdone himself again. And then again with the next book after that, and so on and so forth. It’s hard to put your finger on it. Maybe it was that this book felt so relaxed compared to the sustained tension in IJ; maybe it's the subtlety of the novel's characters. I mean, do you remember Norman Bombardini from The Broom of the System?
There were a lot of really stand-out passages, particularly Drinion and Rand's chat, but everything and nothing's a spoiler so there's no point telling you about them: you might as well read the whole thing. Overall I think the book will stick with me, although I didn't expect that while reading it. A case of the right book at the right time probably. Definitely gonna get a copy of Although of Course You End up Becoming Yourself next because David Foster Wallace. And PS, if you're looking to start with DFW's fiction, pick IJ and come back to this one later.
Edit:
So I said I couldn’t put my finger on how The Pale King was a more mature work than IJ. Well, I put my finger on it and it has do with why I think you should read IJ first.
Major spoiler alert for both novels. You’ve been warned!
(view spoiler)[
I see The Pale King thematically as a natural extension or continuation of IJ. That's what I was groping after. I guess what I mean is there are clearly similarities between characters in both novels, but there are just as clearly differences. That is, IJ’s characters themselves are TPK’s point of departure. TPK’s characters are essentially the grown up analogues of IJ's. Hal for example had a pretty difficult childhood with the death of Himself; then you’ve got “David Wallace”, who also dealt with the death of his father; and you’ve got Toni Ware, the girl who learned to play dead, who went through something far more horrific. Three characters and, for all intents and purposes, a level playing field.
But on the one hand, there’s Hal, who dealt with Himself’s death in part by dedicating himself to The Show—but not entirely—and in part by having a really guilty, clandestine relationship with Bob Hope. (To say nothing of PGOAT and her story.) On the other hand, Chris Fogle’s father dies in TPK and he pretty much then and there shapes up, turns off As the World Turns, and dedicates his concentration to the job he gets at the IRS, eventually losing interest in the drugs, as he tells us, and who knows what else, that he enjoyed in college. He eased right into a job that requires so much concentration and care it’s heroic and learned how to be successful in his own right (cf. Toni Ware).
Still there’s a lot to speculate on. Like, what is there to be said for someone so content and, if nothing else, more stable like Drinion who is and always will be an Examiner? Or is there nothing more to read into his situation besides that he simply likes his work? And what about for the successful Mr. DeWitt Glendenning himself in §48? Nobody’s invincible? (Interesting choice (or was it cooincidence?), by the way, to put his sections so close to the end knowing the state David was in before he quit working on the book.)
In some ways The Pale King does feel like a finished DFW work because it really doesn’t matter if he ever fed us those answers. And, with total bias, I’d have to say it would be hard to appreciate a lot of what TPK does have to offer as an unfinished novel without the context of the world as the younger David imagined it. If the "jest" in Infinite Jest was that DFW got you compulsively reading his novel, then maybe, if anything, the fortuitous jest with TPK is that we have to figure out how to deal with it as it is or that we can't expect to sit entertained forever: we've got work to do, right?
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For starters, going into the book knowing that one of the major themes was supposed to be about life’s boringness, and for all the reviews I had read that mentioned the same, I reall...more So
For starters, going into the book knowing that one of the major themes was supposed to be about life’s boringness, and for all the reviews I had read that mentioned the same, I really expected a bunch of difficult passages, where David’d thoroughly narrate checking one or twenty 1040s, that would bring my pace to a halt. There was a handful of these necessary evils in Infinite Jest, so I knew what he was capable of. But the parts of the book that I think were meant to be dry I just found interesting, even if the procedures and organizational structure of the IRS from, say, 1977–1984 have no relevance to my life. De gustibus non est disputandum. But the writing throughout was as you’d expect: fluent and readable. So the book itself wasn't boring, and it even may get you thinking about the activity of reading itself (again).
I kept thinking throughout the book that it’s a shame DFW isn’t around to write anymore. Not just because of the obvious, but specifically because, while IJ remains and probably always will be my favorite book, The Pale King was clearly written a good 10 years’ worth of wisdom (this coming from a know-nothing twenty-something) and skill refinement after IJ. If he had finished this book, he almost certainly would have outdone himself again. And then again with the next book after that, and so on and so forth. It’s hard to put your finger on it. Maybe it was that this book felt so relaxed compared to the sustained tension in IJ; maybe it's the subtlety of the novel's characters. I mean, do you remember Norman Bombardini from The Broom of the System?
There were a lot of really stand-out passages, particularly Drinion and Rand's chat, but everything and nothing's a spoiler so there's no point telling you about them: you might as well read the whole thing. Overall I think the book will stick with me, although I didn't expect that while reading it. A case of the right book at the right time probably. Definitely gonna get a copy of Although of Course You End up Becoming Yourself next because David Foster Wallace. And PS, if you're looking to start with DFW's fiction, pick IJ and come back to this one later.
Edit:
So I said I couldn’t put my finger on how The Pale King was a more mature work than IJ. Well, I put my finger on it and it has do with why I think you should read IJ first.
Major spoiler alert for both novels. You’ve been warned!
(view spoiler)[
I see The Pale King thematically as a natural extension or continuation of IJ. That's what I was groping after. I guess what I mean is there are clearly similarities between characters in both novels, but there are just as clearly differences. That is, IJ’s characters themselves are TPK’s point of departure. TPK’s characters are essentially the grown up analogues of IJ's. Hal for example had a pretty difficult childhood with the death of Himself; then you’ve got “David Wallace”, who also dealt with the death of his father; and you’ve got Toni Ware, the girl who learned to play dead, who went through something far more horrific. Three characters and, for all intents and purposes, a level playing field.
But on the one hand, there’s Hal, who dealt with Himself’s death in part by dedicating himself to The Show—but not entirely—and in part by having a really guilty, clandestine relationship with Bob Hope. (To say nothing of PGOAT and her story.) On the other hand, Chris Fogle’s father dies in TPK and he pretty much then and there shapes up, turns off As the World Turns, and dedicates his concentration to the job he gets at the IRS, eventually losing interest in the drugs, as he tells us, and who knows what else, that he enjoyed in college. He eased right into a job that requires so much concentration and care it’s heroic and learned how to be successful in his own right (cf. Toni Ware).
Still there’s a lot to speculate on. Like, what is there to be said for someone so content and, if nothing else, more stable like Drinion who is and always will be an Examiner? Or is there nothing more to read into his situation besides that he simply likes his work? And what about for the successful Mr. DeWitt Glendenning himself in §48? Nobody’s invincible? (Interesting choice (or was it cooincidence?), by the way, to put his sections so close to the end knowing the state David was in before he quit working on the book.)
In some ways The Pale King does feel like a finished DFW work because it really doesn’t matter if he ever fed us those answers. And, with total bias, I’d have to say it would be hard to appreciate a lot of what TPK does have to offer as an unfinished novel without the context of the world as the younger David imagined it. If the "jest" in Infinite Jest was that DFW got you compulsively reading his novel, then maybe, if anything, the fortuitous jest with TPK is that we have to figure out how to deal with it as it is or that we can't expect to sit entertained forever: we've got work to do, right?
(hide spoiler)](less)
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Jason
Haha, yeah, I bet you'll love it. You have to give it a go! You might have a bunch of books ahead of it in the queue, but once you've gotten into it,...more
Haha, yeah, I bet you'll love it. You have to give it a go! You might have a bunch of books ahead of it in the queue, but once you've gotten into it, you'll have long forgotten about them.(less)
21 lug. 06:31
21 lug. 06:31
s.penkevich
That's what I hear. I've recently become obsessed with his writing - his short stories really struck me as pure gold, so I think it'll be the next boo...more
That's what I hear. I've recently become obsessed with his writing - his short stories really struck me as pure gold, so I think it'll be the next book commitment once I've crushed through a couple short ones.(less)
21 lug. 07:07
21 lug. 07:07
As usual, I'll spare you the plot line and general buzz, since I figure if you're reading this, you've read at least some of the endless hype surrounding this unfinished masterpiece.
And it would have been a masterpiece, judging from what exists of it (because it is very incomplete, make no mistake), and the author's own notes--reproduced at the end of the book--toward structure and theme. It takes on Wallace's usual themes of boredom vs. entertainment, normal vs. aberrant, individual vs. group,...more As usual, I'll spare you the plot line and general buzz, since I figure if you're reading this, you've read at least some of the endless hype surrounding this unfinished masterpiece.
And it would have been a masterpiece, judging from what exists of it (because it is very incomplete, make no mistake), and the author's own notes--reproduced at the end of the book--toward structure and theme. It takes on Wallace's usual themes of boredom vs. entertainment, normal vs. aberrant, individual vs. group, and above all, the devil of solipsism. It is this one theme that shades the feel of these notes and vignettes toward a novel closer to the dark late DFW of Oblivion than that of the earlier two novels. As in the final collection of short stories, we see here, above all, characters lost in the labyrinths of their own minds, helpless to escape. And although The Pale King has been touted as some sort of paean to the boredom of routine, it is the characters' struggle against their own consciousness that stands out.
Mostly what The Pale King made me feel was sad. Sad and frustrated at the beguiling incompleteness of what could have been a brilliant novel, sad at the damning price in pain that genius so often exacts from its possessors, sad at what could have been...what could have been.(less)
And it would have been a masterpiece, judging from what exists of it (because it is very incomplete, make no mistake), and the author's own notes--reproduced at the end of the book--toward structure and theme. It takes on Wallace's usual themes of boredom vs. entertainment, normal vs. aberrant, individual vs. group,...more As usual, I'll spare you the plot line and general buzz, since I figure if you're reading this, you've read at least some of the endless hype surrounding this unfinished masterpiece.
And it would have been a masterpiece, judging from what exists of it (because it is very incomplete, make no mistake), and the author's own notes--reproduced at the end of the book--toward structure and theme. It takes on Wallace's usual themes of boredom vs. entertainment, normal vs. aberrant, individual vs. group, and above all, the devil of solipsism. It is this one theme that shades the feel of these notes and vignettes toward a novel closer to the dark late DFW of Oblivion than that of the earlier two novels. As in the final collection of short stories, we see here, above all, characters lost in the labyrinths of their own minds, helpless to escape. And although The Pale King has been touted as some sort of paean to the boredom of routine, it is the characters' struggle against their own consciousness that stands out.
Mostly what The Pale King made me feel was sad. Sad and frustrated at the beguiling incompleteness of what could have been a brilliant novel, sad at the damning price in pain that genius so often exacts from its possessors, sad at what could have been...what could have been.(less)
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I am currently embroiled in one of my monthly book-choosing breakdowns. My book choosing is not done at random, but is a complex process subject to many factors, such as 'what did I read last?' 'what was the nationality of the author who wrote the last book I read?' 're: the last book I read, what was main thrust of the plot?' 'was the author of the last book I read male or female?' 'the last book I read: when was it written?' 're: a potential book, have I read a book by this person before?' 'if...more
I am currently embroiled in one of my monthly book-choosing breakdowns. My book choosing is not done at random, but is a complex process subject to many factors, such as 'what did I read last?' 'what was the nationality of the author who wrote the last book I read?' 're: the last book I read, what was main thrust of the plot?' 'was the author of the last book I read male or female?' 'the last book I read: when was it written?' 're: a potential book, have I read a book by this person before?' 'if so, how long ago did I read a book by them?' and so on and so forth. There are a quite mind-boggling number of constraints I place upon the choosing of my next book, because it has to bear [almost] no similarity to the last book I read. At this moment, as I write this, I am in bed with my laptop [appropriately] on my lap; on the two tables either side of the bed stand 5 precariously piled towers of books, 58 books to be exact. Next to me, on the bed, is The Pale King by David Foster Wallace. I bought the book today, in Waterstones. It cost £9.99. At the conclusion of my purchase the hobbit-like man behind the counter gave me a little card with a stamp on it. Quaint. Ten stamps and you get money off your next book or something. Next book. If only he knew. So, anyway, I reckoned I'd made up my mind, I was going to read The Pale King; no more fucking around, the choice had been made. And, yeah, I know, it was a surprise to me too. What can I say, I was desperate. But I'm not reading it, am I? No, I'm sitting here, fag dangling from my mouth like a stick of dynamite, my head doing the lindy hop, and writing this 'review' in an attempt to distract me from my own insanity. Of The Pale King I read exactly 86 words. I stopped at this point:
'all heads gently nodding in the morning breeze like a mother's soft hand on your cheek.'
Just, fuck no.(less)
'all heads gently nodding in the morning breeze like a mother's soft hand on your cheek.'
Just, fuck no.(less)
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[P]
I haven't read the book but I've seen the film, and yeah I am totally like that, just with more hair-tearing and screaming into my pillow.
06 mag. 12:47
06 mag. 12:47
The really obvious thing that everyone keeps talking about is how sad the reality of this unfinished novel is, how sad it is that DFW the man killed himself and how sad it is that we lost DFW the writer. And it's understandable, talking about that is, because we're human beings and when a writer allows us to connect so deeply with him, when he takes us on the massively emotional trip that most fans of DFW think his books ultimately are, and then is taken by his illness, we feel just as we would...more
The really obvious thing that everyone keeps talking about is how sad the reality of this unfinished novel is, how sad it is that DFW the man killed himself and how sad it is that we lost DFW the writer. And it's understandable, talking about that is, because we're human beings and when a writer allows us to connect so deeply with him, when he takes us on the massively emotional trip that most fans of DFW think his books ultimately are, and then is taken by his illness, we feel just as we would if we were in a personal sort of relationship with said writer.
But this, I believe, is not the real source of the sadness. The real source of the sadness is that DFW was a man of immense philosophical aptitude and human understanding, and that in spite of this he could not persevere. The hopelessness comes not from his writing but from his reality. His entire canon of work is about finding some sort of way out, which way out never materialized for him in reality. And it is immensely hard, considering the sort of writer this guy was, to really sever his work from his person in our heads.
That's why it is a soul-crushingly difficult task to get through this book, especially certain chapters of it, in which he details and really exposes the importance of all the dull, banal issues we have and why they're really not dull and banal at all and why thinking of them that way just prevents us from getting at the real source and meaning of these issues, and traps us in a horrible, solipsistic, and plainly evil cycle.
The Pale King is, on the surface moreso than any other writing of his, about this sort of stuff. It's not solely about boredom or loneliness or... ... Instead, it's about the totality of what it is to be a human being and to deal with being a human being in our world. To say that its world is as engrossing and fascinating as Infinite Jest's would be a lie, and it's plain to see that this novel will never gain the traction that one did, will never be as well-regarded and seminal.
The reason why is not that this is any better or worse. The reason is that The Pale King is just too uncomfortable. It's too honest. It's too real. There are no wheelchair assassins or other absurdities. DFW's distinctive brand of humour is present, of course, but not in a way that allows us any sort of distraction from what is at stake on every page of this book and every moment in our lives. Compare Meredith Rand from this book, and her problematic prettiness, with Joelle Van Dyne's. Even Oblivion allowed us more distance from the shatteringly difficult nature of existence.
Of course, and I almost feel bad for writing this down, you have got to consider the fact that DFW wrote much of this book in his last days, closer to losing his battle.
And you have got to find that scary.
Depending on who you talk to, The Pale King is either DFW's most sophisticated and literary work, in which he eschews any sort of pretension found in his earlier work and forces us to confront serious realities, or it is his least sophisticated, least artful, because it is so tremendously straightforward.
I'm not sure where I think it stands in comparison to his other work. I do know it is, on a chapter by chapter basis, easily superior to Brief Interviews with Hideous Men. There are many chapters here that indisputably stand with some of the best American writing of the last 30-40 years-- some of the specific standouts are mentioned in other reviews here. I won't pick my own because it's too hard for me to do so and would maybe reveal more about myself than I am comfortable revealing even to my closest friends. But The Pale King is ultimately really its own beast, far less cute and far more gruesome than anything else DFW wrote, and very, very difficult to get through (to me at least) because of its nature.
It also somehow feels almost like his most important work, unfinished as it may be. One gets the sense that this book says things that need to be said, that few writers are really willing to talk about, at least in the manner DFW chooses to talk about these things. I get a similar sense about IJ and his short fiction, but it's not the same sense. It's difficult to really get at what the difference exactly is, but I think it has something to do with the crushing reality and mundanity of this book, which is exactly why, again, it will never be the cult item IJ is. DFW often tried to get at very human, basic realities or issues by introducing the extraordinary in one way or another. Here even when we get absurd, seeming diversions, they turn out to be immensely ordinary and mundane and real in a way none of his other fictions are. (less)
But this, I believe, is not the real source of the sadness. The real source of the sadness is that DFW was a man of immense philosophical aptitude and human understanding, and that in spite of this he could not persevere. The hopelessness comes not from his writing but from his reality. His entire canon of work is about finding some sort of way out, which way out never materialized for him in reality. And it is immensely hard, considering the sort of writer this guy was, to really sever his work from his person in our heads.
That's why it is a soul-crushingly difficult task to get through this book, especially certain chapters of it, in which he details and really exposes the importance of all the dull, banal issues we have and why they're really not dull and banal at all and why thinking of them that way just prevents us from getting at the real source and meaning of these issues, and traps us in a horrible, solipsistic, and plainly evil cycle.
The Pale King is, on the surface moreso than any other writing of his, about this sort of stuff. It's not solely about boredom or loneliness or... ... Instead, it's about the totality of what it is to be a human being and to deal with being a human being in our world. To say that its world is as engrossing and fascinating as Infinite Jest's would be a lie, and it's plain to see that this novel will never gain the traction that one did, will never be as well-regarded and seminal.
The reason why is not that this is any better or worse. The reason is that The Pale King is just too uncomfortable. It's too honest. It's too real. There are no wheelchair assassins or other absurdities. DFW's distinctive brand of humour is present, of course, but not in a way that allows us any sort of distraction from what is at stake on every page of this book and every moment in our lives. Compare Meredith Rand from this book, and her problematic prettiness, with Joelle Van Dyne's. Even Oblivion allowed us more distance from the shatteringly difficult nature of existence.
Of course, and I almost feel bad for writing this down, you have got to consider the fact that DFW wrote much of this book in his last days, closer to losing his battle.
And you have got to find that scary.
Depending on who you talk to, The Pale King is either DFW's most sophisticated and literary work, in which he eschews any sort of pretension found in his earlier work and forces us to confront serious realities, or it is his least sophisticated, least artful, because it is so tremendously straightforward.
I'm not sure where I think it stands in comparison to his other work. I do know it is, on a chapter by chapter basis, easily superior to Brief Interviews with Hideous Men. There are many chapters here that indisputably stand with some of the best American writing of the last 30-40 years-- some of the specific standouts are mentioned in other reviews here. I won't pick my own because it's too hard for me to do so and would maybe reveal more about myself than I am comfortable revealing even to my closest friends. But The Pale King is ultimately really its own beast, far less cute and far more gruesome than anything else DFW wrote, and very, very difficult to get through (to me at least) because of its nature.
It also somehow feels almost like his most important work, unfinished as it may be. One gets the sense that this book says things that need to be said, that few writers are really willing to talk about, at least in the manner DFW chooses to talk about these things. I get a similar sense about IJ and his short fiction, but it's not the same sense. It's difficult to really get at what the difference exactly is, but I think it has something to do with the crushing reality and mundanity of this book, which is exactly why, again, it will never be the cult item IJ is. DFW often tried to get at very human, basic realities or issues by introducing the extraordinary in one way or another. Here even when we get absurd, seeming diversions, they turn out to be immensely ordinary and mundane and real in a way none of his other fictions are. (less)
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Jennifer D.
Oooh!! Sa-weet on the 5-star, Adam.
I love your review and you put words to the essence of my feelings about DFW's death "The real source of the sadnes...more Oooh!! Sa-weet on the 5-star, Adam.
I love your review and you put words to the essence of my feelings about DFW's death "The real source of the sadness is that DFW was a man of immense philosophical aptitude and human understanding, and that in spite of this he could not persevere. The hopelessness comes not from his writing but from his reality. His entire canon of work is about finding some sort of way out, which way out never materialized for him in reality...".
Thank you.(less)
01 giu. 17:02
I love your review and you put words to the essence of my feelings about DFW's death "The real source of the sadnes...more Oooh!! Sa-weet on the 5-star, Adam.
I love your review and you put words to the essence of my feelings about DFW's death "The real source of the sadness is that DFW was a man of immense philosophical aptitude and human understanding, and that in spite of this he could not persevere. The hopelessness comes not from his writing but from his reality. His entire canon of work is about finding some sort of way out, which way out never materialized for him in reality...".
Thank you.(less)
01 giu. 17:02
Joshua Nomen-Mutatio
The second paragraph gets at something that's terrified me in extremely on-edge depressed moments. It was what ran through my head when I first heard...more
The second paragraph gets at something that's terrified me in extremely on-edge depressed moments. It was what ran through my head when I first heard about his death. I thought he had his shit together, he was a model for how to overcome personal demons of all sorts, and then he strangled himself to death. Difficult, sad, stuff, but TPK redeems it in some difficult-to-express way...(less)
06 ott. 19:20
06 ott. 19:20
David Foster Wallace takes on the central problem of our times. The book can be neatly summed up in section 45, that is pages 439-440 and ends with the sentence "If you are immune to boredom there is literally nothing you can't accomplish". Pale King is therefore a perfect complement or maybe the development of the idea of infinite jest (the desperate need to be entertained), by presenting that imperative's underlying cause "rather the way the ability to breathe and pump blood underlies all thou...more
David Foster Wallace takes on the central problem of our times. The book can be neatly summed up in section 45, that is pages 439-440 and ends with the sentence "If you are immune to boredom there is literally nothing you can't accomplish". Pale King is therefore a perfect complement or maybe the development of the idea of infinite jest (the desperate need to be entertained), by presenting that imperative's underlying cause "rather the way the ability to breathe and pump blood underlies all thought and action."
It's certainly an unfinished novel, there are parts that clunk, in particular some of the overwrought conversation between IRS staff, and the whole is somewhat less than the parts. I gave it five stars because I'd read it again. Though I wouldn't read it all again.
I would read these passages again: Fogle's 100-page account about why he joined the IRS is freestanding wonder and should be in William James's "Varieties of Religious Experience" (might they republish it like they did the first part of "Underworld"?); the horrible and hilarious high-school shop accident that ends with the poignant observation "...that what they'd then thought was the wide round world was a little boy's preening dream"; the sixty-page barroom tete-a-tete between "The fox" and "Mr. excitement"; the trailer crash and murder of Toni Ware's mother; all are worth rereading and close study. For humor I've already returned to the sixties experience of a certain Wash U student, and also the account of the fierce infant who "would just gaze at the auditor fiercely, with a combination of intensity and disdain, its expression rather as if it were hungry and the auditor were food but not quite the right kind."
Plus I actually enjoyed some of the info about the IRS, even if it isn't true. If we get audited, I'll check the auditor's desk name plate to see if it's Phil McPockets.
Unexpectedly, it's one of the best books on meditation that I've read even though the word itself is only mentioned once, and then only in the notes section in the back. (less)
It's certainly an unfinished novel, there are parts that clunk, in particular some of the overwrought conversation between IRS staff, and the whole is somewhat less than the parts. I gave it five stars because I'd read it again. Though I wouldn't read it all again.
I would read these passages again: Fogle's 100-page account about why he joined the IRS is freestanding wonder and should be in William James's "Varieties of Religious Experience" (might they republish it like they did the first part of "Underworld"?); the horrible and hilarious high-school shop accident that ends with the poignant observation "...that what they'd then thought was the wide round world was a little boy's preening dream"; the sixty-page barroom tete-a-tete between "The fox" and "Mr. excitement"; the trailer crash and murder of Toni Ware's mother; all are worth rereading and close study. For humor I've already returned to the sixties experience of a certain Wash U student, and also the account of the fierce infant who "would just gaze at the auditor fiercely, with a combination of intensity and disdain, its expression rather as if it were hungry and the auditor were food but not quite the right kind."
Plus I actually enjoyed some of the info about the IRS, even if it isn't true. If we get audited, I'll check the auditor's desk name plate to see if it's Phil McPockets.
Unexpectedly, it's one of the best books on meditation that I've read even though the word itself is only mentioned once, and then only in the notes section in the back. (less)
Upon hearing that David Foster Wallace’s unfinished last novel was going to be published, my first thought was, “How do they know it wasn‘t done?” Because it’s not like Infinite Jest was a model of story resolution.
My question was answered in the introduction of The Pale King by editor Michael Pietsch that gives a concise breakdown of what Wallace left behind and how he put it together. He makes it very clear that this is not the book that Wallace was envisioning before his suicide. As Pietsch...more Upon hearing that David Foster Wallace’s unfinished last novel was going to be published, my first thought was, “How do they know it wasn‘t done?” Because it’s not like Infinite Jest was a model of story resolution.
My question was answered in the introduction of The Pale King by editor Michael Pietsch that gives a concise breakdown of what Wallace left behind and how he put it together. He makes it very clear that this is not the book that Wallace was envisioning before his suicide. As Pietsch explains, what had been completed was too good to just put in a library where only scholars would read it, and if I ever meet Mr. Pietsch, I’m going to shake his hand and buy him a drink for helping to get this published.
The book is about the examiners (a/k/a wigglers) at a regional Internal Revenue Service center in Peoria, Illinois, but there’s no real overall plot to it. It comes across as a series of loosely connected short stories. Which makes sense considering that Wallace wrote chapters out of sequence and left no detailed outline, but Pietsch also states that Wallace’s notes repeatedly mentioned that he wanted the book to be ‘tornadic’ in nature. Apparently he planned it to be a swirl of people and events that would randomly bonk the reader on the head until some kind of larger pattern emerged. Without the rest of the book, we don’t get the bigger picture, just the bonks, but almost all the bonks are fascinating.
No surprise then that most of what is sticking with me about the book is random, too. In no particular order:
* There’s a lot here about boredom and bureaucracy, but it doesn’t go in the direction you’d expect. While Wallace repeatedly explores the soul-crushing tedium of going through tax forms and the dull inner workings of the IRS, there’s no real raging against the machine going on here. In fact, Wallace almost seems to celebrate the focus required to do the job in the face of unending boredom and make it seem noble. One could argue that his point was that the majority of us waste our time trying to avoid being bored without accomplishing much so you might as well sit down and get something done.
* I am going to change my name to Diablo the Left-Handed Surrealist even though I’m right handed and can’t paint.
* The early chapter featuring Leonard Stecyk as the kid who is so helpful and charitable that everyone hates him is one of the funniest things I’ve read in a long time. Impressive how Wallace was able to make the reader want to punch Leonard in the face during this portion, but later on turned him into a more sympathetic character who gets to shine in a crisis.
* Like a lot of people, I think my favorite part of the book may be the long story of how Chris went from a self-described ‘wastoid’ with father issues to a guy who actively seeks out a career in the IRS after mistakenly sitting in on a class about taxes.
* Wallace wrote himself into the novel, and then went to a lot of effort trying to convince the reader that what he/she was reading was actually a memoir disguised as a fiction for legal purposes. He recounts long discussions with lawyers and having to get a bunch of releases signed by various real people at the insistence of his publisher, and I was just nodding along with this part when it suddenly hit me that since Wallace had died before finishing the book the whole thing was an elaborate ‘Gotcha!’.
* I was often listening to the audio version of this at work while performing a bunch of dull tasks. So I was listening to a book about people doing boring work while doing boring work.
I got so into the audible book that I took the personally unprecedented step of getting the print version from the library while in the middle of it so that I could go back and look up some points.
* Another chapter I found oddly fascinating was the part where beautiful Meredith Rand is telling the strangely literal Shane Drinion about how she met her husband when she was committed to a mental institution as a teenager for being a cutter. Drinion seems like he could have Asperger’s or some other kind of social impairment, but gets very interested in her story. This leads to a weird dynamic of him be completely tuned to her with no agenda of his own, and Meredith finds this kind of attention appealing. It was like Scarlett Johansson telling her life story to Sheldon on The Big Bang Theory.
* Creepiest part of the book was the section about a kid who decides to kiss every square inch of his own body and embarks on a long-term campaign of freaky contortions and lip extending exercises. That whole story just made me want to lay down with a bottle of ibuprofen and a heating pad.
* The notes included at the end indicate that there was a lot that Wallace planned to write didn’t get to it. I find this one particularly interesting: “Drinion is happy. Ability to pay attention. Turns out that bliss - a second-by-second joy + gratitude at the gift of being alive, conscious - lies on the other side of crushing, crushing boredom. Pay close attention to the most tedious things you can find (tax returns, televised golf) , and, in waves, a boredom like you’ve never known will wash over you and just about kill you. Ride these out, and it’s like stepping from black and white into color. Like water after days in the desert. Constant bliss in every atom.”
I would have loved to read what Wallace could have come up with along those lines and the rest of what he had been planning. The Pale King is brilliant in a lot of ways, but it’s also a sad, sad read because most readers will be left haunted by the ghost of what could have been.(less)
My question was answered in the introduction of The Pale King by editor Michael Pietsch that gives a concise breakdown of what Wallace left behind and how he put it together. He makes it very clear that this is not the book that Wallace was envisioning before his suicide. As Pietsch...more Upon hearing that David Foster Wallace’s unfinished last novel was going to be published, my first thought was, “How do they know it wasn‘t done?” Because it’s not like Infinite Jest was a model of story resolution.
My question was answered in the introduction of The Pale King by editor Michael Pietsch that gives a concise breakdown of what Wallace left behind and how he put it together. He makes it very clear that this is not the book that Wallace was envisioning before his suicide. As Pietsch explains, what had been completed was too good to just put in a library where only scholars would read it, and if I ever meet Mr. Pietsch, I’m going to shake his hand and buy him a drink for helping to get this published.
The book is about the examiners (a/k/a wigglers) at a regional Internal Revenue Service center in Peoria, Illinois, but there’s no real overall plot to it. It comes across as a series of loosely connected short stories. Which makes sense considering that Wallace wrote chapters out of sequence and left no detailed outline, but Pietsch also states that Wallace’s notes repeatedly mentioned that he wanted the book to be ‘tornadic’ in nature. Apparently he planned it to be a swirl of people and events that would randomly bonk the reader on the head until some kind of larger pattern emerged. Without the rest of the book, we don’t get the bigger picture, just the bonks, but almost all the bonks are fascinating.
No surprise then that most of what is sticking with me about the book is random, too. In no particular order:
* There’s a lot here about boredom and bureaucracy, but it doesn’t go in the direction you’d expect. While Wallace repeatedly explores the soul-crushing tedium of going through tax forms and the dull inner workings of the IRS, there’s no real raging against the machine going on here. In fact, Wallace almost seems to celebrate the focus required to do the job in the face of unending boredom and make it seem noble. One could argue that his point was that the majority of us waste our time trying to avoid being bored without accomplishing much so you might as well sit down and get something done.
* I am going to change my name to Diablo the Left-Handed Surrealist even though I’m right handed and can’t paint.
* The early chapter featuring Leonard Stecyk as the kid who is so helpful and charitable that everyone hates him is one of the funniest things I’ve read in a long time. Impressive how Wallace was able to make the reader want to punch Leonard in the face during this portion, but later on turned him into a more sympathetic character who gets to shine in a crisis.
* Like a lot of people, I think my favorite part of the book may be the long story of how Chris went from a self-described ‘wastoid’ with father issues to a guy who actively seeks out a career in the IRS after mistakenly sitting in on a class about taxes.
* Wallace wrote himself into the novel, and then went to a lot of effort trying to convince the reader that what he/she was reading was actually a memoir disguised as a fiction for legal purposes. He recounts long discussions with lawyers and having to get a bunch of releases signed by various real people at the insistence of his publisher, and I was just nodding along with this part when it suddenly hit me that since Wallace had died before finishing the book the whole thing was an elaborate ‘Gotcha!’.
* I was often listening to the audio version of this at work while performing a bunch of dull tasks. So I was listening to a book about people doing boring work while doing boring work.
I got so into the audible book that I took the personally unprecedented step of getting the print version from the library while in the middle of it so that I could go back and look up some points.
* Another chapter I found oddly fascinating was the part where beautiful Meredith Rand is telling the strangely literal Shane Drinion about how she met her husband when she was committed to a mental institution as a teenager for being a cutter. Drinion seems like he could have Asperger’s or some other kind of social impairment, but gets very interested in her story. This leads to a weird dynamic of him be completely tuned to her with no agenda of his own, and Meredith finds this kind of attention appealing. It was like Scarlett Johansson telling her life story to Sheldon on The Big Bang Theory.
* Creepiest part of the book was the section about a kid who decides to kiss every square inch of his own body and embarks on a long-term campaign of freaky contortions and lip extending exercises. That whole story just made me want to lay down with a bottle of ibuprofen and a heating pad.
* The notes included at the end indicate that there was a lot that Wallace planned to write didn’t get to it. I find this one particularly interesting: “Drinion is happy. Ability to pay attention. Turns out that bliss - a second-by-second joy + gratitude at the gift of being alive, conscious - lies on the other side of crushing, crushing boredom. Pay close attention to the most tedious things you can find (tax returns, televised golf) , and, in waves, a boredom like you’ve never known will wash over you and just about kill you. Ride these out, and it’s like stepping from black and white into color. Like water after days in the desert. Constant bliss in every atom.”
I would have loved to read what Wallace could have come up with along those lines and the rest of what he had been planning. The Pale King is brilliant in a lot of ways, but it’s also a sad, sad read because most readers will be left haunted by the ghost of what could have been.(less)
Update (3/14/2013. Um, about 1:48pm) After further thoughts, discussions, and arguments (all with myself), I've upped the rating to 4. The book deserves it, and 4 stars sounds right.
Now, a too-long-to-be-an-aside aside....
I used to be a sandblaster at the company I still currently work at. That mostly consisted of me, sitting at a sandblasting cabinet, cleaning off pieces of bronze artwork, so they could be further worked on, welded together, etc. If that sounds a bit boring....good, you've cau...more Update (3/14/2013. Um, about 1:48pm) After further thoughts, discussions, and arguments (all with myself), I've upped the rating to 4. The book deserves it, and 4 stars sounds right.
Now, a too-long-to-be-an-aside aside....
I used to be a sandblaster at the company I still currently work at. That mostly consisted of me, sitting at a sandblasting cabinet, cleaning off pieces of bronze artwork, so they could be further worked on, welded together, etc. If that sounds a bit boring....good, you've caught on quick. I sat for hours a day, just cleaning artwork after artwork, and it was not a job for somebody who needed constant stimulation. Bluntly, it got pretty damn boring at times. But, I found my way around that tediousness, mostly through blasting music at obscene levels, making little games at blasting pieces in record time, and sometimes, when I needed it, going to that happy place in my head. I found that you can make some really beautiful and strange movies in your own head when needed. Anyways, there was a welder, let's call him N, and once in a while, when he had no work in his department, he would be sent to my department. Which he (and I) hated. N was loud, and brash, and as soon as he started working, the complaining began. Soon enough, I would feel a tap on my shoulder, see him standing there, and the floodgates of bitching began. "Jesus, Dave, how the ---- do you do this all day? I want to shoot myself everytime I have to go back here. What the ---- are you listening to? Dude, if I had to work here every day, I'd shoot myself. How do you sit there like that...are you even listening? Take your --------- headphones off...."
You get the idea.
Whenever N was working with me, it was horrible, not just for his continued bitching, but also because I couldn't hide the tedium with him around. All the negative aspects of the job, everything that I had tried to shove into dark corners to be able to get something done, was now under an encompassing spotlight glare, and I realized the impossibility of dealing with malaise when you have an irritated songbird on your shoulder who makes it a point to single out each dull and weary condition in front of you. When N was working next to me, what was once a quiet plodding job became horrifically sluggish and dense, and I wondered what I was doing. Which brings me to Pale King....
Because PK is about boredom, specifically the boredom of being an examiner in the IRS, and more pointedly, what kind of people would work, no, more than that, would thrive and seek out such an environment. All the workers DFW writes of are damaged in some way, be it growing up abandoned in an orphanage, raised by a line of deranged, unpredictable matriarchs, or being the type of person who decides at a young age that your goal is to touch every part of your body with your lips, and then achieve that goal up to the various body parts that would be forbidden to the cause. (like the back of the head. I know what parts you were thinking of first, and those parts were reached.) Wallace seems to present these people to say that they are the chosen, that the people who would immerse themselves in that environment are the ones who have not conceived of serious boredom, and thus dullness becomes the exciting vacation, the 8 hours a day where you can get what life never offers on the outside.
DFW does not talk about the boredom, so much as dump you into the deep end, sink or swim. Several chapters do nothing but drone on, at first glance with no real point. The points were there, but, man, you had to dig. The worst part was Wallace taking the place of existential trilling songbird, seeming to squawk at you during the thickest sections. "Man, how boring is this? I mean, holy cow, this is sluggish!" Especially during the meta-tinged author forewords, which are mindf--ks meant to present Pale King as a true story, and DFW as an actual character in said story. (For the record, pretty sure that isn't true) Every time Wallace talks to the reader in the book, he lies, in a genius sort of way. For example, the first foreword he proceeds to tell how the IRS learned to get Pro-Revenue Service legislation passed by making it the law so boring and dense that nobody would read it, and find out what the IRS was really trying to do. And he does this by making the foreword so boring and dense that you have to struggle to find the point... Mindf--ker. Those antics make the book unbelievably cerebral, and absolutely difficult to plow through.
Despite this, there are numerous sections that are worth the effort. The two longest chapters are also, not coincidentally, the best in the book. One is a conversation between an attractive woman and man who would best be described as a computer, the other is one employee, during an interview, relaying his life story and how he decided to work at the IRS. Both are excellent, as much for what they don't tell as what they do, and both also give the most character development/backstory in PK. There wasn't much of that in the book, but to be fair, that wasn't at all what DFW was going for. As I said, there are many philosophical points being made in Pale King, floating in stupor to be extracted out by thoughtful examination. PK may be the smartest fiction book I've ever read, certainly one of the hardest, but not one I can sell as extremely enjoyable. I want to read more DFW, in the future, but I'm willing to take some time in between dives towards the deep end. (less)
Now, a too-long-to-be-an-aside aside....
I used to be a sandblaster at the company I still currently work at. That mostly consisted of me, sitting at a sandblasting cabinet, cleaning off pieces of bronze artwork, so they could be further worked on, welded together, etc. If that sounds a bit boring....good, you've cau...more Update (3/14/2013. Um, about 1:48pm) After further thoughts, discussions, and arguments (all with myself), I've upped the rating to 4. The book deserves it, and 4 stars sounds right.
Now, a too-long-to-be-an-aside aside....
I used to be a sandblaster at the company I still currently work at. That mostly consisted of me, sitting at a sandblasting cabinet, cleaning off pieces of bronze artwork, so they could be further worked on, welded together, etc. If that sounds a bit boring....good, you've caught on quick. I sat for hours a day, just cleaning artwork after artwork, and it was not a job for somebody who needed constant stimulation. Bluntly, it got pretty damn boring at times. But, I found my way around that tediousness, mostly through blasting music at obscene levels, making little games at blasting pieces in record time, and sometimes, when I needed it, going to that happy place in my head. I found that you can make some really beautiful and strange movies in your own head when needed. Anyways, there was a welder, let's call him N, and once in a while, when he had no work in his department, he would be sent to my department. Which he (and I) hated. N was loud, and brash, and as soon as he started working, the complaining began. Soon enough, I would feel a tap on my shoulder, see him standing there, and the floodgates of bitching began. "Jesus, Dave, how the ---- do you do this all day? I want to shoot myself everytime I have to go back here. What the ---- are you listening to? Dude, if I had to work here every day, I'd shoot myself. How do you sit there like that...are you even listening? Take your --------- headphones off...."
You get the idea.
Whenever N was working with me, it was horrible, not just for his continued bitching, but also because I couldn't hide the tedium with him around. All the negative aspects of the job, everything that I had tried to shove into dark corners to be able to get something done, was now under an encompassing spotlight glare, and I realized the impossibility of dealing with malaise when you have an irritated songbird on your shoulder who makes it a point to single out each dull and weary condition in front of you. When N was working next to me, what was once a quiet plodding job became horrifically sluggish and dense, and I wondered what I was doing. Which brings me to Pale King....
Because PK is about boredom, specifically the boredom of being an examiner in the IRS, and more pointedly, what kind of people would work, no, more than that, would thrive and seek out such an environment. All the workers DFW writes of are damaged in some way, be it growing up abandoned in an orphanage, raised by a line of deranged, unpredictable matriarchs, or being the type of person who decides at a young age that your goal is to touch every part of your body with your lips, and then achieve that goal up to the various body parts that would be forbidden to the cause. (like the back of the head. I know what parts you were thinking of first, and those parts were reached.) Wallace seems to present these people to say that they are the chosen, that the people who would immerse themselves in that environment are the ones who have not conceived of serious boredom, and thus dullness becomes the exciting vacation, the 8 hours a day where you can get what life never offers on the outside.
DFW does not talk about the boredom, so much as dump you into the deep end, sink or swim. Several chapters do nothing but drone on, at first glance with no real point. The points were there, but, man, you had to dig. The worst part was Wallace taking the place of existential trilling songbird, seeming to squawk at you during the thickest sections. "Man, how boring is this? I mean, holy cow, this is sluggish!" Especially during the meta-tinged author forewords, which are mindf--ks meant to present Pale King as a true story, and DFW as an actual character in said story. (For the record, pretty sure that isn't true) Every time Wallace talks to the reader in the book, he lies, in a genius sort of way. For example, the first foreword he proceeds to tell how the IRS learned to get Pro-Revenue Service legislation passed by making it the law so boring and dense that nobody would read it, and find out what the IRS was really trying to do. And he does this by making the foreword so boring and dense that you have to struggle to find the point... Mindf--ker. Those antics make the book unbelievably cerebral, and absolutely difficult to plow through.
Despite this, there are numerous sections that are worth the effort. The two longest chapters are also, not coincidentally, the best in the book. One is a conversation between an attractive woman and man who would best be described as a computer, the other is one employee, during an interview, relaying his life story and how he decided to work at the IRS. Both are excellent, as much for what they don't tell as what they do, and both also give the most character development/backstory in PK. There wasn't much of that in the book, but to be fair, that wasn't at all what DFW was going for. As I said, there are many philosophical points being made in Pale King, floating in stupor to be extracted out by thoughtful examination. PK may be the smartest fiction book I've ever read, certainly one of the hardest, but not one I can sell as extremely enjoyable. I want to read more DFW, in the future, but I'm willing to take some time in between dives towards the deep end. (less)
B.I. #? 04-11
'Well, I was going to suppress the urge to do it this way, but it seemed fitting. Not just in that meta-gimmicky way, but like a sort of homage. Because I genuinely do love the man and his writing, which is not the sort of sentiment that I usually feel toward most fiction writers that I admire.'
Q.
'Okay, maybe love isn't the right word. More like a relatable connection. Like listening to that Nine Inch Nails album With Teeth, and thinking about Reznor's substance abuse problem, an...more B.I. #? 04-11
'Well, I was going to suppress the urge to do it this way, but it seemed fitting. Not just in that meta-gimmicky way, but like a sort of homage. Because I genuinely do love the man and his writing, which is not the sort of sentiment that I usually feel toward most fiction writers that I admire.'
Q.
'Okay, maybe love isn't the right word. More like a relatable connection. Like listening to that Nine Inch Nails album With Teeth, and thinking about Reznor's substance abuse problem, and that particularly stormy and tumultuous period in which he wrote The Fragile, and subsequently crawled out of depression, alcohol and drugs, bulked up, made a comeback, and released a new album. And so that album now strikes seriously personal emotional chords within my being because I feel that I know what Reznor is getting at, even if the lyrics are comedically self-pitying, they're cathartic and bold, still-'
Q.
'Yeah, a little off topic I guess. What I'm basically trying to say is that I just relate to him ... like I don't relate to Pynchon so much, or Gaddis, or Bellow ... maybe Mishima and Vollmann. Vollmann is complicated though, saying I relate to Vollmann risks sounding sort of pretentious. He translates the human condition well, but as far as being capable of relating to Vollmann as a person ... not so much. Anyway, Wallace just gives voice to how difficult it is to explain what's going on inside one's head. My own thought process works in a very similar manner to his. He seems to give voice to a lot of the anxieties and neurosis that I try to articulate to people sometimes, or maybe he just expresses the occasional failure in attempting to do so.'
Q.
'You know, I really try to avoid reading the reviews. I guess I just don't care. I know that I like it, and a few close friends do. It's personal. Like, I don't even want to attempt to sound objective when talking about Wallace. There's just no point. I'm emotionally and cerebrally transfixed by his books.
Q.
'Sure, that's going to be a focal point in a lot of the subsequent criticism. Already has really. I mean, they published a fucking commencement speech of his. But you and I basically know that it happened. He did it. He's not coming back, but thanks to Michael Pietsch, who I think did the right thing by working on releasing this material, we have a semblance of what he was going for. I say, it's best to just focus on the work at hand. Attempt to imagine what Wallace was going for with this piece, rather than try to diagnose his suicide.'
Q.
'Honestly, the man was clinically depressed. All that I can say is this: I get it. Clinical depression is fucking horrifying. Like, in example: have you ever experienced total nihilism? Like, as in nothing? As in I feel nothing about anything right now, and I'm just emotionally and mentally numb and sort of inert and dead?
Q.
'And that's just the thing. David struggled with every creative bone in his body to fight the depressed temptations of nihilism and apathy and self-gratifying cynical irony. I mean, he worked so hard to get away from it. One thing that I pulled from the first half of the book is ... like, look, nihilism is many things, but it most certainly is not cool or fun or hep. It's an awful, life-defeating, soul-murdering cognitive phenomenon. People need to fight that urge, and life, and well, the various like soul-murderingly dull jobs that most people come across in the span of said life, will test ever fiber of your earnestly engaged being. David's books all seem to suggest that we fight that urge to not care. It's hard work. He taught me that. One of the most valuable life lessons I'll ever fuckin' learn.
Q....
'Well, it's unpleasant to say the least. Personally speaking, I wake up certain mornings, and possibly due to how boring sobriety has made my life seem, feel nothing about my life. So much to the point at which, yes, it does seem like a rational decision for me to simply eliminate my own map. I doubt that I will, but speaking as a depressed person, I understand how unbearable that can be. Add anti-depressants to the mix, and one's head can, chemically speaking, turn into a fucking nightmare. It just breaks people down sometimes. I've felt numb all day, but that's another story.'
Q.
'Yeah, I miss him almost like I would a real friend. There is a part later in the book ... another vignette which illustrates the character Steyck's pathological niceness and diligence. It's sort of a drawn out, intensely morbid yet hilarious joke. The joke itself is sort of like black humor on steroids. It's so dark and sardonic, yet sympathetic and brilliant and basically hilarious, that no one but Wallace could've written it. And as I sat in my room on the couch, reading this part in the book, I sighed, this deep melancholy sigh, and sort of just intoned out loud, "Oh Dave, this is it, huh?". And as sad as this little moment was, it was just so richly imbued with gratitude and admiration and a generally warm feeling of fondness for his sense of humor and originality. I was upset, yet simultaneously sort of comforted by that moment.'
Q.
' ... '
Q.
'I mean, generally speaking, it's about human boredom, that, and the remarkable ability that certain human beings have to basically immerse themselves in the real-world epitome of dullness and tedium. He used the IRS; the culture of "wigglers" and CID agents as an example.'
Q....
'I think it's pretty brilliant, really. And after reading the material that Pietsch had arranged, I get the impression that Wallace had such elaborate intentions for this book. Even in it's unfinished form, it's still massively impressive.
Q.
'It is similar to his previous stuff, thematically and otherwise. The unfortunate thing is that it seems like he really hit this peak in his strengths as a storyteller and narrator before the suicide. There is a certain laid-back cadence and rhythm to his prose. It's just so casual yet engaging. I mean, a lot of people seem put off by the sheer length of some of his sentences, and while I'll totally concede to them being sort of dense, they're really not that ... 'difficult'? I dunno, again, that's more like me trying to defend Wallace's writing and justify his cultural relevance, which, as I hinted at before, I just don't care to. I know that I like it.'
Q.
'Well, it's fiction; these are all basically just gut reactions and opinions anyway. With most novels, short stories, etc, I like play around and attempt to put them in their respective historical context and everything, listing the flaws and strengths of the plot and all that, but in the end, it's just a drawn out way of saying either "I really like this", or "I really dislike this".
Q.
'Okay ... '
Q.
'Apparently, Wallace was working as a GS-9 public sector employee in the early 80's, which I guess was in order to pay off his tuition from Amherst? I believe it.'
Q.
'Yeah, there is an author foreword ... about eighty pages into the story. It's done very tastefully, but taking the incompleteness of the work into consideration, it might look dubious to some.'
Q.
'Of course that came to mind. I just think that it's a cheap way of explaining why it's there. I mean, Wallace had such a keen perspective on all of the common tropes of post-WWII, 'postmodern' fiction, that it just seems a little silly to imagine that he was naive enough, especially at this point in his career, to lazily fall back on such a common self-insertion. It could be argued that the enormous mindfuck of a legal conundrum that writing a memoir about being a GS-9 IRS employee must be, led Wallace to avoid the straightforward memoir format, and attempt to explain why he was seemingly blending fiction and reality. It's all just too difficult and painful to theorize about though. Who knows what he really had in mind? Who knows if he even wanted that part in there? Again, it seems irrelevant at this point. I have total faith in the fact that it would have been great ... even better than it already is.'
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'Well, I was going to suppress the urge to do it this way, but it seemed fitting. Not just in that meta-gimmicky way, but like a sort of homage. Because I genuinely do love the man and his writing, which is not the sort of sentiment that I usually feel toward most fiction writers that I admire.'
Q.
'Okay, maybe love isn't the right word. More like a relatable connection. Like listening to that Nine Inch Nails album With Teeth, and thinking about Reznor's substance abuse problem, an...more B.I. #? 04-11
'Well, I was going to suppress the urge to do it this way, but it seemed fitting. Not just in that meta-gimmicky way, but like a sort of homage. Because I genuinely do love the man and his writing, which is not the sort of sentiment that I usually feel toward most fiction writers that I admire.'
Q.
'Okay, maybe love isn't the right word. More like a relatable connection. Like listening to that Nine Inch Nails album With Teeth, and thinking about Reznor's substance abuse problem, and that particularly stormy and tumultuous period in which he wrote The Fragile, and subsequently crawled out of depression, alcohol and drugs, bulked up, made a comeback, and released a new album. And so that album now strikes seriously personal emotional chords within my being because I feel that I know what Reznor is getting at, even if the lyrics are comedically self-pitying, they're cathartic and bold, still-'
Q.
'Yeah, a little off topic I guess. What I'm basically trying to say is that I just relate to him ... like I don't relate to Pynchon so much, or Gaddis, or Bellow ... maybe Mishima and Vollmann. Vollmann is complicated though, saying I relate to Vollmann risks sounding sort of pretentious. He translates the human condition well, but as far as being capable of relating to Vollmann as a person ... not so much. Anyway, Wallace just gives voice to how difficult it is to explain what's going on inside one's head. My own thought process works in a very similar manner to his. He seems to give voice to a lot of the anxieties and neurosis that I try to articulate to people sometimes, or maybe he just expresses the occasional failure in attempting to do so.'
Q.
'You know, I really try to avoid reading the reviews. I guess I just don't care. I know that I like it, and a few close friends do. It's personal. Like, I don't even want to attempt to sound objective when talking about Wallace. There's just no point. I'm emotionally and cerebrally transfixed by his books.
Q.
'Sure, that's going to be a focal point in a lot of the subsequent criticism. Already has really. I mean, they published a fucking commencement speech of his. But you and I basically know that it happened. He did it. He's not coming back, but thanks to Michael Pietsch, who I think did the right thing by working on releasing this material, we have a semblance of what he was going for. I say, it's best to just focus on the work at hand. Attempt to imagine what Wallace was going for with this piece, rather than try to diagnose his suicide.'
Q.
'Honestly, the man was clinically depressed. All that I can say is this: I get it. Clinical depression is fucking horrifying. Like, in example: have you ever experienced total nihilism? Like, as in nothing? As in I feel nothing about anything right now, and I'm just emotionally and mentally numb and sort of inert and dead?
Q.
'And that's just the thing. David struggled with every creative bone in his body to fight the depressed temptations of nihilism and apathy and self-gratifying cynical irony. I mean, he worked so hard to get away from it. One thing that I pulled from the first half of the book is ... like, look, nihilism is many things, but it most certainly is not cool or fun or hep. It's an awful, life-defeating, soul-murdering cognitive phenomenon. People need to fight that urge, and life, and well, the various like soul-murderingly dull jobs that most people come across in the span of said life, will test ever fiber of your earnestly engaged being. David's books all seem to suggest that we fight that urge to not care. It's hard work. He taught me that. One of the most valuable life lessons I'll ever fuckin' learn.
Q....
'Well, it's unpleasant to say the least. Personally speaking, I wake up certain mornings, and possibly due to how boring sobriety has made my life seem, feel nothing about my life. So much to the point at which, yes, it does seem like a rational decision for me to simply eliminate my own map. I doubt that I will, but speaking as a depressed person, I understand how unbearable that can be. Add anti-depressants to the mix, and one's head can, chemically speaking, turn into a fucking nightmare. It just breaks people down sometimes. I've felt numb all day, but that's another story.'
Q.
'Yeah, I miss him almost like I would a real friend. There is a part later in the book ... another vignette which illustrates the character Steyck's pathological niceness and diligence. It's sort of a drawn out, intensely morbid yet hilarious joke. The joke itself is sort of like black humor on steroids. It's so dark and sardonic, yet sympathetic and brilliant and basically hilarious, that no one but Wallace could've written it. And as I sat in my room on the couch, reading this part in the book, I sighed, this deep melancholy sigh, and sort of just intoned out loud, "Oh Dave, this is it, huh?". And as sad as this little moment was, it was just so richly imbued with gratitude and admiration and a generally warm feeling of fondness for his sense of humor and originality. I was upset, yet simultaneously sort of comforted by that moment.'
Q.
' ... '
Q.
'I mean, generally speaking, it's about human boredom, that, and the remarkable ability that certain human beings have to basically immerse themselves in the real-world epitome of dullness and tedium. He used the IRS; the culture of "wigglers" and CID agents as an example.'
Q....
'I think it's pretty brilliant, really. And after reading the material that Pietsch had arranged, I get the impression that Wallace had such elaborate intentions for this book. Even in it's unfinished form, it's still massively impressive.
Q.
'It is similar to his previous stuff, thematically and otherwise. The unfortunate thing is that it seems like he really hit this peak in his strengths as a storyteller and narrator before the suicide. There is a certain laid-back cadence and rhythm to his prose. It's just so casual yet engaging. I mean, a lot of people seem put off by the sheer length of some of his sentences, and while I'll totally concede to them being sort of dense, they're really not that ... 'difficult'? I dunno, again, that's more like me trying to defend Wallace's writing and justify his cultural relevance, which, as I hinted at before, I just don't care to. I know that I like it.'
Q.
'Well, it's fiction; these are all basically just gut reactions and opinions anyway. With most novels, short stories, etc, I like play around and attempt to put them in their respective historical context and everything, listing the flaws and strengths of the plot and all that, but in the end, it's just a drawn out way of saying either "I really like this", or "I really dislike this".
Q.
'Okay ... '
Q.
'Apparently, Wallace was working as a GS-9 public sector employee in the early 80's, which I guess was in order to pay off his tuition from Amherst? I believe it.'
Q.
'Yeah, there is an author foreword ... about eighty pages into the story. It's done very tastefully, but taking the incompleteness of the work into consideration, it might look dubious to some.'
Q.
'Of course that came to mind. I just think that it's a cheap way of explaining why it's there. I mean, Wallace had such a keen perspective on all of the common tropes of post-WWII, 'postmodern' fiction, that it just seems a little silly to imagine that he was naive enough, especially at this point in his career, to lazily fall back on such a common self-insertion. It could be argued that the enormous mindfuck of a legal conundrum that writing a memoir about being a GS-9 IRS employee must be, led Wallace to avoid the straightforward memoir format, and attempt to explain why he was seemingly blending fiction and reality. It's all just too difficult and painful to theorize about though. Who knows what he really had in mind? Who knows if he even wanted that part in there? Again, it seems irrelevant at this point. I have total faith in the fact that it would have been great ... even better than it already is.'
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Moira wrote: "Beautiful review.
It's so dark and sardonic, yet sympathetic and brilliant and basically hilarious, that no one but Wallace could've writ...more Moira wrote: "Beautiful review.
It's so dark and sardonic, yet sympathetic and brilliant and basically hilarious, that no one but Wallace could've written it. And as I sat in my room on the couch, reading this ..."
Thanks, Moira.(less)
02 nov. 14:54
It's so dark and sardonic, yet sympathetic and brilliant and basically hilarious, that no one but Wallace could've writ...more Moira wrote: "Beautiful review.
It's so dark and sardonic, yet sympathetic and brilliant and basically hilarious, that no one but Wallace could've written it. And as I sat in my room on the couch, reading this ..."
Thanks, Moira.(less)
02 nov. 14:54
Jesse
yeah i can't help but think, franzen is doing all this to, a) takes shots at an author who he is clearly jealous of (like why can't I be the once-in-a...more
yeah i can't help but think, franzen is doing all this to, a) takes shots at an author who he is clearly jealous of (like why can't I be the once-in-a-generation talent who burns hot and quick and then kills himself because his demons were to powerful. on some level franzen must fell this sentiment) and, b) this is a great way to garner attention; and, whether positive or negative, attention is good for book sales. franzen just has a knack for controversies anytime a release date of one of his novels rolls around: last time it was oprah, this time it's going after dfw's image and even worse his readers, whose lives were enriched by wallace's writing (i.e. fiction's job is to disturb the comfortable and comfort the disturbed - dave did alot of comforting with his novels).
i'll probably still read franzen's book at some point, but i damn sure won't buy it, and i sure as shit don't respect franzen as a fellow human being. of course, he could care less he just wants to be the great american novelist, and now that wallace has checked out, franzen's doing everything in his power to soil dfw and position himself as the writer of this generation. but i'll sleep easy, franzen has no chance. and when we're all gone, people will always read wallace. but franzen - i forsee a John Galsworthy future for his readership, which is, declining steadliy into the arms of obsolescence. sorry jon.(less)
03 nov. 13:27
i'll probably still read franzen's book at some point, but i damn sure won't buy it, and i sure as shit don't respect franzen as a fellow human being. of course, he could care less he just wants to be the great american novelist, and now that wallace has checked out, franzen's doing everything in his power to soil dfw and position himself as the writer of this generation. but i'll sleep easy, franzen has no chance. and when we're all gone, people will always read wallace. but franzen - i forsee a John Galsworthy future for his readership, which is, declining steadliy into the arms of obsolescence. sorry jon.(less)
03 nov. 13:27
How do you review an unfinished book? How do you even start to review an unfinished DFW book about magical tax agents and boredom?
I think I start by saying that the book I read is quite a different book to the book that DFW apparently wanted to write, if you believe the endnotes. The eight pages at the end tell a far more interesting story than do the 540 pages of actual text. You can't review an author's intentions, though, so all I can really do is to try to review the book that was published....more How do you review an unfinished book? How do you even start to review an unfinished DFW book about magical tax agents and boredom?
I think I start by saying that the book I read is quite a different book to the book that DFW apparently wanted to write, if you believe the endnotes. The eight pages at the end tell a far more interesting story than do the 540 pages of actual text. You can't review an author's intentions, though, so all I can really do is to try to review the book that was published.
What makes this even more difficult is that one of the most central themes to the book, appears to hinge on the premise that tax administration is inherently boring. While many people may have no trouble with that assumption, I spent many years in a not dissimilar role in social security administration. I would argue that this kind of work is only boring from the outside. When you're in the middle of it, when you understand the context and the huge implications this has for an entire nation of real people and their lives... it really is exciting and something most of us were highly passionate about. There was a point in the text that referenced, "the pointless complexity of bureaucracy", but there is always a point. Someone somewhere at some point in time has always been trying to achieve something with that complexity, even if the end result is ineffectual, perverse, or the point is no longer relevant. If you know the corporate history, you'll know what the point is (or was).

Even the "tingle tables" (above) are something I would have killed for back in the day. My workplace had a "clean desk policy" to prevent confidential documents being leaked, so everything had to be locked up at the end of the day. This did not stop me from cobbling together bits & pieces of shelving and constructing my own version, however..
This leads me to another issue. I found it really unlikely that a federal government department in any country, particularly in the 1980s, would be so highly organised and self-aware. I mean we're talking about disseminating brochures to potential recruits with hidden information which were really complex psychological experiments to see who would read to the end through all the dry wording, and a range of similar baroque plots and schemes. [This makes more sense when viewed in light of the end-notes, where we find out that DFW intended a central plot whereby (view spoiler)[someone was gathering together agents with particular skills, talents and magical abilities (hide spoiler)], however I don't believe this comes through clearly in the book as published]
Don't get me wrong, there were flashes of brilliance in this book. Chapter 8 is the story of a young girl who's the third generation of a family of broken women. This is one of the most wonderful pieces of fiction I've ever read, and works beautifully as a standalone short story. If you read nothing else in this book, you need to read Chapter 8!
Likewise some of the ideas DFW was experimenting with are fascinating. For example, putting us in the role of "wiggler", wading our way through 100 pages of mostly dry text and footnotes, for the odd hidden gem of information - just like the brochures. Or the idea that is referenced quite early in the book about boredom really being fear of something far, far darker. Great idea - but never really fleshed out. [Or the idea in the endnotes about having things *almost* happen, and then not happening - but again, this doesn't really come through in the book]
And here's the thing: As much as I struggled to plough through this, as much as I found myself saying "What. The. Actual. Fuck?" with some of the latter chapters, the endnotes point to something that could have been truly wonderful, as well as making some sense out of the text that actually is there. This really tips the balance for me, and makes it a book that I do enjoy, if mostly for the ideas it raises.
At the end of the day though, I think the wee Leo hit it on the head with his five-word review, "Man is this ever unfinished".
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It's not that I mind my cat sharing my books with me, I just wish she wasn't so far ahead of me.
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I think I start by saying that the book I read is quite a different book to the book that DFW apparently wanted to write, if you believe the endnotes. The eight pages at the end tell a far more interesting story than do the 540 pages of actual text. You can't review an author's intentions, though, so all I can really do is to try to review the book that was published....more How do you review an unfinished book? How do you even start to review an unfinished DFW book about magical tax agents and boredom?
I think I start by saying that the book I read is quite a different book to the book that DFW apparently wanted to write, if you believe the endnotes. The eight pages at the end tell a far more interesting story than do the 540 pages of actual text. You can't review an author's intentions, though, so all I can really do is to try to review the book that was published.
What makes this even more difficult is that one of the most central themes to the book, appears to hinge on the premise that tax administration is inherently boring. While many people may have no trouble with that assumption, I spent many years in a not dissimilar role in social security administration. I would argue that this kind of work is only boring from the outside. When you're in the middle of it, when you understand the context and the huge implications this has for an entire nation of real people and their lives... it really is exciting and something most of us were highly passionate about. There was a point in the text that referenced, "the pointless complexity of bureaucracy", but there is always a point. Someone somewhere at some point in time has always been trying to achieve something with that complexity, even if the end result is ineffectual, perverse, or the point is no longer relevant. If you know the corporate history, you'll know what the point is (or was).

Even the "tingle tables" (above) are something I would have killed for back in the day. My workplace had a "clean desk policy" to prevent confidential documents being leaked, so everything had to be locked up at the end of the day. This did not stop me from cobbling together bits & pieces of shelving and constructing my own version, however..
This leads me to another issue. I found it really unlikely that a federal government department in any country, particularly in the 1980s, would be so highly organised and self-aware. I mean we're talking about disseminating brochures to potential recruits with hidden information which were really complex psychological experiments to see who would read to the end through all the dry wording, and a range of similar baroque plots and schemes. [This makes more sense when viewed in light of the end-notes, where we find out that DFW intended a central plot whereby (view spoiler)[someone was gathering together agents with particular skills, talents and magical abilities (hide spoiler)], however I don't believe this comes through clearly in the book as published]
Don't get me wrong, there were flashes of brilliance in this book. Chapter 8 is the story of a young girl who's the third generation of a family of broken women. This is one of the most wonderful pieces of fiction I've ever read, and works beautifully as a standalone short story. If you read nothing else in this book, you need to read Chapter 8!
Likewise some of the ideas DFW was experimenting with are fascinating. For example, putting us in the role of "wiggler", wading our way through 100 pages of mostly dry text and footnotes, for the odd hidden gem of information - just like the brochures. Or the idea that is referenced quite early in the book about boredom really being fear of something far, far darker. Great idea - but never really fleshed out. [Or the idea in the endnotes about having things *almost* happen, and then not happening - but again, this doesn't really come through in the book]
And here's the thing: As much as I struggled to plough through this, as much as I found myself saying "What. The. Actual. Fuck?" with some of the latter chapters, the endnotes point to something that could have been truly wonderful, as well as making some sense out of the text that actually is there. This really tips the balance for me, and makes it a book that I do enjoy, if mostly for the ideas it raises.
At the end of the day though, I think the wee Leo hit it on the head with his five-word review, "Man is this ever unfinished".
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It's not that I mind my cat sharing my books with me, I just wish she wasn't so far ahead of me.
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Aug 01, 2011
matt
rated it
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I'm about a hundred pages in and this book is enthralling and gleamingly (not forbiddingly) complex. I love DFW profoundly, he's one of the writers I turn to for the usual reasons one turns to favorite (personal!) writers. There's insight, wit, beauty, power, depth, irony, verisimilitude, all of that stuff but also a strange sort of love. I don't mean this in an Oprah way or even 'agape' but this kind of... benevolence.
The world is an often ugly, unfair, crude and fucked-up place perhaps more...more I'm about a hundred pages in and this book is enthralling and gleamingly (not forbiddingly) complex. I love DFW profoundly, he's one of the writers I turn to for the usual reasons one turns to favorite (personal!) writers. There's insight, wit, beauty, power, depth, irony, verisimilitude, all of that stuff but also a strange sort of love. I don't mean this in an Oprah way or even 'agape' but this kind of... benevolence.
The world is an often ugly, unfair, crude and fucked-up place perhaps more often than not. One of the pleasures of fine lit is that you get a sense of a discriminating, enveloping, generous field of vision from the writer or the world the writer creates. it's like an old house you grew up in- even with the lights off, you get a sense of where everything is. The author cares enough about his world to create it vividly, compellingly, evocatively, and even if he's a misanthrope or a raging addict or a stern moralizer there's something of redemption in the act of creation itself. To add a wing on the ever-morphing mansion of art- the ancient and secret and unbearably vivid realm of the imagination which of course may not be reality but might glean the guts of what comprises the real when held up alongside it- which, as all passionate readers know, is as much a form of being alive as breathing or walking casually down the street.
From the first few pages I immediately got a sense that Wallace, god bless his postmodern, hyper-conscious soul, was really letting it go. There's an ecstatic quality to the first 50 or so pages; the details pile up, the rhythmic pulse of the prose is heartbeat present, the characters are eccentric and somewhat strain the bounds of credulity yet tack back to plausibility because Wallace is just an amazing talent.
It was really heartening and inspiring and somewhat reassuring to see such an intellect cut loose. Wallace always gets criticized for being almost terminally hip with his digressions and formal trickery and pomo self-consciousness and narrative reflexivity...rather unfairly.
There's a big beating heart below the massive brain. Always. I really get a sense that, thus far in, The Pale King has an emotionally releasing quality to the prose.
I know it's unfinished and edited from a third party but still...they didn't change the words on the page, they only refashioned the chronology of the episodes.
I do have an unfortunate habit of absolutely loving books for a hundred pages and then suddenly falling deeply out of love. I really don't think this is going to happen with this one, though, after all I've been judiciously waiting to complete the works since, after all, there just won't be any more, will there?
Oh, and I'd be really curious to see what a libertarian or a socialist (a real one, mind, not a poseur) would make of the IRS situation. That's why I added this to my shelf for 'social crit' which is of course a rather obvious and nebulous category. A painstaking representation of an institution like this can't help but be social criticism.
Taxes: boring death for most people. As an ex tax examiner (yup!) and thus ex-wiggler, I know quite well the mise-en-scene we're getting here. But the thing is: even as IRS policy and taxes are notoriously opaque and boring as all hell, Wallace himself (or "Wallace" as the narrative suggests, and well, ok then, if you prefer...) acknowledges the fact that even if the lines of discourse are dense, there is a host of deeply subversive and radical issues at stake- the nature of the state, the systematization of modern life itself, the relationship between consensual governance and sheer necessity...There's a radical reading of this text just waiting for someone to make some academic bones over someday.
I also have to add that the strange and (seeming) irony of an ecstatic text created by a emerging suicide is not lost on me...
I'm reading this at a very complex and angst-ridden time in my life, being no stranger to the scenario but really just getting it from all sides here unexpectedly, and I'm pleased to say that reading this book has actually been an extremely soothing and fresh experience. Death be not proud.
***
Finished it tonight. The Wallace concerns are here, of course: the ironic self-conscious self-consciousness of emotionally strained, disturbed or depressed people. The minutiae of the madness of everyday life, which is to say categorically also the vapid, thechnocratic beaurocratic presence of institutions. How people behave when they know there's some sort of behavior expected of them, what specific kind they don't know exactly. The snide and clipped laughter of the career pen pusher who can cite endless reams of statistics about the history, behvior code, accounting, and telos of the machine they are in fact a cog in who goes home at night and stares blanky at a sitcom, not laughing but acknowledging laughter taking place on the screen. Grimy realism, usually in dialect (Wallace has, I think a vivid ear for colloquial speech) which is more of a neon memory which collects itself in trauma.
Wallace's women are an interesting breed. he likes grotesques, and he likes the quotidian. His women suffer from being at the mercy of their own beauty, kindness or good intentions. The men aren't as hideous as you would think, they're either tortured satiric geniuses or schlubs or wicked arrested adolescents. But the tenuous possibilty for authentic human connection is the goal- and it happens. Wallace also has playwright's ear for extended monologue. Some of his most powerful writing is found there. However, and this is crucial, it must always be delivered with a postmodern nervous glance over the shoulder, a am-I-doing-this-right, as their guts gradually spill out across the floor, opening into a void.
The mistery of the archive. The goofy, the guileless, the holy fools, the empty likeability. I think Wallace was a moralist at heart, with a massive transparent eyeball (his essays he annotates what he sees, in his fiction he dramatizes it- and I mean EVERYTHING- he takes the usual artistic onslaught of perception and impression and sqeezes it into a wall street ticker of data and rumination. I think his biggest influence really was Dostoevsky, even though of course EVERYBODY loves Dostoevsky and reads him as a sort of Led Zeppelin II for literature. This is not to take away the relevance, mind you, but to underscore the canonical status, virtuosity, and raw dark power of the work.
I also think, a la Dostoevsky, that his end point was Tolstoy. It's not about how the writer writes necessarily, but what he intermittently and inexorably ends up standing for. Not in a political sense, though that can certainly be a major part of it, but in terms of worldview. Dostoevsky is obsessed and fascinated more than he would like to admit with madness, desperation, nothingness, redemption. He's into the irrational, the absurd and grotesque. Wallace registers this and internalizes it- morality again. Tolstoy recognizes all of that and is then concerned with how that gets translated into the social sphere. He wants the above ground, not just the subterranean. Morality in the sense that he will, if he can, sit you down and pour you a drink and pat you on the knee and explain that the kingdom of god is within you. Dostoevsky will illustrate how the existing models are filled with darkness, madness, illusion, delusion, spite and sex. He'll tell you what's wrong by lifting the sewer grate.
Wallace is in an interesting position here. He knows the terminal existential waste of the guy in the shirt which is exactly matching the shirt of the guy sitting next to him behind the desk. The empty greeting because there are no words, really, with which to greet another. The nowhere man. The man who has nothing to say because no one will understand him and is surrounded by people.
But if you look at, say, "this is water", his commencement speech, you know that he's in earnest and that he is encouraging enlightened attention, selflessness, decency, and imagination. He's trying to reach out of the terminal hipness of treating the world and life itself (YOUR life, by the way) like a sitcom. He wants to break through to the humid, sensitive consciousness beneath the corporate slogans and accepted social rituals and 'interface'...
and he tries, lord how he tries. But he can't quite do it- yet. Kakutani was very right when she called him a writer of virtuosic talents who can seemingly do anything. He can. He can write all over the map in pretty much every way you would imagine fiction taking form. There are brilliant moments in The Pale King. There are long stretches which are tedious and dry as dust. It has to get four stars because, uncompleted draft that it is, it doesn't yet have organic unity, radiance, wholeness, the shape has not taken form. It will always be thus- Wallace's despair and constant psychic pain meant he eventually decided to end his life. The people closest to him- the people who loved him and the people he loved- weren't even surprised.
Wallace chose a way out which meant there would be no ending. The hole that remains is luminous, but it must remain empty. It's deeply to be reminded that art is not a morality tale or even a comedy. Wallace was not the only one to see the light, but he was also one of the many who finally couldn't find it within himself to reach it. The Pale King will remain a marvelous, incomplete coda to a brilliant and all-too-short career.....(less)
The world is an often ugly, unfair, crude and fucked-up place perhaps more...more I'm about a hundred pages in and this book is enthralling and gleamingly (not forbiddingly) complex. I love DFW profoundly, he's one of the writers I turn to for the usual reasons one turns to favorite (personal!) writers. There's insight, wit, beauty, power, depth, irony, verisimilitude, all of that stuff but also a strange sort of love. I don't mean this in an Oprah way or even 'agape' but this kind of... benevolence.
The world is an often ugly, unfair, crude and fucked-up place perhaps more often than not. One of the pleasures of fine lit is that you get a sense of a discriminating, enveloping, generous field of vision from the writer or the world the writer creates. it's like an old house you grew up in- even with the lights off, you get a sense of where everything is. The author cares enough about his world to create it vividly, compellingly, evocatively, and even if he's a misanthrope or a raging addict or a stern moralizer there's something of redemption in the act of creation itself. To add a wing on the ever-morphing mansion of art- the ancient and secret and unbearably vivid realm of the imagination which of course may not be reality but might glean the guts of what comprises the real when held up alongside it- which, as all passionate readers know, is as much a form of being alive as breathing or walking casually down the street.
From the first few pages I immediately got a sense that Wallace, god bless his postmodern, hyper-conscious soul, was really letting it go. There's an ecstatic quality to the first 50 or so pages; the details pile up, the rhythmic pulse of the prose is heartbeat present, the characters are eccentric and somewhat strain the bounds of credulity yet tack back to plausibility because Wallace is just an amazing talent.
It was really heartening and inspiring and somewhat reassuring to see such an intellect cut loose. Wallace always gets criticized for being almost terminally hip with his digressions and formal trickery and pomo self-consciousness and narrative reflexivity...rather unfairly.
There's a big beating heart below the massive brain. Always. I really get a sense that, thus far in, The Pale King has an emotionally releasing quality to the prose.
I know it's unfinished and edited from a third party but still...they didn't change the words on the page, they only refashioned the chronology of the episodes.
I do have an unfortunate habit of absolutely loving books for a hundred pages and then suddenly falling deeply out of love. I really don't think this is going to happen with this one, though, after all I've been judiciously waiting to complete the works since, after all, there just won't be any more, will there?
Oh, and I'd be really curious to see what a libertarian or a socialist (a real one, mind, not a poseur) would make of the IRS situation. That's why I added this to my shelf for 'social crit' which is of course a rather obvious and nebulous category. A painstaking representation of an institution like this can't help but be social criticism.
Taxes: boring death for most people. As an ex tax examiner (yup!) and thus ex-wiggler, I know quite well the mise-en-scene we're getting here. But the thing is: even as IRS policy and taxes are notoriously opaque and boring as all hell, Wallace himself (or "Wallace" as the narrative suggests, and well, ok then, if you prefer...) acknowledges the fact that even if the lines of discourse are dense, there is a host of deeply subversive and radical issues at stake- the nature of the state, the systematization of modern life itself, the relationship between consensual governance and sheer necessity...There's a radical reading of this text just waiting for someone to make some academic bones over someday.
I also have to add that the strange and (seeming) irony of an ecstatic text created by a emerging suicide is not lost on me...
I'm reading this at a very complex and angst-ridden time in my life, being no stranger to the scenario but really just getting it from all sides here unexpectedly, and I'm pleased to say that reading this book has actually been an extremely soothing and fresh experience. Death be not proud.
***
Finished it tonight. The Wallace concerns are here, of course: the ironic self-conscious self-consciousness of emotionally strained, disturbed or depressed people. The minutiae of the madness of everyday life, which is to say categorically also the vapid, thechnocratic beaurocratic presence of institutions. How people behave when they know there's some sort of behavior expected of them, what specific kind they don't know exactly. The snide and clipped laughter of the career pen pusher who can cite endless reams of statistics about the history, behvior code, accounting, and telos of the machine they are in fact a cog in who goes home at night and stares blanky at a sitcom, not laughing but acknowledging laughter taking place on the screen. Grimy realism, usually in dialect (Wallace has, I think a vivid ear for colloquial speech) which is more of a neon memory which collects itself in trauma.
Wallace's women are an interesting breed. he likes grotesques, and he likes the quotidian. His women suffer from being at the mercy of their own beauty, kindness or good intentions. The men aren't as hideous as you would think, they're either tortured satiric geniuses or schlubs or wicked arrested adolescents. But the tenuous possibilty for authentic human connection is the goal- and it happens. Wallace also has playwright's ear for extended monologue. Some of his most powerful writing is found there. However, and this is crucial, it must always be delivered with a postmodern nervous glance over the shoulder, a am-I-doing-this-right, as their guts gradually spill out across the floor, opening into a void.
The mistery of the archive. The goofy, the guileless, the holy fools, the empty likeability. I think Wallace was a moralist at heart, with a massive transparent eyeball (his essays he annotates what he sees, in his fiction he dramatizes it- and I mean EVERYTHING- he takes the usual artistic onslaught of perception and impression and sqeezes it into a wall street ticker of data and rumination. I think his biggest influence really was Dostoevsky, even though of course EVERYBODY loves Dostoevsky and reads him as a sort of Led Zeppelin II for literature. This is not to take away the relevance, mind you, but to underscore the canonical status, virtuosity, and raw dark power of the work.
I also think, a la Dostoevsky, that his end point was Tolstoy. It's not about how the writer writes necessarily, but what he intermittently and inexorably ends up standing for. Not in a political sense, though that can certainly be a major part of it, but in terms of worldview. Dostoevsky is obsessed and fascinated more than he would like to admit with madness, desperation, nothingness, redemption. He's into the irrational, the absurd and grotesque. Wallace registers this and internalizes it- morality again. Tolstoy recognizes all of that and is then concerned with how that gets translated into the social sphere. He wants the above ground, not just the subterranean. Morality in the sense that he will, if he can, sit you down and pour you a drink and pat you on the knee and explain that the kingdom of god is within you. Dostoevsky will illustrate how the existing models are filled with darkness, madness, illusion, delusion, spite and sex. He'll tell you what's wrong by lifting the sewer grate.
Wallace is in an interesting position here. He knows the terminal existential waste of the guy in the shirt which is exactly matching the shirt of the guy sitting next to him behind the desk. The empty greeting because there are no words, really, with which to greet another. The nowhere man. The man who has nothing to say because no one will understand him and is surrounded by people.
But if you look at, say, "this is water", his commencement speech, you know that he's in earnest and that he is encouraging enlightened attention, selflessness, decency, and imagination. He's trying to reach out of the terminal hipness of treating the world and life itself (YOUR life, by the way) like a sitcom. He wants to break through to the humid, sensitive consciousness beneath the corporate slogans and accepted social rituals and 'interface'...
and he tries, lord how he tries. But he can't quite do it- yet. Kakutani was very right when she called him a writer of virtuosic talents who can seemingly do anything. He can. He can write all over the map in pretty much every way you would imagine fiction taking form. There are brilliant moments in The Pale King. There are long stretches which are tedious and dry as dust. It has to get four stars because, uncompleted draft that it is, it doesn't yet have organic unity, radiance, wholeness, the shape has not taken form. It will always be thus- Wallace's despair and constant psychic pain meant he eventually decided to end his life. The people closest to him- the people who loved him and the people he loved- weren't even surprised.
Wallace chose a way out which meant there would be no ending. The hole that remains is luminous, but it must remain empty. It's deeply to be reminded that art is not a morality tale or even a comedy. Wallace was not the only one to see the light, but he was also one of the many who finally couldn't find it within himself to reach it. The Pale King will remain a marvelous, incomplete coda to a brilliant and all-too-short career.....(less)
Feb 26, 2013
Megha
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This may be an unfinished work, but it's not imperfect.
Given its theme, TPK might as well be Wallace's response to my reaction to IJ.
(More after I finish.)
There was a unique, and horrible sadness finishing this book. David Foster Wallace has been a companion via the bookshelf since 1997. I read 'Infinite Jest' when I, myself, was going through rehab at a shady inpatient facility in Chandler, AZ at age 20. I had the distinct and remarkable pleasure of following him throughout most of his literary career.
Like most of his serious fans, his mastery of the personal, perfectly honed first person became a counterpoint to my own internal and wandering mo...more There was a unique, and horrible sadness finishing this book. David Foster Wallace has been a companion via the bookshelf since 1997. I read 'Infinite Jest' when I, myself, was going through rehab at a shady inpatient facility in Chandler, AZ at age 20. I had the distinct and remarkable pleasure of following him throughout most of his literary career.
Like most of his serious fans, his mastery of the personal, perfectly honed first person became a counterpoint to my own internal and wandering monologues. Like many of DFW's fanbase, I have my own stories about serious depression, substance abuse, and the neurosis of high achievement.
So yeah, the suicide. The half-completed manuscript found on his desk. All of it resulting in this, 'The Pale King.'
It works. It's very sad. Given the context of the novel, it is almost unbearably sad.
Like most of DFW's longer output, its purposely crafted to defy (my first instinct was to say 'bigger' than) genre definitions. It is by one turn, a fictional memoir of a fictional David Foster Wallace's fictional year and a half at the IRS. By the other, it is a careful meditation on duty, on boredom, on alienation. All of it is salted with DFW's humor-- here both managing to skewer bureaucratic inertia, while remaining sympathetic to the very human causes of bureaucratic inertia.
From a craft standpoint, this felt a bit like a step backwards. 'Oblivion' seemed like DFW's high-water mark, with pretty much the entire arsenal of advanced storytelling techniques deployed masterfully. 'The Pale King' is a bit of a retreat from the cutting edge-- if anything, the style is deeply reminiscent of 'Infinite Jest.' The footnotes are back, with a vengeance.
I am being meticulously careful about spoilers. A huge chunk of the fun of Wallace's work is getting lost in the funhouse. That said, you are going to learn a lot about Federal Tax systems, procedures, and departmental structures. Your heart is going to be pulled around by a pitch-perfect cast ranging from DFW himself, as a 20-something acne-impacted college dropout, to a mysterious semi-autistic IRS reviewer who floats above his desk when absorbed completely, Zen style. There is not one, but two ghosts lurking about the Peoria, IL, IRS Examination Facility that the bulk of the story occupies.
I read the book breathlessly, in a four-day gulp. The byzantine IRS lingo is perfectly represented-- anyone with less than a CPA may have to reread some sections. I had to slow way down for some of the more complex sections.
It left me sad. It is a vastly more emotionally mature piece of work-- DFW takes off the hyperkinetic people-pleaser mask (ala Hal Incandeza) that essentially defined his narrative persona. This final DFW owns up to some family-of-origin problems that were previously only hinted at.
He is hideously hard on himself, frankly. The portrait of himself at 20 is cruel. I'm not a psychiatrist or psychologist or even an armchair version of same-- but it struck me as telling that he had so little compassion for himself as a young man-- and like everyone else, all I've got is more questions.
The novel contains several scenes that I would place high amongst the finest work DFW ever did. I believe that he correctly identifies the horrible struggle of modernity as 'boredom,' a word so horrible it is almost never spoken. I do not know if rigid adherence to duty or adoption of a code is the solution; but I do know that there are many, many competing solutions that are a lot worse.
I would not recommend this as an entry-point for DFW, but it is certainly a 'must have' for fans. (less)
Like most of his serious fans, his mastery of the personal, perfectly honed first person became a counterpoint to my own internal and wandering mo...more There was a unique, and horrible sadness finishing this book. David Foster Wallace has been a companion via the bookshelf since 1997. I read 'Infinite Jest' when I, myself, was going through rehab at a shady inpatient facility in Chandler, AZ at age 20. I had the distinct and remarkable pleasure of following him throughout most of his literary career.
Like most of his serious fans, his mastery of the personal, perfectly honed first person became a counterpoint to my own internal and wandering monologues. Like many of DFW's fanbase, I have my own stories about serious depression, substance abuse, and the neurosis of high achievement.
So yeah, the suicide. The half-completed manuscript found on his desk. All of it resulting in this, 'The Pale King.'
It works. It's very sad. Given the context of the novel, it is almost unbearably sad.
Like most of DFW's longer output, its purposely crafted to defy (my first instinct was to say 'bigger' than) genre definitions. It is by one turn, a fictional memoir of a fictional David Foster Wallace's fictional year and a half at the IRS. By the other, it is a careful meditation on duty, on boredom, on alienation. All of it is salted with DFW's humor-- here both managing to skewer bureaucratic inertia, while remaining sympathetic to the very human causes of bureaucratic inertia.
From a craft standpoint, this felt a bit like a step backwards. 'Oblivion' seemed like DFW's high-water mark, with pretty much the entire arsenal of advanced storytelling techniques deployed masterfully. 'The Pale King' is a bit of a retreat from the cutting edge-- if anything, the style is deeply reminiscent of 'Infinite Jest.' The footnotes are back, with a vengeance.
I am being meticulously careful about spoilers. A huge chunk of the fun of Wallace's work is getting lost in the funhouse. That said, you are going to learn a lot about Federal Tax systems, procedures, and departmental structures. Your heart is going to be pulled around by a pitch-perfect cast ranging from DFW himself, as a 20-something acne-impacted college dropout, to a mysterious semi-autistic IRS reviewer who floats above his desk when absorbed completely, Zen style. There is not one, but two ghosts lurking about the Peoria, IL, IRS Examination Facility that the bulk of the story occupies.
I read the book breathlessly, in a four-day gulp. The byzantine IRS lingo is perfectly represented-- anyone with less than a CPA may have to reread some sections. I had to slow way down for some of the more complex sections.
It left me sad. It is a vastly more emotionally mature piece of work-- DFW takes off the hyperkinetic people-pleaser mask (ala Hal Incandeza) that essentially defined his narrative persona. This final DFW owns up to some family-of-origin problems that were previously only hinted at.
He is hideously hard on himself, frankly. The portrait of himself at 20 is cruel. I'm not a psychiatrist or psychologist or even an armchair version of same-- but it struck me as telling that he had so little compassion for himself as a young man-- and like everyone else, all I've got is more questions.
The novel contains several scenes that I would place high amongst the finest work DFW ever did. I believe that he correctly identifies the horrible struggle of modernity as 'boredom,' a word so horrible it is almost never spoken. I do not know if rigid adherence to duty or adoption of a code is the solution; but I do know that there are many, many competing solutions that are a lot worse.
I would not recommend this as an entry-point for DFW, but it is certainly a 'must have' for fans. (less)
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Jun 04, 2011
Frederick
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I listened to the Hachette Audiobook, read by an actor ideally suited to the task: Robert Petkoff.
I will point out that, when I got toward the end, I began comparing the U.S. hardcover edition (published by Little, Brown)to the audiobook and I discovered the texts were different. The audiobook, had entire sentences in it which I couldn't find in the print version, and name substitutions -- for example, the audio has the character's name "Shinn" in Chapter 49 instead of the name "Chris Fogle"), w...more I listened to the Hachette Audiobook, read by an actor ideally suited to the task: Robert Petkoff.
I will point out that, when I got toward the end, I began comparing the U.S. hardcover edition (published by Little, Brown)to the audiobook and I discovered the texts were different. The audiobook, had entire sentences in it which I couldn't find in the print version, and name substitutions -- for example, the audio has the character's name "Shinn" in Chapter 49 instead of the name "Chris Fogle"), which are inconsistent name-changes at that -- for example, "Chris Fogle" has another chapter earlier in the book and both the Audio and the hardcover use the name "Chris Fogle.") One chapter gives the name of its point-of-view character throughout in the hardcover while the Audiobook simply has her as "the woman.") Strange stuff, but my guess is the audiobook was recorded before THE PALE KING was given a final edit. The hardcover was published in the US on April 15th, 2011 -- Income Tax day, of course -- and my assumption is the so-called "International Edition", the ISBN for which is given on the copyright page, may be identical, in wording, to the Audiobook. I seem to see on Goodreads that readers in other parts of the world -- I'm from the US -- were posting reviews before the book was published in its author's native country. In any case, sometimes the audiobook makes things clearer and sometimes the (US) hardcover makes things clearer. The footnotes are excluded entirely from the audio, except in the cases where the footnote has an asterisk instead of a number. I found the footnotes actually give away things which are better left revealed in the narrative proper, so the lack of footnotes in the audiobook is, perhaps, not an essential detractor.
Now to the book: It is absolutely as advertised. Wallace rings in all the changes here. I think there are enough similarities to MOBY-DICK (both books being about people immersing themselves in work of a most challenging sort; both books having, early into the narrative, a curmudgeonly fellow telling those about to embark on their journey what they're in for -- Father Mapple in MOBY-DICK, the guest lecturer at DePaul in the PALE KING; both books having at least one description of a very pale being -- the one in PALE KING gets described as having a face like a whale. It's a fleeting description, but you'll find it.)
THE PALE KING is very funny in parts and also harrowing. The scary parts are like Stephen King in an extremely realistic mood. There is a touch of Hunter Thompson. Above all, this novel captures an American essence I haven't seen successfully captured in decades. It is a beautiful, monumental and rewarding book.(less)
I will point out that, when I got toward the end, I began comparing the U.S. hardcover edition (published by Little, Brown)to the audiobook and I discovered the texts were different. The audiobook, had entire sentences in it which I couldn't find in the print version, and name substitutions -- for example, the audio has the character's name "Shinn" in Chapter 49 instead of the name "Chris Fogle"), w...more I listened to the Hachette Audiobook, read by an actor ideally suited to the task: Robert Petkoff.
I will point out that, when I got toward the end, I began comparing the U.S. hardcover edition (published by Little, Brown)to the audiobook and I discovered the texts were different. The audiobook, had entire sentences in it which I couldn't find in the print version, and name substitutions -- for example, the audio has the character's name "Shinn" in Chapter 49 instead of the name "Chris Fogle"), which are inconsistent name-changes at that -- for example, "Chris Fogle" has another chapter earlier in the book and both the Audio and the hardcover use the name "Chris Fogle.") One chapter gives the name of its point-of-view character throughout in the hardcover while the Audiobook simply has her as "the woman.") Strange stuff, but my guess is the audiobook was recorded before THE PALE KING was given a final edit. The hardcover was published in the US on April 15th, 2011 -- Income Tax day, of course -- and my assumption is the so-called "International Edition", the ISBN for which is given on the copyright page, may be identical, in wording, to the Audiobook. I seem to see on Goodreads that readers in other parts of the world -- I'm from the US -- were posting reviews before the book was published in its author's native country. In any case, sometimes the audiobook makes things clearer and sometimes the (US) hardcover makes things clearer. The footnotes are excluded entirely from the audio, except in the cases where the footnote has an asterisk instead of a number. I found the footnotes actually give away things which are better left revealed in the narrative proper, so the lack of footnotes in the audiobook is, perhaps, not an essential detractor.
Now to the book: It is absolutely as advertised. Wallace rings in all the changes here. I think there are enough similarities to MOBY-DICK (both books being about people immersing themselves in work of a most challenging sort; both books having, early into the narrative, a curmudgeonly fellow telling those about to embark on their journey what they're in for -- Father Mapple in MOBY-DICK, the guest lecturer at DePaul in the PALE KING; both books having at least one description of a very pale being -- the one in PALE KING gets described as having a face like a whale. It's a fleeting description, but you'll find it.)
THE PALE KING is very funny in parts and also harrowing. The scary parts are like Stephen King in an extremely realistic mood. There is a touch of Hunter Thompson. Above all, this novel captures an American essence I haven't seen successfully captured in decades. It is a beautiful, monumental and rewarding book.(less)
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Frederick
You're welcome! I think you'll find the voice on THE PALE KING almost perfect.
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HOLY SHIT IT'S FINALLY IN MY HANDS
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I think this novel feels very unfinished but still has plenty of breathtaking DFW moments that any of his fans will appreciate. Chapter 22 and Chapter 24 were highlights for me. One cautionary note: this book is in some ways a very bleak read, not only because of what we know about where DFW was headed, but because of (what I see) as the implications of thinking too much, which is either to 1) kill yourself (see "Good Old Neon" from OBLIVION), 2) find some bullshit religion to believe in (see Ch...more
I think this novel feels very unfinished but still has plenty of breathtaking DFW moments that any of his fans will appreciate. Chapter 22 and Chapter 24 were highlights for me. One cautionary note: this book is in some ways a very bleak read, not only because of what we know about where DFW was headed, but because of (what I see) as the implications of thinking too much, which is either to 1) kill yourself (see "Good Old Neon" from OBLIVION), 2) find some bullshit religion to believe in (see Chapter 22 here), 3) become criminally insane (see, e.g., "Mr. Squishy," also from OBLIVION), 4) "self-medicate" (see IJ obv), or 5) just stop thinking so much (see the Drivion character in this book), which good luck with that....(less)
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May 25, 2012
Nate
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5 of 5 stars
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Revised: 5/25/12
Fuck it. I'm bumping this up to five stars. I haven't been the same since I read this book and I find everything about it pervading my thoughts. One of the few books that I have thought about every day since I read it.
Original (early March):
I'm really struggling with how to rate this. Because the two biggest faults of this book are its tedium, which is intentional, and the fact that I feel I read about half of a book. It really feels incomplete. 540 pages in and I felt like I ha...more Revised: 5/25/12
Fuck it. I'm bumping this up to five stars. I haven't been the same since I read this book and I find everything about it pervading my thoughts. One of the few books that I have thought about every day since I read it.
Original (early March):
I'm really struggling with how to rate this. Because the two biggest faults of this book are its tedium, which is intentional, and the fact that I feel I read about half of a book. It really feels incomplete. 540 pages in and I felt like I had been introduced to something. I felt like I had met a whole bunch of people and just started to form rough identities and then poof. It's over and you're left reading notes of where the book could have gone.
'Irrelevant' Chris Fogle's interview was genius. The conversation between Meredith and Drinion is great. Those parts were five stars for me. There are a lot of characters that are so vastly underdevoloped (Sylvanshine and Reynolds had some phenomenal potential, I didn't get a great feel for Toni Ware) and again I don't want to fault the novel for that but it is what it is.
I found it interesting how the themes: boredom and tedium and the drudgery of IRS work almost came out and were expressed while I was reading the novel. By that I mean I could actually feel sometimes when I was reading line by line, page by page, trying to get to the end of a chapter, trying to make progress only to look at another couple hundred of pages. And then of course there were other occasions where I got absolutely immersed and didn't even notice I had read thirty pages without looking at the numbers.
I didn't pick up on all the lingo and shorthand, but I got a good feel for the context at least. It's a book I'll definitely be reading again if I can get a different copy than the library one. (less)
Fuck it. I'm bumping this up to five stars. I haven't been the same since I read this book and I find everything about it pervading my thoughts. One of the few books that I have thought about every day since I read it.
Original (early March):
I'm really struggling with how to rate this. Because the two biggest faults of this book are its tedium, which is intentional, and the fact that I feel I read about half of a book. It really feels incomplete. 540 pages in and I felt like I ha...more Revised: 5/25/12
Fuck it. I'm bumping this up to five stars. I haven't been the same since I read this book and I find everything about it pervading my thoughts. One of the few books that I have thought about every day since I read it.
Original (early March):
I'm really struggling with how to rate this. Because the two biggest faults of this book are its tedium, which is intentional, and the fact that I feel I read about half of a book. It really feels incomplete. 540 pages in and I felt like I had been introduced to something. I felt like I had met a whole bunch of people and just started to form rough identities and then poof. It's over and you're left reading notes of where the book could have gone.
'Irrelevant' Chris Fogle's interview was genius. The conversation between Meredith and Drinion is great. Those parts were five stars for me. There are a lot of characters that are so vastly underdevoloped (Sylvanshine and Reynolds had some phenomenal potential, I didn't get a great feel for Toni Ware) and again I don't want to fault the novel for that but it is what it is.
I found it interesting how the themes: boredom and tedium and the drudgery of IRS work almost came out and were expressed while I was reading the novel. By that I mean I could actually feel sometimes when I was reading line by line, page by page, trying to get to the end of a chapter, trying to make progress only to look at another couple hundred of pages. And then of course there were other occasions where I got absolutely immersed and didn't even notice I had read thirty pages without looking at the numbers.
I didn't pick up on all the lingo and shorthand, but I got a good feel for the context at least. It's a book I'll definitely be reading again if I can get a different copy than the library one. (less)
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Very David Foster Wallace. How raw this is. The initial feeling is one of immense pity -- had he lived to finish it, the book it could've been!! As it is, the incompleteness is evident. One might've read Wallace's other famous novel, Infinite Jest -- it hung together completely, like Ulysses did. The unfinishedness of it is palpable, and in my opinion compromises any fair review the book could've had.
The first thing one should note, I guess, about the Pale King is that Wallace never really left...more Very David Foster Wallace. How raw this is. The initial feeling is one of immense pity -- had he lived to finish it, the book it could've been!! As it is, the incompleteness is evident. One might've read Wallace's other famous novel, Infinite Jest -- it hung together completely, like Ulysses did. The unfinishedness of it is palpable, and in my opinion compromises any fair review the book could've had.
The first thing one should note, I guess, about the Pale King is that Wallace never really left any instructions on how it should fit together. It was up to the poor editor and friend (alas, I cannot recall his name, a writer's critic is a thankless job) who was familiar with his work -- and him -- to put it together. The assumption here ('it was apparent...') is that it is supposed to be structured like Infinite Jest, but really, one wouldn't know.
The book is infamously about boredom. Ennui, whatever you call it (Wallace even has some sort of etymology of the word 'boredom' inserted in one of the chapters). But Wallace manages to show that -- really -- people are various. I have read reviews saying that it explores the peculiar personalities suited to the job. Perhaps. But in my opinion -- boredom is something that is very modern -- linked to capitalism, industrialisation and the rest of it. The IRS was chosen, perhaps, because it is THE extreme of boredom. But the fact is, radically different personalities are co-opted into the same routines -- with radically different results. And this IS the case in society so often nowadays -- that although jobs are different from one another, they're similar enough such that a fair portion of people end up doing what they are doing only because they need the money (in Marxist terms, alienated). You DO have the rare person who finds meaning in his/her job -- but this is more coincidence -- a happy coincidence -- of a person having a calling and being able to follow that calling through.
With regards to the rare person who enjoys the IRS, Wallace manages to give a romantic tinge to this drudge work (is he... could he be the only... a modernist could've done it. The Hunger Artist, Wallace on Kafka, go and read that essay). There IS something noble, the text seems to be saying, about valiantly and thanklessly doing routine, boring work that keeps society going -- and which no one appreciates or enjoys doing. Here the routine of life 'reveals being', so to speak. Go beyond boredom and you sort of live in the moment. It's a little Heideggerian, although my memory of that essay (was it called What is Metaphysics?) is fuzzy. I recall reading that boredom reveals being; being is covered up by being. The routine soothes the mind, allows you to feel alive precisely because all that mental babble is drowned out by the concentration needed. Work in the IRS, for those personalities, is like meditation. They go beyond thought into nothingness, which is merely the sensory appreciation of living -- perhaps I am not putting this rightly, but I think what I intend to say is somewhere along those lines. Then there are others who feel that they ARE going to do something valiant, who consciously like the work BECAUSE it is boring and mechanical, torturous -- the pleasure is of course a masochistic one -- 'Beyond the Pleasure Principle' -- for those who are interested in digging up the references. Some version of the martyr complex.
Wallace is also remarkably perceptive about how one is perceived by the other, about what it means to be a human being. He understands that bodies can be traps as much as minds can. We tend to think of being bored with ideas, or just being bored as a feeling, but also that we are born into a certain situation, most times, and a very unique, odd sort of frustrated boredom ensues. I would hesitate to call it existential angst, because that seems to imply more frustration and despair. It's a sort of resignation TO the angst, an acceptance as such. The closest I can think of would be the end of Waiting for Godot, where gogo says 'I can't go on like this' and didi replies 'that's what you think'. It's the 'that's what you think' that (to my mind) separates Godot from typically 'existentialist' works -- even the notion of angst is a mask for existence -- where existing is just torturous -- and boring. Getting up to see each day is boring, but it has to be done. The book is of course more *solid*, more ostensibly political than Beckett -- and in a way less hopeful, more angry (the years inbetween make the difference) -- less funny. Wallace deals with -- how mechanisation is affecting our lives -- literally -- machines -- and how humans are becoming excess (in a way a commentary on the population problem). How didi's 'that's what you think' isn't enough, how it doesn't numb -- because you can't numb numbness.
He came very close -- I have the feeling that he was slowly, ever so slowly -- carefully circling the subject (I mean this in all ways). If he had lived, perhaps we might have had the complete view. There was something to be articulated, on the brink of articulation. I am aware from Wallace's notes that the book is supposed to have that sense of anticipation and incompleteness ANYWAY, but that is no reason to presume that the effect of the incomplete novel would mirror that of the complete novel. The tragedy is that he could've done it. He was clever enough, sensitive enough, compassionate enough. We might have had something really interesting to deal with, as it is, we catch glimpses of what could have been and mourn the loss of a great writer. I emphasise 'writer' because to me, that's what Wallace was, and was best at. I don't really agree with his views on post-structuralism, and I think some of his essays (while interesting) are conceptually dubious -- although I'll be in hot soup for saying it. But when writers write with their hearts and minds in unison, and write with conviction, they tend to have a sort of trance-like prophetic property -- their work is so much more than them, related but not equal to. It has been this way for all the great writers, and so it is for Wallace, and I regret not that we never got to KNOW what he THOUGHT, but that we never got to SEE what he WAS SEEING -- not completely.(less)
The first thing one should note, I guess, about the Pale King is that Wallace never really left...more Very David Foster Wallace. How raw this is. The initial feeling is one of immense pity -- had he lived to finish it, the book it could've been!! As it is, the incompleteness is evident. One might've read Wallace's other famous novel, Infinite Jest -- it hung together completely, like Ulysses did. The unfinishedness of it is palpable, and in my opinion compromises any fair review the book could've had.
The first thing one should note, I guess, about the Pale King is that Wallace never really left any instructions on how it should fit together. It was up to the poor editor and friend (alas, I cannot recall his name, a writer's critic is a thankless job) who was familiar with his work -- and him -- to put it together. The assumption here ('it was apparent...') is that it is supposed to be structured like Infinite Jest, but really, one wouldn't know.
The book is infamously about boredom. Ennui, whatever you call it (Wallace even has some sort of etymology of the word 'boredom' inserted in one of the chapters). But Wallace manages to show that -- really -- people are various. I have read reviews saying that it explores the peculiar personalities suited to the job. Perhaps. But in my opinion -- boredom is something that is very modern -- linked to capitalism, industrialisation and the rest of it. The IRS was chosen, perhaps, because it is THE extreme of boredom. But the fact is, radically different personalities are co-opted into the same routines -- with radically different results. And this IS the case in society so often nowadays -- that although jobs are different from one another, they're similar enough such that a fair portion of people end up doing what they are doing only because they need the money (in Marxist terms, alienated). You DO have the rare person who finds meaning in his/her job -- but this is more coincidence -- a happy coincidence -- of a person having a calling and being able to follow that calling through.
With regards to the rare person who enjoys the IRS, Wallace manages to give a romantic tinge to this drudge work (is he... could he be the only... a modernist could've done it. The Hunger Artist, Wallace on Kafka, go and read that essay). There IS something noble, the text seems to be saying, about valiantly and thanklessly doing routine, boring work that keeps society going -- and which no one appreciates or enjoys doing. Here the routine of life 'reveals being', so to speak. Go beyond boredom and you sort of live in the moment. It's a little Heideggerian, although my memory of that essay (was it called What is Metaphysics?) is fuzzy. I recall reading that boredom reveals being; being is covered up by being. The routine soothes the mind, allows you to feel alive precisely because all that mental babble is drowned out by the concentration needed. Work in the IRS, for those personalities, is like meditation. They go beyond thought into nothingness, which is merely the sensory appreciation of living -- perhaps I am not putting this rightly, but I think what I intend to say is somewhere along those lines. Then there are others who feel that they ARE going to do something valiant, who consciously like the work BECAUSE it is boring and mechanical, torturous -- the pleasure is of course a masochistic one -- 'Beyond the Pleasure Principle' -- for those who are interested in digging up the references. Some version of the martyr complex.
Wallace is also remarkably perceptive about how one is perceived by the other, about what it means to be a human being. He understands that bodies can be traps as much as minds can. We tend to think of being bored with ideas, or just being bored as a feeling, but also that we are born into a certain situation, most times, and a very unique, odd sort of frustrated boredom ensues. I would hesitate to call it existential angst, because that seems to imply more frustration and despair. It's a sort of resignation TO the angst, an acceptance as such. The closest I can think of would be the end of Waiting for Godot, where gogo says 'I can't go on like this' and didi replies 'that's what you think'. It's the 'that's what you think' that (to my mind) separates Godot from typically 'existentialist' works -- even the notion of angst is a mask for existence -- where existing is just torturous -- and boring. Getting up to see each day is boring, but it has to be done. The book is of course more *solid*, more ostensibly political than Beckett -- and in a way less hopeful, more angry (the years inbetween make the difference) -- less funny. Wallace deals with -- how mechanisation is affecting our lives -- literally -- machines -- and how humans are becoming excess (in a way a commentary on the population problem). How didi's 'that's what you think' isn't enough, how it doesn't numb -- because you can't numb numbness.
He came very close -- I have the feeling that he was slowly, ever so slowly -- carefully circling the subject (I mean this in all ways). If he had lived, perhaps we might have had the complete view. There was something to be articulated, on the brink of articulation. I am aware from Wallace's notes that the book is supposed to have that sense of anticipation and incompleteness ANYWAY, but that is no reason to presume that the effect of the incomplete novel would mirror that of the complete novel. The tragedy is that he could've done it. He was clever enough, sensitive enough, compassionate enough. We might have had something really interesting to deal with, as it is, we catch glimpses of what could have been and mourn the loss of a great writer. I emphasise 'writer' because to me, that's what Wallace was, and was best at. I don't really agree with his views on post-structuralism, and I think some of his essays (while interesting) are conceptually dubious -- although I'll be in hot soup for saying it. But when writers write with their hearts and minds in unison, and write with conviction, they tend to have a sort of trance-like prophetic property -- their work is so much more than them, related but not equal to. It has been this way for all the great writers, and so it is for Wallace, and I regret not that we never got to KNOW what he THOUGHT, but that we never got to SEE what he WAS SEEING -- not completely.(less)
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Stile Libero Big isbn: 8806203355
isbn13: 9788806203351
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Stile Libero Big isbn: 8806203355
isbn13: 9788806203351
format: Paperback
David Foster Wallace worked surprising turns on nearly everything: novels, journalism, vacation. His life was an information hunt, collecting hows and whys. "I received 500,000 discrete bits of information today," he once said, "of which maybe 25 are important. My job is to make some sense of it." He wanted to write "stuff about what it feels like to live. Instead of being a relief from what it fe...more
David Foster Wallace worked surprising turns on nearly everything: novels, journalism, vacation. His life was an information hunt, collecting hows and whys. "I received 500,000 discrete bits of information today," he once said, "of which maybe 25 are important. My job is to make some sense of it." He wanted to write "stuff about what it feels like to live. Instead of being a relief from what it feels like to live." Readers curled up in the nooks and clearings of his style: his comedy, his brilliance, his humaneness.
His life was a map that ends at the wrong destination. Wallace was an A student through high school, he played football, he played tennis, he wrote a philosophy thesis and a novel before he graduated from Amherst, he went to writing school, published the novel, made a city of squalling, bruising, kneecapping editors and writers fall moony-eyed in love with him. He published a thousand-page novel, received the only award you get in the nation for being a genius, wrote essays providing the best feel anywhere of what it means to be alive in the contemporary world, accepted a special chair at California's Pomona College to teach writing, married, published another book and, last month[Sept, 2008], hanged himself at age 46.
-excerpt from The Lost Years & Last Days of David Foster Wallace by David Lipsky in Rolling Stone Magazine October 30, 2008.
Also see the related interview with the writer of the piece above: Getting to Know David Foster Wallace by Sean Woods, Rolling Stone Magazine, October 30, 2008.
Among Wallace's honors were a Whiting Writers Award (1987), a Lannan Literary Award (1996), a Paris Review Aga Khan Prize for Fiction (1997), a National Magazine Award (2001), three O. Henry Awards (1988, 1999, 2002), and a MacArthur Foundation "Genius" Grant.
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His life was a map that ends at the wrong destination. Wallace was an A student through high school, he played football, he played tennis, he wrote a philosophy thesis and a novel before he graduated from Amherst, he went to writing school, published the novel, made a city of squalling, bruising, kneecapping editors and writers fall moony-eyed in love with him. He published a thousand-page novel, received the only award you get in the nation for being a genius, wrote essays providing the best feel anywhere of what it means to be alive in the contemporary world, accepted a special chair at California's Pomona College to teach writing, married, published another book and, last month[Sept, 2008], hanged himself at age 46.
-excerpt from The Lost Years & Last Days of David Foster Wallace by David Lipsky in Rolling Stone Magazine October 30, 2008.
Also see the related interview with the writer of the piece above: Getting to Know David Foster Wallace by Sean Woods, Rolling Stone Magazine, October 30, 2008.
Among Wallace's honors were a Whiting Writers Award (1987), a Lannan Literary Award (1996), a Paris Review Aga Khan Prize for Fiction (1997), a National Magazine Award (2001), three O. Henry Awards (1988, 1999, 2002), and a MacArthur Foundation "Genius" Grant.
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“The next suitable person you’re in light conversation with, you stop suddenly in the middle of the conversation and look at the person closely and say, “What’s wrong?” You say it in a concerned way. He’ll say, “What do you mean?” You say, “Something’s wrong. I can tell. What is it?” And he’ll look stunned and say, “How did you know?” He doesn’t realize something’s always wrong, with everybody. Often more than one thing. He doesn’t know everybody’s always going around all the time with something wrong and believing they’re exerting great willpower and control to keep other people, for whom they think nothing’s ever wrong, from seeing it.”
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