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My guest today is author Mark Souza. I met Mark on Twitter about a year ago. Recently, I finally got around to reading some of his short stories and became an instant fan of his writing. If you like stories that make you flinch and cringe a little (or a lot), then you'll love Mark's work. He's one of those few authors who can make me shudder without spilling a drop of blood. Mark agreed to hang out here and answer my questions. And I have to tell you that he was quite tolerant with my insanity, but that is a whole other topic! Here's a brief introduction:

Mark Souza lives in the Pacific Northwest with his wife, two children, and mongrel beast-dog, Tater. He writes primarily horror, though on occasion, other things that strike his fancy. When he's not writing, he's out among you trying to look and act normal (whatever that is), reminding himself that the monsters he's created are all in his head, no more real than campaign promises.

Upcoming Titles

His novel Robyn's Egg will be released in the spring of 2012

A collection of his short stories, Try 2 Stop Me, will be released in September of 2012

FREE short stories available on Smashwords and most major ebook retail sites:

Cupid's Maze
Murphy's Law
Appliances Included
The Diary of Horatio White
The Comfort Shack
Second Honeymoon

Connect With Mark Online:

My Website: www.marksouza.com

Twitter: http://twitter.com/#!/souzawrites

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Now for our chat:

What is it about short fiction that appeals to you as a writer?

Writing short stories is the fastest way to get published, the best way to receive feedback, and the fastest way to learn the writing craft. A writer can spend a year writing a novel before submitting to agents and editors to get feedback. Good luck with that. Agents and editors are usually too busy to provide a critique. Feedback usually consists of "not for us." And unless you just wrote The Hunger Games, they won't read more than the first few paragraphs.

If a writer pens short stories, they can submit ten or more stories in that same time period, the stories will be read, and chances for honest feedback improve drastically. With short stories, you are dealing with anthology or magazine editors who get tens of thousands of words coming across their desks each week, versus an agent who receives millions of words a week.

The advantage short stories provide is more repetitions at working your craft. Every element of a good novel can be found in a good short story, so what a writer learns from writing short stories is directly applicable to writing novels. And because short stories usually have a word limit, they also teach the art of editing and tightening prose. The lower the word count, the more a writer learns about editing. Nothing tightens flaccid prose better and quicker than flash fiction, stories of 1000 words or less. Those 1000 words have to do double duty. Wordy phrases have to be reworked till they're lean and precise.

It's also much easier coming up with ideas for good short stories than it is ideas strong enough to support a full length novel. And who knows, short stories sometimes grow long legs and turn into novels – I'm working on one of those now. What started as 5,000 words is now 100,000.

As you can probably tell, I'm a big proponent of writers cutting their teeth on short stories.

When you first sit down to write, is your focus more on the plot or the characters?

I usually start with a premise and plot first. But occasionally I'll come up with a character that cries out for a story. For stories that begin with plot, once I map out where I'm going, I look for my characters and make a fundamental shift toward a character driven story. I firmly believe that good fiction is all character driven.

I'm generally a plotter rather than a pantser. A lot of that has to do with time restrictions where my writing is concerned. I don't have the luxury of letting my characters wander until they find a story. That often leads to dead ends, ideas that peter out before they reach conclusion.

If you equate writing with driving, and time with fuel, those with a full gas tank and a fat wallet (i.e., plenty of writing time) have the luxury of pantsing – driving around without a map to see what they find. In my case, my tank is much closer to E. I have to have a map and check my route before I start. I need to know I have enough gas to reach my destination. There has a viable story before I'll even start down the path.

I get into arguments about this all the time, and always with those with plenty of writing time. I try to point out that just because I plot, doesn't mean I'm closed to the wonderful twists and turns my characters discover. If my characters take a story in a new and better direction, I am very open to revising my plot. But again, the new route has to be able to get me to the end.

Describe your ideal writing environment.

My ideal writing environment would be on the deck of my 120 foot yacht, anchored in a quiet lagoon off Aruba, with my loyal manservant Geoffrey keeping me well stocked with icy Diet Pepsis. Alas, I have no yacht, and Geoffrey works for someone else (Stephen King I think).

I do most of my writing at work during lunch. My yacht is a desk wedged amid cubical wall, my little cell in the hive. It's messy – two monitors, a phone, and piled high with paperwork. It could use either a good cleaning or a fire. There's always a background din from the chatter of coworkers and the hiss of the ventilation system; which is fine by me. It's my version of the Caribbean breaking over a white-sand beach. I grew up in a large family and feel more at home with a little noise in my ears, and ill at ease in total silence. The one good thing about having so little time to write is that you have to get down to it: no waiting on my muse. If she shows up, great. If not, I start without her.

At the end of your story Appliances Included, you give readers insight into a character that was inspired by an actual person you and your wife met one day. Do you often base your characters on real people?

I often build characters a bit like Doctor Frankenstein — a piece from this friend, a trait from that one. It's easier to build a character if you actually see and experience the specific personality traits you want to use.

Sometimes I'll build characters wholly from scratch, but they rarely have the depth of personality as Franken-characters. They feel a little less genuine, and they are harder for me to visualize and know.

Rarely do I use someone I've met as a character, whole and unaltered. Sadie (not her real name) is an exception. Sadie didn't need anything added to her to stand out on the page and take over a story. She was bigger than life in person, and bigger than life on paper. I met her once, talked to her for about five minutes, and will never forget her.

Writers have to keep their eyes and ears open for that kind of found treasure. It's too easy to roll up the windows and move on, all the while missing out on something truly exceptional, and truly human. It only seemed appropriate to view the end of the story through Sadie's eyes. She's the neighborhood busybody, the Gladys Kravitz of her block. She's seen them come and seen them go, and always has an opinion she's only too glad to share.

Franken-characters is the perfect description!

Your story Cupid's Maze was inspired by a trip with your daughter to a corn maze. Tell us a bit about that experience and how the story idea was formed.

My experience with my daughter was mildly alarming in that I thought it would be an easy matter to negotiate the maze considering it was relatively small and had a number of tall landmarks we could use for orientation. The corn wasn't all that high, yet we were lost for hours. In our maze, the biggest element of horror was dispelled when we discovered Porta-Potties installed at the center.

The experience did get the wheels turning in my head, though. What if the corn was tall enough to wall off the rest of the world, the maze much larger, with no landmarks to orient yourself? Add in frigid weather, the specter of impending nightfall, and the possibility having to spend the night exposed in the corn. Then last two elements; take away the laughter and reassuring sounds of others in the maze (safety in numbers), and put something menacing to stalk those trapped inside. Suddenly, the friendly little corn maze turns into a horrifying nightmare.

Jessy Marie Roberts, Chief Editor at Pill Hill Press, gave me a great piece of advice about writing horror; it isn't horror if bad things happen to people who deserve it, horror is when horrible things happen to good people, to innocents. I put that advice to work in Cupid's Maze.

These two stories share a paranormal-horror component. What draws you to this genre?

What drew me to horror is practicality. When I started writing short stories trying to get published, the large majority of calls for submissions were in the horror genre. Though I'm a big Stephen King fan, I started out a mystery and thriller writer. I'm no dummy. I learned what I needed to be able to write horror, found some success, and kept on writing it. There will be mysteries in my future, but I'm embracing horror.

The paranormal introduces the ultimate fear – the unknown; that which we don't understand and have never dealt with. Horror is a fantastic foil to show both the best in people, and the worst. I have little interest in gore or body count, but instead, concentrate on how characters respond to fear and duress. This aligns with my belief that good fiction is character driven. That's where Koontz and King succeed so brilliantly. If you can't get the reader to identify with the characters, you're only killing trees, no matter what the genre.

What scares you the most and why?

Being victimized and helpless. The only thing worse, having something horrible happen to loved ones and being powerless to stop it. I think that is the basis of horror; having your worst fears realized and not knowing what to do to prevent it or make things better.

In my worst nightmare ever, I had driven to the Grand Canyon with my wife and oldest daughter; she was about six in my dream. I pulled into a scenic overlook and parked right up against the short, stone, retaining wall at the edge of the canyon. I was distracted trying to find a camera lost inside the car. When I looked up, my daughter was balancing atop the wall and walking toward me. I lunged and tried to grab her before she fell. She startled and instinctively stepped back, and was gone.

What a horrible dream!

I am a dog-lover (that sounds far creepier than it is), so I have to ask about your "beast-dog, Tater". Why do you call him a "beast-dog"? And how did he/she wind up with the name Tater?

My youngest daughter always wanted a dog, but we had a long list of reasons why that might not be a good idea. One day near Christmas, my sister-in-law asked our kids, "If you had a million dollars, what would you do with it?" My youngest responded she'd buy a dog, because from what her parents said, that's about how much money it would take. A few weeks later, we picked out a rescue dog.

The website said she was a bloodhound/dachshund mix (MONGREL), and from the photo (floppy eared, long, black and tan body,) we thought that might be right. We were looking for a small, easy to manage dog. When we went to pick her up, it was clear the dachshund part was flat out wrong. The dog was much larger than we'd been led to believe. She is a shepherd/basset mix. Body of a basset, head and coloration of a shepherd (she weighs about 65 lbs now = BEAST DOG).

Comedian Ron White was very popular with my girls at the time we acquired our dog, so Tater – Ron White's alias when arrested for drunk and disorderly – was tossed out as a possible name, and it stuck. Take a German Shepherd, saw it off at the knees, and you have Tater. She never fails to draw stares when we take her for a walk.

He's cute! But, yes, he is a bit of a beast. I've learned you can't always trust shelters and rescues to get the breed right.

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Here's a look at some of Mark's stories on Amazon:

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You can also grab some of Mark's stories free on Smashwords, where you can download the format of your choice for your ereader or computer.

I hope you'll step into Mark's fictional world.

Thanks for reading.