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message 1: by CJ (new)

CJ Now I only have 2 chapters done becuase I don't know if I'm all that good at this so please let me know what your guys think and I'll continue if you guys like it, enjoy :)

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


Little Butterfly εïз *Happy dance* New fanfic!
Love the banter between the two, that's exactly them, always teasing each other.
When Butch got hurt though, I thought V would normally have done something, like press some cloth on the wounds.., since he is a paramedic.
Please do continue your writing!


message 3: by Lenore (new)

Lenore I'm definitely gonna be reading it!


message 4: by Tessa (new)

Tessa Well done so far CJ. Looking forward to reading more!


message 5: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie Yes!!! Can't get enough of Butch/Vishous!


Becca {{Lady Kilt Chaser}} Ohhh I love it already! gimme more!


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

Always liking more Vutch!! Keep going!


message 8: by Johanna79 (new)

Johanna79 Good so far, keep it coming, sista!!


message 9: by CJ (new)

CJ Thanks for the encouragement guys! I'll write some more real soon :)


message 11: by Tessa (new)

Tessa Thanks CJ! Can't wait to read it :)


message 12: by Tessa (new)

Tessa Chapter 3 is up!


message 13: by CJ (new)

CJ Chapter 4,5, and 6 are up. I'm a writing fool.


message 14: by Tessa (new)

Tessa Keep it up CJ. That was a wonderful way to wake up and start my day :)


message 15: by CJ (new)

CJ I won't let you down Tessa. New chapter is up, enjoy people.


texxie-prufreads.blogspot.com And enjoy I did! :)


message 17: by CJ (last edited Jun 26, 2011 07:17PM) (new)

CJ Good texxie, that's my plan.


message 18: by CJ (new)

CJ New chapter up. It went a little differnet then planned, but I'm glad. Enjoy.


texxie-prufreads.blogspot.com Back to needing therapy! You're killing me here!!!

More please! :P


message 20: by Tessa (new)

Tessa Well done CJ! Can't wait to see what happens in the reveal to Jane and Marissa!


message 21: by CJ (new)

CJ Sorry guys, looks like I'm not going to finish this chapter tonight. I'm seriously battling with this one. Probably because I don't want to write this part :(. Anyway, hopefully it will be up tomorrow. If any other writer's have any suggestions I'm open to them.


message 22: by [deleted user] (new)

CJ wrote: "Sorry guys, looks like I'm not going to finish this chapter tonight. I'm seriously battling with this one. Probably because I don't want to write this part :(. Anyway, hopefully it will be up tomor..."

My suggestion is keep writing! I'm bored i need reading material hahahahaha!!!! No rally I want a smack down between the boys and the shellans


message 23: by CJ (new)

CJ Lol I know hot lifegaurd but the outcome from the fight is not good and it's hard fitting in three peoples POV. And then of course the 2 people bonding thing. FUCK! my mind feels like scrambled eggs :/


message 24: by Holly (new)

Holly Excellent start. Love me some V/Butch action. :)


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

CJ wrote: "Lol I know hot lifegaurd but the outcome from the fight is not good and it's hard fitting in three peoples POV. And then of course the 2 people bonding thing. FUCK! my mind feels like scrambled egg..."

Is that my name now! Hot lifeguard!


message 26: by CJ (new)

CJ Lol no Charlie, sorry couldn't help myself. It was the talk of the town on the Lover Redemeed topic so I had to mess with you. Now go check out my Butch pic, F!!!!


texxie-prufreads.blogspot.com Oopsie, that's totally my bad. LMAO. I put two and two together, my ovaries exploded and it just went to hell in a handbasket after that. :D Putting it out of my mind, out of my mind. It's just "Charlie". HA!


message 28: by CJ (new)

CJ Ha Charlie loves it! Don't worry though Charlie, I won't chase after you. Is it ok to drool?


message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

If you want to call me hot life guard go ahead! My ego might just like that


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

CJ wrote: "Ha Charlie loves it! Don't worry though Charlie, I won't chase after you. Is it ok to drool?"

Drool all you want ladies I'm all yoursssss


message 31: by CJ (new)

CJ Ha! It's settled Hot Lifegaurd it is! Told you he was lovin' it Texxie.


texxie-prufreads.blogspot.com He does'nt play fair. ;P


message 33: by CJ (new)

CJ I know right? I thought of u this morning texxie, a semi drove by me and in big letters on the back it said Tex. :)


message 34: by Johanna79 (new)

Johanna79 Whens the next chapter coming out?


message 35: by CJ (new)

CJ Hmmm idk Johanna, I'm hoping tonight or tomorrow. This one's tough.


message 36: by [deleted user] (new)

texxie wrote: "He does'nt play fair. ;P"

Why don't i play fair hot mama? I didn't know there were rukles


texxie-prufreads.blogspot.com CJ wrote: "I know right? I thought of u this morning texxie, a semi drove by me and in big letters on the back it said Tex. :)"

That was me. Was coming to demand the next chapter. Must have taken a wrong turn somewhere. ;P


message 38: by CJ (new)

CJ Ha ha! I think I need some motovation here....hmmm maybe some mouth to mouth might help me out!


texxie-prufreads.blogspot.com Charlie wrote: "texxie wrote: "He does'nt play fair. ;P"

Why don't i play fair hot mama? I didn't know there were rukles"


oh no, I'm not walking into that one!


texxie-prufreads.blogspot.com CJ wrote: "Ha ha! I think I need some motovation here....hmmm maybe some mouth to mouth might help me out!"

aww, are you stuck or can't decide on a direction?


message 41: by CJ (new)

CJ I feel like there's just too much going on and it's hard to write it when I know what's going to happen and I don't like it.


texxie-prufreads.blogspot.com oh but it's soooooo goooood!!! I hope you find your way soon. We have faith in you. On a side note, if I don't get a healthy dose of Vutch soon... =>


message 43: by CJ (new)

CJ Awww thank you texxie. That helps, I'm on it! To bad I couldn't be on...


texxie-prufreads.blogspot.com Lmao.....yeah, I'm sure that would help too. Can't help ya there but I'm sure I'll be laughing through the tears when Charlie...ahem...pipes in. No way is he gonna let that go. Just giving u a fair warning. :)


message 45: by CJ (new)

CJ That was my whole plan texxie. *grinning evilly, rubbing my hands together*


message 46: by [deleted user] (new)

texxie wrote: "Lmao.....yeah, I'm sure that would help too. Can't help ya there but I'm sure I'll be laughing through the tears when Charlie...ahem...pipes in. No way is he gonna let that go. Just giving u a fair..."

Just cause u asked for it hot mama, you're not getting anything!


message 47: by texxie-prufreads.blogspot.com (last edited Jun 29, 2011 02:42PM) (new)

texxie-prufreads.blogspot.com at this point, I can only shake my head and grin like a fool. LMAO

Though I will say, that's sooooo not fair. Had that been me, no way would you have let that go! You've proven that much! lol


message 48: by [deleted user] (new)

I know all you girls want a piece of me! I can't be everywhere though sorry, but I give free rides on week ends! CJ wanna VIP


message 49: by CJ (new)

CJ Hell yeah! I think I deserve it for writing this fan fiction! Just sayin'


message 50: by CJ (new)

CJ Well, looks like it's going to be another day peeps. Sorry, I tried my best but it will be worth the wait that I promise you.


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